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** Harry pays a visit to Azkaban to [[spoiler:meet Sirius]] shortly before Year 2, a whole year before Sirius' canon escape.


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* TheCorruptor: [[spoiler:Lucius Malfoy tried to become this by attempting to sway things in his favor at Harry's custody hearing, even bribing Mr. Weasley's advocate.]]

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* PyrrhicVictory: The premise that pushes Harry to go back in time. He defeated Voldemort, but not before Voldemort killed everyone Harry knows and loves.

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The premise that pushes Harry to go back in time. He defeated Voldemort, but not before Voldemort killed everyone Harry knows and loves.loves.
** Alastor Moody inflicted one on Voldemort when he rallied the Aurors to defend Azkaban, killed all the prisoners Voldemort wanted to rescue, levelled every structure that Voldemort could have used, and presumably inflicted numerous casualties on the invading Death Eaters, before finally going down and leaving Voldemort to claim a barren rock.
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** In the BadFuture, Alastor Moody rallied the Aurors posted at Azkaban, and held off a siege by Voldemort's forces for several days, destroying everything Voldemort wanted on the island and ultimately giving him a PyrrhicVictory. The battle apparently traumatised the Death Eaters to the point where from that point onward, any prisoners they took could shout out Moody's CatchPhrase, "Constant vigilance!" to get instantly executed and avoid torture.
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* OpenSecret: By second year, Harry's friends are all aware that there are some things he isn't telling them, but he's told them enough to realise that he only isn't sharing his secrets with them because Snape would learn about it when he reads their minds, giving them extra incentive to learn Occlumency to keep him out.

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* OpenSecret: By second year, Harry's friends are all aware that there are some things he isn't telling them, but he's told them enough to realise that he only isn't sharing his secrets with them because Snape would learn about it when he reads their minds, giving them extra incentive to learn Occlumency to keep him Snape out.

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-->'''Harry''': I'm sorry.
-->'''Sorting Hat''': Don't be, that was really a clever plan. I still say you would have done well in Slytherin.
-->'''Harry''': Maybe so. Thank you. ''[blasts the Hat]''

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'''Harry''':
Maybe so. Thank you. ''[blasts the Hat]''



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--->'''Harry''': She walked up right behind me as I said that, didn't she?
--->'''[=McGonagall=]''': Your grasp of the obvious is as keen as your gift for imitations, Mr. Potter.

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* FeedTheMole: While Hermione isn't betraying Harry on purpose, Harry essentially does this by guiding her towards the necessary clues to realise that Snape is somehow reading their minds, thus ensuring that Snape will underestimate Harry from what he sees in Hermione's memories.


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** When Harry's friends realise that Snape can read minds, Harry honestly tells them that something in his past prevents Snape reading ''his'' mind, allowing them to assume it's a side-effect of his scar rather than him having learnt Occlumency in the future.


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* OpenSecret: By second year, Harry's friends are all aware that there are some things he isn't telling them, but he's told them enough to realise that he only isn't sharing his secrets with them because Snape would learn about it when he reads their minds, giving them extra incentive to learn Occlumency to keep him out.
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* CareBearStare: Harry uses this on Voldemort in the very first chapter. It even includes the associated light show.

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* CareBearStare: Harry uses this on Voldemort in the very first chapter.chapter, assaulting Voldemort's mind by ''letting him feel Harry's pain'' -- which Voldemort is unprepared for. It even includes the associated light show.
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* AmoralAttorney: [[spoiler:Mr. Bendricks, the advocate Mr. Weasley hired, turns out to have been bribed by Lucius Malfoy to sway things in his favor at Harry's custody hearing.]]


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* DidntSeeThatComing: Harry's vision of his older self in Chapter 2 says he should have expected that merging their souls would be very difficult given Harry's own ability to resist the Imperius Curse.


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* EyeColorChange: The older Harry in Chapter 2 has green eyes like his canon self, but duller and murkier, most likely because of the decade-plus long war he lived through.

