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* RageBreakingPoint: In Chapter 4, Papyrus (who's already stressed out by Flowey's torment and abuse) snaps at Sans for probing and questioning him about his well-being, leading to a brutal ReasonYouSuck speech directed towards his brother.
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* RageBreakingPoint: In Chapter 4, Papyrus (who's already stressed out by Flowey's torment and abuse) snaps at Sans for probing and questioning him about his well-being, leading to a brutal ReasonYouSuck speech [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech Reason You Suck speech]] directed towards his brother.
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* RageBreakingPoint: In Chapter 4, Papyrus (who's already stressed out by Flowey's torment and abuse) snaps at Sans for probing and questioning him about his well-being, leading to a brutal ReasonYouSuck speech directed towards his brother.
--> ''Papyrus met [Sans'] concerned glare, and some tiny, over-tightened screw in his mind suddenly stripped out.''
--> ''Papyrus met [Sans'] concerned glare, and some tiny, over-tightened screw in his mind suddenly stripped out.''
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* AdultFear: The fic is a disturbingly realistic portrayal of an abusive friendship, featuring one of the sweetest characters from the original game being tormented and frightened into keeping silent by his own “friend”.
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* TheSociopath: UpToEleven with Flowey in this fic. While he does show some of his TragicVillain traits, make no mistake, this features him at his absolute nastiest. He even [[PlayingTheVictimCard uses his tragic backstory]] as a way to [[WoundedGazelleGambit manipulate Papyrus]]. All without even a remote hint of remorse. There's a reason the fic has the following tag:
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* TheSociopath: UpToEleven Taken up to eleven with Flowey in this fic. While he does show some of his TragicVillain traits, make no mistake, this features him at his absolute nastiest. He even [[PlayingTheVictimCard uses his tragic backstory]] backstory as a way to [[WoundedGazelleGambit manipulate Papyrus]]. All Papyrus]], all without even a remote hint of remorse. There's a reason the fic has the following tag:
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* AdaptationalVillainy: [[DownplayedTrope While Flowey was already brutal]] in ''Undertale'', this fic doesn't include much of the softer side that he had as Asriel.
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* HateSink: [[AntagonistTitle The titular Flowey]] lacks the sympathetic qualities of his canon counterpart. Having grown bored in [[GroundhogDayLoop one of his latest runs]], Flowey decides to psychologically torment Papyrus, [[FalseFriend who sees him as a friend]], under the guise of training. He challenges Papyrus to fight for his life, killing him and resetting whenever he fails and punishing him by slowly breaking his body parts if he refuses. Flowey tells Papyrus to keep the training a secret, threatening his loved ones if he does not comply. Flowey spends the story slowly breaking down Papyurs and turning him into a shadow of his former self, causing Papyrus to lash out at his loved ones and become distant from them. When Sans is falsely accused of abusing Papyrus by Undyne and imprisoned, Flowey laughs before taking the opportunity to give Papyrus his final challenge- [[spoiler: to kill an innocent monster. When Papyrus warns the snowdrake instead and refuses to kill the Moldsmal, Flowey offs the latter himself. Finally, when Sans shows up to recuse Papyrus, Flowey makes a final attempt to kill them both, and when Papyrus slays him, [[YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame he congratulates the latter for finally killing someone]]]]. A bloodthirsty sociopath who torments his so-called 'best friend' for fun, Flowey completely abandons the kindness he had as Asriel.
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* HateSink: [[AntagonistTitle The titular Flowey]] lacks the sympathetic qualities of his canon counterpart. Having grown bored in [[GroundhogDayLoop one of his latest runs]], Flowey decides to psychologically torment Papyrus, [[FalseFriend who sees him as a friend]], under the guise of training. He challenges Papyrus to fight for his life, killing him and resetting whenever he fails and punishing him by slowly breaking his body parts if he refuses. Flowey tells Papyrus to keep the training a secret, threatening his loved ones if he does not comply. Flowey spends the story slowly breaking down Papyurs and turning him into a shadow of his former self, causing Papyrus to lash out at his loved ones and become distant from them. When Sans is falsely accused of abusing Papyrus by Undyne and imprisoned, Flowey laughs before taking the opportunity to give Papyrus his final challenge- [[spoiler: to challenge — [[spoiler:to kill an innocent monster. When Papyrus warns the snowdrake instead and refuses to kill the Moldsmal, Flowey offs the latter himself. Finally, when Sans shows up to recuse rescue Papyrus, Flowey makes a final attempt to kill them both, and when Papyrus slays him, [[YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame he congratulates the latter for finally killing someone]]]]. A bloodthirsty sociopath who torments his so-called 'best friend' for fun, Flowey completely abandons the kindness he had as Asriel.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Though he had his suspicions, Sans first realizes that something is really wrong with Papyrus when he makes a pun only for Papyrus, who normally [[LamePunReaction gets mad]], to barely react to it.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Though he had his suspicions, Sans first realizes that something is really wrong with Papyrus when he makes a pun pun, only for Papyrus, who normally [[LamePunReaction gets mad]], to barely react to it.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[DownplayedTrope Ever so slightly.]] While Flowey was already brutal in Undertale, this fic doesn't include the softer side that he had as Asriel.
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* TheSociopath: UpToEleven with Flowey in this fic. While he does show some of his TragicVillain traits, make no mistake, this features him at his absolute nastiest. He even [[PlayingTheVictimCard uses his tragic backstory]] as a Wayne to [[WoundedGazelleGambit manipulate Papyrus]]. All without even a remote hint of remorse. There's a reason the fic has the following tag:
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* TheSociopath: UpToEleven with Flowey in this fic. While he does show some of his TragicVillain traits, make no mistake, this features him at his absolute nastiest. He even [[PlayingTheVictimCard uses his tragic backstory]] as a Wayne way to [[WoundedGazelleGambit manipulate Papyrus]]. All without even a remote hint of remorse. There's a reason the fic has the following tag:
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[DownplayedTrope Ever so slightly.]] While Flowey was already brutal in Undertale, this fic doesn't include the softer side that he had as Asriel.
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* HateSink: [[AntagonistTitle The titular Flowey]] lacks the sympathetic qualities of his canon counterpart. Having grown bored in [[GroundhogDayLoop one of his latest runs]], Flowey decides to psychologically torment Papyrus, [[FalseFriend who sees him as a friend]], under the guise of training. He challenges Papyrus to fight for his life, killing him and resetting whenever he fails and punishing him by slowly breaking his body parts if he refuses. Flowey tells Papyrus to keep the training a secret, threatening his loved ones if he does not comply. Flowey spends the story slowly breaking down Papyurs and turning him into a shadow of his former self, causing Papyrus to lash out at his loved ones and become distant from them. When Sans is falsely accused of abusing Papyrus by Undyne and imprisoned, Flowey laughs before taking the opportunity to give Papyrus his final challenge- to kill an innocent monster. When Papyrus warns the snowdrake instead and refuses to kill the Moldsmal, Flowey offs the latter himself. Finally, when Sans shows up to recuse Papyrus, Flowey makes a final attempt to kill them both, and when Papyrus slays him, [[YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame he congratulates the latter for finally killing someone]]. A bloodthirsty sociopath who torments his so-called 'best friend' for fun, Flowey completely abandons the kindness he had as Asriel.
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* HateSink: [[AntagonistTitle The titular Flowey]] lacks the sympathetic qualities of his canon counterpart. Having grown bored in [[GroundhogDayLoop one of his latest runs]], Flowey decides to psychologically torment Papyrus, [[FalseFriend who sees him as a friend]], under the guise of training. He challenges Papyrus to fight for his life, killing him and resetting whenever he fails and punishing him by slowly breaking his body parts if he refuses. Flowey tells Papyrus to keep the training a secret, threatening his loved ones if he does not comply. Flowey spends the story slowly breaking down Papyurs and turning him into a shadow of his former self, causing Papyrus to lash out at his loved ones and become distant from them. When Sans is falsely accused of abusing Papyrus by Undyne and imprisoned, Flowey laughs before taking the opportunity to give Papyrus his final challenge- [[spoiler: to kill an innocent monster. When Papyrus warns the snowdrake instead and refuses to kill the Moldsmal, Flowey offs the latter himself. Finally, when Sans shows up to recuse Papyrus, Flowey makes a final attempt to kill them both, and when Papyrus slays him, [[YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame he congratulates the latter for finally killing someone]].someone]]]]. A bloodthirsty sociopath who torments his so-called 'best friend' for fun, Flowey completely abandons the kindness he had as Asriel.
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* AntagonistTitle: Obviously, and yet still is quite the {{Understatement}}.
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* HateSink: [[AntagonistTitle The titular Flowey]] lacks the sympathetic qualities of his canon counterpart. Having grown bored in [[GroundhogDayLoop one of his latest runs]], Flowey decides to psychologically torment Papyrus, [[FalseFriend who sees him as a friend]], under the guise of training. He challenges Papyrus to fight for his life, killing him and resetting whenever he fails and punishing him by slowly breaking his body parts if he refuses. Flowey tells Papyrus to keep the training a secret, threatening his loved ones if he does not comply. Flowey spends the story slowly breaking down Papyurs and turning him into a shadow of his former self, causing Papyrus to lash out at his loved ones and become distant from them. When Sans is falsely accused of abusing Papyrus by Undyne and imprisoned, Flowey laughs before taking the opportunity to give Papyrus his final challenge- to kill an innocent monster. When Papyrus warns the snowdrake instead and refuses to kill the Moldsmal, Flowey offs the latter himself. Finally, when Sans shows up to recuse Papyrus, Flowey makes a final attempt to kill them both, and when Papyrus slays him, [[YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame he congratulates the latter for finally killing someone]]. A bloodthirsty sociopath who torments his so-called 'best friend' for fun, Flowey completely abandons the kindness he had as Asriel.