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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Hermione assumes that the Reaper Soul Crystal that Harry gave Neville is an item of dark magic, since it produced a smoke entity resembling a Dementor. But while WordOfGod confirmed both that Harry is a Black Mage and that there is a connection between the Voidsent and the Dementors, there's nothing wrong with the crystal.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Hermione assumes that the Reaper Soul Crystal that Harry gave Neville is an item of dark magic, since it produced a smoke entity resembling a Dementor. But while WordOfGod confirmed both that Harry is a Black Mage and that there is a connection between the Voidsent and the Dementors, there's nothing wrong with the crystal.crystal - the entity is indeed a [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Voidsent]], but it's just a normal example of the species, [[DarkIsNotEvil honorable adherence to contracts included]], same as any other Reaper avatar.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Due to being much closer age-wise than the canon Warrior of Light when they met her, Harry and Alisaie are an OfficialCouple in this story. [[spoiler:He proposes to her during his first Christmas at Hogwarts]].
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* WrongContextMagic: Wizarding World magic runs into this issue when compared to Aether based magic. In particular, Dark Magic on Earth is defined as anything that intentionally harms the target, while in Eorzea and the Source, it's EntropyAndChaos magic.
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* WrongContextMagic: Wizarding World magic runs into this issue when compared to Aether based magic. In particular, Dark Magic on Earth is defined as anything that intentionally harms the target, while in Eorzea and the Source, it's EntropyAndChaos magic.EntropyAndChaosMagic.
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* TheChosenOne: As soon as Harry is sorted into Gryffindor, his Reaper Soul Crystal chooses Neville to be its bearer.
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* TheChosenOne: As soon as Harry is sorted into Gryffindor, his Reaper Soul Crystal chooses Neville to be its bearer. After the Halloween troll is dealt with, Hermoine ends up chosen by his Black Mage Soul Crystal.
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* {{Irony}}: Hermoine spends the first few chapters worried that Harry will teach Neville dark magic due to how the aesthetics of the Reaper look. At the end of Chapter 6, the Soul Crystal for the Black Mage (one of the actual BlackMagic classes in ''FFXIV'') chooses ''her'' to wield its knowledge and power.
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* OnlySaneMan: Hermoine is a {{Deconstruct|edCharacterArchetype}}ion of this, in that, in the words of the author, she's an OnlySaneMan "in a world where Sanity got shot in the head from the word go" - she's trying to apply logic to Harry when everything about him defies reason. She's rightfully suspicious of him because he's supposed to be eleven but showed up looking nineteen years old, and that's just the start of it.
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* TrueCompanions: Harry's friends in Eorzea mean the world to him. The Sorting Hat even brings this up, but when Harry wonders if this will get him in Hufflepuff, it notes his greatest trials have been aiding complete strangers.
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* TrueCompanions: Harry's friends in Eorzea mean the world to him. The Sorting Hat even brings this up, but when Harry wonders if this will get him in Hufflepuff, it notes his greatest trials have been aiding complete strangers.strangers.
* WrongContextMagic: Wizarding World magic runs into this issue when compared to Aether based magic. In particular, Dark Magic on Earth is defined as anything that intentionally harms the target, while in Eorzea and the Source, it's EntropyAndChaos magic.
* WrongContextMagic: Wizarding World magic runs into this issue when compared to Aether based magic. In particular, Dark Magic on Earth is defined as anything that intentionally harms the target, while in Eorzea and the Source, it's EntropyAndChaos magic.
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* DramaticIrony: Dumbledore sent out a Portkey to retrieve Harry because he was terrified that the boy was suffering wherever he was. The first half of the prologue showed that Harry was about to take a break from adventuring and is quite annoyed to have been kidnapped.
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* DramaticIrony: DramaticIrony:
** Dumbledore sent out a Portkey to retrieve Harry because he was terrified that the boy was suffering wherever he was. The first half of the prologue showed that Harry was about to take a break from adventuring and is quite annoyed to have beenkidnapped.kidnapped.
