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* KillingInSelfDefense: While still an accidental murder, the specifics reason of Mari's death in this continuity was Sunny pushing her away from molesting him.

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"HE TRUSTED YOU!" Another fist, and another web of cracks. "WE trusted you! And look what you did!" She tore off the paper, and pulled it up to her baleful gaze. "He lost four years because of YOU! He keeps having nightmares because of YOU! I-I have to stand there and--" She growled. "He's so scared.... and it's all. Your. '''FAULT!'''"

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"HE TRUSTED YOU!" Another fist, and another web of cracks. "WE trusted you! And look what you did!" She tore off [[StabThePicture the paper, paper]], and pulled it up to her baleful gaze. "He lost four years because of YOU! He keeps having nightmares because of YOU! I-I have to stand there and--" She growled. "He's so scared.... and it's all. Your. '''FAULT!'''"


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* StagingAnIntervention: In ''False Heaven'', Basil, Kel, and Hero, on Kim's behest, invite Aubrey to lunch at the lake, but it turns out to be them sitting her down so they can talk to her about her rampaging throughout Faraway Town and taking her hatred of Mari out on everyone else.
-->Hero took a moment to gather himself. "There's something we need to talk to you about."\\
She started to frown. "What in the hell do we 'need' to talk about? Nothing's going on."\\
Hero sighed. "Aubrey, we're concerned about your behavior. Your anger, in particular, is becoming a problem again."\\
"Are you kidding-- my temper is ''fine''!"\\
"We both know that's not true." Hero sniped, meeting her with a firm stare.
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* StabThePicture: In ''False Heaven'', Aubrey takes out her hatred of the deceased Mari on a comically exaggerated drawing of her pasted on a teddy bear, giving it a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech all the while.

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* WhatTheHellHero: When Sunny confessed to what Mari did to him and to killing her, [[{{Pun}} Hero]] at first tries to deny it, claiming that Sunny is still recovering mentally from his fight with Basil and possibly delirious. This absolutely angers Aubrey and Kel (albeit to a lesser extent than her), while Sunny, horrified at Hero refusing to believe him, runs off to the hospital roof and [[DrivenToSuicide tries to end himself]].

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* WhatTheHellHero: When Sunny confessed to what Mari did to him and to killing her, [[{{Pun}} Hero]] at first tries to deny it, claiming that Sunny is Sunny's only saying all of it because he's still recovering mentally delirous from his the fight with Basil and possibly delirious. last night. This absolutely angers Aubrey and Kel (albeit to a lesser extent than her), while Sunny, horrified at Hero refusing to believe him, runs off to the hospital roof and [[DrivenToSuicide tries to end himself]].himself]].
-->“Sunny… Sunny’s still recovering from the fight with Basil,” Hero said, sparing a glance at the still unconscious boy. “He might have a concussion, or maybe he’s still delirious from whatever medication they put him on.” \\
“''Maybe''!?” Aubrey snapped. \\
Her yell made Sunny back up further away. She cast him a sad, apologetic look before turning back to Hero. “You think ''that’s'' fake?” She asked, in a milder tone.
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* WhatTheHellHero: When Sunny confessed to what Mari did to him and to killing her, [[{{Pun}} Hero]] at first tries to deny it, claiming that Sunny is still recovering mentally from his fight with Basil and possibly delirious. This absolutely angers Aubrey and Kel (albeit to a lesser extent than her), while Sunny, horrified at Hero refusing to believe him, runs off to the hospital roof and [[DrivenToSuicide tries to end himself]].
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-->[Kel] found it hard to believe that the girl that everyone looked up to, the girl that his brother collapsed over, may have been a monster. But he believed regardless. He believed in Sunny’s clear anguish and fear.

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-->[Kel] --->[Kel] found it hard to believe that the girl that everyone looked up to, the girl that his brother collapsed over, may have been a monster. But he believed regardless. He believed in Sunny’s clear anguish and fear.



-->How many times did she pin Sunny down? How many times did everyone smile and laugh with Mari, unaware of her crimes? How many times did Mari wave off Sunny's mood when Aubrey asked about it....?\\

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-->How --->How many times did she pin Sunny down? How many times did everyone smile and laugh with Mari, unaware of her crimes? How many times did Mari wave off Sunny's mood when Aubrey asked about it....?\\

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* BrokenPedestal: Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends, and TheHeart of their group, to the point that her death caused them to split up. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand. Basil, who is noted as having trusted Mari greatly, becomes unable to bond with Polly (his caretaker) because he thinks she might do the same to him, and Aubrey goes from dying her hair pink because Mari wanted it, to openly expressing a desire to kill Mari herself. In ''False Heaven'', Aubrey directly tells (a picture of) Mari how she betrayed them.

