Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FauxAfablyEvil: Max Cash can act rather polite and friendly. But it has a disturbing undercurrent. He [[EvilCannotComprehendGood barely understands friendship]] and basically is just maeeing with heads.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BadFuture: What Rainbow Dash finds herself in. While not dystopian, it's still bad compared to her Present Day. [[spoiler: Applejack finds herself there, too]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SecretIdentity: Rainbow's is [[MythologyGag Firefly]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
to:
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, the alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* ArrangedMarriage: The griffons and changelings have eugenics programs. The Solar King also hs the power to arrange this. [[spoiler: He uses this power to betroth Star Fall to his son]].
to:
* ArrangedMarriage: The griffons and changelings have eugenics programs. The Solar King also hs has the power to arrange this. [[spoiler: He uses this power to betroth betrothe Star Fall to his son]].
* [[BreedingCult Breeding]] [[ThePlan Plan]]: The Solar King is bent on having powerful Royal Heirs to the point[[spoiler: that he wants an Alicorn born into the family. And he believes Star Fall is the key to this]]. So far, nopony else is in agreement with him, but nopony is able to change his mind
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* ImpossibleTask: The Maul is an obstacle course designed to be impossible to complete which is used in training Solar Kingdom spies. [[spoiler: Rainbow complete it, but with a lot more difficulty than she expected as she didn't realise that she'd have to be dodging bullets, missiles and melee fighters at the time.]]
to:
* ImpossibleTask: The Maul is an obstacle course designed to be impossible to complete which is used in training Solar Kingdom spies. [[spoiler: Rainbow complete completed it, but with a lot more difficulty than she expected as she didn't realise that she'd have to be dodging bullets, missiles and melee fighters at the time.]]
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* WarGod: Nightmare Umbra is thought of this way. But she is feared rather thn worshipped.
to:
* WarGod: Nightmare Umbra is thought of this way. But she is feared rather thn than worshipped.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* LightningBruiser: Rainbow is faster, stronger and tougher than pretty much every modern pony.
to:
* LightningBruiser: Rainbow is faster, stronger and tougher than pretty much every modern pony. There ''are'' modern supersonic pegasi, but they are [[FragileSpeedster extreme specialists]] and only the more powerful earth ponies are stronger or tougher (and probably not both).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HealingFactor: Nightmare Umbra regenerates almost instantly from injury, [[MadeOfIron assuming yu can get through her defenses]]. Her [[BloodyMurder blood fights back as well.]] Rainbow also heals extremely quickly to the point that when Star Fall boosted her HealingFactor her wounds began closing up before their eyes.
Added DiffLines:
* LightningBruiser: Rainbow is faster, stronger and tougher than pretty much every modern pony.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* LivingLieDetector: Hard Boiled's magic lets him function as one of these.
Added DiffLines:
* SemanticSuperpower: Rainbow is able to use her talent of being fast and winning to win a bet and learn how to speak Solar in mere days.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* HermeticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
to:
* HermeticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels spells by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Looks like this was more specific than I suspected.
Deleted line(s) 50 (click to see context) :
* VegetarianVampire: Changelings have restrictions on how they can feed. Typically feeding on the love of parents with dead children. Calumn actually considers it wrong to feed on Blaze despite Blaze giving him permission to.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* VegetrianVampire: Changelings have restrictions on how they can feed. Typically feeding on the love of parents with dead children. Calumn actually considers it wrong to feed on Blaze despite Blaze giving him permission to.
to:
* VegetrianVampire: VegetarianVampire: Changelings have restrictions on how they can feed. Typically feeding on the love of parents with dead children. Calumn actually considers it wrong to feed on Blaze despite Blaze giving him permission to.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ShapeshiftersDoItForAChange: Changelings take full advantage of the fact that their VoluntaryShapeshifting let's them switch gender at will. They do have a default gender though.
Added DiffLines:
* VegetrianVampire: Changelings have restrictions on how they can feed. Typically feeding on the love of parents with dead children. Calumn actually considers it wrong to feed on Blaze despite Blaze giving him permission to.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* WarGod: Nightmare Umbra is thought of this way. But she is feared rather thn worshipped.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* FantasticSlur: "Insect" for changeling. Also [[NicknamingTheEnemy the two sides of Eqyestria call each other "lunatics" and "sun-heads".]]
to:
* FantasticSlur: "Insect" for changeling. Also [[NicknamingTheEnemy the two sides of Eqyestria Equestria call each other "lunatics" and "sun-heads".]]