** Hagrid assumes that Harry won't be able to see the Thestrals at Hogwarts because he hasn't seen and comprehended death. Harry is by this point a OneManArmy who has killed innumerable people and watched several friends die right in front of him, and states this immediately after admitting he can see the Thestrals.
** Dumbledore sent out a Portkey to retrieve Harry because he was terrified that the boy was suffering wherever he was. The first half of the prologue showed that Harry was about to take a break from adventuring and is quite annoyed to have been
** Hagrid assumes that Harry won't be able to see the Thestrals at Hogwarts because he hasn't seen and comprehended death. Harry is by this point a OneManArmy who has killed innumerable people and watched several friends die right in front of him, and states this immediately after admitting he can see the Thestrals.
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* HorseOfADifferentColor: Harry has a black-feathered Chocobo named Squall that he uses as a mount. A later conversation with Hagrid reveals he has ridden many other beasts, but hasn't tried with a unicorn because they are too skittish. Hagrid begins planning to teach him to ride a Hippogriff after Harry successfully earns the respect of one.
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* BrutalHonesty: When Snape tries to question Harry about what would happen if he mixed two potions ingredients (which in canon was an excuse to mess with Harry, who he knew dodn't know the answer), Harry retorts that he hasn't ready the required lessons yet, subtly calling out Snape for doing so.
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* FlatWhat: Snape's reaction when he uses a ''Legilimens'' spell on Harry, only to see the boy's memories of Eorzea without any context.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Hermione assumes that the Reaper Soul Crystal that Harry gave Neville is an item of dark magic, since it produced a smoke entity resembling a Dementor. But while WordOfGod confirmed both that Harry is a Black Mage and that there is a connection between the Voidsent and the Dementors, there's nothing wrong with the crystal.
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* TheChosenOne: As soon as Harry is sorted into Gryffindor, his Reaper Soul Crystal chooses Neville to be its bearer.
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It can be read [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/heart-of-ember-autumntide-harry-potter-final-fantasy-xiv.1143055/#post-98649505 here]] at Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.
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It can be read [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/heart-of-ember-autumntide-harry-potter-final-fantasy-xiv.1143055/#post-98649505 here]] at Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.
Website/SpacebattlesDotCom, and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/53524573 AO3 here]].
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To avoid Harry being starved by the Dursleys, his magic decides to teleport him to the Source. Several years and insane adventures later, the Warrior of Light returns home due desperate Portkey usage by Dumbledore, and isn't exactly happy with the change of setting.
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To avoid Harry being starved by the Dursleys, his magic decides to teleport teleports him to the Source. Several years and insane adventures later, the Warrior of Light returns home due to desperate Portkey usage by Dumbledore, Dumbledore and isn't exactly happy with the change of setting.
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* {{Magitek}}: Harry carries loads of this - he's mentioned as having the weapons of all three magitek wielding classes in ''FFXIV''[[note]]a gunblade, rifle, and nouliths, though Dumbledore mistakes them for crystals[[/note]].
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* {{Magitek}}: Harry carries loads of this - he's mentioned as having the weapons of all three magitek wielding magitek-wielding classes in ''FFXIV''[[note]]a gunblade, rifle, and nouliths, though Dumbledore mistakes them for crystals[[/note]].
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: InUniverse, dragons native to the Earth of the Wizarding World are implied to be weaker than those of the Source, since Harry doesn't sense any aether in his dragonhide gloves, instead finding them to be just really tough letter.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: InUniverse, dragons native to the Earth of the Wizarding World are implied to be weaker than those of the Source, since Harry doesn't sense any aether in his dragonhide gloves, instead finding them to be just really tough letter.leather.
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* FryingPanOfDoom: PlayedForLaughs example, while looking over all the weapons on Harry's Chocobo, Dumbledore wonders why a [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking frying pan]]'' is among them. Since none of the combat classes in ''FFXIV'' use frying pans, [[NoodleImplements it's a mystery why Harry packed it with his weapons]].
