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*** In the opening scene, Eli tries to tell the team [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyModernWarfare2 "No rushing."]] before the elevator arrives and interrupts him.
*** One character takes out the last enemy, and [[BlackComedy jokes]] [[spoiler:"[[VideoGame/CounterStrike Terrorists win.]]" It's doubled-up if the reader realizes ''the whole chapter'' is about a team of "terrorists" in civvies and disguises fighting through uniformed "counter-terrorists" to plant a bomb.]]
*** One character takes out the last enemy, and [[BlackComedy jokes]] [[spoiler:"[[VideoGame/CounterStrike Terrorists win.]]" It's doubled-up if the reader realizes ''the whole chapter'' is about a team of "terrorists" in civvies and disguises fighting through uniformed "counter-terrorists" to plant a bomb.]]
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*** Another character takes out the last enemy, and [[BlackComedy jokes]] [[spoiler:"[[VideoGame/CounterStrike Terrorists win.]]" It's doubled-up if the reader realizes ''the whole chapter'' is about a team of "terrorists" in civvies and disguises fighting through uniformed "counter-terrorists" to plant a bomb.]]
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*** Another ''Literature/{{Cryptonomicon}}'' ref. Specifically, [[spoiler:the main POV character dies in a near-identical way to Bobby Shaftoe, except Bobby was going to die anyway. Mike would just rather avoid getting captured alive. Also, he just got his wife killed.]]
*** Another character takes out the last enemy, and [[BlackComedy jokes]] [[spoiler:"[[VideoGame/CounterStrike Terrorists win.]]" It's doubled-up if the reader realizes ''the whole chapter'' is about a team of "terrorists" in civvies and disguises fighting through uniformed "counter-terrorists" to plant a bomb.]]
*** Another ''Literature/{{Cryptonomicon}}'' ref. Specifically, [[spoiler:the main POV character dies in a near-identical way to Bobby Shaftoe, except Bobby was going to die anyway. Mike would just rather avoid getting captured alive. Also, he just got his wife killed.]]
*** Another character takes out the last enemy, and [[BlackComedy jokes]] [[spoiler:"[[VideoGame/CounterStrike Terrorists win.]]" It's doubled-up if the reader realizes ''the whole chapter'' is about a team of "terrorists" in civvies and disguises fighting through uniformed "counter-terrorists" to plant a bomb.]]
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** Chapter 31, ''Ascendant'', takes place in and around Chicago, and anyone familiar with the area may realize [[spoiler:most of the action is set on the Trump International Hotel. When a shot comes from the only higher building in Chicago, one character says it "came from the South, across the river". Which is roughly the correct direction for Willis (Sears) Tower.]]
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* TakeThat: Averted. In Chapter 31, ''Ascendant'', [[the bulk of the chapter takes place on the roof of Trump Hotel, in Chicago, though it's never explicitly described. The authoritarian aliens decided to put their mind-controlling communications tech there, which might read like a shot at Trump. The author note at the end of the chapter says the location was chosen years prior, long before Trump was elected, because he saw a construction documentary. The implication is that it's not ''actually'' a political reference, just random chance.]]
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** The mayor of Vancouver is one Pierre "Pepe" Tucker, a reference to popular [[Fanfic/{{Renegade}} and]] [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars prolific]] [[Fanfic/{{Forward}} Spacebattles]] [[Fanfic/{{Harbinger}} writer]] [[Fanfic/NoGodsOnlyGuns Peptuck]]. The writer said in the spirit of the MCU's Stan Lee cameos, he would be played by Creator/SidMeier. It's not clear whether he knew Meier ''is'' actually Canadian.
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** The mayor of Vancouver is one Pierre "Pepe" Tucker, a reference to popular [[Fanfic/{{Renegade}} and]] [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars prolific]] [[Fanfic/{{Forward}} Spacebattles]] [[Fanfic/{{Harbinger}} writer]] [[Fanfic/NoGodsOnlyGuns Peptuck]].and prolific Spacebattles writer Creator/{{Peptuck}}. The writer said in the spirit of the MCU's Stan Lee cameos, he would be played by Creator/SidMeier. It's not clear whether he knew Meier ''is'' actually Canadian.