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* ImpossibleTask: The Maul is an obstcle course designed to be impossible to complete which is used in training Solar Kingdom spies. [[spoiler: Rainbow complete it, but with a lot more difficulty than she expected as she didn't realise that she'd have to be dodging bullets, missiles and melee fighters at the time.]]
to:
* ImpossibleTask: The Maul is an obstcle obstacle course designed to be impossible to complete which is used in training Solar Kingdom spies. [[spoiler: Rainbow complete it, but with a lot more difficulty than she expected as she didn't realise that she'd have to be dodging bullets, missiles and melee fighters at the time.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BloodKnight: Charisma's talent actually encourages her to fight. And she really enjoys it.
Added DiffLines:
* CuteAndPsycho: Charisma is a pretty pink pegasus who is considered very attractive. She's also [[AxCrazy dangerously insane]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: A variation. Rainbow ''does'' know how strong she is. What she doesn't realise at first though is how fragile everypony ''else'' is and nearly kills two police officers by accident. Even the air pressure from her sonic booms are dangerous.
Added DiffLines:
* MakeMeWannaShout: Nightmare Umbra uses the Royal Canterlot Voice as a weapon. Sonic booms can also be weaponised.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[ShowWithinAShow Book Within A Fic]]: ''Harmony Theory'' itself and ''The Magic of Friendship''. Both by Twilight.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees what Rainbow can do, she seems impressed and starts calling her "Hot Stuff". She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
to:
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees what Rainbow can do, she seems impressed and starts calling her [[TermsOfEndangerment "Hot Stuff".Stuff"]]. She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
Added DiffLines:
* UnskilledButStrong: Astrid claims that Rainbow is this. Gamma responds that the problem isn't that Rainbow is unskilled, but rather that she's a TechnicalPacifist.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ImpossibleTask: The Maul is an obstcle course designed to be impossible to complete which is used in training Solar Kingdom spies. [[spoiler: Rainbow complete it, but with a lot more difficulty than she expected as she didn't realise that she'd have to be dodging bullets, missiles and melee fighters at the time.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* PsychoExGirlfriend: Charisma is [[spoiler: Trail Blazer's]] ex.
Changed line(s) 40 (click to see context) from:
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented by English in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by writing the language which is spoken less in that scene italics.
to:
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented by English in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by writing the language which is spoken less in that scene in italics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* HermiticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
to:
* HermiticMagic: HermeticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* BadassBookworm: Star Fall.
to:
* BadassBookworm: Star Fall.Fall is a scholar, magic talent, spy and powerful (by modern standards) mage, able to use her abilities in a fight.
Changed line(s) 21,22 (click to see context) from:
* GeniusLoci: The Everstorm seems entient and malevolent.
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
to:
* GeniusLoci: The Everstorm seems entient sentient and malevolent.
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respectivecelestil bodies]].celestial bodies]].
* HermiticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
* {{Gotterdammerung}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective
* HermiticMagic: As a pegasus, Star Fall has no horn and so casts spels by drawing magic circles on spell paper.
Changed line(s) 34 (click to see context) from:
* RealityIsOutToLunch: The Everstorm.
to:
* RealityIsOutToLunch: The Everstorm.Everstorm induces insanity, creates illusions, moves locations, has variable gravity, logic defying weather, attacks with floating skulls and the occasional crucified zombie ursa major animated by fast growing vines among other things.
Changed line(s) 39 (click to see context) from:
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by writing the language which is spoken less in that scene italics.
to:
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented by English in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by writing the language which is spoken less in that scene italics.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18,19 (click to see context) from:
* DeadpanSnarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fall acttually manage to [[spoiler: chase off Nightmre Umbra. However, Umbra is still regaining her strength.]]
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fall acttually manage to [[spoiler: chase off Nightmre Umbra. However, Umbra is still regaining her strength.]]
to:
* DeadpanSnarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and an "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fallacttually actually manage to [[spoiler: chase off Nightmre Umbra. However, Umbra is still regaining her strength.]]
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fall
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees wht Rainbow cn do, she seems impressed and starts calling her "Hot Stuff". She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
to:
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees wht what Rainbow cn can do, she seems impressed and starts calling her "Hot Stuff". She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* IWantMyJetpack: Rainbow actually asks why they don't have jetpacks. Str Fall is actually a bit dissapointed at how unimpressed Rainbow seems with the future.
to:
* IWantMyJetpack: Rainbow actually asks why they don't have jetpacks. Str Star Fall is actually a bit dissapointed disappointed at how unimpressed Rainbow seems with the future.