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* FryingPanOfDoom: PlayedForLaughs example, while looking over all the weapons on Harry's Chocobo, Dumbledore wonders why a [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking ''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking frying pan]]'' is among them. Since none of the combat classes in ''FFXIV'' use frying pans, [[NoodleImplements it's a mystery why Harry packed it with his weapons]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all of his adventures Harry went on and all the powers, light and dark, that he has acquired, the SortingHat still declares him a Gryffindor. {{Justified|Trope}} in that, as the Hat notes, while Harry's journey has been focused on his friends, he still devoted himself to saving a world that wasn't his because it is the right thing to do, emphasizing many of Gryffindor's virtues.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all of his adventures Harry went on and all the powers, light and dark, that he has acquired, the SortingHat Sorting Hat still declares him a Gryffindor. {{Justified|Trope}} in that, as the Hat notes, while Harry's journey has been focused on his friends, he still devoted himself to saving a world that wasn't his because it is the right thing to do, emphasizing many of Gryffindor's virtues.
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* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven. When he uses a crystal to talk with Alisaie, though, it's implied the same amount of time has passed for him as it has for her.
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* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven. When he uses a crystal to talk with Alisaie, though, it's implied the same amount of time has passed for him as it has for her.her.
* TrueCompanions: Harry's friends in Eorzea mean the world to him. The Sorting Hat even brings this up, but when Harry wonders if this will get him in Hufflepuff, it notes his greatest trials have been aiding complete strangers.
* TrueCompanions: Harry's friends in Eorzea mean the world to him. The Sorting Hat even brings this up, but when Harry wonders if this will get him in Hufflepuff, it notes his greatest trials have been aiding complete strangers.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all of his adventures Harry went on and all the powers, light and dark, that he has acquired, the SortingHat still declares him a Gryffindor. {{Justified|Trope}} in that, as the Hat notes, while Harry's journey has been focused on his friends, he still devoted himself to saving a world that wasn't his because it is the right thing to do, emphasizing many of Gryffindor's virtues.
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* DramaticIrony: Dumbledore sent out a Portkey to retrieve Harry because he was terrified that the boy was suffering wherever he was. The first half of the prologue showed that Harry was about to take a break from adventuring and is quite annoyed to have been kidnapped.
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* AgeLift: Due to the TimeyWimeyBall between the source and his native Earth, Harry is nineteen years old when he first arrives at Hogwarts.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Dumbledore was so panicked when he found that Harry was missing that he used a specially enchanted Portkey to bring him back to Hogwarts. As Professor [=McGonagall=] notes, he didn't even consider checking first with Durmstrang or Beaubaxton to see if Harry enrolled there.
* FryingPanOfDoom: PlayedForLaughs example, while looking over all the weapons on Harry's Chocobo, Dumbledore wonders why a [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking frying pan]]'' is among them. Since none of the combat classes in ''FFXIV'' use frying pans, [[NoodleImplements it's a mystery why Harry packed it with his weapons]].
* {{Magitek}}: Harry carries loads of this - he's mentioned as having the weapons of all three magitek wielding classes in ''FFXIV''[[note]]a gunblade, rifle, and nouliths, though Dumbledore mistakes them for crystals[[/note]].
* FryingPanOfDoom: PlayedForLaughs example, while looking over all the weapons on Harry's Chocobo, Dumbledore wonders why a [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking frying pan]]'' is among them. Since none of the combat classes in ''FFXIV'' use frying pans, [[NoodleImplements it's a mystery why Harry packed it with his weapons]].
* {{Magitek}}: Harry carries loads of this - he's mentioned as having the weapons of all three magitek wielding classes in ''FFXIV''[[note]]a gunblade, rifle, and nouliths, though Dumbledore mistakes them for crystals[[/note]].
