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*** It makes sense that the UNSC's forces don't take many losses, as the five characters that initially travel to Faerun include two SPARTANs (one I and one II), An AI (capable of analyzing thousands of tactics per second), Commander Keyes (who helped lead the UNSC to victory multiple times with her tactical insight, and rarely gets involved in the battles personally), and the Arbiter, a mighty warrior who used to be in command of an unbelievably huge warfleet. Out of all the people who could have been sent, these individuals would stand the best chance of surviving, adapting, and ''thriving'' in these new situations.

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*** It makes sense that the UNSC's forces don't take many losses, as the five characters that initially travel to Faerun include two SPARTANs [=SPARTANs=] (one I and one II), An an AI (capable of analyzing thousands of tactics per second), Commander Keyes (who helped lead the UNSC to victory multiple times with her tactical insight, and rarely gets involved in the battles personally), and the Arbiter, a mighty warrior who used to be in command of an unbelievably huge warfleet. Out of all the people who could have been sent, these individuals would stand the best chance of surviving, adapting, and ''thriving'' in these new situations.

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** Mephasm. He's literally Neeshka's grandfather, and he's one of the more powerful Balors.



** Mephasm. He's literally Neeshka's grandfather, and he's one of the more powerful Balors.
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Dangerously Genre Savvy is being merged with Genre Savvy. Misuse and zero context examples will be cut.


* HeroKiller: Gromph Baenre who manages to kill [[spoiler: Revajik, Lady Alustriel, and the Hunter Denos]], probably because he's DangerouslyGenreSavvy.

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* HeroKiller: Gromph Baenre who manages to kill [[spoiler: Revajik, Lady Alustriel, and the Hunter Denos]], probably because he's DangerouslyGenreSavvy.Denos]].
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* OutsideContextVillain: Inverted. Chief and co. are Outside Context ''Heroes''.

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* OutsideContextVillain: Inverted. OutsideContextProblem: Chief and co. are Outside Context ''Heroes''.
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** The five elements of the assault forces are [[WorldWarII Omaha, Utah, Gold, Juno and Sword.]]

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** The five elements of the assault forces are [[WorldWarII [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII Omaha, Utah, Gold, Juno and Sword.]]
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Master Swordsman is "good with swords". Implausible Fencing Powers is "swordplay as a superpower". If he had Implausible Fencing Powers, a sword WOULDN'T be obsoleted by a gun.


* DoesntLikeGuns: Drizzt is this in ''spades'' (mainly because such weapons make his ImplausibleFencingPowers utterly obsolete). He does carry and use firearms as the story progresses, but with a distinct lack of enthusiasm. [[UnstoppableRage Usually.]]

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* DoesntLikeGuns: Drizzt is this in ''spades'' (mainly because such weapons make his ImplausibleFencingPowers MasterSwordsman skills utterly obsolete). He does carry and use firearms as the story progresses, but with a distinct lack of enthusiasm. [[UnstoppableRage Usually.]]

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* ShoutOut: [[Film/TheMatrix "I had seen them punch through stone walls and soldiers empty entire power packs at them and hit nothing but air."]]

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[[Film/TheMatrix "I had seen them punch through stone walls and soldiers empty entire power packs at them and hit nothing but air."]]



** "[[{{Gettysburg}} There are times when a Lord's life does not count.]]"

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** "[[{{Gettysburg}} There "There are times when a Lord's life does not count.]]"" is a reference to what Gen. Winfield Scott Hancock is said to have said at the Battle of Gettysburg "There are times when a corps commander's life does not count."
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** Mephasm. He's literally Neeshka's grandfather, and he's one of the more powerful Balors.


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** Bruenor is the one to kill Matron Baenre, but in the process his face is scarred so badly that he'll never grow a beard again (Beards being rather significant to dwarven culture, to the point that Chief remarks that they'd be willing to give up other parts of their anatomy before they give up their beards).


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** [[spoiler: Diadect, previously only mentioned in computer log entries made nearly one hundred thousand years ago, is a major supporting character here. Note that this was done ''before'' the revelations of Halo 4, where he also made an appearance (though in a very different role).]]
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** Otherwise averted in the mortal realm, as other than a little light-hearted ribbing, elves and dwarves alike are seen fighting together against the Drow and the Demogorgon's forces.


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* HumansAreWarriors: UNSC tech (which is purely human-designed) is one of the key multiplying factors for the story, and human characters make up roughly half the armies working for the side of good.
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** In a slightly earlier scene, the Dwarven pantheon and Helm call out the Elves (and the rest of the gods) for, despite knowing that bad times were coming, not coming to the aid of the dwarves in retaking their hall from the drow.
** For the most part, the light-alligned elves are barely mentioned, and are seen working together with the humans and their allies. Their Dark counterparts? Not so much. They are subjected to massive curbstomps, while their way of life is shown to be cruel, barbaric, and self-destructive, which is even lampshaded by Lolth herself after she faces Helm.
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** Similarly, the reason he's not constantly conspiring against his superiors as so many of his kin do is because he's quite happy with his current position- any higher and the responsibilities and pressure would be too much, any lower and he wouldn't have enough power.