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Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends, and TheHeart of their group, to the point that her death caused them to split up. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand. Basil, who is noted as having trusted Mari greatly, becomes unable to bond with Polly (his caretaker) because he thinks she might do the same to him, and Aubrey goes from dying her hair pink because Mari wanted it, to openly expressing a desire to kill Mari herself. Kel takes it a little better, but still needs time to process it.
-->[Kel] found it hard to believe that the girl that everyone looked up to, the girl that his brother collapsed over, may have been a monster. But he believed regardless. He believed in Sunny’s clear anguish and fear.
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In ''False Heaven'', Aubrey directly tells (a picture of) Mari how she betrayed them.

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* BrokenPedestal: Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends, and TheHeart of their group, to the point that her death caused them to split up. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand. Basil, who is noted as having trusted Mari greatly, becomes unable to bond with Polly (his caretaker) because he thinks she might do the same to him, and Aubrey goes from dying her hair pink because Mari wanted it, to openly expressing a desire to kill Mari herself.

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* BrokenPedestal: Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends, and TheHeart of their group, to the point that her death caused them to split up. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand. Basil, who is noted as having trusted Mari greatly, becomes unable to bond with Polly (his caretaker) because he thinks she might do the same to him, and Aubrey goes from dying her hair pink because Mari wanted it, to openly expressing a desire to kill Mari herself. In ''False Heaven'', Aubrey directly tells (a picture of) Mari how she betrayed them.
-->How many times did she pin Sunny down? How many times did everyone smile and laugh with Mari, unaware of her crimes? How many times did Mari wave off Sunny's mood when Aubrey asked about it....?\\
"HE TRUSTED YOU!" Another fist, and another web of cracks. "WE trusted you! And look what you did!" She tore off the paper, and pulled it up to her baleful gaze. "He lost four years because of YOU! He keeps having nightmares because of YOU! I-I have to stand there and--" She growled. "He's so scared.... and it's all. Your. '''FAULT!'''"
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Expanding on the “worshipping” aspect.


* BrokenPedestal: Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand.

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* BrokenPedestal: Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's friends.friends, and TheHeart of their group, to the point that her death caused them to split up. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the reveal that she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand. Basil, who is noted as having trusted Mari greatly, becomes unable to bond with Polly (his caretaker) because he thinks she might do the same to him, and Aubrey goes from dying her hair pink because Mari wanted it, to openly expressing a desire to kill Mari herself.
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Being seen as a Cool Big Sis does indicate some level of idolatry.


%% * BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Sunny's mother especially hard, to the extent that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and Aubrey goes from mourning her dear friend to wishing she could kill Mari herself. %%%%% Partial Context Example: Did anyone idolize Mari?

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%% * BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Mari was seen as the CoolBigSis by Sunny's mother especially hard, friends. Needless to say, they all have a lot of trouble coming to terms with the extent reveal that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and she had been sexually abusing Sunny, with Aubrey goes from mourning her dear friend to wishing she could kill Mari herself. %%%%% Partial Context Example: Did anyone idolize Mari?and Basil in particular getting traumatized secondhand.
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%% * BrotherSisterIncest: An unwilling example.

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%% * BrotherSisterIncest: An unwilling example.example, with Mari sexually abusing her younger brother, Sunny.

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* CerebusRetcon: Some of Mari's canon dialogue and unused Something dialogue is repurposed to make Mari sound predatory towards Sunny. For example, her {{Catchphrase}}, "All it costs is your love!"- the love in this case being her sexual assaults. And Something saying "Sunny... I love you" is because that is what Mari would say while molesting him.

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* CerebusRetcon: Some of Mari's canon dialogue and unused Something dialogue is repurposed to make Mari sound predatory towards Sunny. For example, her {{Catchphrase}}, "All it costs is your love!"- the love in this case being her sexual assaults. "Don’t be afraid. It’s not as scary as you think." has the same meaning here. And Something saying says "Sunny... I love you" is because that is what Mari would say while molesting him.him.
-->Sunny couldn’t find stability. Every piece of advice Mari had ever given him just reminded him of something darker about her and he hated it he hated it he hated it he hated it

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* BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Sunny's mother especially hard, to the extent that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and Aubrey goes from mourning her dear friend to wishing she could kill Mari herself.
* BrotherSisterIncest: An unwilling example.

