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* DungeonBypass: It wasn't exactly a dungeon ''per say'', but the UNSC raids Luskan's Hosttower from the top down by blowing a hole through the top floor with a [[TankGoodness Rhino]]'s [[{{BFG}} MAC cannon]].
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Halo: Finishing the Fight is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story is currently a work in progress, with two major postings sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159198 Creative Writing Forum]] of Spacebattles.com, which stands at 44 chapters at the moment, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has 24 chapters.

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Halo: Finishing the Fight is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story is currently a work in progress, with two major postings sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159198 Creative Writing Forum]] of Spacebattles.com, which stands at 44 45 chapters at the moment, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has 24 chapters.
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* On a more meta level: [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=140935&page=106 verification that at least two of Bungie's employees read and enjoyed the fic]] (scroll down to post #2639 by a poster named "Barricade").

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* ** On a more meta level: [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=140935&page=106 verification that at least two of Bungie's employees read and enjoyed the fic]] (scroll down to post #2639 by a poster named "Barricade").
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* On a more meta level: [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=140935&page=106 verification that at least two of Bungie's employees read and enjoyed the fic]] (scroll down to post #2639 by a poster named "Barricade").

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Halo: Finishing the Fight is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story is currently a work in progress, with two major postings sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159198 Creative Writing Forum]] of Spacebattles.com, which stands at 40 chapters at the moment, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has 24 chapters.

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Halo: Finishing the Fight is, as the author put it, "the result of what started as a series of postulated "what ifs" among the author and his friends after a night spent consuming too much root beer while playing games, and listening to far too much Immediate Music to possibly be healthy." It has since grown to a 700+ page work of fanfiction involving (the author hopes at least) passable attempts at blending military science fiction with high fantasy, alternating between the two different elements trying to understand one another and [[ChunkySalsaRule Orcs and Dark Elves being shot in the face with 26th century assault weaponry]]. The story is currently a work in progress, with two major postings sites. The first is at the [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159198 Creative Writing Forum]] of Spacebattles.com, which stands at 40 44 chapters at the moment, while a slightly more polished and proofread version can be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4108390/1/Halo_Finishing_the_Fight Fanfiction.net]], which currently has 24 chapters.


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* DidNotDoTheResearch: Aratech seems to think that Sergeant Johnson was an ODST and not a regular Marine.
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** Okay, how has the Chief's epic takedown of a Glabrezu gone unmentioned?
-->The Spartan's fist connected with the bronze codpiece that it wore, and a resounding 'gong' echoed through the room. The Tiefling's mouth dropped open as the piece of protective equipment crumpled inward and collapsed under the fury of the blow. The Glabrezu stumbled backwards, its eyes crossing slightly. It collapsed to its knees, its lower arms clutching at its wound. Then it howled in agony as its brain finally finished processing what had happened to it. It was a scream, Neeshka noted with a smirk, which was quite a few octaves higher than she believed the wolf demons were capable of. This was followed a by a moment of whimpering, before the Spartan turned his weapon upon the creature.
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** During the retaking of Mithril Hall, Johnson and Drizzt encounter a Drow who spins her scimitars around in a fancy display. Drizzt is about to go fight her, but then [[CombatPragmatist Johnson]] [[IndianaJones just shoots]] [[WhyDontYouJustShootHim her.]]
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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] ''annihilates'' Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it.]]

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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] ''annihilates'' Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it. To clarify, he's putting out firepower that is in the same league as the Big Bang itself, or what was thrown around in the final TTGL episode.]]
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* BetterToDieThanToBeKilled: [[spoiler: Mias Tarkimee]] kills himself rather than let Triel Baenre extract information from his head.

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* BetterToDieThanToBeKilled: BetterToDieThanBeKilled: [[spoiler: Mias Tarkimee]] kills himself rather than let Triel Baenre extract information from his head.


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* NotSoDifferent: The [[strike:Arbiter]]Ascetic notes how the drow are similar to what the Covenant used to be.
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* BadassBack: One drow makes the mistake of trying to interfere with [[spoiler: Mephasm facing down Errtu]] and gets thrown into a wall for her trouble.


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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: When [[spoiler: Mephasm comes for Neeshka]], several drow are thrown into their own torture implements.


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* WhyWontYouDie: Lolth asks this of [[spoiler: Helm/Didact]] when they fight.

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[OneOfUs the trope is complete]],” Cortana said.'

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* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[OneOfUs the trope is complete]],” Cortana said.' '
* BetterToDieThanToBeKilled: [[spoiler: Mias Tarkimee]] kills himself rather than let Triel Baenre extract information from his head.



* DavidVersusGoliath: Chief [[spoiler: in Didact's Class 20 armour]] would be the Goliath against lots of other things, but is still out-beasted by [[spoiler: Demogorgon]].



* HealingFactor: Demogorgon has a pretty powerful one.



