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* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:First thing that She Who Lives In Her Name does upon seeing Autochthon is to immediately launch a [[MakeMeWannaShout Space Monster Scream]] at him before calling him a retard.]]
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* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:First thing that She Who Lives In Her Name does upon seeing Autochthon is to immediately launch a [[MakeMeWannaShout Space Monster Scream]] Scream at him before calling him a retard.]]
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* OnTheNext: A [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/page-624#post-9441067 fan made one]], but still endorsed by [[WordOfGod Gregg.]]
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* OnTheNext: A [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/page-624#post-9441067 224243/page-628 fan made one]], but still endorsed by [[WordOfGod Gregg.]]
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* ScheduleSlip: Mainly when reading it on the forums as he wrote it, as Gregg tended to alternate his writing between ''GSP'' and ''Nobody Dies'' so one story goes on a brief hiatus while he works on the other.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their… ''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are enhanced, as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their… ''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' ''assets'' are enhanced, as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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* ''Fanfic/ShipsAhoy'' (''Series/OddSquad''): While O'Donahue is terrible at square dancing and doing the waltz, he can dance incredibly well to rock n' roll music.
--> '''Oprah:''' Since when did you learn all those moves?
--> '''O'Donahue:''' I dunno! It just sort of happened! Unreal, right?
--> '''Oprah:''' Since when did you learn all those moves?
--> '''O'Donahue:''' I dunno! It just sort of happened! Unreal, right?
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** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm needs]]''.
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** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] everyone has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm ''[[SexualEuphemism needs]]''.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their… ''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are [[BuxomIsBetter enhanced]], as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their… ''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are [[BuxomIsBetter enhanced]], enhanced, as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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** ''Wuffles, the Wonder Geth'' references ''Wuffles, the Wonder Fish'' from ''FanFic/NobodyDies'' (whose own naming was a shout out to Legion's in ''Mass Effect 2'')
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** ''Wuffles, the Wonder Geth'' references ''Wuffles, the Wonder Fish'' from ''FanFic/NobodyDies'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' (whose own naming was a shout out to Legion's in ''Mass Effect 2'')
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*** Persistent Righteous Protector appears to be [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Go-Kun]]]]!Keeper - until it turns out that's just an [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith Avatar]] and his true form is [[GeniusLoci the entire '''city''']], [[spoiler:[[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion retractable buildings and Geofront]]]] included.
*** The Tower of [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Ree]]]] has been mentioned.
** There's even a reference to ''another fanfic'' that also got started on Spacebattles. Joker mentions that, going by his car, Garrus is considering an alternate career as [[FanFic/{{Renegade}} "the Kool Aid Man."]]
*** The Tower of [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Ree]]]] has been mentioned.
** There's even a reference to ''another fanfic'' that also got started on Spacebattles. Joker mentions that, going by his car, Garrus is considering an alternate career as [[FanFic/{{Renegade}} "the Kool Aid Man."]]
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*** Persistent Righteous Protector appears to be [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies [[spoiler:[[Fanfic/NobodyDies Go-Kun]]]]!Keeper - until it turns out that's just an [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith Avatar]] and his true form is [[GeniusLoci the entire '''city''']], [[spoiler:[[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion retractable buildings and Geofront]]]] included.
*** The Tower of[[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies [[spoiler:[[Fanfic/NobodyDies Ree]]]] has been mentioned.
** There's even a reference to ''another fanfic'' that also got started on Spacebattles. Joker mentions that, going by his car, Garrus is considering an alternate career as[[FanFic/{{Renegade}} [[Fanfic/{{Renegade}} "the Kool Aid Man."]]
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** Geth Colossi [[Comicbook/{{Doom}} have huge guts]].
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** Geth Colossi [[Comicbook/{{Doom}} [[ComicBook/{{Doom}} have huge guts]].
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** A human going into an ancient ruin in space in search of an orb while listening to music? [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy Where have we heard THAT one before]]?