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%% * BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Sunny's mother especially hard, to the extent that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and Aubrey goes from mourning her dear friend to wishing she could kill Mari herself.
herself. %%%%% Partial Context Example: Did anyone idolize Mari?
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* BrotherSisterIncest: An unwilling example.



* KarmicDeath: In sharp contrast to the original canon where Mari's death is a tragic accident, Mari is accidentally killed by Sunny when she attempts to rape him.
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* KarmicDeath: In sharp contrast to the original canon where Mari's death is a tragic accident, Mari is accidentally killed by Sunny when she attempts to rape him.
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There's also a similar one-shot fanfic, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32998861 False Heaven]]'' by Schrift, which is openly inspired by this one but takes place in a slightly different continuity. It follows a similar setup with a Sunny/Aubrey pairing and deals with Aubrey's growing frustration with her inability to have a physical relationship with Sunny due to his [[HatesBeingTouched aversion to touch]].

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There's also a similar one-shot fanfic, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32998861 False Heaven]]'' by Schrift, which is openly inspired by this one but takes place in a slightly different continuity. It follows a similar setup with a Sunny/Aubrey pairing and deals with Aubrey's growing frustration with her inability to have a physical relationship with Sunny due to his [[HatesBeingTouched aversion to touch]]. The original author scitydreamer [[ApprovalOfGod commented their support and enjoyed the work]], so for all intents and purposes this could be treated as a SpiritualSuccessor.
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There's also a similar one-shot fanfic, ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/32998861 False Heaven]]'' by Schrift, which is openly inspired by this one but takes place in a slightly different continuity. It follows a similar setup with a Sunny/Aubrey pairing and deals with Aubrey's growing frustration with her inability to have a physical relationship with Sunny due to his [[HatesBeingTouched aversion to touch]].

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* CerebusRetcon: Some of Mari's canon dialogue and unused Something dialogue is repurposed to make Mari sound predatory towards Sunny. For example, her {{Catchphrase}}, "All it costs is your love!"- the love in this case being her sexual assaults. And Something saying "Sunny... I love you" is because that is what Mari would say while molesting him.



* DarkReprise: Some of Mari's canon dialogue and unused Something dialogue is repurposed to make Mari sound predatory.
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* TraumaButton: The thought of Sunny being around Mari, as well as things that heavily remind him of her, cause his traumatic memories to resurface. To protect Sunny, his mother donated their piano to Faraway's church, and Hero decided to stow away Basil's photos of Mari (and all except the ones of her with Hero were burned by Aubrey).
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* SpiritualSuccessor: The fanfic is explicitly said to be inspired by ''[[VideoGame/{{LISA}} LISA the First]]'', a ''VideoGame/YumeNikki''-esque SurrealHorror game about a child being sexually abused by a family member and experiencing nightmares because of it.
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* DarkReprise: Some of Mari's canon dialogue and unused Something dialogue is repurposed to make Mari sound predatory.
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Adult Fear is no longer a trope


* AdultFear: Sunny's mom is horrified to learn about the abuse that went on in her house under her nose and is heartbroken when Sunny initially rejects her attempt to comfort him.
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His grandma shook her head. “You’re too young to know what it’s about.”\

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His grandma shook her head. “You’re too young to know what it’s about.”\
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Averted. Mari sexually abusing Sunny is treated exactly as horrifying as it should be.

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His grandma shook her head. “You’re too young to know what it’s about.”

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His grandma shook her head. “You’re too young to know what it’s about.”\
* InterruptedIntimacy: A dark example that happens to Mari twice as she is about to molest her little brother Sunny- once by Basil concerned about Sunny, and once by Kel looking to surprise the siblings. Naturally, Sunny is grateful for being saved.
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* HarmfulToMinors: A flashback in ''Will You Forgive Me, My Best Friend?'' shows Basil watching a mystery drama with his grandmother only to end up witnessing the beginning of a rape scene. His grandmother ends up giving him TheTalk, but about rape specifically.
-->In one case, there was a show where a man shoved a woman into bed, reaching out with his hands to rip at her clothes while she cried -\\\
Grandma had turned off the television, shaking her head. “They don’t need to show that stuff for the mystery. Television these days is getting to be too much.”\\\
“Grandma, what was happening there?” Basil remembered asking her in confusion.\\\
His grandma shook her head. “You’re too young to know what it’s about.”