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
* ManipulativeBastard: Max Cash with alittle help from [[spoiler: a couple of Elements of Harmony]].
to:
* ManipulativeBastard: Max Cash with alittle a little help from [[spoiler: a couple of Elements of Harmony]].
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Modern Equestria is both more scientificlly advanced ''and'' more religious than Rainbow is used to. She considersit strange to think of the alicorns as gods or to pray to them. Twinkle Shine lampshades how this is different from what her clss might expect.
to:
* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Modern Equestria is both more scientificlly scientifically advanced ''and'' more religious than Rainbow is used to. She considersit considers it strange to think of the alicorns as gods or to pray to them. Twinkle Shine lampshades how this is different from what her clss class might expect.
Changed line(s) 36,37 (click to see context) from:
* SlaveRace: Every griffon is pledged to serve the Solar King as his magic is keeping their species from extinction.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow is viewed.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow is viewed.
to:
* SlaveRace: Every griffon is pledged to serve the Solar King King, as his magic is keeping their species from extinction.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow isviewed.viewed by those in the setting.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow is
Added DiffLines:
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* Deadpan Snarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
to:
* Deadpan Snarker: DeadpanSnarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground, next to a dead stallion, with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned tornado duty, in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
to:
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground, next to a dead stallion, with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned tornado duty, in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he she is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
* MindControl: Both an ability used by the changelings and [[spoiler: an ability Max Cash is using the Elements of Harmony for.]]
Changed line(s) 37,38 (click to see context) from:
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by making the language which is spoken less italics.
* WillingChannel: Nightmare Umbra is possessing the willing [[spoiler: Twinkle Shine]].
* WillingChannel: Nightmare Umbra is possessing the willing [[spoiler: Twinkle Shine]].
to:
* TortureTechnician: Charisma and she enjoys it.
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented bymaking writing the language which is spoken less in that scene italics.
*WillingChannel: WillingChanneler: Nightmare Umbra is possessing the willing [[spoiler: Twinkle Shine]].
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by
*
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CloudCuckooLander: Blaze's speeches are enough to make some fans suspect him to be Pinkie's descendant.
Added DiffLines:
* FantasticSlur: "Insect" for changeling. Also [[NicknamingTheEnemy the two sides of Eqyestria call each other "lunatics" and "sun-heads".]]
Added DiffLines:
* InUniverseNickname: Blaze for Trail Blazer.
Added DiffLines:
* ManipulativeBastard: Max Cash with alittle help from [[spoiler: a couple of Elements of Harmony]].
* TheMentor: Twinkle Shine for Star Fall.
* MotorMouth: Blaze really seems to like talking.
* TheMentor: Twinkle Shine for Star Fall.
* MotorMouth: Blaze really seems to like talking.
Added DiffLines:
* OutgrownSuchSillySuperstitions: [[InvertedTrope Inverted.]] Modern Equestria is both more scientificlly advanced ''and'' more religious than Rainbow is used to. She considersit strange to think of the alicorns as gods or to pray to them. Twinkle Shine lampshades how this is different from what her clss might expect.
Added DiffLines:
* RedBaron: Charisma is called "The Asskicker" by her enemies.
* SlaveRace: Every griffon is pledged to serve the Solar King as his magic is keeping their species from extinction.
* SlaveRace: Every griffon is pledged to serve the Solar King as his magic is keeping their species from extinction.
Added DiffLines:
* WillingChannel: Nightmare Umbra is possessing the willing [[spoiler: Twinkle Shine]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
* MySpeciesDothProtestToMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
to:
* MySpeciesDothProtestToMuch: MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 22 (click to see context) from:
* TheInterplayOfSexAndViolence: Charisma is sometimes turned on by the idea of others being injured.
to:
* TheInterplayOfSexAndViolence: InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Charisma is sometimes turned on by the idea of others being injured.
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
* MySpeciesProtestethToMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
to:
* MySpeciesProtestethToMuch: MySpeciesDothProtestToMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
* {{Gotterdammerag}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
to:
* {{Gotterdammerag}}: {{Gotterdammerung}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
* TheMagicGoesAway: The Schism [[spoiler: as part of Celestia and Luna's plan.]]
Deleted line(s) 28 (click to see context) :
* WhenTheMagicWentAway: The Schism [[spoiler: as part of Celestia and Luna's plan.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground next to a dead stallion with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned torndo duty in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
to:
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground underground, next to a dead stallion stallion, with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned torndo duty tornado duty, in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon. and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
to:
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon. superweapon and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
Added DiffLines:
* AfterTheEnd: The Schism was an apocalyptic event which resulted in this.