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** Some of Tali's kerlish (Quarian language)[[note]] specifically, "Ba weep grana bong!" [[/note]] appears to be from the [[Franchise/TransFormers universal greeting]] [[note]] Bah-weep-Graaaaagnah wheep ni ni bong [[/note]]
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** Some of Tali's kerlish (Quarian language)[[note]] specifically, "Ba weep grana bong!" [[/note]] appears to be from the [[Franchise/TransFormers [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} universal greeting]] [[note]] Bah-weep-Graaaaagnah wheep ni ni bong [[/note]]
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* DancingRoyalty: Liara proves to be an excellent dancer, and studied classical asari dance in college. Since asari are infamous for spending their first few centuries in a "wild stage" that often involves acting as strippers, her friends all joke that they didn't even know the asari had dances that didn't involve poles, tables, or laps. Unfortunately, this is a bit of a sore spot for Liara.
-->'''Liara:''' Do you have any idea how long my mother insisted I take classical dance? ''Thirty years'', that's how long. "No daughter of mine is going to shake her ass in a titty bar," she said. Even if all my roommates did. I had to take a dance course every semester for my entire college career. So I have ''thirty'' years of classical dance experience, thank you very much.\\
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'''Jane:''' Lemme get this straight, you were in college for... thirty years?\\
'''Liara:''' Yes. Yes, I was. Does that answer your question?\\
'''Jane:''' Yep. [[ProportionalAging Every question I ever had]].
* ''Fanfic/ShipsAhoy'' (''Series/OddSquad''): While O'Donahue is terrible at square dancing and doing the waltz, he can dance incredibly well to rock n' roll music.
--> '''Oprah:''' Since when did you learn all those moves?
--> '''O'Donahue:''' I dunno! It just sort of happened! Unreal, right?
-->'''Liara:''' Do you have any idea how long my mother insisted I take classical dance? ''Thirty years'', that's how long. "No daughter of mine is going to shake her ass in a titty bar," she said. Even if all my roommates did. I had to take a dance course every semester for my entire college career. So I have ''thirty'' years of classical dance experience, thank you very much.\\
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'''Jane:''' Lemme get this straight, you were in college for... thirty years?\\
'''Liara:''' Yes. Yes, I was. Does that answer your question?\\
'''Jane:''' Yep. [[ProportionalAging Every question I ever had]].
* ''Fanfic/ShipsAhoy'' (''Series/OddSquad''): While O'Donahue is terrible at square dancing and doing the waltz, he can dance incredibly well to rock n' roll music.
--> '''Oprah:''' Since when did you learn all those moves?
--> '''O'Donahue:''' I dunno! It just sort of happened! Unreal, right?
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* BeyondTheImpossible: One of the running themes of the story is that the phrase, "this is impossible" means nothing to an [[PhysicalGod Exalt.]] [[spoiler: Shepard uses this concept to run on snowflakes in the first chapter, and eventually [[UpToEleven up the beam from a Reaper's weapon.]]]]
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* BeyondTheImpossible: One of the running themes of the story is that the phrase, "this is impossible" means nothing to an [[PhysicalGod Exalt.]] [[spoiler: Shepard uses this concept to run on snowflakes in the first chapter, and eventually [[UpToEleven up the beam from a Reaper's weapon.]]]]]]
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* TheAgeless: [[spoiler: Krogan turn out to be effectively immortal unless killed]].
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* TheAgeless: [[spoiler: Krogan [[spoiler:Krogan turn out to be effectively effectively]] immortal unless killed]].killed.
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* BiologicalImmortality: Krogan don't have a life span. They have a life ''expectancy''.
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** Thane's reaction to [[spoiler: literally having his Kepral's Syndrome ''[[CrazyAwesome punched out of him.]]'']]
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** Thane's reaction to [[spoiler: literally having his Kepral's Syndrome ''[[CrazyAwesome ''[[CrazyEnoughToWork punched out of him.]]'']]
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** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
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** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech speech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
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** Shepard references ''the'' WorldOfCardboardSpeech from ''WesternAnimation/JusticeLeague'' ''Unlimited'' when throwing down with Morinth.
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** Shepard references ''the'' WorldOfCardboardSpeech Superman's world-of-cardboard speech from ''WesternAnimation/JusticeLeague'' ''Unlimited'' when throwing down with Morinth.
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Superman's original speech is quoted (nearly) word for word by Shepard before she punches [[spoiler:Morinth]] halfway across a planet.
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** Or better the moment just after, as Shepard is staring at Kasumi in sheer WTF.
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** Or better the moment just after, as Shepard is staring at Kasumi in sheer WTF.confusion after she says the aforementioned line.
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* TheAgeless: [[spoiler: Krogan turn out to be effectively immortal unless killed]].
