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* MoodWhiplash: Starts out as a fairly serious fic, then gets dark as characters die, the Mass Effect galaxy is invaded, and discord makes it an unpleasant place. Characters from Borderlands die (including Tina). Suddenly, bursts of comedic socipathy and schadenfreude played for laughs appear in the mid-twenties chapters. Also, Shepard gets a Stupid Statement Dance Mix while Jack and Brick train little comedic sociopaths of their own. A literary headrest might be necessary -- things get very dark in Chapter 31. The galaxy militarizes, not too different than Palpatine's New Order, Shepard "grabs a gun" by leading Apocalypse How Level 4s against worlds populated by both enemies and innocents, the quarians link hands with the geth... to destroy all opposition, and the United Defense Command takes on an extremely fascist tone. In Chapter 34, Lilith sets off on a course for redemption, ultimately earning it through a Heroic Sacrifice in Chapter 35.
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* MoodWhiplash: Starts out as a fairly serious fic, then gets dark as characters die, the Mass Effect galaxy is invaded, and discord makes it an unpleasant place. Characters from Borderlands die (including Tina). Suddenly, bursts of comedic socipathy and schadenfreude played for laughs appear in the mid-twenties chapters. Also, Shepard gets a Stupid Statement Dance Mix dance mix while Jack and Brick train little comedic sociopaths of their own. A literary headrest might be necessary -- things get very dark in Chapter 31. The galaxy militarizes, not too different than Palpatine's New Order, Shepard "grabs a gun" by leading Apocalypse How Level 4s against worlds populated by both enemies and innocents, the quarians link hands with the geth... to destroy all opposition, and the United Defense Command takes on an extremely fascist tone. In Chapter 34, Lilith sets off on a course for redemption, ultimately earning it through a Heroic Sacrifice in Chapter 35.
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* StupidStatementDanceMix: Shepard's appearance before the Council gets turned into this in-universe ("Reaper Problem").