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* NamesTheSame: Upon meeting a rookie with the same first name as his, Pena thinks "[[Creator/EmilyDickinson there's a pair of us]], [[LampshadeHanging don't tell]]!"
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* FateWorseThanDeath: In the climax, [[spoiler:we learn the Uber-Ethereal bodyjacked Kirsten Arnadottir and made her into the Avatar. The Ethereal claims Kirsten is still in there. Screaming. Also, Loki captures one of the Sentinel cyborgs, and he says he didn't kill her just so he could give her to ''Vahlen'', as revenge for injuring his old student Kelda.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: In the climax, [[spoiler:we learn the Uber-Ethereal bodyjacked Kirsten Arnadottir and made her into the Avatar. The Ethereal claims Kirsten is still in there. Screaming. Also, Loki captures one of the Sentinel cyborgs, and he says he didn't kill her just so he could give her to ''Vahlen'', as revenge for injuring his old student Kelda.]]
** [[spoiler:Captain America turns out to be much better at them, of course.]]
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** Due to giving Thor additional weapons before he returns to Asgard, including ICER weapons, Thor is able to capture Loki, the Rainbow Bridge remains intact, and Asgard is setting up relations with Earth. What this means for how badly this throws the MCU off the rails remains to be seen.
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** Due to giving XCOM and SHIELD give Thor additional weapons before he returns to Asgard, including ICER weapons, weapons. So Thor is able to capture Loki, the Rainbow Bridge remains intact, and Asgard is starts setting up relations with Earth. What this means for how badly this throws [[spoiler:Which [[NiceJobBreakingItHero scares the MCU Ethereals so badly]] they kick off the rails remains their takeover early, force XCOM into hiding, activate their HYDRA infiltrators to be seen.control SHIELD, and hold ''Earth'' hostage until Asgard backs off.]]
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''Fanfic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
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* BrickJoke: [[spoiler:One of the first things we learn is how Reed Richards was the first choice for XCOM's Chief Engineer. The final scene is Commander Hill meeting the [[Comicbook/FantasticFour Fantastic Fo]]- the Future Foundation as they return to Earth. Reed wants to know what he missed.]]
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* BrickJoke: [[spoiler:One of the first things we learn is how Reed Richards was the first choice for XCOM's Chief Engineer. The final scene is Commander Hill meeting the [[Comicbook/FantasticFour [[ComicBook/FantasticFour Fantastic Fo]]- the Future Foundation as they return to Earth. Reed wants to know what he missed.]]
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] ''Franchise/{{Batman}}[=/XCOM=]'' crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', ''Fanfic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
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** XCOM has multiple Skyrangers, like in ''Fanfic/AradsStardust'', as well as taking (David) Bradford and (Moira) Vahlen's first names from them, as per WordOfGod.
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** XCOM has multiple Skyrangers, like in ''Fanfic/AradsStardust'', ''Fanfic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', as well as taking (David) Bradford and (Moira) Vahlen's first names from them, as per WordOfGod.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', ''FanFic/{{Stardust|Arad}}'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
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* NotSoDifferent: In Arc 3, [[spoiler:XCOM ends up using basically the same terrorist tactics as HYDRA did at the start of the fic. In Chapter 32, Miss Smith points this out to Captain America, to the latter's discomfort.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: In Arc 3, [[spoiler:XCOM ends up using basically the same terrorist tactics as HYDRA did at the start of the fic. In Chapter 32, Miss Smith points this out to Captain America, to the latter's discomfort.]]
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** Jane Porter has a cousin named Ruth, who had to take a trip to Israel. Assuming Porter is as Israeli as Natalie Portman is, Ruth is probably this universe's version of the Israeli hero Sabra.
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** Jane Porter has a cousin named Ruth, who had to take a trip to Israel. Assuming Porter is as Israeli as Natalie Portman Creator/NataliePortman is, Ruth is probably this universe's version of Sabra, an X-Men character from the Israeli hero Sabra.comics.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse[[labelnote:*]]For starters, before eventually incorporating the X-Men and the Fantastic Four into the story.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r. Later portions of the fic added elements from ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome" In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome" SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
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* RealityEnsues : In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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* ShipperOnDeck: The staff seem very supportive of Irene/Laura, as well as Bradford/Director Schmidt, despite the latter being technically against regs.