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* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:The Vioator of Nullspace apparently fancies himself a Primordial]].
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** It's been suggested (with [[ShrugOfGod varying]] [[LyingCreator levels]] of plausibility) that the Maidens are in the ME universe as well.
* ArcWords / DareToBeBadass: "You can be '''better'''"
* ArcWords / DareToBeBadass: "You can be '''better'''"
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** It's been suggested (with invoked [[ShrugOfGod varying]] [[LyingCreator levels]] of plausibility) that the Maidens are in the ME universe as well.
*ArcWords / DareToBeBadass: ArcWords: "You can be '''better'''"'''[[DareToBeBadass better]]'''"
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* AWizardDidIt: Summed up:
-->'''Shepard''': “Goto! How the ''fuck'' did you [[spoiler: train a bear to operate a tank]]?!”
-->'''Kasumi''': "Magic!"
** In-Universe, this is how the Normandy crew eventually classifies anything Exalts do. "Bullshit kung-fu magic. Like Shepard does."
-->'''Shepard''': “Goto! How the ''fuck'' did you [[spoiler: train a bear to operate a tank]]?!”
-->'''Kasumi''': "Magic!"
** In-Universe, this is how the Normandy crew eventually classifies anything Exalts do. "Bullshit kung-fu magic. Like Shepard does."
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*** Which heavily implies removal of {{Noodle Implement|s}} status from [[spoiler: that miniature krogan statue...]]
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*** Which heavily implies the removal of {{Noodle Implement|s}} "{{Noodle Implement|s}}" status from [[spoiler: that miniature krogan statue...]]
* AGodAmI: [[spoiler:The Vioator of Nullspace apparently fancies himself a Primordial]].
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Shepard, apparently due to the Exaltation changing her body in more ways than the obvious. [[spoiler: As in, immodest to the "causing a ''mild earthquake''" level.]] It also lasts [[spoiler: a full ''hour'']] too.
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* InformedObscenity / UnusualEuphemism: Claw Hammer. (Also a ShoutOut.)
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* InformedObscenity / UnusualEuphemism: InformedObscenity: Claw Hammer.Hammer, due to also being an in-universe UnusualEuphemism. (Also a ShoutOut.)
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: During a fight, someone tries to stab Shepard with a knife. For about thirty seconds. While everyone else stops to watch. Shepard's reply? "I can't believe I'm asking this, but are you in yet?"
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* LampshadedDoubleEntendre: During a fight, someone tries to stab Shepard with a knife.knife, unsuccessfully. For about thirty seconds. While everyone else stops to watch.watch him try to shove his knife into Shepard. Shepard's reply? "I can't believe I'm asking this, but are you in yet?"
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** Out of universe, the response of several readers when [[spoiler:Shadow Broker Husk/Harbinger punches Tali's helmet off, severely injuring her]], and when [[spoiler: Autochthon frees Leaping Sky/The Catalyst, and finds out about the Great Curse.]]
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** Out of universe, the response of several readers when [[spoiler:Shadow Broker Husk/Harbinger punches Tali's helmet off, severely injuring her]], her and exposing her to unfiltered air]], and when [[spoiler: Autochthon frees Leaping Sky/The Catalyst, and finds out about the Great Curse.]]
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* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler: The Viator, to quote WordOfGod, "has crafted itself into the Principle of Genocide". The Reaper cycle? A way to keep genociding over and over again...and probably to build an army since he also wants to return to the Exalted universe and consume the Yozi.]]
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* OmnicidalManiac: [[spoiler: The Viator, to quote WordOfGod, "has crafted itself into the Principle of Genocide". The Reaper cycle? A way to keep genociding over and over again...and probably to build an army since he also wants to return to the Exalted ''Exalted'' universe and consume the Yozi.]]
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* PutOnABusToHell: In-universe, the Reapers' answer to organics too competent at fighting the Reapers is a forced mass-relay jump several million light years outside the galaxy to an area ''[[ForbiddenZone inhabited by something that ]]'''one-shots Reapers'''''... [[spoiler:And exactly what '''Perfect Defender of Reposition''' does to Normandy and Orizaba. Unfortunately for them, this ends in NiceJobFixingItVillain-the mysterious, Reaper-killing monster turns out to be [[EternalEngine Autochthon]] with his weapons active, and at least one Alchemical is happy to welcome them.]]