* {{HSQ}}: The description of [[spoiler: the Forerunners and their battles with the Flood. And Demogorgon is so extreme a LightningBruiser that even with Helm/Didact's old Class Twenty suit and its BulletTime power, Chief still has much trouble. Then again, he is '''the''' most powerful demon ever.]]

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* {{HSQ}}: The description of [[spoiler: the Forerunners and their battles with the Flood. And Demogorgon is so extreme a LightningBruiser that even with Helm/Didact's old Class Twenty suit and its BulletTime power, Chief still has much trouble. You know you're in this territory when an anti-matter based grenade is considered "too slow moving and too weak to be of much use". Then again, he is '''the''' most powerful demon ever.]]



* TheLawOfDiminishingDefensiveEffort: Averted, as while little the drow have can seriously dent MC's shields [[spoiler: or those of the Sangheili]], he isn't standing around letting them have free hits either.



* MookHorrorShow: The perception of the Spartans as seen through Covenant eyes.

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* MookHorrorShow: The perception of the Spartans as seen through Covenant eyes.eyes, as well as the newcomers as seen through the drow and their allies.



* NoSell: [[spoiler: One of Demogorgon's Death Knights]] easily stops a spell that supposedly can damage even the strongest demi-liches.



* PersonOfMassDestruction: [[spoiler: The Chief/Cortana in Didact's Class 20 power-armor. Full stop. They even metion that he could probably take down an entire Covenant fleet single-handidly with it. Unfortunately, they're fighting the [[EldritchAbomination Demogorgon]]]]

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* PersonOfMassDestruction: [[spoiler: The Chief/Cortana in Didact's Class 20 power-armor. Full stop. They even metion mention that he could probably take down an entire Covenant fleet single-handidly single-handedly with it. Unfortunately, they're fighting the [[EldritchAbomination Demogorgon]]]]



* RetGone: A spell used by [[spoiler: one of Demogorgon's Death Knights does this, so thoroughly killing a pair of elves that Corellon cannot remember them.]]



* WeHaveReserves: The drow employ this in their assault on Mithril Hall, and how! Casualties mount in the millions before long.

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* WeHaveReserves: WeHaveReserves[=/=]ZergRush: The drow employ this in their assault on Mithril Hall, and how! Casualties mount in the millions before long.long. Later, [[spoiler: the demons]] use this too.
* WhenAllYouHaveIsAHammer: "One of the first lessons that Lek'golo were taught in combat came to mind: nothing is indestructible if you apply enough force."
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* {{HSQ}}: The description of [[spoiler: the Forerunners and their battles with the Flood.]]

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* {{HSQ}}: The description of [[spoiler: the Forerunners and their battles with the Flood. And Demogorgon is so extreme a LightningBruiser that even with Helm/Didact's old Class Twenty suit and its BulletTime power, Chief still has much trouble. Then again, he is '''the''' most powerful demon ever.]]

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* BizarreAlienBiology: It is noted that some of the drow's allies have biology so different that nerve gas will have no effect on them.



* BulletTime: One of the powers of [[spoiler: the Forerunner suits]] is controlled time dilation. Spartan time and haste spells also create this effect.
* CanonImmigrant: Numerous characters from all over the Forgotten Realms' expanded universe make appearances, not least of whom are [[NeverwinterNights2 Neeshka]] and [[TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt]], who share main character status with Chief and the crew.
* ChunkySalsaRule: This fic invokes the trope liberally.



* CanonImmigrant: Numerous characters from all over the Forgotten Realms' expanded universe make appearances, not least of whom are [[NeverwinterNights2 Neeshka]] and [[TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt]], who share main character status with Chief and the crew.

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* CanonImmigrant: Numerous characters from all over the Forgotten Realms' expanded universe make appearances, not least of whom are [[NeverwinterNights2 Neeshka]] and [[TheDarkElfTrilogy Drizzt]], who share main character status with Chief ColdBloodedTorture: Done to [[spoiler: Neeshka by Errtu and the crew.drow]].



* ChunkySalsaRule: This fic invokes the trope liberally


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* TeleportSpam: Used by [[spoiler: the Forerunners, Helm and Lolth]].
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* ArmCannon: [[spoiler: The Golems created by Cortana]] have a 30mm cannon attached to the left forearm and a flamethrower on the right.


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* ShoulderCannon: [[spoiler: The Golems created by Cortana]] have a Gauss Cannon mounted on their left shoulders.

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* AntiMagic: One of the new toys Cortana creates is a grenade that releases this.



* BattleInTheRain: '“Yeah, all we need is a torrential downpour and [[OneOfUs the trope is complete]],” Cortana said.'



* GroinAttack: "Pwent retaliated with a spiked gauntlet, smashing the Elf at about eye level. The Master Chief almost winced as he realized both where the Gutbuster had struck his foe, and that his opponent happened to be a male. The Dark Elven warrior screamed in agony as blood went everywhere."
** "Twinkle punched through the mail, through the padding underneath, and down until it emerged from the Elf's groin."



* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: What the surviving member of a Hunter pair goes into after their Bond-Brother is killed.]]

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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: What the surviving member of a Hunter pair goes into after their Bond-Brother is killed.]]]] Dwarves also do this.



** [[{{Scarface}} Say hello to my little friend!]]
** [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail "Antioch Grenade"]]



* SwordAndGun: The [[strike: Arbiter]]Ascetic uses both a SMG, later a needler, and a plasma sword to fight a Balor.



** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] ''annihilates'' Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it.]]

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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] ''annihilates'' Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it.]] ]]
* VillainTeleportation: Some of the enemies use teleportation to get into the defences of Mithril Hall. [[spoiler: Including an attempted decapitation strike at Lord Nasher and the command group.]]


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* WeHaveReserves: The drow employ this in their assault on Mithril Hall, and how! Casualties mount in the millions before long.
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** [[TeamFortress2 “What kind of a sick]] [[strike: [[TeamFortress2 man]]]][[TeamFortress2 , demented individual]] [[strike: [[TeamFortress2 sends babies to fight]]]] [[TeamFortress2 sent you out here? I was told we would be fighting men, not children!”]]
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* GangstaStyle: From the 22nd chapter: "Nekar, stop holding that pistol sideways, you are not here to show off!"

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* GangstaStyle: From the 22nd 21st chapter: "Nekar, stop holding that pistol sideways, you are not here to show off!"
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* MookHorrorShow: The perception of the Spartans as seen through Covenant eyes.

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* ShoutOut: [[TheMatrix "I had seen them punch through stone walls and soldiers empty entire power packs at them and hit nothing but air."]]



* WarIsHell: The description of the carnage on Azure Twelve is chilling.

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* WarIsHell: The description of the carnage on Azure Twelve is chilling.horrifying, both in- and out-of-story.
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* WarIsHell: The description of the carnage on Azure Twelve is chilling.
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* GangstaStyle: From the 22nd chapter: "Nekar, stop holding that pistol sideways, you are not here to show off!"
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* NoSoStoic: see the second TearJerker entry below

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* NoSoStoic: NotSoStoic: see the second TearJerker entry below

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* NoSoStoic: see the second TearJerker entry below



** [[spoiler: [[ManlyTears Master Chief]], after the battle with Demongorgon]]

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** [[spoiler: [[ManlyTears [[NotSoStoic Master Chief]], [[ManlyTears after the battle with Demongorgon]]Demongorgon]]]]
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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] annihilates Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it.

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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] annihilates ''annihilates'' Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it. it.]]

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** [[spoiler:[[BeamSpam The]] [[MoreDakka end]] [[MacrossMissileMassacre of]] [[TeleFrag Demongorgon]].]]

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** [[spoiler:[[BeamSpam [[spoiler:[[WaveMotionGun The]] [[MoreDakka end]] [[MacrossMissileMassacre of]] [[TeleFrag Demongorgon]].Demon]][[PortalCut gorgon]].]]



* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Cortana]]
** HesJustHiding: The reactions to the above. Helped by the fact that the passage in particular doesn't actually say exactly what happened.



* PapaWolf: Mephasm to Neeshka. So very much.

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* PapaWolf: Mephasm to Neeshka. So very much.[[AndShowItToYou much]].


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** Master Chief [[spoiler: [[strike: finishes off]] [[strike: kills]] [[strike: destroys]] annihilates Demongorgon by opening a one-way Slipspace portal inside of his body, then firing everything he has left into it.
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** [[spoiler:[[BeamSpam The]] [[MoreDakka end]] [[MacrossMissileMassacre of]] [[TeleFrag Demongorgon]].]]
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Incorrect usage of what is now Gunship Rescue - it refers to a gunship rescuing the heroes in dire straits, not a gunship itself.


* BigDamnGunship: The Pelicans, of course.
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* {{HSQ}}: The description of [[spoiler: the Forerunners and their battles with the Flood.]]

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Before long, the crew meets the natives of Faerun, and find themselves drawn ever deeper into the conflicts of the local world. As tensions mount, and armies are mustered, the Dawn’s crew is forced to pick a side and make their stand, while trying to make sense of who brought them to this strange world, and more importantly, why?

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Before long, the crew meets the natives of Faerun, and find themselves drawn ever deeper into the conflicts of the local world. As tensions mount, and armies are mustered, the Dawn’s Dawn's crew is forced to pick a side and make their stand, while trying to make sense of who brought them to this strange world, and more importantly, why?


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* OneOfUs: The title of the second chapter is "Observations, Plans, and a XanatosGambit".
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*BigBrotherInstinct: John seems to be developing one of these towards Neeshka.


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*ClickHello: Inverted. The UNSC and Neo Covenant are pretty jumpy when it comes to people teleporting into their ship. Mephasm and Helm learn this first hand.
--> '''Johnson''': "The next person who teleports in here is getting a belly full of uranium."


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*CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Chapter 25 "My name is John."

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