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-> '''Dumbledore''': You do understand that you will be effectively resurrecting Tom Riddle?\\
'''Harry''': If I do, it will be a small price to pay for the lives of everyone who died in this war. Fighting him again is nothing, if I have a chance to do it better this time.\\
'''Dumbledore''': Do it better, Harry?\\
'''Harry''': I plan to cheat like Draco Malfoy on a potions exam.

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-> '''Dumbledore''': You do understand that you will be effectively resurrecting Tom Riddle?\\
'''Harry''': If I do, it will be a small price to pay for the lives of everyone who died in this war. Fighting him again is nothing, if I have a chance to do it better this time.\\
'''Dumbledore''': Do it better, Harry?\\
'''Harry''': I plan to cheat like Draco Malfoy on a potions exam.wick check.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Harry is definitely on different footing with several of the adults from his previous life.

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The story opens with an adult Harry finally defeating Voldemort after fighting him and his Death Eaters for about thirteen years. The victory [[PyrrhicVictory is extremely hollow]], however; the war has directly or indirectly claimed the lives of virtually every named character in the series and Harry has lost everyone he ever loved and then some. As a potentially fatal case of depression begins to settle in, however, Harry uncovers theoretical texts in the ruins of Hogwarts that suggest a means by which to travel backwards in time.

With nothing left to lose, Harry gambles his life on a second chance, and hits the jackpot when his spirit merges with his younger self partway through the summer before his first year at Hogwarts. In classic Peggy Sue fashion, "young" Harry then begins subtly altering the timeline to make things better... with mixed results.

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The story opens with an adult Harry finally defeating Voldemort after fighting him and his Death Eaters for about thirteen years. The victory [[PyrrhicVictory is extremely hollow]], however; the war has directly or indirectly claimed the lives of virtually every named character in the series and Harry has lost everyone he ever loved and then some. As Then, as a potentially fatal case of depression begins to settle in, however, Harry uncovers theoretical texts in the ruins of Hogwarts that suggest a means by which to travel backwards in time.

With nothing left to lose, Harry gambles his life on a second chance, and hits the jackpot when his spirit [[MergerOfSouls merges with his younger self self]] partway through the summer before his first year at Hogwarts. In classic Peggy Sue fashion, "young" Harry then begins subtly altering the timeline to make things better... with mixed results.
[[ForWantOfANail mixed]] [[InSpiteOfANail results]].



On May 13, 2019 the story disappeared from [[Website/FanfictionDotNet FanFiction.net]], with the author clarifying on his website that this was due to an accusation of copyright infringement involving song lyrics (namely, "Weasley is our King", which Harry sings in Chapter 28), though it is still available at other locations and he is appealing to the site directors to undo their decision, The fic has since been made available on various other sites, including:

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On May 13, 2019 the story disappeared from [[Website/FanfictionDotNet FanFiction.net]], with the author clarifying on his website that this was due to an accusation of copyright infringement involving song lyrics (namely, "Weasley is our King", which Harry sings in Chapter 28), though it is still available at other locations and he is appealing to the site directors to undo their decision, decision. The fic has since been made available on various other sites, including:

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* GodzillaThreshold: When Ron, Fred, and George [[spoiler:rescue Harry during Chapter 11, Ron is afraid to move Harry for fear of hurting him more. So he breaks the Decree for the Reasonable Restriction of Underage Sorcery by using ''mobilicorpus'' so he can move Harry.]]

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** Also in the same situation, Mrs. Weasley doesn't like to apparate if she can't help it, preferring to use the Floo Network. However, [[spoiler:Harry is in a bad state, so she apparates with him to St. Mungo's.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: The BadFuture Voldemort; his brutal and devastating campaign is the reason why Harry sends his soul back in time to do things right.


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* PredecessorVillain: Lord Voldemort in the BadFuture; his brutal and devastating campaign is the reason why Harry sends his soul back in time to do things right.
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** Harry promises Melissa Bulstrode that [[spoiler: if she can get proof of who killed her sister, the Aurors will never find their body]]. She doesn't think he's serious, but after the war he's fought, chances are that he is.

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** Harry promises Melissa Millicent Bulstrode that [[spoiler: if [[spoiler:if she can get proof of who killed her sister, sister,]] the Aurors will never find their body]].the body. She doesn't think he's serious, but after the war he's fought, chances are that he is.

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--> She’d put Ginny in charge of him. And given her his wand.

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* DueToTheDead: After the Battle of Hogwarts in the BadFuture, Harry visited the ruins every anniversary of it. It was during one of these visits when Harry was ambushed by Death Eaters and entered into a TeleportSpam battle throughout the ruins and Hogsmeade.



--> '''Hermione''': I'm sorry. You must think I’m mental.\\

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** Similarly, Mad-Eye Moody was killed defending Azkaban from the Death Eaters after Harry had started searching for the Horcruxes.

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** Similarly, Mad-Eye Moody was killed defending Azkaban from the Death Eaters after Harry had started searching for the Horcruxes.Horcruxes, holding out for three weeks after the Sack of Hogwarts.



* SwordCane: Lucius Malfoy's cane contains a poisoned blade, which killed Mr Weasley in the past future.

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* SwordCane: Lucius Malfoy's cane contains a poisoned blade, which killed Mr Mr. Weasley in the past future.



* TalkingInYourSleep: Harry dozes off in the Weasleys' car, and wakes with several of them staring at him. Luna later tells him that he was making death threats and using "[[NarrativeProfanityFilter some words I’m going to have to look up when we get to school]]."

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* TalkingInYourSleep: Harry dozes off in the Weasleys' car, and wakes with several of them staring at him. Luna later tells him that he was making death threats and using "[[NarrativeProfanityFilter some words I’m I'm going to have to look up when we get to school]]."
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---> '''Harry''': As you wish, Professor. ''<{{beat}}>'' Oops.

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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Basically applies to Rita Skeeter, as Harry deals with the potential threat she poses by basically blackmailing her with his knowledge of her Animagus status and an offer to make her his exclusive journalist. So long as Rita doesn't write anything scathingly against him or his friends, Harry will provide her with at least one interview a year, while also ensuring that she gets first shot if any stories come up involving him; Harry even recognises that it's a good deal for Rita as she gets exclusive insight into one of the most famous figures in the wizarding world.



* CutLexLuthorACheck: Basically applies to Rita Skeeter, as Harry deals with the potential threat she poses by basically blackmailing her with his knowledge of her Animagus status and an offer to make her his exclusive journalist. So long as Rita doesn't write anything scathingly against him or his friends, Harry will provide her with at least one interview a year, while also ensuring that she gets first shot if any stories come up involving him; Harry even recognises that it's a good deal for Rita as she gets exclusive insight into one of the most famous figures in the wizarding world.



* LudicrousGibs: One of Harry's flashbacks in Chapter 14 has him casting a ''reducto'' that splatters a Death Eater against the hedgerow behind him.

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* LudicrousGibs: One of Harry's flashbacks in Chapter 14 has him casting a ''reducto'' ''Reducto'' that splatters a Death Eater against the hedgerow behind him.



* MutualKill: Harry recalls finding that Neville and Bellatrix killed each other.

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* MutualKill: Harry recalls finding that Neville and Bellatrix killed each other.other in the BadFuture.


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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: It's mentioned in Harry's flashback to the burning of The Burrow that Mrs. Weasley, who is killed there, outlived most of her children, most notably Ginny and Charlie (who went on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge after Ginny's death).


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** Similarly, Mad-Eye Moody was killed defending Azkaban from the Death Eaters after Harry had started searching for the Horcruxes.
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* MobileMenace: Voldemort in the BadFuture was constantly on the move, with Harry often attempting to use Legilimens to find him.

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* ImplacableMan: Voldemort in the BadFuture. Until his horcruxes were destroyed, he regularly withstood curses that would reduce most people to charred meat, if they didn't miss.


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* MobileMenace: Voldemort in the BadFuture was constantly on the move, with Harry often attempting to use Legilimens to find him.