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* PutOnABusToHell: In-universe, the Reapers' answer to organics too competent at fighting the Reapers is to cause their ships to take a forced mass-relay jump several million light years outside the galaxy to an area ''[[ForbiddenZone inhabited by something that ]]'''one-shots Reapers'''''... [[spoiler:And that exactly what '''Perfect Defender of Reposition''' does to Normandy and Orizaba. Unfortunately for them, this ends in NiceJobFixingItVillain-the mysterious, Reaper-killing monster turns out to be [[EternalEngine Autochthon]] with his weapons active, and at least one Alchemical is happy to welcome them.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
** Of all people, [[spoiler:''Wuffles'']] gives one to ''[[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Harbinger]]''. Successfully.
** He delivers another one to Harbinger in Chapter 18, ending it with a [[ExpospeakGag more complex version of]] "Your kung-fu is weak."
** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
** Of all people, [[spoiler:''Wuffles'']] gives one to ''[[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Harbinger]]''. Successfully.
** He delivers another one to Harbinger in Chapter 18, ending it with a [[ExpospeakGag more complex version of]] "Your kung-fu is weak."
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* RunningGag: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', not so much).
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:
** Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', not so much).
** Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', not so much).
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* ScheduleSlip: Mainly when reading it on the forums as he wrote it, as Gregg tended to alternate his writing between GSP and Nobody Dies so one story goes on a brief hiatus while he works on the other.
* ScrewDestiny: The general theme of Exalted as a whole, but special mention goes to the Sidereal of Journeys. [[spoiler: Who hid an Exaltation for millions of years until Kal'Reegar could discover it and use it to Duck Fate]].
* ScrewDestiny: The general theme of Exalted as a whole, but special mention goes to the Sidereal of Journeys. [[spoiler: Who hid an Exaltation for millions of years until Kal'Reegar could discover it and use it to Duck Fate]].
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* ScheduleSlip: Mainly when reading it on the forums as he wrote it, as Gregg tended to alternate his writing between GSP ''GSP'' and Nobody Dies ''Nobody Dies'' so one story goes on a brief hiatus while he works on the other.
* ScrewDestiny: The general theme ofExalted ''Exalted'' as a whole, but special mention goes to the Sidereal of Journeys. [[spoiler: Who hid an Exaltation for millions of years until the moment where Kal'Reegar could discover it and use it to Duck Fate]].
* ScrewDestiny: The general theme of
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** ''Wuffles, the Wonder Geth'' references ''Wuffles, the Wonder Fish'' from FanFic/NobodyDies (whose own naming was a shout out to Legion's in ''Mass Effect 2'')
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*** Persistent Righteous Protector appears to be [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Go-Kun]]]]!Keeper - until it turns out that's just an [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith Avatar]] and his true torm is [[GeniusLoci the entire '''city''']], [[spoiler:[[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion retractable buildings and Geofront]]]] included.
*** The Tower of [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Ree]]]] has been mentioned
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*** Persistent Righteous Protector appears to be [[spoiler:[[FanFic/NobodyDies Go-Kun]]]]!Keeper - until it turns out that's just an [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith Avatar]] and his true torm form is [[GeniusLoci the entire '''city''']], [[spoiler:[[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion retractable buildings and Geofront]]]] included.
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** Tali's uncle [[Franchise/StarWars Han]] taught her to fly his temperamental old freighter
*** Later, Udina repeatedly reminds Joker to [[Film/ANewHope Stay on Target]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
** Of all people, [[spoiler:''Wuffles'']] gives one to ''[[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Harbinger]]''. Successfully.
** He delivers another one to Harbinger in Chapter 18, ending it with a [[ExpospeakGag more complex version of]] "Your kung-fu is weak."
** Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended, as Shepard uses it to deliver a WorldOfCardboardSpeech that convinces Vasir that the Shadow Broker is using her.]]
** Of all people, [[spoiler:''Wuffles'']] gives one to ''[[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Harbinger]]''. Successfully.
** He delivers another one to Harbinger in Chapter 18, ending it with a [[ExpospeakGag more complex version of]] "Your kung-fu is weak."
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* TheAgeless: [[spoiler: Krogan turn out to be effectively immortal unless killed]].
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Shepard. [[spoiler: As in, mild earthquake levels.]] It also lasts [[spoiler: a full hour]] too.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Shepard. [[spoiler: As in, mild earthquake levels.]] It also lasts [[spoiler: a full hour]] too.