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* GodOfEvil: Several, but Lolth and Demogorgon are the most prominent.


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* GodOfEvil: Several, but Lolth and Demogorgon are the most prominent.
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* EvilLawyerJoke: When an irritated Ao once again notices how good Helm is at skirting the letter of his decrees while coming dangerously close to violating their spirit, he wonders why he hasn't extended his sphere of influence to more suitable realms... like becoming the god of lawyers.
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* CanonImmigrant: Numerous characters from all over the Forgotten Realms' expanded universe make appearances, not least of whom are [[NeverwinterNights2 Neeshka]] and [[Literature/TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt]], who share main character status with Chief and the crew.

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* CanonImmigrant: Numerous characters from all over the Forgotten Realms' expanded universe make appearances, not least of whom are [[NeverwinterNights2 [[VideoGame/NeverwinterNights2 Neeshka]] and [[Literature/TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt]], who share main character status with Chief and the crew.
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* GodsNeedPrayerBadly: As a result of the Time of Trials, Ao changes things so that the gods are dependent on the belief of their followers, so as to give them ''consequences'' for pulling off schemes.
** Gruumsh is one of the first to have this demonstrated- the massive orc losses taken when the Drow attempt to retake Mithril Hall cause him to feel week, and enter into a sort of "Power Loss Spiral:" the more orcs die, the less his power is. And the less powerful he is, the less the orcs will believe in him, which leads to him losing power, which leads to less orcs believing in him...
** Lolth also suffers from this after [[spoiler: The nuking of Menzobarranzen]]. Her race was never very numerous, and with the culture that she herself implemented, weakness is to be despised... and she is very weak...


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* ScrewYouElves: Corellon states arrogantly that he doesn't believe that the Flood would pose his people a threat, so Helm gives him memories of the Flood, and points out that forests aren't really a great defense against a highly infectious, FTL-capable parasite.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: A very mild example, but whenever the Gravemind spoke to the Chief, it left a kind of "Psychic Echo." Those who weren't there can't hear the voice, but certain people are more... sensitive, to say the least, as Neeshka nearly has a fit by exposure to the video.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Helm''': "I was born more than a hundred thousand years ago, on a planet long since blasted to ash and dust… There, on that day, at that time, I was given the name [[{{Halo}} Arias Didact]]." ]]

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--> [[spoiler: '''Helm''': "I was born more than a hundred thousand years ago, on a planet long since blasted to ash and dust… There, on that day, at that time, I was given the name [[{{Halo}} [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Arias Didact]]." ]]



--> [[spoiler: '''Helm''': "I was born more than a hundred thousand years ago, on a planet long since blasted to ash and dust… There, on that day, at that time, I was given the name [[{{Halo}} Arias Didact]]." ]]

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--> [[spoiler: '''Helm''': "I was born more than a hundred thousand years ago, on a planet long since blasted to ash and dust… There, on that day, at that time, I was given the name [[{{Halo}} [[Franchise/{{Halo}} Arias Didact]]." ]]
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: The entire fic noticably treats the fluff and lore of both the Halo EU and the Forgotten Realms as canon to the storyline, while ignoring the crunch of the Halo games and [[DungeonsAndDragons DnD]] 3rd Edition - especially noticable in how Spartans are depicted as far more capable than their ODST allies in combat, rather than [[Videogame/Halo3ODST roughly equal]], with Spartans having a [[RegeneratingHealth slight]] [[RegeneratingShieldsStaticHealth edge]].

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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: The entire fic noticably treats the fluff and lore of both the Halo EU and the Forgotten Realms as canon to the storyline, while ignoring the crunch of the Halo games and [[DungeonsAndDragons [[TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons DnD]] 3rd Edition - especially noticable in how Spartans are depicted as far more capable than their ODST allies in combat, rather than [[Videogame/Halo3ODST roughly equal]], with Spartans having a [[RegeneratingHealth slight]] [[RegeneratingShieldsStaticHealth edge]].
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Averted, none of the Forgotten Realms characters understand English, or French, German, Chinese, Russian, Spanish, Latin, and Old English for that matter. Cortana manages to decipher it, allowing them to communicate. [[spoiler:She later does the same for the Neo-Covenant, and they later act as translators when the UNSC shows up.]]

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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Averted, none of the Forgotten Realms characters understand English, or French, German, Chinese, Russian, Spanish, Latin, and Old English for that matter. Cortana manages to decipher it, allowing them to communicate. [[spoiler:She later does the same for the Neo-Covenant, and they later act as translators when the UNSC shows up.up (as obviously no one from Faerun can speak any of the Covenant Languages either (Except Helm)).]]
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* PragmaticHero: The Halo cast are all several steps closer to the cynical side of the {{SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism}} than the Forgotten Realms characters and it shows. However, the Forgotten Realms characters mostly come around to the pragmatic point of view. By the final battle, the only objection to genecide of the drow is the Gods insistence that they save some of the children, so that the drow race will live on even if the drow culture doesn't.
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* The dark elf children, however, disappear after the scene where they ask Keyes what will happen to them. Who she will convince to adopt emotionally-abused children from a near-universally-despised race whom will take at least sixty years to mature is not addressed.
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** [[{{Scarface}} "Say hello to my little friend!"]]

