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* BornFromPlants: As said in Chapter 34:
--> wild pixies are like little helpers to Yggdrasil, they protect and tend to World Tree and its offshoots. They spawn from a rare species of flower that only buds in the presence of the World Tree or one of its shoots and only blossoms on the night of a full moon. [=ALfheim=] lore says that Navigation Pixies are wild pixies that are born from a Yggdrasil Blossom that blooms in captivity.
--> wild pixies are like little helpers to Yggdrasil, they protect and tend to World Tree and its offshoots. They spawn from a rare species of flower that only buds in the presence of the World Tree or one of its shoots and only blossoms on the night of a full moon. [=ALfheim=] lore says that Navigation Pixies are wild pixies that are born from a Yggdrasil Blossom that blooms in captivity.
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* CameBackWrong:[[spoiler: Aki, this is especially evident in {{Omake}} snippets.]]
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* CameBackWrong:[[spoiler: Aki, CameBackWrong: [[spoiler:Aki, this is especially evident in {{Omake}} snippets.]]
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* LessonsInSophistication: [[spoiler: Kirito had to take a crash course in lady-like behavior to better sell his "Midori" disguise during V 2.0's gala. Asuna did not need to because she already did back on earth.]]
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* AstonishinglyAppropriateAppearance: The Fae as a matter of course.
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* AttractiveBentGender: [[spoiler:Kirito/Midori is regarded as a stunning beauty by all who meet her]]
** Shiori technically counts as well.
** Shiori technically counts as well.
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* AttractiveBentGender: AttractiveBentGender:
** [[spoiler:Kirito/Midori is regarded as a stunning beauty by all who meet her]]
** Shiori technically counts aswell.well given she was a guy in Japan and the triplets are considered to be cute. As it happens, one of them has a male faction disguise.
** [[spoiler:Kirito/Midori is regarded as a stunning beauty by all who meet her]]
** Shiori technically counts as
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Unlike most [=ZnT=] crossover fics, Saito is actually in this one. He is promptly killed, turned into a zombie, and then killed for good. And the audience doesn't know this until after the fact when ''his real name is put on his gravestone with his SAO handle''.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Unlike most [=ZnT=] crossover fics, Saito is actually in this one. He is promptly killed, turned into a zombie, and then killed for good. And the The audience doesn't know this until after the fact when ''his real name is put on his gravestone with his SAO handle''.]]
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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler: Probably Kirito's point of view when Yui HACKS Cardinal and upgrades his Beast Form to full Gleam Eyes during his fight with the Raid Boss near the Yggdrasil shoot.]]
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* DeusExMachina: [[spoiler: Probably This is Kirito's point of view when Yui HACKS Cardinal and upgrades his Beast Form to full Gleam Eyes during his fight with the Raid Boss near the Yggdrasil shoot.shoot. He has no idea what's going on when he is transformed into Gleam Eyes just as he was about to lose. A god, or something like it, was indeed involved after all.]]
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* [[TheDividual The Trividual]]: Shiori is a special case, in that she's three Cait Sith, sharing one mind.
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* [[TheDividual The Trividual]]: TheDividual: Shiori is a special case, in that she's three Cait Sith, sharing one mind.
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** Shiori is very much aware that her mission is probably one of those. She tries hard not to think about that.
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** Shiori is very much aware that her mission is probably one of those.going to kill her. She tries hard not to think about that.
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* FromBadToWorse: Asuna and the research subjects. On the upshot, Sugou apparently wasn't logged in when the transfer occurred, and the changes to the game world busted the lock on Asuna's cage and woke up the other [=SAOvivors=]. On the other hand, [[spoiler: their only escape route dumped them in Albion, right in the middle of a civil war.]] Out of the frying pan...
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* FromBadToWorse: FromBadToWorse:
** Asuna and the research subjects. On the upshot, Sugou apparently wasn't logged in when the transfer occurred, and the changes to the game world busted the lock on Asuna's cage and woke up the other [=SAOvivors=]. On the other hand, [[spoiler: their only escape route dumped them in Albion, right in the middle of a civil war.]] Out of the frying pan...
** Asuna and the research subjects. On the upshot, Sugou apparently wasn't logged in when the transfer occurred, and the changes to the game world busted the lock on Asuna's cage and woke up the other [=SAOvivors=]. On the other hand, [[spoiler: their only escape route dumped them in Albion, right in the middle of a civil war.]] Out of the frying pan...
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: [[spoiler:Louise relives Asuna's memories of getting intimate with Kirito. It is unclear how much she actually saw.]]
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: GettingCrapPastTheRadar:
** [[spoiler:Louise relives Asuna's memories of getting intimate with Kirito. It is unclear how much she actually saw.]]
** [[spoiler:Louise relives Asuna's memories of getting intimate with Kirito. It is unclear how much she actually saw.]]
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* GiantFlyer: [[spoiler:Lhamthanc the Steel Toothed's second form.]]
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* GiantFlyer: GiantFlyer:
** [[spoiler:Lhamthanc the Steel Toothed's secondform.form can fly.]]
** [[spoiler:Lhamthanc the Steel Toothed's second
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Played with. [[spoiler:Asuna's reunion kiss with Kirito, while the latter is still in his female disguise. Caramella seems all too pleased to have witnessed the sight.]]
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: GirlOnGirlIsHot:
** Playedwith. with during [[spoiler:Asuna's reunion kiss with Kirito, while the latter is still in his female disguise. Caramella seems all too pleased to have witnessed the sight.]]
** Played
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* GondorCallsForAid: Downplayed in that Kirito never actually asked for their help, but [[spoiler: a host of SAO survivors including Agil, Klein, Lizbeth, Silica, and Argo followed the rumors of Asuna's appearance in ALO and jumped into Alfheim to help Kirito just before the transport.]]