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* AWizardDidIt: Summed up:
-->'''Shepard''': “Goto! How the ''fuck'' did you [[spoiler: train a bear to operate a tank]]?!”
-->'''Kasumi''': "Magic!"
** In-Universe, this is how the Normandy crew eventually classifies anything Exalts do. "Bullshit kung-fu magic. Like Shepard does."
-->'''Shepard''': “Goto! How the ''fuck'' did you [[spoiler: train a bear to operate a tank]]?!”
-->'''Kasumi''': "Magic!"
** In-Universe, this is how the Normandy crew eventually classifies anything Exalts do. "Bullshit kung-fu magic. Like Shepard does."
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* ShoutOut: Joker's maneuvering in the aircar chase is not unlike the "tunnel scene" from Film/MenInBlack.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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** The scene where [[spoiler:Golah]] opens her equivalent of a fridge to get drinks is a PurpleProse version of the [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 "Meet the Medic"]] scene.
--->'''[[spoiler:Golah]]:''' Later.
--->'''[[spoiler:Golah]]:''' Later.
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* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker: Terminal, Lord of Boksone, breaks down normal sentences into several smaller ones, sometime putting full stops between ''words''.
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** Joker, after hearing a story about a clan of extremely badass quarians: "So... [[ComicBook/CaptainAmerica Captain Flotilla, huh? Do they give him the super soldier serum]] or a [[ComicBook/{{Batman}} bat costume]]?"
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* VaryingTacticsBoss: The Tower of Ree has 99 blocks consisting of 100 floors, and at the end of each block, every person who attempts to climb it has to fight a construction made of Jade which looks like a human teenage girl. On each block, the girl uses completely different tactics; at one block she uses animals, at another she's riding a Mini-Mecha, in another she uses Self-Duplication, and so on and forth.
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What would happen (asked Gregg Landsman of ''FanFic/NobodyDies'' and ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' fame/infamy) if a titular Exaltation from the latter wound up in Commander Shepard of the former?
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What would happen (asked Gregg Landsman of ''FanFic/NobodyDies'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' fame/infamy) if a titular Exaltation from the latter wound up in Commander Shepard of the former?
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* BadassGrandpa:
** Admiral Stephen Hackett, who is one of the only people Shepard truly looks up to, and has earned that respect. When [[spoiler: a bunch of Deus' wildlife gets loose on the Normandy, he proceeds to beat the hell out of several raptor analogues without batting an eye]].
** [[spoiler: Golah, Great Sage Equal of Heaven. A krogan who is ''thousands of years old'' and has been living on ''Feros.'' Although Golah actually falls under NeverMessWithGranny.]]
** Admiral Stephen Hackett, who is one of the only people Shepard truly looks up to, and has earned that respect. When [[spoiler: a bunch of Deus' wildlife gets loose on the Normandy, he proceeds to beat the hell out of several raptor analogues without batting an eye]].
** [[spoiler: Golah, Great Sage Equal of Heaven. A krogan who is ''thousands of years old'' and has been living on ''Feros.'' Although Golah actually falls under NeverMessWithGranny.]]
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** Garrus' hunting of Omega's criminals is wrought with references to Franchise/{{Batman}} and ThePunisher.
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** Garrus' hunting of Omega's criminals is wrought with references to Franchise/{{Batman}} and ThePunisher.ComicBook/ThePunisher.
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** Tali's uncle [[Film/StarWars Han]] taught her to fly his temperamental old freighter
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** Tali's uncle [[Film/StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Han]] taught her to fly his temperamental old freighter
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* ContinuityReboot: The author has restarted the story from the beginning, the link is at the top.
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* {{Reboot}}: The author has restarted the story from the beginning, the link is at the top.
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** [[spoiler: Golah, Great Sage Equal of Heaven. A Krogan who is ''thousands of years old'' and has been living on ''Feros.'' Although Golah actually falls under NeverMessWithGranny.]]
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** [[spoiler: Golah, Great Sage Equal of Heaven. A Krogan krogan who is ''thousands of years old'' and has been living on ''Feros.'' Although Golah actually falls under NeverMessWithGranny.]]
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*** Which heavily implies removal of {{Noodle Implement|s}} status from [[spoiler: that miniature Krogan statue...]]