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* ShipperOnDeck: The staff seem seems very supportive of Irene/Laura, as well as Bradford/Director Schmidt, despite the latter being technically against regs.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome" In Chapter 3, [[spoiler:Eamon is surprised to find that XCOM starts with six-man squads, not four like in the game. [[ThisIsReality His internal chiding asks him whether he thought they would move on a grid]].]]
** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single vulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse[[labelnote:*]]For starters before eventually incorporating the X-Men and the Fantastic Four into the story.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r. Later portions of the fic added elements from ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse[[labelnote:*]]For starters starters, before eventually incorporating the X-Men and the Fantastic Four into the story.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r. Later portions of the fic added elements from ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse''[[labelnote:*]]For starters.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r. Later portions of the fic added elements from ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse''[[labelnote:*]]For starters.''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse[[labelnote:*]]For starters before eventually incorporating the X-Men and the Fantastic Four into the story.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r. Later portions of the fic added elements from ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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* FusionFic: Fusing the worlds of the Marvel Cinematic Universe and X-COM: Enemy Unknown. And later ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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* FusionFic: Fusing the worlds of the Marvel Cinematic Universe and X-COM: ''X-COM: Enemy Unknown.Unknown''. And later ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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* DeathOfAChild: The first chapter ends with Eamon and the readers learning that HYDRA killed a kid, and in the Moscow Terror Mission, [[spoiler:an entire school is attacked and implanted by Chryssalids.]]
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* InfantImmortality: Averted. The first chapter ends with Eamon and the readers learning that HYDRA killed a kid, and in the Moscow Terror Mission, [[spoiler:an entire school is attacked and implanted by Chryssalids.]]
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** In chapter 5, they encounter a private security operative (you know, a mercenary) named Wilson who is very good with weapons and constantly makes goofy remarks. It's not a particularly subtle SelfDemonstrating/{{Deadpool}} reference.
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** In chapter 5, they encounter a private security operative (you know, a mercenary) named Wilson who is very good with weapons and constantly makes goofy remarks. It's not a particularly subtle SelfDemonstrating/{{Deadpool}} ComicBook/{{Deadpool}} reference.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse''[[labelnote:*]]For starters.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/xcom-iron-man-ferris.281782/ Ferris]] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10005292/1/ is]] an ''VideoGame/XCOMEnemyUnknown''[=/=]''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse''[[labelnote:*]]For starters.[[/labelnote]] crossover fanfic by u63r.
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* FusionFic: Fusing the worlds of the Marvel Cinematic Universe and X-COM: Enemy Unknown.
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* FusionFic: Fusing the worlds of the Marvel Cinematic Universe and X-COM: Enemy Unknown. And later ''VideoGame/XCOM2''.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: In the climax, [[spoiler:we learn the Uber-Ethereal bodyjacked Kirsten Arnadottir and made her into the Avatar. The Ethereal claims Kirsten is still in there. Screaming. Also, Loki captures one of the Sentinel cyborgs, and he says he didn't kill her just so he could give her to ''Vahlen''.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: In the climax, [[spoiler:we learn the Uber-Ethereal bodyjacked Kirsten Arnadottir and made her into the Avatar. The Ethereal claims Kirsten is still in there. Screaming. Also, Loki captures one of the Sentinel cyborgs, and he says he didn't kill her just so he could give her to ''Vahlen''.''Vahlen'', as revenge for injuring his old student Kelda.]]
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* PowerCopying: In the finale, [[spoiler:the Uber-Ethereal imitates XCOM's pseudo-psionic packs after she sees them in action. Except for telekinesis, which she already has.]]
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single, bulnerable craft.
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* {{Retirony}}: In Arc 3, Schmidt notes that [[spoiler:she wants to spend more time with her kids when the mission is done. Clearly she's going to get killed during the final mission. Nope, that goes to Tony, who made the mistake of saying he had Girl Back Home (Pepper). Note that he wasn't the only one thinking about the subject, so it was a misdirect.]]
* RousingSpeech: Tony tries one, gets sidetracked, and admits that he's just not that good at speeches.
* RuleOfFun: The author's notes for the Moscow Terror Mission say the scenario in the fic would be nearly unplayable, and not much fun. He also points out that the game's version - saving a few dozen people in attacks that kill thousands - isn't really that notable.
* RousingSpeech: Tony tries one, gets sidetracked, and admits that he's just not that good at speeches.
* RuleOfFun: The author's notes for the Moscow Terror Mission say the scenario in the fic would be nearly unplayable, and not much fun. He also points out that the game's version - saving a few dozen people in attacks that kill thousands - isn't really that notable.
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* {{Retirony}}: In Arc 3, Schmidt notes that says [[spoiler:she wants to spend more time with her kids when the mission is done. Clearly she's going to get killed during the final mission. Nope, that goes to Tony, who made the mistake of saying he had Girl Back Home (Pepper). Note that he wasn't the only one thinking about the subject, so it was a deliberate misdirect.]]
* RousingSpeech: Tony tries one, gets sidetracked, and admitsthat he's just not that good at speeches.
* RuleOfFun: The author's notes for the Moscow Terror Mission say the scenario in the fic would be nearly unplayable, and not much fun. He alsopoints out says that the game's version - saving a few dozen people in attacks that kill thousands - isn't really that notable.
* RousingSpeech: Tony tries one, gets sidetracked, and admits
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** The mayor of Vancouver is one Pierre "Pepe" Tucker, a reference to popular [[Fanfic/{{Renegade}} and]] [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars prolific]] [[Fanfic/{{Forward}} Spacebattles]] [[Fanfic/{{Harbinger}} writer]] [[Fanfic/NoGodsOnlyGuns Peptuck]]. It is further noted that in the spirit of the MCU's Stan Lee cameos, he would be played by Creator/SidMeier. It's not clear whether he knew Meier ''is'' actually Canadian.
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** The mayor of Vancouver is one Pierre "Pepe" Tucker, a reference to popular [[Fanfic/{{Renegade}} and]] [[Fanfic/TiberiumWars prolific]] [[Fanfic/{{Forward}} Spacebattles]] [[Fanfic/{{Harbinger}} writer]] [[Fanfic/NoGodsOnlyGuns Peptuck]]. It is further noted that The writer said in the spirit of the MCU's Stan Lee cameos, he would be played by Creator/SidMeier. It's not clear whether he knew Meier ''is'' actually Canadian.
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** Chapter 3 has a marksman, AKA a sniper, by the name of Mundy. Mundy is the name of the Sniper from ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2''. It also turns out that Sergeant Dunayevsky has a doctorate in Russian Literature. Again, WordOfGod confirms that he's the Heavy.
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** Chapter 3 has a marksman, AKA a sniper, by the name of Mundy. Mundy is the name of the Sniper from ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2''. It also turns out that Sergeant Dunayevsky has a doctorate in Russian Literature. Again, WordOfGod confirms that he's the Heavy.
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* ShownTheirWork: Like ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'' does with Young Justice and DC comics, this story heavily references obscure bits of the MCU and Marvel comics in general. For example, minor Iron Man villain Bruno Horgan[[note]]who appeared in the non-canon Iron Man video game, working for AIM, as well as a tie-in comic[[/note]] works for SHIELD instead of going after Tony, and the X-Ray eye from ''Series/AgentsOfShield'' is foreshadowed during the French convoy attack, then shows up properly in Arc 3. [[spoiler:And at Tony's funeral.]]
** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain. It's not clear if it's supposed to be the character's thoughts, or a narration in-joke.[[/note]].
** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain. It's not clear if it's supposed to be the character's thoughts, or a narration in-joke.[[/note]].
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* ShownTheirWork: Like ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'' does with Young Justice and DC comics, this story heavily references obscure bits of the MCU and Marvel comics in general. For example, minor Iron Man villain Bruno Horgan[[note]]who appeared in the non-canon Iron Man video game, working for AIM, as well as a tie-in comic[[/note]] works for SHIELD instead of going after Tony, and the X-Ray eye from ''Series/AgentsOfShield'' is foreshadowed as a scanner during the French convoy attack, then shows up properly in Arc 3. [[spoiler:And at Tony's funeral.funeral as a scanner again.]]
** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain. It's not clear if it's supposed to be the character's joking thoughts, or a narration in-joke.[[/note]].
** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain. It's not clear if it's supposed to be the character's joking thoughts, or a narration in-joke.[[/note]].
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Pointedly averted. [[spoiler:Kirsten ''may'' have used her psychic powers to rape a guy while she was drunk, and both SHIELD and XCOM take it completely seriously. Cap even mentions how [[TruthInTelevision the UK's laws say a woman can't rape]]. We never find out if she did it or not.]]
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* Idiosyncratic Episode Naming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
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* Idiosyncratic Episode Naming: FateWorseThanDeath: In the climax, [[spoiler:we learn the Uber-Ethereal bodyjacked Kirsten Arnadottir and made her into the Avatar. The Ethereal claims Kirsten is still in there. Screaming. Also, Loki captures one of the Sentinel cyborgs, and he says he didn't kill her just so he could give her to ''Vahlen''.]]
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
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* ShutUpElves: In chapter 20, [[spoiler:a group of Asgardians, superhuman beings who are nigh-immortal, practically immune to bullets, and practically view themselves as gods, joke to one another how weak these aliens are (and how the PunyHumans must be overestimating their threat)... right before their leader ''literally'' walks into a Muton and gets most of his torso obliterated. One of the other team members manages to kill the muton, but the group is now panicked and later seem traumatized.]]
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* ShutUpElves: In chapter 20, [[spoiler:a group of Asgardians, superhuman beings who are nigh-immortal, practically immune to bullets, and practically view themselves as gods, joke to one another how weak these aliens are (and how the PunyHumans must be overestimating their threat)... right before their leader ''literally'' walks into a Muton and gets most of his torso obliterated. One of the other team members manages to kill the muton, Muton, but the group is now was panicked and later seem seemed traumatized.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:XCOM manages to save the day, but SHIELD is in shambles, there's a bunch of uncontrolled super-tech floating around out there, and Tony died. Also, Moscow is uninhabitable for the forseeable future. Did we mention the many world leaders who either willingly worked with the X-Rays or were mind-controlled?]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:XCOM manages to save the day, but SHIELD is in shambles, there's a bunch of uncontrolled super-tech floating around out there, and Tony died. Also, Moscow is uninhabitable for the forseeable future. foreseeable future, and there are a lot of people with mutations. Did we mention the many world leaders who either willingly worked with the X-Rays or were mind-controlled?]]mind-controlled? Yeah, there's going to be a lot of distrust.]]
* FromNobodyToNightmare: By the finale, [[spoiler:Dum-E has been trained and upgraded to an outright AI and runs XCOM's ground combat drones.]]
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* LampshadeHanging: At one point, the concept of bipedal robots is taken down, pointing out that while intimidating, it's usually better to have them with wheels or treads.
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* LampshadeHanging: At one point, the concept of bipedal robots is taken down, pointing out that down; while intimidating, it's usually better to have them with wheels or treads.
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* RuleOfFun: The author's notes for the Moscow Terror Mission note that the scenario in the fic would be nearly unplayable, and not much fun. He also points out that saving a few dozen people in attacks that kill thousands isn't really that notable.
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* RuleOfFun: The author's notes for the Moscow Terror Mission note that say the scenario in the fic would be nearly unplayable, and not much fun. He also points out that the game's version - saving a few dozen people in attacks that kill thousands - isn't really that notable.
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** Chapter 28: Much of the chapter takes place in a 'data vault' run by the Epiphyte Corporation from ''Literature/Cryptonomicon''. [[spoiler:Okoye sits at Randy's desk, eats his Cap'n Crunch, and looks at the picture on his desk. Apparently Randy and Amy had a kid.]]
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** Chapter 28: Much of the chapter takes place in a 'data vault' run by the Epiphyte Corporation from ''Literature/Cryptonomicon''.''Literature/{{Cryptonomicon}}''. [[spoiler:Okoye sits at Randy's desk, eats his Cap'n Crunch, and looks at the picture on his desk. Apparently Randy and Amy had a kid.]]
