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* AgentPeacock: Heins. Though [[CloudCuckooLander flighty]] and so very much InTouchWithHisFeminineSide, he [[spoiler:saves Hans life twice]] and women cannot get enough of him, much to his bafflement.

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* AgentPeacock: Heins. Though [[CloudCuckooLander flighty]] and so very much InTouchWithHisFeminineSide, he [[spoiler:saves Hans life twice]] life]] and women cannot get enough of him, much to his bafflement.


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* SweetieGraffiti: Carved into the balcony railing of the castle of Arendelle is [[spoiler: an H and a backwards E. Hans carved them with a fork for the two of them when he was five and she was three.]]
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* AgentPeacock: Heins. Though [[CloudCuckooLander flighty]] and so very much InTouchWithHisFeminineSide, he [[spoiler:saves Hans life twice]] and women cannot get enough of him, much to his bafflement.
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--> '''Heins''' *Seething*: “They are not ''[[BeserkButton rags]]''.”

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--> '''Heins''' *Seething*: “They are not ''[[BeserkButton ''[[BerserkButton rags]]''.”
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* ITakeOffenceAtTheLastOne:ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne:
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Apparently, [[spoiler: Hans and Elsa]] were childhood friends briefly. Time will tell if the relationship is a victorious one or not.


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* CurtainClothing: According to Heins, it’s amazing what one can do with “unused curtains, a ream of burgundy silk and a little ingenuity”. This is to replace his suit after he uses his original suit for fabric to make Elsa’s replacement dress for the gala.


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* ITakeOffenceAtTheLastOne:
--> '''Johan''': “. . . Journeying all the way to Arendelle with only a single barrel, a small satchel, and a stack of old rags?”
--> '''Heins''' *Seething*: “They are not ''[[BeserkButton rags]]''.”
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* AlcoholicParent: Helena's father after getting dismissed from his service.


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* LeonineContract: Helena falls prey to one while trying to get money to help her mother.


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* PapaWolf: Helena's father, despite falling into alcoholism, regains a bit of his old spirit when trying to protect his daughter from a man who's trying to take advantage of her. Unfortunately, he gets fatally stabbed in the process.
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* WorkOffTheDebt: Helena's employment by Egil is essentially this. Unfortunately for her, she didn't understand how interest works when she first signed up, and now realizes she has little hope of paying it off.
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* TheAtoner: Take a guess

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* DeathGlare: [[spoiler:Anna]] to Hans.



* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen. So far, it's been strongly averted for [[spoiler:Kristoff, who punches Hans out the moment he realizes who he is, and only begrudgingly takes him to see Anna, who's no happier]].

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* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen. So far, it's been strongly averted for [[spoiler:Kristoff, who punches Hans out the moment he realizes who he is, and only begrudgingly takes him to see Anna, who's no happier]].happier, and who indicates that things between them will never be the same as they were before]].


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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: By cutting off trade with Wesselton, Elsa resulted in Wesselton cheating its other trade partners out of their fair share, resulting in Arendelle's economy entering a crisis.


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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Hans to Heins in Chapter 12
-->'''Hans''': We. Cannot. Be found.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Heins. And Anna, as usual.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Heins. [[spoiler: And Anna, as usual.]]



* CloudCuckooLander: Heins, who raves about clothes and the colours the Arendelle people will be wearing at the masked ball and goes utterly nuts discussing the party with Anna.

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* CloudCuckooLander: Heins, who raves about clothes and the colours the Arendelle people will be wearing [[spoiler: at the masked ball and goes utterly nuts discussing the party with Anna.]]
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 12, Kristoff says "[[Creator/{{LaurelAndHardy}} Now you've done it!]]" when [[spoiler: Anna attacks Heins out with a frying pan.]]

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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 12, Kristoff says "[[Creator/{{LaurelAndHardy}} Now you've done it!]]" when [[spoiler: Anna attacks Heins out with a frying pan.]]
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 12, Kristoff says "[[Creator/{{LaurelAndHardy}} Now you've done it!]]" when [[spoiler: Anna attacks Heins out with a frying pan.]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Heins. And Anna, as usual.