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*** Which heavily implies removal of {{Noodle Implement|s}} status from [[spoiler: that miniature Krogan krogan statue...]]
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In ''Mass Effect'' canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's... ''[[FanFic/NobodyDies Wuffles the Wonder Geth]]''.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In ''Mass Effect'' canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth.geth. Here, he's... ''[[FanFic/NobodyDies Wuffles the Wonder Geth]]''.
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* HiddenElfVillage: [[spoiler: There is a hidden group of quarians that never left Rannoch, protected by the Geth.]]
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* HiddenElfVillage: [[spoiler: There is a hidden group of quarians that never left Rannoch, protected by the Geth.geth.]]
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* HolographicDisguise: How everyone's favourite Geth would infiltrate [[BandOfBrothels Azure]], except that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Geth do not infiltrate]].
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* HolographicDisguise: How everyone's favourite Geth geth would infiltrate [[BandOfBrothels Azure]], except that [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Geth geth do not infiltrate]].
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* KillSteal: After [[spoiler: Kal'Reegar curb-stomps Terminal, all that's left standing is a horribly mutilated Geth shell, held together only by the Reaper's pure rage...]] And then Wuffles blows its head off from across the battlefield.
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* KillSteal: After [[spoiler: Kal'Reegar curb-stomps Terminal, all that's left standing is a horribly mutilated Geth geth shell, held together only by the Reaper's pure rage...]] And then Wuffles blows its head off from across the battlefield.
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* MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours: [[spoiler:Wuffles]] makes the following declaration to [[spoiler:Harbinger: “We have internalized the lessons and principles that embody the Geth, and their quest to live alongside organics and reunite with the Creators, And while your Solar Hero Style is strong, we present the following hypothesis; It cannot defeat our Synthetic Hero Style.”]]
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* MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours: [[spoiler:Wuffles]] makes the following declaration to [[spoiler:Harbinger: “We have internalized the lessons and principles that embody the Geth, geth, and their quest to live alongside organics and reunite with the Creators, And while your Solar Hero Style is strong, we present the following hypothesis; It cannot defeat our Synthetic Hero Style.”]]
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** Poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]]. Since it didn't repair the giant hole in its chest after the first time, the bullets usually just hit things behind him.
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** Poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].geth]]. Since it didn't repair the giant hole in its chest after the first time, the bullets usually just hit things behind him.
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--> '''Aethyta:''' "Honey, I've lived for a few centuries. In my time, I've seen hanar bondage, elcors dancing, and a Krogan trying to woo his girl with poetry. Shit gets weird enough that you look at the weirdness and say, 'Hell, I've seen weirder.'"
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--> '''Aethyta:''' "Honey, I've lived for a few centuries. In my time, I've seen hanar bondage, elcors dancing, and a Krogan krogan trying to woo his girl with poetry. Shit gets weird enough that you look at the weirdness and say, 'Hell, I've seen weirder.'"
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--> "You had a turian, Benezia's daughter, a quarian and a Krogan on your crew. Matter of time before you recruited a Geth."
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--> "You had a turian, Benezia's daughter, a quarian and a Krogan krogan on your crew. Matter of time before you recruited a Geth.geth."
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** "So you want to fight the Reapers?" "The Geth believe that self-determination is the right of any sentient." [[Franchise/TransFormers "Freedom is the right of all living beings?"]]
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** "So you want to fight the Reapers?" "The Geth geth believe that self-determination is the right of any sentient." [[Franchise/TransFormers "Freedom is the right of all living beings?"]]
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* ChekhovsGun: At first this looked to be [[Main/InvokedTrope invoked]], as Kasumi appears to conspicuously set up a Chekhov's Honey Badger in a box during her mission at Hock's estate.
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* ChekhovsGun: At first this looked to be [[Main/InvokedTrope invoked]], as Kasumi appears to conspicuously set up a Chekhov's Honey Badger in a box during before going on her mission at to Hock's estate.
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* [[ChekhovsGun Chekhov's Honey Badger]]
** "[[SubvertedTrope This is not]] Chekov." [[spoiler: It is a grizzly bear.]]
** And subverted again. Kasumi mentions the actual trope, and talks about how she [[spoiler: hid a box in Hock's gunship with a surprise]]. Implications are that the Gun will be Chekov. [[spoiler: The box actually contains Wrex.]]