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** [[{{Scarface}} [[Film/{{Scarface 1983}} "Say hello to my little friend!"]]
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* GhengisGambit: Part of Helm's plan involves putting the rest of the Good pantheon into a corner so they'll HAVE to put aside their petty squabbling and unite together against Lolth and Demogorgon

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* GhengisGambit: GenghisGambit: Part of Helm's plan involves putting the rest of the Good pantheon into a corner so they'll HAVE to put aside their petty squabbling and unite together against Lolth and Demogorgon
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** Gazap mentions several battles, including that his son died in the battle of Jericho Seven, which was described from the SPARTAN point of view in ''The Fall Of Reach.'' He also brings up the SPARTAN assault on Reach as well as the destruction of the ''Unyielding Hierophant'', which were documented in ''Halo: First Strike''.
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** Given his... well, ''alien'' appearance, the Arbiter is constantly mistaken for some form of demon... which the Chief finds funny, given that it wasn't all that long ago that the Arbiter was calling ''him'' that.

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* VilliansDyingGrace: Gromph decides in the final moments before Menzoberranzan's destruction to save Triel rather than himself with his last bit of teleportation magic. [[EvilCannotComprehendGood Neither of them can figure out why he did it.]]

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* VilliansDyingGrace: Gromph VillainsDyingGrace: [[spoiler:Gromph decides in the final moments before Menzoberranzan's destruction to save Triel rather than himself with his last bit of teleportation magic. magic.]] [[EvilCannotComprehendGood Neither of them can figure out why he did it.]]
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: The entire fic noticably treats the fluff and lore of both the Halo EU and the Forgotten Realms as canon to the storyline, while ignoring the crunch of the Halo games and [[DungeonsAndDragons DnD]] 3rd Edition - especially noticable in how Spartans are depicted as far more capable than their ODST allies in combat, rather than [[Videogame/Halo3ODST roughly equal]], with Spartans having a [[RegeneratingHealth slight]] [[RegeneratingShieldsStaticHealth edge]].
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* ChekovsGun: MC gives Bruenor a grenade before the battle for Mithral Hall, so he can commit suicide if he thinks he'll get captured. This proves crucial during the fight with Matron Baerne, where he uses it to great effect.

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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: MC gives Bruenor a grenade before the battle for Mithral Hall, so he can commit suicide if he thinks he'll get captured. This proves crucial during the fight with Matron Baerne, where he uses it to great effect.
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* BoringButPractical: Mephasm's office, which honestly isn't all that different from a modern office. He notes that most would be surprised that it's not some obviously evil hole of pure corruption and doom, but he ''does'' need to have a place where he works on his paperwork.

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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: In the finale, Chief spots Johnson smoking a Sweet Williams Cigar. [[spoiler: Since they ran out of those ''months'' ago, it tips Chief off that the UNSC has finally found Faerun... and presumably provided Johnson with some of them. He's correct, and moments later he encounters UNSC soldiers and Lord Hood.]]



* KilledByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Alustriel, killed by Gromph during the Drow Assault on Mithril Hall. Also, Bane during the Time of Troubles.]]

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* KilledByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Alustriel, killed by Gromph during the Drow Assault on Mithril Hall. Also, Bane during the Time of Troubles. Gromph dies when Menzoberranzan is obliterated by the nukes.]]



** Justified, seeing as how the most advanced projectile weapons that have been developed in Faerun are blackpowder weapons, and their technology is somewhere in the neighborhood of pre-industrial, while the UNSC are at the stage of development where faster-than-light travel is common, and the Covenant are even ''more'' advanced in many areas. Them having to explain things about their home and their toys isn't unexpected.
*** Somewhat played straight with Johnson, who at one point is assigned to talk about the Rhino tank because "He has a way with words."



** Class 20 armor also has this.



** Somewhat averted for most of the story- due to the fact that there are ''no'' ways to get back to Earth or one of her colonies, Johnson has to go without his trademark cigar [[spoiler: right up until the epilogue]].



* TeleportSpam: Used by [[spoiler: the Forerunners, Helm and Lolth]].

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* TeleportSpam: Used by [[spoiler: the Forerunners, Helm and Lolth]].Lolth. Demogorgon and Chief do quite a bit of this in their fight as well.]].



* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Several chapters were dedicated to Helm/Diadact's flashback to the Forerunner/Flood war, writing in whole events which were only alluded to or briefly explained in the Halo games (before the Forerunner Saga books came out and made his fanon obsolete (Yet still unbelievably cool)).

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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: Several chapters were dedicated to Helm/Diadact's [[spoiler: Helm/Diadact's]] flashback to the Forerunner/Flood war, writing in whole events which were only alluded to or briefly explained in the Halo games (before the Forerunner Saga books came out and made his fanon obsolete (Yet still unbelievably cool)).

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