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* CloudCuckooLander: Heins, who raves about clothes and the colours the Arendelle people will be wearing at the masked ball and goes utterly nuts discussing the party with Anna.
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-->*Hans's father asks if what he's done is true.*
-->'''Hans:''' Yes, it is true.
-->'''Hans's Mother:''' "Hans! No...no...not my Hans, not my baby! No!
-->*When his father nervously suggests the death penalty*
-->'''Hans's Mother:''' No! I will not see my son walk to the gallows, I will not! I would rather take his place before I ever see the day!
-->'''Hans:''' *Thinking* Mother...you would defend me if I'd murdered one hundred people...
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Heins to [[spoiler:Kristoff]] regarding his unfavorable judgment of Hans
-->'''Heins''': … how long have you known him?

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* DirtyCoward: [[spoiler:Kristoff]] accuses Hans of being this when he freezes up as [[spoiler:his brother falls through the ice]], but Heins points out that a childhood trauma kicked in.



* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen. So far, it's been strongly averted for [[spoiler:Kristoff, who punches Hans out the moment he realizes who he is]].

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* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen. So far, it's been strongly averted for [[spoiler:Kristoff, who punches Hans out the moment he realizes who he is]].is, and only begrudgingly takes him to see Anna, who's no happier]].



* ReformedButRejected: Hans. [[spoiler:Kristoff punches him out the moment he sees him, although he is eventually convinced to help get them to the castle. Anna looks far angrier than we've ever seen her when she sees Hans]].



* TemptingFate: [[spoiler:Kristoff]] believes that "no one will show up" to his high and isolated cottage, and almost immediately afterward, [[spoiler:Anna]] arrives.



* ThouShaltNotKill: Johan, despite being a pirate, which is why he's troubled by what Hans admits to have attempted.

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* ThouShaltNotKill: Johan, despite being a pirate, which is why he's troubled by what Hans admits to have having attempted.



* WhamLine: In Chapter 8, when Heins recognizes the pirate captain.

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* WhamLine: In WhamLine:
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**In Chapter 10, a visitor arrives where Hans and Heins are, not expecting to see them. [[spoiler:Her]] description quickly establishes [[spoiler:her]] identity as [[spoiler:Anna]].


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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Hans gets this from his mother and Heins.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Hans initially failed to plan his return to Arendelle. After running into a storm and getting picked up by pirates, he learns from this mistake.


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* RealityEnsues: When pretending to be ice harvesters, Hans and Heins end up making some amateur mistakes, one of which results in an accident that [[spoiler:almost gets Heins killed]] and is decidedly not PlayedForLaughs. They have a harder time pretending to be a profession than most fictional characters.


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* ThouShaltNotKill: Johan, despite being a pirate, which is why he's troubled by what Hans admits to have attempted.
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* InTouchWithHisFeminineSide: Heins, who has the job of a seamstress, only more royal.
** AmbiguouslyGay: The ladies can't get enough of him, but he just finds his admirers a little more than annoying.

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* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen.

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* EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen. So far, it's been strongly averted for [[spoiler:Kristoff, who punches Hans out the moment he realizes who he is]].


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* SpoilerTitle: Chapter 10's title, [[spoiler:The Official Ice Master and Deliverer]] reveals which character makes an appearance in that chapter.
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-->'''Heins''': Have you all forgotten what makes a prince? [[BadassCreed A prince forgets trespasses! He forgives! He sacrifices! He is compassionate!]]

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-->'''Heins''': He's our brother, Harald! Our brother! And I, for one, love him! Have you all forgotten what makes a prince? [[BadassCreed A prince forgets trespasses! He forgives! He sacrifices! He is compassionate!]]

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-->'''Harald''': Don't recite those time-old rhymes to me! God knows we spent half our childhoods reciting them back to the king
whenever he asked like a bunch of trained parrots!