* ArrangedMarriage: The griffons and changelings have eugenics programs. The Solar King also hs the power to arrange this. [[spoiler: He uses this power to betroth Star Fall to his son]].
* BadassBookworm: Star Fall.
* Deadpan Snarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fall acttually manage to [[spoiler: chase off Nightmre Umbra. However, Umbra is still regaining her strength.]]
* GeniusLoci: The Everstorm seems entient and malevolent.
* {{Gotterdammerag}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees wht Rainbow cn do, she seems impressed and starts calling her "Hot Stuff". She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
* TheInterplayOfSexAndViolence: Charisma is sometimes turned on by the idea of others being injured.
* IWantMyJetpack: Rainbow actually asks why they don't have jetpacks. Str Fall is actually a bit dissapointed at how unimpressed Rainbow seems with the future.
* MySpeciesProtestethToMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
* RealityIsOutToLunch: The Everstorm.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow is viewed.
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by making the language which is spoken less italics.
* WhenTheMagicWentAway: The Schism [[spoiler: as part of Celestia and Luna's plan.]]
* ArrangedMarriage: The griffons and changelings have eugenics programs. The Solar King also hs the power to arrange this. [[spoiler: He uses this power to betroth Star Fall to his son]].
* BadassBookworm: Star Fall.
* Deadpan Snarker: Astrid telling Star that she [[SarcasmMode regrets becoming and "unstoppable badass" instead of learning "egghead language"]] shows her to be this.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Rainbow, Astrid and Star Fall acttually manage to [[spoiler: chase off Nightmre Umbra. However, Umbra is still regaining her strength.]]
* GeniusLoci: The Everstorm seems entient and malevolent.
* {{Gotterdammerag}}: Celestia and Luna are now [[spoiler: sealed in their respective celestil bodies]].
* InLoveWithYourCarnage: After Charisma sees wht Rainbow cn do, she seems impressed and starts calling her "Hot Stuff". She is also pleased by Blaze's resistance to torture.
* TheInterplayOfSexAndViolence: Charisma is sometimes turned on by the idea of others being injured.
* IWantMyJetpack: Rainbow actually asks why they don't have jetpacks. Str Fall is actually a bit dissapointed at how unimpressed Rainbow seems with the future.
* MySpeciesProtestethToMuch: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed.]] Calumn has an existential crisis about his identity as a changeling and what that means, but changelings do not seem to be AlwaysChaoticEvil in this fic. Just [[BlueAndOrangeMorality different]].
* RealityIsOutToLunch: The Everstorm.
* SuperSoldier: How Rainbow is viewed.
* TranslationConvention: There are at least three languages in the fic. All three are represented in the fic. A switch in languages is represented by making the language which is spoken less italics.
* WhenTheMagicWentAway: The Schism [[spoiler: as part of Celestia and Luna's plan.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48739/harmony-theory Harmony Theory]] is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by Sharaloth.
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground next to a dead stallion with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned torndo duty in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
After injuring herself, she is rescued by [[BadassBookworm Star Fall/Fallen Star]] and her griffon bodyguard Astrid, two spies for the Solar Kingdom. Star Fall recognises the language Rainbow speaks as Old Equestrian, that she is the most powerful and magical pegasus to have been seen in at least eight hundred years and that she is claiming to be the ancient hero Rainbow Dash.
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon. and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
And how does all this relate to Twilight's disturbing discoveries about the Elements of Harmony themselves?
----
!!This fanfic contains examples of the following tropes:
After the defeat of Chrysalis, Celestia assigns Twilight the task of studying The Elements of Harmony. Over a thousand years later, Rainbow Dash wakes up underground next to a dead stallion with no memory of anything that has happened since Ponyville was assigned torndo duty in a world very different to the one she is used to. Equestria has split in two, the magic of the world has faded, the geography, cultures and languages are not what he is familiar with and the first thing she does gets her in trouble with the Lunar Republic's police force.
After injuring herself, she is rescued by [[BadassBookworm Star Fall/Fallen Star]] and her griffon bodyguard Astrid, two spies for the Solar Kingdom. Star Fall recognises the language Rainbow speaks as Old Equestrian, that she is the most powerful and magical pegasus to have been seen in at least eight hundred years and that she is claiming to be the ancient hero Rainbow Dash.
The tensions between the two sides of Equestria only increase with the arrival of a living superweapon. and it looks like Nightmare Umbra, alicorn of war is set to return. And what does Rainbow's arrival have to do with the activities of the criminal Max Cash?
And how does all this relate to Twilight's disturbing discoveries about the Elements of Harmony themselves?
----
!!This fanfic contains examples of the following tropes: