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A fanfic based on ''VideoGame/DCUniverseOnline'', in which ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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* CycleOfRevenge: Let's just say Sachel did something she regretted a lot about a long, long time ago.
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* TheEmpath: Beelzebub is a seriously evil version.
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:All the original characters dies, except Monokrome.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: When Beelzebub tries to [[BreakThemByTalking break Sachel by talking]].
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that [[StalkerWithACrush Sachel has been following him]]. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that [[StalkerWithACrush Sachel has been following him]]. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]]]
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A FanFic based on ''VideoGame/DCUniverseOnline'', in which ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic fanfic based on ''VideoGame/DCUniverseOnline'', in which ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: All the original characters dies, except Monokrome.]]
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* [[spoiler:KillEmAll: All KillEmAll: [[spoiler:All the original characters dies, except Monokrome.]]
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-->'''Sachel''': Do I need to remind you of the stakeout at the Metrodome?
-->'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
-->'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
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-->'''Sachel''': Do I need to remind you of the stakeout at the Metrodome?
-->'''Lexicon''':Metrodome?\\
'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
-->'''Lexicon''':
'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', ''VideoGame/DCUniverseOnline'', in which ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which {{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which {{Brainiac}}'s ComicBook/{{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which {{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which {{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future LexLuthor, ComicBook/LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
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*[[spoiler:KillEmAll: All the original characters dies, except Monokrome.]]
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*AndYourLittleDogToo: [[spoiler:"I hope you said good-bye to your roommate this morning."]]
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* EvilCounterpart: Vendettuh to Monokrome.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Sachel. Vendettuh is a villainous version.
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that [[StalkerWithACrush Sachel has been following him]]. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that [[StalkerWithACrush Sachel has been following him]]. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* TheAtoner: Sachel, for "crimes against humanity".
* BeingHumanSucks: Sachel misses being able to fly without her mechanical wings.
* BeingHumanSucks: Sachel misses being able to fly without her mechanical wings.
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* {{Expy}}: Monokrome is {{Batman}} with [[BadassAbnormal mental powers]]. Some interactions between him and Sachel is reminiscent of Batman and WonderWoman in ''WesternAnimation/JusticeLeague''.
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* DominoMask: Lexicon wears one.
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* GlowingEyes: Sachel, although she could turn them on and off at will.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Monokrome.
* GoodIsNotSoft: Monokrome.
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* LipstickLesbian: Lexicon.
* TheMedic: Lexicon again.
* MeaningfulName: Sachel goes by "Kristin Church".
* MindOverMatter: Monokrome.
* TheMedic: Lexicon again.
* MeaningfulName: Sachel goes by "Kristin Church".
* MindOverMatter: Monokrome.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Sachel, before she was punished for burning a city to the ground.
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* ReallyGetsAround: Implied to be Lexicon.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The childish and flirtatious Sachel is over 5000 years old.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The childish and flirtatious Sachel is over 5000 years old.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Between Monokrome and Sachel.
* StepfordSmiler: Sachel, being a repentant fallen angel and all.
* WingedHumanoid: Sachel again, although her wings are mechanical.
* XtremelyKoolLetterz: Monokrome.
* StepfordSmiler: Sachel, being a repentant fallen angel and all.
* WingedHumanoid: Sachel again, although her wings are mechanical.
* XtremelyKoolLetterz: Monokrome.
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* AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]". Sachel also calls Monokrom "[[EmbarrassingNickname Krome boy]]".
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* AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]". Sachel also calls Monokrom Monokrome "[[EmbarrassingNickname Krome boy]]".
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*FemaleAngelMaleDemon: Sachel and Beelzebub. Although Beelzebub [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity may or may not be a human deluded into thinking he is a demon.]]
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that Sachel has been spying on him. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that [[StalkerWithACrush Sachel has been spying on him.following him]]. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]".
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* AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]". Sachel also calls Monokrom "[[EmbarrassingNickname Krome boy]]".
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*EvilCounterpart: Vendettuh to Monokrome.
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*CharacterTitle: "Grey Area" is one of Monokrome's nicknames.
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* DoesntLikeGuns: Batman, but Monokrome is completely fine with one as long as Batman is not looking.
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* DoesntLikeGuns: Batman, but Monokrome is completely fine with one as long as Batman is not looking.looking, as he is an ex-cop.
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*GlowingEyes: Sachel, although she could turn them on and off at will.
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*AlmostKiss: [[spoiler:Sachel and Monokrome in their civilian identities. Interrupted by a fireball attack. Talk about the MomentKiller.]]
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*BondVillainStupidity: Beelzebub wants to emotionally destroy Sachel before killing her.
*BreakThemByTalking: See above. And he did pretty well too.
*CycleOfRevenge: Let's just say Sachel did something she regretted a lot about a long, long time ago.
*DressedInLayers: Sachel/Kristin and Monokrome/Richard wear their uniform under their civilian cloths.
*BreakThemByTalking: See above. And he did pretty well too.
*CycleOfRevenge: Let's just say Sachel did something she regretted a lot about a long, long time ago.
*DressedInLayers: Sachel/Kristin and Monokrome/Richard wear their uniform under their civilian cloths.
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* {{Expy}}: Monokrome is {{Batman}} with [[BadassAbnormal mental powers]].
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* {{Expy}}: Monokrome is {{Batman}} with [[BadassAbnormal mental powers]]. Some interactions between him and Sachel is reminiscent of Batman and WonderWoman in ''WesternAnimation/JusticeLeague''.
*DeadpanSnarker: Sachel. Vendettuh is a villainous version.
*DominoMask: Lexicon wears one.
*TheEmpath: Beelzebub is a seriously evil version.
*ForTheEvulz: Beelzebub attempted to kill Sachel just cause. [[spoiler:Didn't help that he found out she was an angel.]]
*TheEmpath: Beelzebub is a seriously evil version.
*ForTheEvulz: Beelzebub attempted to kill Sachel just cause. [[spoiler:Didn't help that he found out she was an angel.]]
*MeaningfulName: Sachel goes by "Kristin Church".
*NotSoDifferent: When Beelzebub tries to [[BreakThemByTalking break Sachel by talking]].
*PayEvilUntoEvil: Beelzebub's reasoning behind his vendetta against Sachel for crimes committed thousands of years ago.
*PayEvilUntoEvil: Beelzebub's reasoning behind his vendetta against Sachel for crimes committed thousands of years ago.
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that Sachel has been spying on him.
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* SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that Sachel has been spying on him. [[spoiler:Sachel later uses his real name to address him like it is no secret.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Lexicon was going to a "first date", and Sachel slyly suggest that she should leave the apartment they share together for the night.
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*MindOverMatter: Monokrome.
* NoodleIncident: Lexicon was going to a "first date", and Sachel slyly suggest that she should leave the apartment they share together for the night. [[spoiler:[[ReallyGetsAround Good guess...]]]]
* NoodleIncident: Lexicon was going to a "first date", and Sachel slyly suggest that she should leave the apartment they share together for the night. [[spoiler:[[ReallyGetsAround Good guess...]]]]
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-->“Oh, nothing important,” Sachel said, her voice dripping with sarcasm, “Just my coat, my wings, and my weapons. It’s not like I can't do my job without them.”
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-->“Oh, nothing important,” Sachel said, her voice dripping with sarcasm, “Just my coat, my wings, and my weapons. It’s not like I can't do my job without them.” ”
*SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that Sachel has been spying on him.
*SecretIdentity: Monokrome's is mentioned. He told no one except Gordon, not even [[TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife Sachel]] or Batman, but he thinks the latter has a pretty good idea, being the world's greatest detective. He also suspects that Sachel has been spying on him.
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A FanFic based on ''DCUniverseOnline'', in which {{Brainiac}}'s exobytes were released by the future LexLuthor, creating thousands of new heroes and villains.
!!This series provides examples of:
*AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]".
*TheAtoner: Sachel, for "crimes against humanity".
*BeingHumanSucks: Sachel misses being able to fly without her mechanical wings.
*EmpathicEnvironment: Sachel was having a pretty bad day when it started to rain.
*{{Expy}}: Monokrome is {{Batman}} with [[BadassAbnormal mental powers]].
*DarkIsNotEvil: All three heroes have a black outfit, couple with some white for Monokrome, green for Lexicon, and red for Sachel.
*DoesntLikeGuns: Batman, but Monokrome is completely fine with one as long as Batman is not looking.
*GoodIsNotSoft: Monokrome.
*InTheBack: Beelzebub tried to snipe Sachel from behind.
*LipstickLesbian: Lexicon.
*TheMedic: Lexicon again.
*NoodleIncident: Lexicon was going to a "first date", and Sachel slyly suggest that she should leave the apartment they share together for the night.
-->'''Sachel''': Do I need to remind you of the stakeout at the Metrodome?
-->'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Sachel, before she was punished for burning a city to the ground.
*PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Sachel calls Bane a "sexist bastard".
*ReallyGetsAround: Implied to be Lexicon.
*ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The childish and flirtatious Sachel is over 5000 years old.
*SarcasmMode: When Lexicon stole and hid Sachel's gear so she could heal.
-->“Oh, nothing important,” Sachel said, her voice dripping with sarcasm, “Just my coat, my wings, and my weapons. It’s not like I can't do my job without them.”
*SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Between Monokrome and Sachel.
*StepfordSmiler: Sachel, being a repentant fallen angel and all.
*WingedHumanoid: Sachel again, although her wings are mechanical.
*XtremelyKoolLetterz: Monokrome.
!!This series provides examples of:
*AffectionateNickname: Lexicon and Sachel call each other "Lexi" and "[[LesYay Angel face]]".
*TheAtoner: Sachel, for "crimes against humanity".
*BeingHumanSucks: Sachel misses being able to fly without her mechanical wings.
*EmpathicEnvironment: Sachel was having a pretty bad day when it started to rain.
*{{Expy}}: Monokrome is {{Batman}} with [[BadassAbnormal mental powers]].
*DarkIsNotEvil: All three heroes have a black outfit, couple with some white for Monokrome, green for Lexicon, and red for Sachel.
*DoesntLikeGuns: Batman, but Monokrome is completely fine with one as long as Batman is not looking.
*GoodIsNotSoft: Monokrome.
*InTheBack: Beelzebub tried to snipe Sachel from behind.
*LipstickLesbian: Lexicon.
*TheMedic: Lexicon again.
*NoodleIncident: Lexicon was going to a "first date", and Sachel slyly suggest that she should leave the apartment they share together for the night.
-->'''Sachel''': Do I need to remind you of the stakeout at the Metrodome?
-->'''Lexicon''': Shut up.
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Sachel, before she was punished for burning a city to the ground.
*PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Sachel calls Bane a "sexist bastard".
*ReallyGetsAround: Implied to be Lexicon.
*ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The childish and flirtatious Sachel is over 5000 years old.
*SarcasmMode: When Lexicon stole and hid Sachel's gear so she could heal.
-->“Oh, nothing important,” Sachel said, her voice dripping with sarcasm, “Just my coat, my wings, and my weapons. It’s not like I can't do my job without them.”
*SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Between Monokrome and Sachel.
*StepfordSmiler: Sachel, being a repentant fallen angel and all.
*WingedHumanoid: Sachel again, although her wings are mechanical.
*XtremelyKoolLetterz: Monokrome.