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* AdaptationalVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego like in other fanfics. She's the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. Sheik has no positive elements. She is simply bitter and violent.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego AloofAlterEgo like in other fanfics. She's the common fanfic depiction. She is the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. negativity; Sheik has no positive elements. She elements.,she is simply bitter and violent.
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* SlashFic: It's a Zelda/Samus-themed series.
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* SlashFic: It's a Zelda/Samus-themed series.series where Zelda and Samus are attracted to one another, but neither are able to express their feelings healthily.
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* DarkFic: Unlike in the games, BloodlessCarnage is not a thing at all. Fighters can't ''die'' in battle, however they do bleed and bones can break. The audiences are blood-hungry so the more blood, the better. On a plot level, the characters are much darker than in canon.
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* DarkFic: Unlike in the games, BloodlessCarnage is not a thing at all. Fighters can't ''die'' in battle, however they do bleed and bones can break. The audiences are blood-hungry blood-hungry, so the more blood, the better. On a plot level, the characters are much darker than in canon.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234330/1/Doppelgänger Doppelganger]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5985108/1/An-Almighty-Thud An Almighty Thud]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262946/1/I-Do-Not-Exist I Do Not Exist]]''.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosBrawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234330/1/Doppelgänger Doppelganger]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5985108/1/An-Almighty-Thud An Almighty Thud]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262946/1/I-Do-Not-Exist I Do Not Exist]]''.
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: The traumatic loss of her parents, her upbringing amongst the Chozo, and her lifestyle has a bounty-hunter has left Samus emotionally stunted. She doesn't understand her own emotions, especially the ones she feels towards Zelda.
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* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: The traumatic loss of her parents, her upbringing amongst the Chozo, and her lifestyle has as a bounty-hunter has left Samus emotionally stunted. She doesn't understand her own emotions, especially the ones she feels towards Zelda.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Both Sheik and Samus are much crueler, colder, and more violent than in their source games or
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Both Sheik and Samus are much crueler, colder, and more violent than in their source games or in ''Smash Bros''.
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* SlashFic: It's a Zelda/Samus-themed series.
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* DownerEnding: After getting beat by [[spoiler:Zelda]] in a NoHoldsBeatDown, [[spoiler:Samus]] is not allowed treatment. She ends up [[spoiler:dying of her injuries]].
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* DownerEnding: After getting beat by [[spoiler:Zelda]] in a NoHoldsBeatDown, NoHoldsBarredBeatDown, [[spoiler:Samus]] is not allowed treatment. She ends up [[spoiler:dying of her injuries]].injuries]].
* NobodyCanDie: Invoked. Death is not possible in battles and the medics always completely fix injuries with their technology.
* NobodyCanDie: Invoked. Death is not possible in battles and the medics always completely fix injuries with their technology.
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''Flinch'' is a dark Zelda/Sheik and Sheik/Samus series. It's devoid of romance, with instead the pairings being decidedly aggressive and toxic.
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Zelda and Samus are both women competing in the world war, however they couldn't be more different. While Zelda is a soft and emotional princess, Samus is a cold and stoic warrior. The two don't get along and don't even talk to each other. Still, they find themselves becoming closer than expected, especially when Samus takes note of Zelda's EnemyWithin Sheik.
''Flinch'' is a dark Zelda/Sheik and Sheik/Samus series. It's devoid ofromance, romance and fluff, with instead the pairings being decidedly aggressive and toxic.
''Flinch'' is a dark Zelda/Sheik and Sheik/Samus series. It's devoid of
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* AdaptationlVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego like in other fanfics. She's the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. Sheik has no positive elements. She is simply bitter and violent.
* AdaptationalWimp: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
* AdaptationalWimp: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
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* AdaptationlVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego like in other fanfics. She's the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. Sheik has no positive elements. She is simply bitter and violent.
* AdaptationalWimp: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of thefighters. fighters, likely because she doesn't have the heart to actually fight. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic of an ActualPacifist than in the games proper.
* AdaptationalWimp: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the
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* ChickMagnet: It's mentioned that Link has become famous due to the ''Smash'' tournament and has attracted the eye of many.
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* ChickMagnet: It's mentioned that Link has become famous due to the ''Smash'' tournament and has attracted the eye of many. He is most interested in Zelda, however she isn't in love with him.
* DarkFic: Unlike in the games, BloodlessCarnage is not a thing at all. Fighters can't ''die'' in battle, however they do bleed and bones can break. The audiences are blood-hungry so the more blood, the better. On a plot level, the characters are much darker than in canon.
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* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body. Sheik is violent and mean while Zelda is pacifistic and gentle.
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* RapeByProxy: Sheik's way of fixing the fued between Zelda and Samus is to pretend to be Zelda and seduce Samus.
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body. Sheik is [[EnemyWithin violent andmean mean]] while Zelda is pacifistic and gentle.gentle.
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: The traumatic loss of her parents, her upbringing amongst the Chozo, and her lifestyle has a bounty-hunter has left Samus emotionally stunted. She doesn't understand her own emotions, especially the ones she feels towards Zelda.
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body. Sheik is [[EnemyWithin violent and
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: The traumatic loss of her parents, her upbringing amongst the Chozo, and her lifestyle has a bounty-hunter has left Samus emotionally stunted. She doesn't understand her own emotions, especially the ones she feels towards Zelda.
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''Flinch'' is a dark Zelda/Sheik and Sheik/Samus series. It's devoid of romance, with instead the pairings being decidedly aggressive and toxic.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Both Sheik and Samus are much crueler, colder, and more violent than in their source games or
* AdaptationlVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego like in other fanfics. She's the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. Sheik has no positive elements. She is simply bitter and violent.
* AdaptationlVillainy: Sheik is not just Zelda as a {{bifauxnen}}, nor she is she an aloof alter ego like in other fanfics. She's the embodiment of all of Zelda's pent up aggression and negativity. Sheik has no positive elements. She is simply bitter and violent.
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* BloodKnight: Sheik is very violent and enjoys making her opponents suffer.
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* BloodKnight: BloodKnight:
** Sheik is very violent and enjoys making her opponentssuffer. suffer.
** Though not to the degree of Sheik, Samus enjoys fighting and has quite a blood-lust.
** Sheik is very violent and enjoys making her opponents
** Though not to the degree of Sheik, Samus enjoys fighting and has quite a blood-lust.
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* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body.
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* DownerEnding: After getting beat by [[spoiler:Zelda]] in a NoHoldsBeatDown, [[spoiler:Samus]] is not allowed treatment. She ends up [[spoiler:dying of her injuries]].
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body. Sheik is violent and mean while Zelda is pacifistic and gentle.
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body. Sheik is violent and mean while Zelda is pacifistic and gentle.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234330/1/Doppelgänger Doppelganger]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5985108/1/An-Almighty-Thud An Almighty Thud]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262946/1/I-Do-Not-Exist I Do Not Exist]]''.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234330/1/Doppelgänger Doppelganger]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5985108/1/An-Almighty-Thud An Almighty Thud]]'', and ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262946/1/I-Do-Not-Exist I Do Not Exist]]''.
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* AdaptationWimpiness: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
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* AdaptationWimpiness: AdaptationalWimp: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''Doppleganger'', ''An Almighty Thud'', and ''I Do Not Exist''.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''Doppleganger'', ''An ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5234330/1/Doppelgänger Doppelganger]]'', ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5985108/1/An-Almighty-Thud An Almighty Thud'', Thud]]'', and ''I ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6262946/1/I-Do-Not-Exist I Do Not Exist''.
Exist]]''.
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* AdaptationalWimpiness: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
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* AdaptationalWimpiness: AdaptationWimpiness: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
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''Flinch'' is a trilogy of ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros Brawl'' oneshot fanfics. The series consists of ''Doppleganger'', ''An Almighty Thud'', and ''I Do Not Exist''.
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!!The ''Flinch'' series contains examples of:
* AdaptationalWimpiness: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
* BloodKnight: Sheik is very violent and enjoys making her opponents suffer.
* ChickMagnet: It's mentioned that Link has become famous due to the ''Smash'' tournament and has attracted the eye of many.
* CompositeCharacter: Zelda is based on the ''Twilight Princess'' Zelda but it's mentioned that she helped Link as Sheik, like the ''Ocarina of Time'' Zelda.
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body.
* WouldNotHurtAChild: Zelda is horrified at having to fight Pit and the Ice Climbers. She dodges them during their two-on-two with her and Samus.
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!!The ''Flinch'' series contains examples of:
* AdaptationalWimpiness: Zelda in ''Brawl'' is a LadyOfWar and, while not a top tier character, she isn't terrible from a meta standpoint. In these fics she can't even land a punch. She's very weak despite training the second hardest out of the fighters. Zelda is also depicted as more pacifistic than in the games proper.
* BloodKnight: Sheik is very violent and enjoys making her opponents suffer.
* ChickMagnet: It's mentioned that Link has become famous due to the ''Smash'' tournament and has attracted the eye of many.
* CompositeCharacter: Zelda is based on the ''Twilight Princess'' Zelda but it's mentioned that she helped Link as Sheik, like the ''Ocarina of Time'' Zelda.
* SplitPersonality: Sheik and Zelda are two very different personalities sharing one body.
* WouldNotHurtAChild: Zelda is horrified at having to fight Pit and the Ice Climbers. She dodges them during their two-on-two with her and Samus.