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* OurGoblinsAreDifferent: Harry is somewhat suprized when he meets the goblins of Gringotts, as the only thing they share with those of the Source are eye color.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven.
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* OurGoblinsAreDifferent: Harry is somewhat suprized surprised when he meets the goblins of Gringotts, as the only thing they share with those of the Source are eye color.
* OutsideContextProblem: Harry - he spent several years in another universe which uses completely different varieties of magic than the Wizarding World, magic that can be used by ''anyone'', and as a side effect, has no masquerade or stigma against magitek. Dumbledore is puzzled by some of his weapons, while Gringotts is surprised that one of his powers lets him understand the language of goblins.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven. When he uses a crystal to talk with Alisaie, though, it's implied the same amount of time has passed for him as it has for her.
* OutsideContextProblem: Harry - he spent several years in another universe which uses completely different varieties of magic than the Wizarding World, magic that can be used by ''anyone'', and as a side effect, has no masquerade or stigma against magitek. Dumbledore is puzzled by some of his weapons, while Gringotts is surprised that one of his powers lets him understand the language of goblins.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven. When he uses a crystal to talk with Alisaie, though, it's implied the same amount of time has passed for him as it has for her.
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''Heart of Ember, Autumntide'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Literature/HarryPotter'' and ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyXIV'' by [=ThatOnePsycho=].
To avoid Harry being starved by the Dursleys, his magic decides to teleport him to the Source. Several years and insane adventures later, the Warrior of Light returns home due desperate Portkey usage by Dumbledore, and isn't exactly happy with the change of setting.
It can be read [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/heart-of-ember-autumntide-harry-potter-final-fantasy-xiv.1143055/#post-98649505 here]] at Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.
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!!This story contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Harry is a CompositeCharacter with the Warrior of Light, making him ''leagues'' beyond his canon self's level of badass.
* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: As Harry was at peace in the Source, he's not happy to be brought home because the method used amounted to kidnapping.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Dumbledore is absolutely livid after seeing that the Dursleys forced Harry to live under the stairs of their house, noting he hasn't been this angry with muggles since what happened with his sister.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: InUniverse, dragons native to the Earth of the Wizarding World are implied to be weaker than those of the Source, since Harry doesn't sense any aether in his dragonhide gloves, instead finding them to be just really tough letter.
* OurGoblinsAreDifferent: Harry is somewhat suprized when he meets the goblins of Gringotts, as the only thing they share with those of the Source are eye color.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven.
To avoid Harry being starved by the Dursleys, his magic decides to teleport him to the Source. Several years and insane adventures later, the Warrior of Light returns home due desperate Portkey usage by Dumbledore, and isn't exactly happy with the change of setting.
It can be read [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/heart-of-ember-autumntide-harry-potter-final-fantasy-xiv.1143055/#post-98649505 here]] at Website/SpacebattlesDotCom.
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!!This story contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Harry is a CompositeCharacter with the Warrior of Light, making him ''leagues'' beyond his canon self's level of badass.
* ComplainingAboutRescuesTheyDontLike: As Harry was at peace in the Source, he's not happy to be brought home because the method used amounted to kidnapping.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Dumbledore is absolutely livid after seeing that the Dursleys forced Harry to live under the stairs of their house, noting he hasn't been this angry with muggles since what happened with his sister.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: InUniverse, dragons native to the Earth of the Wizarding World are implied to be weaker than those of the Source, since Harry doesn't sense any aether in his dragonhide gloves, instead finding them to be just really tough letter.
* OurGoblinsAreDifferent: Harry is somewhat suprized when he meets the goblins of Gringotts, as the only thing they share with those of the Source are eye color.
* TimeyWimeyBall: Harry spent much more time in Eorzea than has passed in his native world, being nineteen years old when Dumbledore kidnaps him home via Portkey when, according to the Hogwarts registry, he should be about eleven.