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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Parodied when Madam Pomfrey has Harry under her care for straining his throat, and does "something so ruthless, so diabolical, that he was still
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Parodied when Madam Pomfrey has Harry under her care for straining his throat, and does "something so ruthless, so diabolical, that he was still
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Parodied when Madam Pomfrey has Harry under her care for straining his throat, and does "something so ruthless, so diabolical, that he was still
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--> She’d put Ginny in charge of him. And given her his wand.
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* CutLexLuthorACheck: Basically applies to Rita Skeeter, as Harry deals with the potential threat she poses by basically blackmailing her with his knowledge of her Animagus status and an offer to make her his exclusive journalist. So long as Rita doesn't write anything scathingly against him or his friends, Harry will provide her with at least one interview a year, while also ensuring that she gets first shot if any stories come up involving him; Harry even recognises that it's a good deal for Rita as she gets exclusive insight into one of the most famous figures in the wizarding world.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Harry is definitely on different footing with several of the adults from his previous life.
** Professor [=McGonagall=] is concerned about how outspoken he is and whether he's thinking his actions through, but overall their relationship is closer and more equal than before.
** Professor Dumbledore is worried about Harry becoming a second Voldemort, and seems unsure of whether he needs to be stricter or kinder to prevent it. For his part, Harry is confident that Dumbledore will try to do the right thing, but not so sure that he'll consider other opinions on what the right thing is. As a result, they're more or less on the same side, but more distant than canon.
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* OriginalCharacter: Goldfarb, a goblin who becomes Harry's Guardian of his Vaults and assists Harry with financial matters.
* OutsideContextProblem: [[spoiler:The IRA is able to damage the Hogwarts wards with a bomb]] because the school's defences against non-magical assault haven't been updated since the castle was built; Flitwick makes it clear that he will remedy that while repairing the wards.

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* OriginalCharacter: Goldfarb, a goblin who becomes Harry's Guardian of his Vaults and assists Harry with financial matters.
matters. And a few ''security'' matters, [[spoiler:such as revenge on the Dursleys for their abuse]].
* OutsideContextProblem: [[spoiler:The IRA is able to damage the Hogwarts wards with a bomb]] bomb]], because the school's defences against non-magical assault haven't been updated since the castle was built; Flitwick makes it clear that he will remedy that while repairing the wards.



-->'''Harry''': Ron, remember when you asked me why I got so angry when Malfoy nicked my letter?[[note]]Malfoy was taking away one of Harry's rare (and thus treasured) experiences of friendship.[[/note]]
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-->'''Harry''': Remember when I told you how many Christmases I've celebrated before this one?[[note]]The [[TimeyWimeyBall simplified]] answer is [[AbusiveParents zero]].[[/note]]
-->'''Ron''': Same thing, yeah?
-->'''Harry''': Spot on, mate.
-->'''Ron''': I wasn't trying to Malfoy your Christmas, Harry.

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-->'''Harry''': Ron, remember when you asked me why I got so angry when Malfoy nicked my letter?[[note]]Malfoy was taking away one of Harry's rare (and thus treasured) experiences of friendship.[[/note]]
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Remember when I told you how many Christmases I've celebrated before this one?[[note]]The [[TimeyWimeyBall simplified]] answer is [[AbusiveParents zero]].[[/note]]
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'''Ron''':
Same thing, yeah?
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Spot on, mate.
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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: "Let's test out mum's handiwork, shall we?"

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* PreAssKickingOneLiner: "Let's Right before [[spoiler:seizing the possessed Professor Quirrell in both hands]].
--> '''Harry''': Let's
test out mum's handiwork, shall we?"we?
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** Molly Weasley realises that the situation is serious when Ron interrupts her yelling at him and the twins [[spoiler:after they rescue Harry from Privet Drive to get her to take a look at Harry first, as Harry needs urgent medical attention]].