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-->'''Harald''': Don't recite those time-old rhymes to me! God knows we spent half our childhoods reciting them back to the king
king whenever he asked like a bunch of trained parrots!

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The brothers who are more forgiving of Hans concede that trade with other nations, and their livelihoods, have suffered as a result.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The brothers who are more forgiving of Hans concede that trade with other nations, and their livelihoods, have suffered as a result.result, as the brothers who refuse to forgive Hans pointed out.


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* ShutUpKirk: Harald to Heins, when Heins tries to remind him of what makes a prince while arguing in Hans' favor.
-->'''Heins''': Have you all forgotten what makes a prince? [[BadassCreed A prince forgets trespasses! He forgives! He sacrifices! He is compassionate!]]
-->'''Harald''': Don't recite those time-old rhymes to me! God knows we spent half our childhoods reciting them back to the king
whenever he asked like a bunch of trained parrots!

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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Heins initially seems to be asking about what Hans did, but quickly turns out to be asking about the condition of the suit he designed for Hans.

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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Heins ComicallyMissingThePoint:
**Heins
initially seems to be asking about what Hans did, but quickly turns out to be asking about the condition of the suit he designed for Hans.Hans.
**A [[BlackComedy much darker]] example happens when the brothers discuss how to deal with Hans.
-->'''Harken''': I could whip him. I've only just procured the most marvelous cat of nine tails. Glass shards imbedded in the leather, guaranteed to cleave flesh with each stroke. ''(gets a SlasherSmile)''
-->'''Helm''': That is not an option.
-->'''Harken''': Why not? Would you rather perform the honor?
-->'''Horatio''': The last man father placed you in charge of whipping died the next day.
-->'''Harken''': Exactly. That should tell you how much I need the practice.


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* SlasherSmile: Harken at the prospect of getting to whip Hans.

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* AlliterativeName: Helen Hunter, the castle doctor.

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* AlliterativeName: AlliterativeName:
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Helen Hunter, the castle doctor.doctor.
** Johan Jorgen, the pirate.



* ArrangedMarriage: One caused Prince Harry to run away from home.

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* ArrangedMarriage: One caused Prince Harry to run away from home. Apparently, it was to the same person that Heinrik was originally supposed to marry.



* BlatantLies: Hans saying “I’m not afraid” when his father declares that he will be going public about his crimes.

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* BlatantLies: Hans saying “I’m not afraid” when his father declares that he will be going public about his crimes. The lie is meant to fool himself as much as his parents.



* ChekhovMIA: Prince Harry, who ran away from home, [[spoiler:shows up in Chapter 8, his brother Heinrik's fence for selling his goods]].



* EmbarrassingNickname:
**"Jo-Jo" for Johan Jorgen, the pirate.
**"Heinie", for Heinrik.



* JustLikeRobinHood: [[spoiler:Heinrik, as well as Harry]] aspire to be this.



* LetMeGetThisStraight: Johan regarding Hans' plan.
-->'''Johan''': "So you're going back to apologize to this crazy magical woman who [[PowerIncontinence can't control herself]] and just happens to be the newly-appointed Queen of Arendelle? After you tried to kill her? Are you mentally ill?"
* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler:The pirate captain is Hans' brother Heinrik. Heinrik's contact is their brother Harry.]]



-->'''Heins''': Hans… this is [[spoiler:Heinrik… our brother!]]"

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-->'''Heins''': Hans… this is [[spoiler:Heinrik… our brother!]]"brother]]!"

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* FamilyThemeNaming: All of the princes of the Southern Isles (Harvard, Hubert, Heinrik, Helm, Harken, Hugo, Harald, Henning, Hedvil, Heins, Harry, Hans) have names beginning with H.

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* FamilyThemeNaming: All of the princes of the Southern Isles (Harvard, (in order of birth: Harvard, Hubert, Helm, Heinrik, Helm, Harken, Hugo, Horatio, Harald, Henning, Hedvil, Heins, Harry, Hans) have names beginning with H.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Harald vs. Heins

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Harald vs. HeinsHeins, after Harald is outvoted in the issue of whether to ask for a pardon for Hans.