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* GondorCallsForAid: Downplayed in that Kirito never actually asked for their help, but [[spoiler: a host of SAO survivors including Agil, Klein, Lizbeth, Silica, and Argo followed the rumors of Asuna's appearance in ALO and jumped into Alfheim to help Kirito just before the transport.Transition.]]
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* HappierHomeMovie: [[spoiler:Brimir's memories that Louise sees. Doubles as a sort of {{Video Will|s}}.]]
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* HappierHomeMovie: [[spoiler:Brimir's memories that Louise sees. Doubles sees look fairly idyllic but Brimir himself isn't happy. This doubles as a sort of {{Video Will|s}}.]]
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* HellHolePrison: La Forace Prison. A secret underground facility built by the order of First Lord Justice of Tristain Lord Aschcroft, right under his home.
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* HellHolePrison: La Forace Prison. A Prison is a secret underground facility built by the order of First Lord Justice of Tristain Lord Aschcroft, right under his home.home. It made his torturing habit more convenient.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: How Matilda intends to hide Tiffania in Tristain after getting her out of Albion. Sylphs look a lot like Elves and Half-Elves, so Tiffa can be covered as a Sylph who doesn't like flying.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: HiddenInPlainSight:
** When it is revealed that [[spoiler: the Henrietta that was kidnapped at the gala in V.20 was actually a body double]], Guiche wonders where the real one could possibly be that would be safer than where the fake one was. It doesn't occur to him [[spoiler: to take a close look at any of the musketeer guards.]]
** How Matilda intends to hide Tiffania in Tristain after getting her out of Albion. Sylphs look a lot like Elves and Half-Elves, so Tiffa can be covered as a Sylph who doesn't like flying.
** When it is revealed that [[spoiler: the Henrietta that was kidnapped at the gala in V.20 was actually a body double]], Guiche wonders where the real one could possibly be that would be safer than where the fake one was. It doesn't occur to him [[spoiler: to take a close look at any of the musketeer guards.]]
** How Matilda intends to hide Tiffania in Tristain after getting her out of Albion. Sylphs look a lot like Elves and Half-Elves, so Tiffa can be covered as a Sylph who doesn't like flying.
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* HostageSituation: Kirito engineers a situation like this as a show of good faith to the Tristainians, offering himself as a hostage to ensure Colbert's safety in diplomacy with the Sylphs.
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* HostageSituation: HostageSituation:
** Kirito engineers a situation like this as a show of good faith to the Tristainians, offering himself as a hostage to ensure Colbert's safety in diplomacy with the Sylphs.
** Kirito engineers a situation like this as a show of good faith to the Tristainians, offering himself as a hostage to ensure Colbert's safety in diplomacy with the Sylphs.
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* ImplacableMan: Aki seems to be NighInvulnerable.
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* ImplacableMan: Aki seems to be NighInvulnerable.NighInvulnerable due to her zombie ability to pull herself together.
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* OrphanageOfLove: The Fae lords set one up in Arrun for the child players whose parents didn't transition. It is especially vital to players who were "joyriding" their older sibling accounts and are now extremely YoungerThanTheyLook and face possible exploitation. It is staffed by caring volunteers.
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* OrphanageOfLove: The Fae lords set one up in Arrun for the child players whose parents didn't transition. It is especially vital to players who were "joyriding" their older sibling accounts and are now extremely YoungerThanTheyLook and face possible exploitation. It is staffed by caring volunteers. volunteers, and run by a kind and motherly caregiver, Irene Sensei.
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*IKnowYourTrueName: The Fae typically go by their avatar's handle rather than their player's name, only telling the latter to exceptionally close relations. Few people, for instance, know that Kino's name is [[spoiler: actually Hayato]], and one of them is his surrogate big sister.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Mortimer's reaction to learning that [[spoiler:Morgiana is pregnant and his brother is the father.]]
** [[spoiler:It gets worse when just earlier he implied to be a recovering alcoholic.]]
** [[spoiler:It gets worse when just earlier he implied to be a recovering alcoholic.]]
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Mortimer's reaction to learning that [[spoiler:Morgiana is pregnant and his brother is the father.]]
**]] [[spoiler:It gets worse when just earlier he implied to be a recovering alcoholic.]]
**
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* AttractiveBentGender: [[spoiler:Kirito/Midori.]]
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* AttractiveBentGender: [[spoiler:Kirito/Midori.]][[spoiler:Kirito/Midori is regarded as a stunning beauty by all who meet her]]
*ClosestThingWeGot: When players-turned-Fae realized they had to build their own society, everyone with potential trade skills was tapped. Many of them had legitimate training and experience but not every job was covered. Need a military? Start with the role-play mercenaries and soldiers. Need civil engineers? Grab the people who managed aquariums for their pet fish. Need murder investigators? Recruit the info broker, the real-life police officer with training in an entirely different area, and the guy who did just this sort of thing, once, in SAO.
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* MamaBear: Morgiana is a frightful adversary under normal circumstances but she gets downright ''scary'' when her guild, Kurotaka, is in lethal trouble.
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* MamaBear: Morgiana is a frightful adversary under normal circumstances but she gets downright ''scary'' when her guild, guild "children", the Kurotaka, is in lethal trouble.
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** [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd]] also get one in the second arc. [[spoiler: The former is a NEET who despises the other fairies for seeking ways back to the world that rejected him and also for trying to import it here, to what he sees as his escape from "that other world". The latter is just a revenge nut because Sakuya banished him pre-Transition and he just smacked with an uncurable status aliment afterward.]]
* MurderMystery: Poor [[spoiler:Novair.]]
* MurderMystery: Poor [[spoiler:Novair.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd]] also get one in the second arc. [[spoiler: The former is a NEET who despises the other fairies for seeking ways back to the world that rejected him and also for trying to import it here, to what he sees as his escape from "that other world". The latter is just a revenge nut because Sakuya banished him pre-Transition and he just got smacked with an uncurable status aliment afterward.]]
* MurderMystery: Poor [[spoiler:Novair.]]]] He died to start off the second arc and Kirito and Argo investigate how and why.
* MurderMystery: Poor [[spoiler:Novair.
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* NoEscapeButDown: How [[spoiler:Wales]] rescues [[spoiler:Caramella]] in York.
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* NoEscapeButDown: NoEscapeButDown:
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** How [[spoiler:Wales]] rescues [[spoiler:Caramella]] in York.
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* OrphanageOfLove: The Fae lords set one up in Arrun for the child players whose parents didn't transition. It is especially vital to players who were "joyriding" their older sibling accounts and are now extremely YoungerThanTheyLook and face possible exploitation.
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* OrphanageOfLove: The Fae lords set one up in Arrun for the child players whose parents didn't transition. It is especially vital to players who were "joyriding" their older sibling accounts and are now extremely YoungerThanTheyLook and face possible exploitation. It is staffed by caring volunteers.
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*TemptingFate: In the aftermath of the Gala, Kirito swears that he's never ever going to use his "Midori" faction disguise again; not one more time in his entire life. Not a second passes before Monmon appears and pleads with "Midori" to visit Guiche more often because "she" is such a good influence on him. Asuna isn't sure if Kirito wants to scream or cry.
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* FairFolk: Many humans in Halkegenia see the players-turned-Fae as the classic archetype. These unnaturally beautiful humanoids appeared out of nowhere from another world (LandOfFaerie, perhaps?). They wield a type of magic alien to their own which can be beguile the mind of their victims or turn themselves into beasts. The fact they, by the Fae's own admission, created an entire illusory reality ''for fun'' only furthers the perception.
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* FairFolk: Many humans in Halkegenia see the players-turned-Fae as the classic archetype. These unnaturally beautiful humanoids appeared out of nowhere from another world (LandOfFaerie, perhaps?). They wield a type of magic alien to their own which can be beguile the mind of their victims or turn themselves into beasts. The fact they, by the Fae's own admission, created an entire illusory reality ''for fun'' only furthers the perception.
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* NobodyPoops: As a result of RealityEnsues, this trope is discussed. Klein (to Leafa's scandal) asks Yui if she has to poop now since she has become a physical existence. She does, and finds it inconvenient but "just biology" and nothing to be embarrassed about.
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* NobodyPoops: As a result of RealityEnsues, this trope is discussed. Klein (to Leafa's scandal) asks Yui if she has to poop now since she has become a physical existence. She does, and finds it inconvenient but "just biology" and nothing to be embarrassed about. ''Dealing'' with the waste is also a major concern.
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*** The mobs and other flora and fauna have caused some ecological reshuffling.
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*** In theory, transformation spells like Kirito's Metamorphosis Baphomet form possess identical stats to the user's Faerie form, which made them not very popular. Now that they're in the real world, these spells are more useful, due to simple applications of strength, size, leverage, and mass. It can have some downsides as well though, like being a bigger target.
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* AncientConspiracy: [[spoiler:The Church is keeping birth records and investigating mages claimed to be failures to find users of the void, and has been doing so for generations.]]
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* AncientConspiracy: [[spoiler:The Church is keeping birth records and investigating mages claimed to be failures to find users of the void, Void, and has been doing so for generations.]]
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*FairFolk: Many humans in Halkegenia see the players-turned-Fae as the classic archetype. These unnaturally beautiful humanoids appeared out of nowhere from another world (LandOfFaerie, perhaps?). They wield a type of magic alien to their own which can be beguile the mind of their victims or turn themselves into beasts. The fact they, by the Fae's own admission, created an entire illusory reality ''for fun'' only furthers the perception.
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* FantasticRacism: The Tristainians are deathly afraid of elves, and the fairies happen to look like elves with wings. It takes some fast talking and good diplomacy on multiple fronts to keep this from being applied to the fairies as a whole, but it works for the most part.
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* FantasticRacism: FantasticRacism:
** The Tristainians are deathly afraid of elves, and the fairies happen to look like elves with wings. It takes some fast talking and good diplomacy on multiple fronts to keep this from being applied to the fairies as a whole, but it works for the most part.
** The Tristainians are deathly afraid of elves, and the fairies happen to look like elves with wings. It takes some fast talking and good diplomacy on multiple fronts to keep this from being applied to the fairies as a whole, but it works for the most part.
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: All over the place.
* HomingProjectile: See RidingTheBomb below.
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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd do this to Sakuya in Chapter ten of the second arc, in a twist they do this while being totally oblivious to the fact that their plans are being ruined utterly.]]
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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd do this to Sakuya in Chapter ten of the second arc, the former threatening to rape her and the latter cutting her face to make her uglier. They both indulge in EvilGloating while she's tied up. In a twist they do this while being totally oblivious to the fact that their plans are being ruined utterly.]]
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* MotiveRant: [[spoiler:Fernand]] has one of these in the Tarbes Arc.
** [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd]] also get one in the second arc.
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* MotiveRant: MotiveRant:
** [[spoiler:Fernand]] has one of these in the TarbesArc.
Arc where he [[spoiler: explains that he is the one behind the destruction of Sayuri's garden and is selling off the pixies to enrich himself, and he's doing this to recoup what he lost freeing his former friend from a POW camp.]]
** [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd]] also get one in the second arc. [[spoiler: The former is a NEET who despises the other fairies for seeking ways back to the world that rejected him and also for trying to import it here, to what he sees as his escape from "that other world". The latter is just a revenge nut because Sakuya banished him pre-Transition and he just smacked with an uncurable status aliment afterward.]]
** [[spoiler:Fernand]] has one of these in the Tarbes
** [[spoiler:Ephialtes and Sigurd]] also get one in the second arc. [[spoiler: The former is a NEET who despises the other fairies for seeking ways back to the world that rejected him and also for trying to import it here, to what he sees as his escape from "that other world". The latter is just a revenge nut because Sakuya banished him pre-Transition and he just smacked with an uncurable status aliment afterward.]]
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:Just in case you weren't sure that Ephialtes and Sigurd weren't evil, they both openly gloat about how they are going to rape Sakuya before killing her. Ephialtes also wants to do the same to Leafa.]]
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler:Just in case you weren't sure that Ephialtes and Sigurd weren't were evil, they both openly gloat about how they are going to rape Sakuya before killing her. Ephialtes also wants to do the same to Leafa. Sakuya herself finds this more despicable than their acts of murder and treason, because it based entirely in malice and selfishness.]]
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Kirito is forcing Asuna to take one post-Dunkirk for the sake of her sanity.
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Kirito is forcing Asuna to take one stay out of combat post-Dunkirk for the sake of her sanity. She gets a ''little'' better over the following weeks and months. [[spoiler: Then she jumps back into action for the gala security plan.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Sakuya's response to Mortimer's plan [[spoiler:to capture Rio in order to interrogate him for information regarding Rip Jack]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 10, Part 7 of the second arc [[spoiler:Louise casting explosions, with more power and control than ever, using Fae chanting.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 10, Part 7 of the second arc [[spoiler:Louise casting explosions, with more power and control than ever, using Fae chanting.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Sakuya's response to Mortimer's plan [[spoiler:to capture Rio in order to interrogate him for information regarding Rip Jack]]
Jack]] is to scold him for being too heavy-handed and too oblivious to backlash of such an action.
*WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 10, Part 7 of the second arc [[spoiler:Louise casting explosions, with more power and control than ever, using Fae chanting.]]
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** Chapter 10, Part 7 of the second arc [[spoiler:Louise casting explosions, with more power and control than ever, using Fae chanting.]]
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, or neutral. It becomes less ambiguous as we get a closer look at Albion society in v3.0. King James is confirmed to indeed be a tyrannical ruler, whose abuse of power and neglect of the lower classes is the driving force behind the civil war. It changes the moral dynamic somewhat in that the Reconquista Rebels actually become pretty justified, [[UnwittingPawn and are just the victims of opportunists]], while the Royalists are [[JustFollowingOrders mindlessly following a tyrannical regime]] and seemingly have no real excuse. Then it comes back into the grey for the Rebels though, when you consider that Prince Wales was near-universally loved by the people and would have made an excellent monarch. But he was still on the kill list.
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, or neutral. It becomes less ambiguous as we get a closer look at Albion society in v3.0. King James is confirmed to indeed be a tyrannical ruler, whose abuse of power and neglect of the lower classes is the driving force behind the civil war. It changes the moral dynamic somewhat in that the Reconquista Rebels actually become pretty justified, [[UnwittingPawn and are just the victims of opportunists]], while the Royalists are [[JustFollowingOrders mindlessly following a tyrannical regime]] and seemingly have no real excuse. Then it comes back into the grey for the Rebels though, when you consider that Prince Wales was near-universally loved by the people and would have made an excellent monarch. But he was still on the kill list. This is actually lampshaded by Dunwell way back in v1.0 when he thinks that it would've been better for King James to have escaped rather than Wales as it would've helped the people back Reconquista more rather than having them split between the two.
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* GenderEqualsBreed:[[spoiler: Averted. WordOfGod says that all natural born Fae will take after the [=race/faction=] of the mother.]]
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* GenderEqualsBreed:[[spoiler: Averted.Subverted. WordOfGod says that all natural born Fae will take after the [=race/faction=] of the mother.]]
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%%%%* [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bitch]]: Sayuri.
* UselessUsefulSpell: In the original series, Louise's default explosions only did some non-lethal damage and destroyed the surroundings. [[spoiler:During the Tarbes arc, she blows up a [[{{Kaiju}} boss]] that required a small army to fight. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome With a single spell.]]]]
* UselessUsefulSpell: In the original series, Louise's default explosions only did some non-lethal damage and destroyed the surroundings. [[spoiler:During the Tarbes arc, she blows up a [[{{Kaiju}} boss]] that required a small army to fight. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome With a single spell.]]]]
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* UselessUsefulSpell: In the original series, Louise's default explosions only did some non-lethal damage and destroyed the surroundings. [[spoiler:During the Tarbes arc, she blows up a [[{{Kaiju}} boss]] that required a small army to fight.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: So said Asuna unto Suguha. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming And all was right with the world.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: So said Asuna unto Suguha. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming And all was right with the world.]]
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* MyGodYouAreSerious: Karin's reaction to being told about the plan to attack York to assume the men are goofing off; they are, after all, using ''kitchen utensils'' in a supposed combat map. Then she finds out they are serious and so looks deeper into it.
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* MyGodYouAreSerious: Karin's reaction to being told about the plan to attack York is to assume the men are goofing off; they are, after all, using ''kitchen utensils'' in a supposed combat map. Then she finds out they are serious and so looks deeper into it.
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*WorthIt: In Sakuya's opinion, [[spoiler: seeing SmugSnake Rio getting decked by Regin, the smaller and more timid Puca]] was definitely worth its fallout.
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* ItsRainingMen: It's Raining ''Faeries'' over York during Operation Dunirk, [[RidingTheBomb and they guiding high explosives!]]
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* ItsRainingMen: It's Raining ''Faeries'' over York during Operation Dunirk, [[RidingTheBomb and they are guiding high explosives!]]
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*EntertaininglyWrong: Several in the Fairy community, such as Netzel, think that Kirito and Asuna were married adults back on Earth who played Alfheim Online with their daughter Yui, and it was only good fortune that they were all logged in at the same time when the Transition happened. Based on any kind of observation of the trio, one can't fault anyone for coming to this conclusion. Kirito himself is amused and thinks it better that people think that way (for now at least).
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*ExplainExplainOhCrap: While investigating the murders of V 2.0, Argo asks Suisen to list the possible next targets based on what is known of the current victims. She jumps for her dagger seconds before Suisen says her name, and before someone breaks through the roof of her room. [[spoiler: It was only Netzel spying for a story.]]
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* DynamicEntry: Kirito rescuing Asuna.
** The assault on [[spoiler: La Forace prison]].
* EliteMook: The zombie Fae.
** The assault on [[spoiler: La Forace prison]].
* EliteMook: The zombie Fae.
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* DynamicEntry: Kirito rescuing Asuna.
**DynamicEntry:
**Kirito rescues Asuna by [[spoiler: springing into action against the one of the few soldiers she hadn't managed to kill before he arrived, thus turning the tables in her favor.]].
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* EliteMook: The zombieFae.Fae have all the same superhuman abilities as their living counterparts but with additional FeelNoPain, fearlessness, and zealous determination.
**
**Kirito rescues Asuna by [[spoiler: springing into action against the one of the few soldiers she hadn't managed to kill before he arrived, thus turning the tables in her favor.]].
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* EliteMook: The zombie
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* EnfantTerrible: Shiori is a set of three of them.
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%%%%* EnfantTerrible: Shiori is a set of three of them.
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Fernand]] loses an eye due to Sayuri's last ditch attack, distracting him long enough for Count Arthur to finish him.
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* EyeScream: EyeScream:
** [[spoiler:Fernand]] loses an eye due to Sayuri's last ditch attack, distracting him long enough for Count Arthur to finish him.
** [[spoiler:Fernand]] loses an eye due to Sayuri's last ditch attack, distracting him long enough for Count Arthur to finish him.
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* {{Facepalm}}: Rute, Cardinal Mazarin, and Duchess Valliere's reaction to Ryo's "plan" to [[ArtisticLicenseEconomics distribute the contents of the faction's treasuries to the masses.]]
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* FourStarBadass: General Eugene and General Gramont. Prince Wales might also qualify.
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* FourStarBadass: General Eugene and General Gramont. Gramont are veteran commanders who make a great show at Dunkirk, both in leading and in personal combat. Prince Wales might also qualify.qualify; it's fuzzy because he doesn't have an official rank, but was de facto in charge of Newcastle since his dad basically turned into a shut-in.
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* GoingDownWithTheShip: [[spoiler:Or castle in the case of Wales' father.]]
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* GoingDownWithTheShip: [[spoiler:Or castle in the case of Wales' father.father; as the king he feels it is his duty to die with the defenders of Newcastle. Rather, that's what he says to convince his last living son to flee.]]
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Louise's summoning.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Louise's summoning.GoneHorriblyRight:
** Louise wanted desperately to summon something, ''anything'' so she won't be branded as a failed mage anymore. She summoned a WorldTree, several cities, said city's countryside, and thousands of supernatural humanoids, and all of it superimposed over her home country. What's worse, no one knows/believes that she summoned it [[spoiler: at first.]]
** Louise wanted desperately to summon something, ''anything'' so she won't be branded as a failed mage anymore. She summoned a WorldTree, several cities, said city's countryside, and thousands of supernatural humanoids, and all of it superimposed over her home country. What's worse, no one knows/believes that she summoned it [[spoiler: at first.]]
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* GovernmentInExile: [[spoiler:Having survived, Prince Wales and the royalists are technically this.]]
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, or neutral.
** Becomes less ambiguous as we get a closer look at Albion society in v3.0. King James is confirmed to indeed be a tyrannical ruler, whose abuse of power and neglect of the lower classes is the driving force behind the civil war. It changes the moral dynamic somewhat in that the Reconquista Rebels actually become pretty justified, [[UnwittingPawn and are just the victims of opportunists]], while the Royalists are [[JustFollowingOrders mindlessly following a tyrannical regime]] and seemingly have no real excuse.
*** Comes back into the grey for the Rebels though, when you consider that Prince Wales was near-universally loved by the people and would have made an excellent monarch. But he was still on the kill list.
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, or neutral.
** Becomes less ambiguous as we get a closer look at Albion society in v3.0. King James is confirmed to indeed be a tyrannical ruler, whose abuse of power and neglect of the lower classes is the driving force behind the civil war. It changes the moral dynamic somewhat in that the Reconquista Rebels actually become pretty justified, [[UnwittingPawn and are just the victims of opportunists]], while the Royalists are [[JustFollowingOrders mindlessly following a tyrannical regime]] and seemingly have no real excuse.
*** Comes back into the grey for the Rebels though, when you consider that Prince Wales was near-universally loved by the people and would have made an excellent monarch. But he was still on the kill list.
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* GovernmentInExile: [[spoiler:Having survived, Prince Wales and the royalists are technically this.the legitimate Albion government, even if they have been kicked out of Albion.]]
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, orneutral.
** Becomesneutral. It becomes less ambiguous as we get a closer look at Albion society in v3.0. King James is confirmed to indeed be a tyrannical ruler, whose abuse of power and neglect of the lower classes is the driving force behind the civil war. It changes the moral dynamic somewhat in that the Reconquista Rebels actually become pretty justified, [[UnwittingPawn and are just the victims of opportunists]], while the Royalists are [[JustFollowingOrders mindlessly following a tyrannical regime]] and seemingly have no real excuse.
*** Comesexcuse. Then it comes back into the grey for the Rebels though, when you consider that Prince Wales was near-universally loved by the people and would have made an excellent monarch. But he was still on the kill list.
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The Reconquista Rebels and the Albion Royalists. Some of the people fighting on both sides truly believe in their causes but many of their leaders are evil and do nasty things to the commoners whether they be friend, enemy, or
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* [[HandCannon Tentacle Cannon]]: Say hello to Kimura, Artillery Slug.
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* [[HandCannon Tentacle Cannon]]: HandCannon: Say hello to Kimura, Artillery Slug.Slug. He can carry ''severall'' of these in his tentacles
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* [[ItsRainingMen It's Raining Faeries]]: [[RidingTheBomb And they have high explosives!]]
* {{Jailbait}}: Klein has to keep reminding himself that even though Leafa the Sylph looks like an adult, Suguha the human isn't.
* {{Jailbait}}: Klein has to keep reminding himself that even though Leafa the Sylph looks like an adult, Suguha the human isn't.
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* [[ItsRainingMen ItsRainingMen: It's Raining Faeries]]: ''Faeries'' over York during Operation Dunirk, [[RidingTheBomb And and they have guiding high explosives!]]
* {{Jailbait}}: Klein has to keep reminding himself that even though Leafa the Sylph looks like an adult, Suguha the human isn't. Specifically, she is Kirito's sister, ''younger'' sister.
* {{Jailbait}}: Klein has to keep reminding himself that even though Leafa the Sylph looks like an adult, Suguha the human isn't. Specifically, she is Kirito's sister, ''younger'' sister.
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* LastStand: [[spoiler:King James decides to stay behind in Newcastle and fight to the last.]]
* LethalJokeCharacter: Kino. In SAO his inability to stick to a single set of skills turned him into a MasterOfNone who wasn't worth much in combat and wound up being used by his guild as an errand boy. In Halkeginia, however, his skills have proven to be far more useful, giving him flexibility unmatched by front-runners who specced for full combat builds like Asuna.
* LethalJokeCharacter: Kino. In SAO his inability to stick to a single set of skills turned him into a MasterOfNone who wasn't worth much in combat and wound up being used by his guild as an errand boy. In Halkeginia, however, his skills have proven to be far more useful, giving him flexibility unmatched by front-runners who specced for full combat builds like Asuna.
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* LastStand: [[spoiler:King James decides to stay behind in Newcastle and fight to the last.last, mostly so that his more honorable son, Wales, will not.]]
* LethalJokeCharacter:Kino. In SAO his Kino' inability to stick to a single set of skills turned him into a MasterOfNone who wasn't worth much in combat and wound up being used by his guild as an errand boy. In Halkeginia, however, his skills have proven to be far more useful, giving him flexibility unmatched by front-runners who specced for full combat builds like Asuna.
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* MeaningfulName: WordOfGod says that pretty much every new character in the Tarbes arc has some cheap meaning behind their name. For example all of the pixies had their names chosen for their meaning in Hanakotoba. According to the author: "So yeah, I've been on cheap name meaning bent this arc."
** Doubles as a ShoutOut in a few cases.
** Doubles as a ShoutOut in a few cases.
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* MeaningfulName: WordOfGod says that pretty much every new character in the Tarbes arc has some cheap meaning behind their name. For example all of the pixies had their names chosen for their meaning in Hanakotoba. According to the author: "So yeah, I've been on cheap name meaning bent this arc."
** Doubles" It doubles as a ShoutOut in a few cases.
** Doubles
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* MusicalAssassin: The Puca, especially the ones focusing on direct combat rather than support.
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* MusicalAssassin: The Puca, especially the ones focusing on direct combat rather than support.support, have this flavor because of their racial traits toward music.
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* MyGodYouAreSerious: This is Karin's reaction to being told about the plan to attack York.
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* MyGodYouAreSerious: This is Karin's reaction to being told about the plan to attack York.York to assume the men are goofing off; they are, after all, using ''kitchen utensils'' in a supposed combat map. Then she finds out they are serious and so looks deeper into it.
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* OhCrap: What happens to all of the gamers now that ALO is real. Also, to greater extent due to circumstances, Asuna when [[spoiler: she stabs an Albion Rebel in the heart with a dagger, and he chokes for a few seconds before dying without his body disappearing.]]
** Everyone who sees [[spoiler: Kirito's Gleam Eyes form.]]
** Everyone who sees [[spoiler: Kirito's Gleam Eyes form.]]
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** What happens to all of the gamers now that ALO is real. Also, to greater extent due to circumstances, Asuna when [[spoiler: she stabs an Albion Rebel in the heart with a dagger, and he chokes for a few seconds before dying without his body disappearing.]]
** Everyone who sees [[spoiler: Kirito's Gleam Eyesform.]]form]] is either terrified or too stunned to take action. It's quite useful for rushing a siege line.
** What happens to all of the gamers now that ALO is real. Also, to greater extent due to circumstances, Asuna when [[spoiler: she stabs an Albion Rebel in the heart with a dagger, and he chokes for a few seconds before dying without his body disappearing.]]
** Everyone who sees [[spoiler: Kirito's Gleam Eyes
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* PairTheSpares: Kirito's many girls from canon get quite a bit of ShipTease with other characters.
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* PairTheSpares: Kirito's many girls from canon get quite a bit of ShipTease with other characters. He is perfectly happy and satisfied with just Asuna.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: WordOfGod states that Leafa and Klein's relationship will be this, although their banter will inspire people to ship them.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: WordOfGod states that Leafa and Klein's relationship will be this, very close but not romantic, although their banter will inspire people to ship them.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Oh so much. A lot of grief could have been avoided if the relevant parties just sat together and discussed things openly.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Oh so much. A lot of grief could have been avoided if the relevant parties just sat together and discussed things openly.
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* PosthumousCharacter: [[spoiler:Brimir]]
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* PutOnABus: Louise. [[spoiler:After disappearing to Romalia at the end of V2, she does not make a single appearance in V3]]
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* PutOnABus: PutOnABus:
** Louise. [[spoiler:After disappearing to Romalia at the end of V2, she does not make a single appearance in V3]]
** Louise. [[spoiler:After disappearing to Romalia at the end of V2, she does not make a single appearance in V3]]
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* RedBaron: Too many to list. Every mage has a runic name they are known by, and many Fae have earned various titles of their own.
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* RedBaron: Too many to list. Every mage has a runic name they are known by, and many Fae have earned various titles of their own.
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* RidingTheBomb: [[spoiler:How the Fae guide their ship-launched bombs down to their targets in York as the opening shots of Operation Dunkirk.]]
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* RidingTheBomb: [[spoiler:How the [[spoiler: The Fae guide their ship-launched bombs down to their targets in York as by holding onto them and nudging them on the way down. These are the opening shots of Operation Dunkirk.]]
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* RousingSpeech: Given in an official address by Lady Sakuya.
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Arguile is killed by Sir Dunwell]] at the Battle of Skiesedge.
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* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler:Arguile is killed by Sir Dunwell]] at the Battle of Skiesedge.Skiesedge because this has more impact than other, less objectively valuable and important, members of Asuna's Knights of Blood.
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* SilkHidingSteel: How Titania was originally written in ALO lore. She was the patron and protector of the small folk (along with roughly half of the the Fae races), and argued and fought with Oberon on their behalf as often as she supported him in his endeavours.
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* SilkHidingSteel: How Titania was originally written in ALO lore. She lore; she was the patron and protector of the small folk (along with roughly half of the the Fae races), and argued and fought with Oberon on their behalf as often as she supported him in his endeavours.
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* SleepCute: After the events of her kidnapping and going to Mortimer's infirmary room while resting from the events, Sakuya falls asleep right on top of him.
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* SleepCute: SleepCute:
** After the events of her kidnapping and going to Mortimer's infirmary room while resting from the events, Sakuya falls asleep right on top of him.
** After the events of her kidnapping and going to Mortimer's infirmary room while resting from the events, Sakuya falls asleep right on top of him.
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* StormingTheCastle: The battle of Newcastle.
* StuffBlowingUp: Happens at TRIST regularly. To the point where the staff has yet to purchase any 2s for the "Number of days since last accident" signs.
* StuffBlowingUp: Happens at TRIST regularly. To the point where the staff has yet to purchase any 2s for the "Number of days since last accident" signs.
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* StormingTheCastle: The battle of Newcastle.
Newcastle is the siege line advancing to overwhelm the defenders. The defenders, naturally, throw everything to stop them.
*StuffBlowingUp: Happens StuffBlowingUp:
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** Explosions happen at TRIST regularly.
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* SuicideMission: Operation Dunkirk. Lord Mortimer and General Gramont are working very hard to increase the odds as much as possible.
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* SuicideMission: SuicideMission:
** OperationDunkirk.Dunkirk is, even by those that designed it, a "terrible idea". Lord Mortimer and General Gramont are working very hard to increase the odds as much as possible.
** Operation
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* SuperToughness: All of the Fae have this to a varying degree. They are nowhere near immortal, however.
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* SuperToughness: SuperToughness:
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** All of the Fae have
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* TakeThat: Against [[spoiler:reviewers who kept asking about Saito]]. See: WhamLine.
* [[spoiler:TheButlerDidIt]]: [[spoiler:The true BigBad of the Tarbes arc is actually Fernand, Count Arthur's butler and friend.]]
* [[spoiler:TheButlerDidIt]]: [[spoiler:The true BigBad of the Tarbes arc is actually Fernand, Count Arthur's butler and friend.]]
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* TakeThat: Against [[spoiler:reviewers TakeThatAudience: [[spoiler:There were many reviewers who kept asking about Saito]].Saito; when he was going to show up and complaining about his absence. He was Arguile the whole time, and [=TriggerHappy=] doesn't reveal this until he's dead.]]. See: WhamLine.
*[[spoiler:TheButlerDidIt]]: TheButlerDidIt: [[spoiler:The true BigBad of the Tarbes arc is actually Fernand, Count Arthur's butler and friend.]]
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* BattleButler: Lawrence Maison, Wales' butler. While he doesn't physically fight, he's nevertheless the Eagle's XO.
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* BattleButler: BattleButler:
** Lawrence Maison, Wales' butler. While he doesn't physically fight, he's nevertheless the Eagle's XO.
** Lawrence Maison, Wales' butler. While he doesn't physically fight, he's nevertheless the Eagle's XO.
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* BecomingTheMask: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]]. Morgiana says she is willing to become her faerie persona for real if that's what it takes to keep the fae safe. Also the fae are starting to manifest more and more "racial" traits as time goes on.
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* BecomingTheMask: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]]. Morgiana says she is willing to become her faerie persona for real if that's what it takes to keep the fae safe. Also safe, especially her "kids" in Kurotaka. She notes that Sayuri has become the Fae Noblewoman for real without noticing it.
*BecomingTheCostume: The fae are starting to manifest more and more "racial" traits as time goeson.on, such as the Cat Sith acting like stereotypical cats (such as a penchant for fish), and the Salamanders and Undine becoming more sensitive to changes in temperature.
*BecomingTheCostume: The fae are starting to manifest more and more "racial" traits as time goes
*NoBiochemicalBarriers: As part of the general RealityEnsues, this is averted. Medicine that was designed for Fae is HarmfulHealing to humans because of the difference in biology. For instance, [[spoiler: the resurrection potion given to Wales revived him from a critical chest wound but the shock of it almost killed him anyways.]]
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* NonActionGuy: Guiche. Doesn't stop him from making two game-changing contributions.
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* NonActionGuy: Guiche. Doesn't stop him from making Guiche has no fighting experience, and what can do is limited to golem creation. He makes two game-changing contributions.contributions in other ways, such as intel gathering.
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* PlayerGuidedMissile: The [[spoiler:"smart bombs" used in York.]]
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* PlayerGuidedMissile: The [[spoiler:"smart bombs" used in York.York are guided by fairies holding onto them and then flying the heck away at the last second.]]
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** [[GenderBender "Midori"]] has difficulty fighting at first because her new body has a different "reach" than her real one. Also, see below.
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** [[GenderBender "Midori"]] has difficulty fighting at first because her new body has a different "reach" than her real one. Also, see below.
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*** Chugging ALO potions will have adverse effects. Especially on humans. For example, a Resurrection potion, and the shock to the system it causes, has just as much chance of killing a human as saving them. A note elsewhere advised not to drink more than 2 potions and it would be better if no potions are drunk at all. (And this for a batch of "mundane, common MMO" Mana potion, Haste potion, and 2 different Heal potions.)
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*** Chugging ALO potions will have adverse effects. Especially effects on humans because Fae are biologically different than humans. For example, a Resurrection potion, and the shock to the system it causes, has just as much chance of killing a human as saving them. A note elsewhere given to Karin advised not to drink more than 2 potions and it would be better if no potions are drunk at all. (And this for a batch of "mundane, common MMO" Mana potion, Haste potion, and 2 different Heal potions.)
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* [[UngratefulBastard Ungrateful Bitch]]: Sayuri.
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* WeaponizedTeleportation: The Blink spell.
* WellIntentionedExtremist: Sayuri
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* FantasyContraception: One of the most commonly used but least talked about uses for water magic.
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* FantasyContraception: One of the most commonly used but least talked about uses for water magic.magic is for birth control.
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* [[spoiler:GenderEqualsBreed]]:[[spoiler: Averted. WordOfGod says that all natural born Fae will take after the [=race/faction=] of the mother.]]
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* [[spoiler:GenderEqualsBreed]]:[[spoiler: GenderEqualsBreed:[[spoiler: Averted. WordOfGod says that all natural born Fae will take after the [=race/faction=] of the mother.]]
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* [[spoiler:GladToBeAliveSex]]: [[spoiler:Heavily implied in the aftermath of the Dunkirk victory celebration. Morgiana doesn't mind.]]
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* [[spoiler:GladToBeAliveSex]]: GladToBeAliveSex: [[spoiler:Heavily implied in the aftermath of the Dunkirk victory celebration. Morgiana doesn't mind.]]
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* HearMeMoney: Leafa is able to expose an attempt to falsely incriminate a fellow fae into indentured servitude by clinking together the supposedly stolen silver candlesticks using this method. As Fae have a heightened sense of hearing, this actually works as opposed to being a gimmick.
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* HearMeMoney: HearMeTheMoney: Leafa is able to expose an attempt to falsely incriminate a fellow fae into indentured servitude by clinking together the supposedly stolen silver candlesticks using this method. As Fae have a heightened sense of hearing, this actually works as opposed to being a gimmick.
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* HearMeMoney: Leafa is able to expose an attempt to falsely incriminate a fellow fae into indentured servitude by clinking together the supposedly stolen silver candlesticks using this method. As Fae have a heightened sense of hearing, this actually works as opposed to being a gimmick.
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* [[spoiler:AncientConspiracy]]: [[spoiler:The Church is keeping birth records and investigating mages claimed to be failures to find users of the void, and has been doing so for generations.]]
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* [[spoiler:AncientConspiracy]]: AncientConspiracy: [[spoiler:The Church is keeping birth records and investigating mages claimed to be failures to find users of the void, and has been doing so for generations.]]
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* AuthorAppeal: Many of the female fae have bodies that [[Franchise/AttackOnTitan Mikasa Ackerman]] would be proud to own. WordofGod says that he actually likes that body shape.
* AwesomeButImpractical: According to WordOfGod, this is how the refitted Thunderchild will end up.
* AwesomeButImpractical: According to WordOfGod, this is how the refitted Thunderchild will end up.
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* AuthorAppeal: Many of the female fae have bodies that [[Franchise/AttackOnTitan Mikasa Ackerman]] would be proud to own. WordofGod says that he actually likes that body shape.
* %%%%* AwesomeButImpractical: According to WordOfGod, this is how the refitted Thunderchild will end up.
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* BackToFront: Argo's dream flashback.
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* [[spoiler:BedmateReveal]]: [[spoiler:Morgiana wakes up the night after Dunkirk to find herself in bed with Eugene after a [[GladToBeAliveSex night of partying.]]]]
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* [[spoiler:BedmateReveal]]: BedmateReveal: [[spoiler:Morgiana wakes up the night after Dunkirk to find herself in bed with Eugene after a [[GladToBeAliveSex night of partying.]]]]
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* [[spoiler:HumongousMecha: The omake-only POE-Ms are this for their pixie pilots.]]
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* [[spoiler:HumongousMecha: HumongousMecha: [[spoiler: The omake-only POE-Ms are this for their pixie pilots.]]
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* LittleMissBadass: Shiori, again.
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* LowerDeckEpisode: The story frequently gives a "commoner eye's view" of the situation, if a minor character is involved. Especially prominent during the attack on York.
* MadScientist: Hyuuga has her moments.
* MadScientist: Hyuuga has her moments.
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* LowerDeckEpisode: The story frequently gives a "commoner eye's view" of the situation, if a minor character is involved. Especially It is especially prominent during the attack on York.
* %%%%* MadScientist: Hyuuga has her moments.
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* MagicPants: Averted, to hilarious consequences.
* MamaBear: Morgiana to her guild Kurotaka.
* MamaBear: Morgiana to her guild Kurotaka.
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%%%%%* MamaBear: Morgiana to her guild Kurotaka.
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* BossBattle: At least once per arc.
* [[spoiler: CameBackWrong]]:[[spoiler: Aki, this is especially evident in {{Omake}} snippets.]]
* [[spoiler: CameBackWrong]]:[[spoiler: Aki, this is especially evident in {{Omake}} snippets.]]
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* BossBattle: At least once per arc.
arc, there is a large and mighty boss monster requiring a raid group, or some special enemy soldier that that needs to be defeated.
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*TheCavalry: During the Tarbes arc, the investigation team is reinforced by a team composed of Cat Stih dragon riders, Tristain dragon knights, and local mages from a milita muster for the Lhamthanc boss battle. Gauis uses the trope by name when he arrives with Silica, who delivered the message to him.
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* ScienceFantasy
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* ScienceFantasyScienceFantasy: When the virtual reality of ''Sword Art Online'' meets the magic of ''The Familiar of Zero'', the result is a mixture of the two. In this case, since the virtual reality ''was'' in the fantasy genre, the cast of the former have an easier or harder method of fitting into the later; being Faerie, they are thought to be related to the native elves but their true existence as humans in a more scientifically advanced society makes them stand out even more.