** "[[SubvertedTrope This is not]] Chekov." [[spoiler: It is a grizzly bear.]]
** And subverted again. Kasumi mentions the actual trope, and talks about how she [[spoiler: hid a box in Hock's gunship with a surprise]]. Implications are that the Gun will be Chekov. [[spoiler: The box actually contains Wrex.]]
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* [[ChekhovsGun ChekhovsGun: At first this looked to be [[Main/InvokedTrope invoked]], as Kasumi appears to conspicuously set up a Chekhov's Honey Badger]]
Badger in a box during her mission at Hock's estate.
** "[[SubvertedTrope This is not]] Chekov." [[spoiler: It is actually a grizzly bear.]]
** And subverted again. Kasumi mentions the actual trope, and talks about how she [[spoiler: hid a box in Hock's gunship with a surprise]]. Implications are that the Gun will be Chekov. [[spoiler:The Then double subverted, as the box actually contains Wrex.]]
** "[[SubvertedTrope This is not]] Chekov." [[spoiler: It is actually a grizzly bear.]]
** And subverted again. Kasumi mentions the actual trope, and talks about how she [[spoiler: hid a box in Hock's gunship with a surprise]]. Implications are that the Gun will be Chekov. [[spoiler:
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* ClothingDamage: Constant due to the Exalted being vastly tougher than their armor. MagicPants are also averted: Shepard ending up naked is practically a RunningGag.
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* ClothingDamage: Constant Constantly, due to the Exalted being vastly tougher than their armor. MagicPants are also averted: Shepard ending up naked is practically a RunningGag.
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* FlatWhat:
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* FlatWhat: A constant RunningGag throughout the story, as people get swiftly introduced to Exalted feats.
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** This is practically one of the author's trademarks.
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** This is practically one of the author's trademarks.trademarks, being liberally present in his other works.
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* HollywoodHacking: Wuffles.
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* HollywoodHacking: Wuffles.Wuffles, who does this to Vasir while not being focused upon.
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* [[UnexplainedRecovery I Got Better]]: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the beginning of [=ME2=] as in canon...
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** Exclaimed by Shepard in surprise.
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** Exclaimed by Shepard in surprise.surprise, as she most certainly did not know it before the story started.
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* IntangibleTheft: [[spoiler: Kasumi Goto]] is a Sidereal Exalted and she steals
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* IntangibleTheft: [[spoiler: Kasumi Goto]] is a Sidereal Exalted and she steals the following:
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* [[spoiler:LivingRelic: Turns out that a few Prothean survivors found Autochthon's body and were given a place to colonize. There's even a Prothean Alchemical.]]
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* [[spoiler:LivingRelic: LivingRelic: [[spoiler: Turns out that a few Prothean survivors found Autochthon's body and were given a place to colonize. There's even a Prothean Alchemical.]]
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** Reapers have names appropriate to their stature and mission...and that ''also'' are fully consistent with canonical naming patterns for Alchemical Exalted. [[spoiler: With good reason; they're basically Alchemical Voidtech Deathlords.]]
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** Reapers have names appropriate to their stature and mission... and that ''also'' are fully consistent with canonical naming patterns for Alchemical Exalted. [[spoiler: With good reason; they're basically Alchemical Voidtech Deathlords.]]
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** In chapter 6 Serviceman Chung finally gets his 'damn firing solution'
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** Poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].
** Wuffles hacking Prazza's suit and activating the Nerv-Stim systems to "incapacitate" him everytime he barges in with weapon in hand.
** Wuffles hacking Prazza's suit and activating the Nerv-Stim systems to "incapacitate" him everytime he barges in with weapon in hand.
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** Poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].
Geth]]. Since it didn't repair the giant hole in its chest after the first time, the bullets usually just hit things behind him.
** Wuffles hacking Prazza's suit and activating the Nerv-Stim systems to "incapacitate" himeverytime every time he barges in with weapon in hand.
** Wuffles hacking Prazza's suit and activating the Nerv-Stim systems to "incapacitate" him
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* ScheduleSlip: Mainly when reading it on the forums as he writes it, Gregg tends to alternate his writing between GSP and Nobody Dies so one story goes on a brief hiatus while he works on the other.
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* ScheduleSlip: Mainly when reading it on the forums as he writes wrote it, as Gregg tends tended to alternate his writing between GSP and Nobody Dies so one story goes on a brief hiatus while he works on the other.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the beginning of [=ME2=] as in canon...