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* WhamLine: In Chapter 8, when Heins recognizes the pirate captain.
-->'''Heins''': Hans… this is [[spoiler:Heinrik… our brother!]]"
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* JerkassHasAPoint: The brothers who are more forgiving of Hans concede that trade with other nations, and their livelihoods, have suffered as a result.
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* NoYou: After being outvoted, Harald tells his brothers that if their kingdom falls, they will shoulder the blame. Heins angrily counters that Harald is the one who will be at fault.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Harald vs. Heins
-->'''Harald''': If our kingdom falls… it will be due to all of you. Remember that.
-->'''Heins''': [[NoYou No, if our kingdom falls, it will be due to you, Harald]]! And I pray such misfortunes as have befallen Hans never befall me, because I certainly can't depend on you to come to my aid!


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* VillainousBSOD: Hans suffers from one as his family learns of his crimes, and he's forced to ponder Anna's parting words to him.

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-->'''Hans''': I tried to murder her, Heins. I doubt I'll find a way to delicately say 'Sorry I attempted to kill
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-->'''Hans''': I tried to murder her, Heins. I doubt I'll find a way to delicately say 'Sorry I attempted to kill
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Hans: So formal, Harald.

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Hans: -->'''Hans''': So formal, Harald.



* TreacheryCoverUp: Somewhat downplayed, but Hans is confined to the castle until his fate is decided, so that word doesn’t get out prematurely. The king ultimately decides to go public about it after stripping Hans of his prince status, though.

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* TreacheryCoverUp: Somewhat downplayed, but Hans is confined to the castle until his fate is decided, so that word doesn’t get out prematurely.prematurely; several of Hans' brothers don't even initially know what happened, though. The king ultimately decides to go public about it after stripping Hans of his prince status, though.
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'''This page contains unmarked spoilers for the movie {{Disney/Frozen}}.'''

Frozen Hearts is a {{Disney/Frozen}} fanfic that takes place after the events of the movie, with Hans being shipped back to the Southern Isles to await judgment for his crimes. Hans manages to avoid the death penalty, but is stripped of his title as prince, and is forbidden to leave the Southern Isles or return to his castle until he can prove himself worthy of being a prince again. Hans sets out to Arendelle again to seek out Elsa and apologize to her, as a way of showing to his father that he is trying to right his wrongs.

The fanfic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9952519/1/Frozen-Hearts here]].

!This fanfic contains examples of:

*AbhorrentAdmirer: Princess Orion to Heins.
*AlliterativeName: Helen Hunter, the castle doctor.
*AloofBigBrother: Most of Hans’ siblings, as per canon, with Hugo, Harald and Helm being the three who treated Hans like he was invisible. Some of them, such as [[NiceGuy Heins]], are a little better than that, but a few, such as [[BigBrotherBully Harald]], are worse.
-->'''Horatio''': (to Hans) Did the queen even look at you?
-->'''Hugo''': Doubtful. Why pay attention to the runt?
*ArcWords: Hans' "frozen heart".
*ArrangedMarriage: One caused Prince Harry to run away from home.
*ATasteOfTheLash: Prince Harken has a more sadistic than usual variant, involving shards of glass in a cat of nine tails, which he proposes as Hans’ punishment. At least one of his whipping victims has died from what he suffered.
*BadassCreed: Hans recites this to his father about what being a prince means. The last phrase becomes his SurvivalMantra.
-->'''Hans''': "A prince [[TurnTheOtherCheek forgets the trespasses against him]], no matter how terrible. He [[HeroicSacrifice sacrifices for others]], even to the expense of his soul. He forgives until he forfeits breath. He is strong, he is compassionate, and the sum of these things makes him complete... a prince I am and a prince I will be."
*BigBrotherBully: Harald beats up Hans after two of his men got dismissed because of how they treated him. Harken proposes whipping Hans, even though people have died from his whippings before.
*BlatantLies: Hans saying “I’m not afraid” when his father declares that he will be going public about his crimes.
*BluntYes: When Hans meets Harald in the harbor.
-->'''Harald''': Hans, do you realize what you’ve done?
-->'''Hans''': I do.
-->'''Harald''': [[{{Angrish}} How could you do… I…]]
*ComicallyMissingThePoint: Heins initially seems to be asking about what Hans did, but quickly turns out to be asking about the condition of the suit he designed for Hans.
*DeadpanSnarker: Hans to his brothers. For example, when he’s brought before his parents to answer to them, he snarks about Harald’s habit of calling his parents “the king and the queen” out of professionalism.
Hans: So formal, Harald.
*DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Heins seemingly gets washed overboard during a storm, but survives]]
*EasilyForgiven: The trope is discussed when Hans and Heins discuss what he's going to do next, though whether it's played straight has yet to be seen.
-->'''Heins''': … have you tried writing the Queen a letter?
-->'''Hans''': I tried to murder her, Heins. I doubt I'll find a way to delicately say 'Sorry I attempted to kill
you'
*EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas: Hans sees his father as one of the few people he respects, and is deeply moved by how much his mother still cares for him after everything he’s done.
*FamilyThemeNaming: All of the princes of the Southern Isles (Harvard, Hubert, Heinrik, Helm, Harken, Hugo, Harald, Henning, Hedvil, Heins, Harry, Hans) have names beginning with H.
*FlatWhat: Harald, in response to Hugo, following a long silence, giving a vote in favor of asking for a pardon for Hans instead of the vote against it Harald had expected, which would have put the "no" votes in the majority.
*HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Prince Heins]] pushes [[spoiler:his younger brother]] to safety in the hold during a storm. [[spoiler:Surprisingly, he lives.]]
*{{Jerkass}}: More than a few of Hans’ brothers do things that, while not approaching the severity of Hans’ crimes in the movie, are exceptionally [[KickTheDog petty and cruel]], and they are often abrasive or cold-hearted.
*KickTheDog: Harald beating up Hans over two of his men getting dismissed.
*LateArrivalSpoiler: The fic’s entire premise spoils Hans’ EvilPlan, as well as the fact that it failed.
*MamaDidntRaiseNoCriminal: Allowyn, Hans’ mother, can hardly believe what she heard about what he did.
*MisplacedRetribution: After two of his best men are dismissed for mistreating Hans while escorting him back to the Southern Isles, Harald beats up Hans, even though technically, the only role Hans played was in the actions that led him to get shipped back home in chains.
*NiceGuy: Prince Heins.
*ParentsAsPeople: George and Allowyn, king and queen of the Southern Isle, are understandably having difficulty coming to terms with what their youngest son did. George realizes that the Southern Isles’ relations with other countries will suffer unless he deals with Hans, but he has difficulty with the idea of punishing his child. Allowyn understands how terrible what Hans did is, but would be executed in his place, and believes that he didn’t do what he did out of a mere lust for power.
*RedemptionQuest: Implied to be in the process for Hans.
*SurvivalMantra: For Hans, it’s “A prince I am and a prince I will be,” the last line of the BadassCreed.
*ThemeNaming: Several of the chapters are named after lines from Frozen. For example, Chapter 3 is called “Kingdom of Isolation,” a phrase from “Let It Go”.
*TreacheryCoverUp: Somewhat downplayed, but Hans is confined to the castle until his fate is decided, so that word doesn’t get out prematurely. The king ultimately decides to go public about it after stripping Hans of his prince status, though.
*WasItAllALie: Interestingly enough, Hans ends up asking himself this about his time with Anna, realizing that he enjoyed it more than he realized.
*WhatTheHellHero: The brothers who want to request that Hans be pardoned and the ones who believe he should not be exchange these while debating the issue. The former group is accused of not realizing the severity of Hans’ crimes, and is reminded of the potential impact on the kingdom’s economic livelihood. The latter group is accused of forgetting that Hans is their brother, and is criticized over their crueler ideas of punishment.

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