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* ShowWithinAShow: Basil and his grandmother are shown watching mystery dramas. They teach Basil things like not going out at night, muggers like to hide in alleyways, and such.


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* TheTalk: In ''Will You Forgive Me, My Best Friend?'', Basil is said by the narration to already have gotten the "birds and bees" talk from his grandmother after he witnessed a sex scene in a romance show. But when he witnesses the beginning of a rape scene in a mystery drama, his grandma has to give him a ''different'' talk explaining what rape is.
-->“Listen Basil. You remember the birds and the bees? That’s usually for people that love each other. But when one person doesn’t want it… when they’re hurt by it… that’s something called rape. It’s something that really hurts a person and it scars them for life.”\\\
“Scar?”\\\
“Not a physical scar, but a scar in here,” she pointed at her head for emphasis. “It’s something that destroys people. So Basil dear, if there’s anyone that ever tries to do that to you or makes you feel uncomfortable… please let someone you trust know.”
* TaughtByTelevision: Basil learned quite a few things from watching mystery dramas with his grandmother, like it being dangerous to go out at night, how to dig a hole, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and]] the [[HarmfulToMinors concept of rape]].

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* NoAntagonist: Downplayed in the three sequel fics, where BigBad Mari is already dead, and like in the canon game, the only thing Sunny faces against at large after Mari's death is the trauma handed to him. But despite her absence, Mari's abuse still lingers in the minds of Sunny, Basil, and the other friends once they realize the truth.

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* NoAntagonist: Downplayed in the three two sequel fics, where BigBad Mari is already dead, and like in the canon game, the only thing Sunny faces against at large after Mari's death is the trauma handed to him. But despite her absence, Mari's abuse still lingers in the minds of Sunny, Basil, and the other friends once they realize the truth.



* VillainousIncest: Initiated by Mari on an unwilling Sunny.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Mari is seen as her beloved self from the original game, as Sunny refuses to hurt everyone else's perception of her.
* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: Shortly before her death, Mari blames Sunny for getting slapped in the face by her after he tried to resist her ''[[VillainousIncest rape attempt]]''.

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* HatesBeingTouched: Sunny is averse to physical intimacy — particularly from grown women — because he was sexually assaulted by his sister.
* HeelFaceTurn: Omori stands against Sunny at the end of the first fic because he's upholding Sunny's sincere belief that he should hide what Mari did to him. After Sunny comes to terms with the truth, though, he actively helps him fight against his trauma... [[JustifiedTrope which is what he was first created to stave off]].



* SpiritualSuccessor: The fanfic is explicitly said to be inspired by ''[[VideoGame/{{LISA}} LISA the First]]''.

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* SpiritualSuccessor: The fanfic is explicitly said to be inspired by ''[[VideoGame/{{LISA}} LISA the First]]''.First]]'', a ''VideoGame/YumeNikki''-esque SurrealHorror game about a child being sexually abused by a family member and experiencing nightmares because of it.


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* AdaptationalVillainy: The story follows an alternative reading of the game's story where Mari is portrayed as a predator who molested Sunny and is thought by Aubrey to have planned to prey on Basil.



* BigBad: Mari in the first and second story is Sunny's sexual abuser and the cause of all his trauma. Even after her death, her actions cast a shadow in the two following stories.

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* BigBad: Mari in the first and second story stories is Sunny's sexual abuser and the cause of all his trauma. Even after her death, her actions cast a shadow in the two following stories.



* DrivenToSuicide: Sunny nearly throws himself off the hospital's roof when he's triggered by his reawakening trauma, but Omori manages to dissuade him.
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* AdultFear: Sunny's mom is horrified to learn about the abuse that went on in her house under her nose and is heartbroken when Sunny initially rejects her attempt to comfort him.


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* SpiritualSuccessor: The fanfic is explicitly said to be inspired by ''[[VideoGame/{{LISA}} LISA the First]]''.


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* VillainousIncest: Initiated by Mari on an unwilling Sunny.
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* BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Sunny's mother especially hard, to the extent that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and part of Aubrey wishes she was able to kill Mari herself.

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* BrokenPedestal: The revelation of Mari's abuse towards Sunny hit Hero, Aubrey, and Sunny's mother especially hard, to the extent that Hero temporarily winds up in denial, and part of Aubrey wishes goes from mourning her dear friend to wishing she was able to could kill Mari herself.

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