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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Most of the time Harry has to subtly manipulate the authority figures in his life to try and make them do the right thing, such as making false claims about childhood memories to get Dumbledore to consider the possibility of Sirius's innocence. However, Kingsley Shacklebolt is swiftly established as one in his own right when he learns the circumstances of [[spoiler:Harry's rescue from the Dursleys, ignoring the issue of the flying car and making it clear that he recognises that Ron's use of magic in the rescue was necessary to prevent further injury to Harry]].
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* GodzillaThreshhold: When Ron, Fred, and George [[spoiler:rescue Harry during Chapter 11, Ron is afraid to move Harry for fear of hurting him more. So he breaks the Decree for the Reasonable Restriction of Underage Sorcery by using ''mobilicorpus'' so he can move Harry.]]

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* GodzillaThreshhold: GodzillaThreshold: When Ron, Fred, and George [[spoiler:rescue Harry during Chapter 11, Ron is afraid to move Harry for fear of hurting him more. So he breaks the Decree for the Reasonable Restriction of Underage Sorcery by using ''mobilicorpus'' so he can move Harry.]]

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* GodzillaThreshhold: When Ron, Fred, and George [[spoiler:rescue Harry during Chapter 11, Ron is afraid to move Harry for fear of hurting him more. So he breaks the Decree for the Reasonable Restriction of Underage Sorcery by using ''mobilicorpus'' so he can move Harry.]]



** The first time Ron spars wth Ginny, he starts with some [[TrashTalk patronising remarks]], until she gets past his guard and punches him in the gut.

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** The first time Ron spars wth with Ginny, he starts with some [[TrashTalk patronising remarks]], until she gets past his guard and punches him in the gut.



--> Harry cracked a nasty grin and wondered if he was an awful person for taking such delight in their misery. He shrugged. With all he was doing to save people he’d likely never meet, he figured karma owed him a little petty behaviour.

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--> Harry cracked a nasty grin and wondered if he was an awful person for taking such delight in their misery. He shrugged. With all he was doing to save people he’d he'd likely never meet, he figured karma owed him a little petty behaviour.



--> '''Harry''': You two must have been going at it at least forty minutes, right? That’s the longest anyone in Gryffindor has lasted so far this year, isn’t it?\\

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--> '''Harry''': You two must have been going at it at least forty minutes, right? That’s That's the longest anyone in Gryffindor has lasted so far this year, isn’t isn't it?\\


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* OriginalCharacter: Goldfarb, a goblin who becomes Harry's Guardian of his Vaults and assists Harry with financial matters.
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* BadFuture: Er...Yes? To sum up, when the story begins, Harry has at last defeated Voldemort for good, and the rest of the Death Eaters died with him... but Hogwarts has been leveled, all his friends and family are dead, Diagon Alley is gone, and the Death Eaters had been committing purges of the British Isles at such a scale that the US Military had to step in. The devastation had also spread to continental Europe, which was why the US Military stepped in just to keep Voldemort west of the Atlantic Ocean.

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* BadFuture: Er...Yes? To sum up, when the story begins, Harry has at last defeated Voldemort for good, and the rest of the Death Eaters died with him... but Hogwarts has been leveled, all his friends and family are dead, Diagon Alley is gone, and the Death Eaters had been committing purges of the British Isles at such a scale that the US Military had to step in. The devastation had also spread to continental Europe, which was why the US Military stepped in just in; to keep Voldemort west on the east side of the Atlantic Ocean.
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* EmpatheticEnvironment: Hogwarts in the BadFuture is always raining inside after the sack, as if the castle is mourning those who perished defending it.

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* EmpatheticEnvironment: EmpathicEnvironment: The enchanted ceiling at Hogwarts in the BadFuture is always raining inside after the sack, as if the castle is mourning those who perished defending it.
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* EmpathaticEnvironment: Hogwarts in the BadFuture is always raining inside after the sack, as if the castle is mourning those who perished defending it.

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* EmpathaticEnvironment: EmpatheticEnvironment: Hogwarts in the BadFuture is always raining inside after the sack, as if the castle is mourning those who perished defending it.

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