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* MadScientist: Downplayed with Brenda. While she is a good person at heart, she happens to be a bit too focused on the technological side of things, and not John's own feelings about essentially being a lab rat for the Gadget Program.
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* MadScientist: Downplayed with Brenda. While she is a good person at heart, she happens to be a bit too focused on the technological side of things, and not John's own feelings about essentially being converted into a lab rat for the Gadget Program.DoAnythingRobot.
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* MadScientist: Downplayed with Brenda. While she is a good person at heart, she happens to be a bit too focused on the technological side of John, and not his own feelings.
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* MadScientist: Downplayed with Brenda. While she is a good person at heart, she happens to be a bit too focused on the technological side of John, things, and not his John's own feelings.feelings about essentially being a lab rat for the Gadget Program.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Downplayed. While it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery, the story mostly retains the tone of its source material.
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* MadScientist: Downplayed with Brenda. While she is a good person at heart, she happens to be a bit too focused on the technological side of John, and not his own feelings.
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** Upon first awakening, John accidentally extends one arm several feet away from him, and it partially retracts (though not enough to hide the metal bits) whilst he's conversing with Brenda:
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** Upon first awakening, John accidentally extends one arm several feet away from him, and it partially retracts (though not enough to hide the metal bits) whilst he's conversing with Brenda:
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->''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
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->''({{Beat}} as Penny turns to Brenda)''
-> '''Penny''': Okay, seriously, ''what did you do to him?''
-> '''Penny''': Okay, seriously, ''what did you do to him?''
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->'''Brenda''': Don’t worry, that’s completely normal–
->'''John''': ''''''NORMAL'?!'''''
->'''John''': ''''''NORMAL'?!'''''
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* {{Determinator}}: John is described as not being someone to quit after the first attempt.
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** Upon first awakening, John accidentally extends his arm several feet away from him, and it partially retracts whilst conversing with Brenda:
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** Upon first awakening, John accidentally extends his one arm several feet away from him, and it partially retracts (though not enough to hide the metal bits) whilst he's conversing with Brenda:
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** Upon first awakening, John accidentally extends his arm several feet away from him, and it partially retracts whilst conversing with Brenda:
->'''Brenda''': Don’t worry, that’s completely normal–
->'''John''': ''''''NORMAL'?!'''''
->'''Brenda''': Don’t worry, that’s completely normal–
->'''John''': ''''''NORMAL'?!'''''
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* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Not as extremely as most, but it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Not as extremely as most, but it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.
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* BodyHorror: BodyHorror:
** Most (if not ''all)'' of John's internal organs were taken out in the procedure, leaving him with nothing but metal components in their place.
** Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
* DarkerAndEdgier:Not as extremely as most, but Downplayed. While it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.imagery, the story mostly retains the tone of its source material.
* FreakOut: Similar to the movie, John initially doesn't take his situation very well, expressing shock and terror over some of his "enhancements".
** Most (if not ''all)'' of John's internal organs were taken out in the procedure, leaving him with nothing but metal components in their place.
** Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
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* FreakOut: Similar to the movie, John initially doesn't take his situation very well, expressing shock and terror over some of his "enhancements".
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* MirthlessLaughter: In response to Penny's question about seeing if her uncle wasn't "mutilated or anything", John begins to chuckle, which then evolves into loud, hysterical cries.
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* MirthlessLaughter: In response to Penny's question about seeing if her uncle wasn't "mutilated or anything", John begins to chuckle, which then evolves escalates into loud, hysterical cries.
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: John has one, according to Penny.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not as extremely as most, but it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.imagery.
* HeroicBSOD: The discovery of the extensive changes to his body leads John to lock himself in a hospital bathroom, and later emerges with red eyes, indicating he'd [[BrokenTears been crying]].
* MirthlessLaughter: In response to Penny's question about seeing if her uncle wasn't "mutilated or anything", John begins to chuckle, which then evolves into loud, hysterical cries.
->''({{Beat}} as Penny turns to Brenda)''
-> '''Penny''': Okay, seriously, ''what did you do to him?''
* HeroicBSOD: The discovery of the extensive changes to his body leads John to lock himself in a hospital bathroom, and later emerges with red eyes, indicating he'd [[BrokenTears been crying]].
* MirthlessLaughter: In response to Penny's question about seeing if her uncle wasn't "mutilated or anything", John begins to chuckle, which then evolves into loud, hysterical cries.
->''({{Beat}} as Penny turns to Brenda)''
-> '''Penny''': Okay, seriously, ''what did you do to him?''
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Along with the rest of his damaged organs, John's reproductive system was removed as well, much to his dismay.
''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Along with the rest of his damaged organs, John's reproductive system was removed as well, unfortunately one to go, much to his dismay.
''For ->''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
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* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Along with the rest of his damaged organs, John's reproductive system was removed as well, much to his dismay.
''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to beseen.seen.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Not as extremely as most, but it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.
''For what had to be the tenth time today his mind offered up the insistence that this had to be [[AllJustADream some drug-fueled nightmare]] he was having while laid up in a hospital bed somewhere. He was starting to have his doubts at this point. Things had finally progressed past the scope of his imagination. They’d turned him into a life-sized, crime-fighting Ken doll.''
* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be
* DarkerAndEdgier: Not as extremely as most, but it does feature some mildly unsettling imagery.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40293765/chapters/100928811 He Has The Heart]]'' is an ''Film/InspectorGadget1999'' fic that delves much more into the emotional side effects becoming a {{Cyborg}} could have brought upon John Brown.
!!''This fanfic contains examples of:''
* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
!!''This fanfic contains examples of:''
* BodyHorror: Like in the film, John's fingertips are removable, and various hatches on his body allow the inner machinery to be seen.