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** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain[[/note]].
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** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain[[/note]].Spain. It's not clear if it's supposed to be the character's thoughts, or a narration in-joke.[[/note]].
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* TemptingFate: In Chapter 20, [[spoiler:a newbie Asgardian team of mages is sent to assist XCOM. To keep up morale, the leader quips about how the aliens really aren't that dangerous. Then he's nearly killed when he walks into a Muton, loses an arm at least, and is incapacitated for the duration of the chapter.]]
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* TemptingFate: In Chapter 20, [[spoiler:a newbie Asgardian team of mages is sent to assist XCOM. To keep up morale, the leader quips about how the aliens really aren't that dangerous. Then he's nearly killed when he walks into a Muton, loses an arm at least, and is incapacitated for the duration of the chapter.chapter, and is presumably sent back to Asgard for treatment. He's absent the rest of the fic.]]
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* TheAce: As you might expect, [[spoiler:Captain America is an expert at strategy, tactics, and CQC. She also speaks excellent Russian, is as good an actress as Black Widow if not better, has experience in covert and guerrilla ops, is a pretty good archer, and [[BrokenAce she's really, really getting tired of it]].]]
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** Instead of Doctor Yinsin, it was Doctor Shen who helped Tony build the first suit of Iron Man armor.
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** Instead of Doctor Yinsin, Yinsen, it was Doctor Shen who helped Tony build the first suit of Iron Man armor.
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* CentralTheme: Secrets and lies. Seems like nearly every main character has one.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:XCOM manages to save the day, but SHIELD is in shambles, there's a bunch of uncontrolled super-tech floating around out there, and Tony died. Also, Moscow is uninhabitable for the forseeable future. Did we mention the many world leaders who either willingly worked with the X-Rays or were mind-controlled?]]
* BrickJoke: [[spoiler:One of the first things we learn is how Reed Richards was the first choice for XCOM's Chief Engineer. The final scene is Commander Hill meeting the [[Comicbook/FantasticFour Fantastic Fo]]- the Future Foundation as they return to Earth. Reed wants to know what he missed.]]
* CentralTheme: Secrets and lies. Seems like nearly every main character hasone.some kind of secret.
* BrickJoke: [[spoiler:One of the first things we learn is how Reed Richards was the first choice for XCOM's Chief Engineer. The final scene is Commander Hill meeting the [[Comicbook/FantasticFour Fantastic Fo]]- the Future Foundation as they return to Earth. Reed wants to know what he missed.]]
* CentralTheme: Secrets and lies. Seems like nearly every main character has
** [[spoiler:The X-Men straight-up use their comics codenames, except for Kitty Pryde, [[MythologyGag who can't decide which one to use]].]]
* EndingMemorialService: [[spoiler:For Tony. We don't actually "see" the funeral. We just get a recap and Fury's speech.]]
* Idiosyncratic Episode Naming: For the first two arcs, most of the chapter titles are quotes of some kind, usually from music. For the third arc, most of the chapter titles are single words starting with A. Except for [[spoiler:the April Fools chapter, which suddenly turns into a {{Batman}}[=/XCOM=] crossover called "Blitz",]] and [[spoiler:the climax, which 'counts down' through single words starting with F, E, D, etc. until it reaches the last chapter; '''Avengers'''. The epilogue is a song lyric...that starts with A.]]
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* MythologyGag: Doctor Vahlen, [[spoiler:aka Jean Grey, is from ''[[ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga Phoenix]]'', Arizona.]]
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Doctor Vahlen, [[spoiler:aka Jean Grey, is from ''[[ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga Phoenix]]'', Arizona.]]]]
** Jane Porter has a cousin named Ruth, who had to take a trip to Israel. Assuming Porter is as Israeli as Natalie Portman is, Ruth is probably this universe's version of the Israeli hero Sabra.
** Doctor Vahlen, [[spoiler:aka Jean Grey, is from ''[[ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga Phoenix]]'', Arizona.
** Jane Porter has a cousin named Ruth, who had to take a trip to Israel. Assuming Porter is as Israeli as Natalie Portman is, Ruth is probably this universe's version of the Israeli hero Sabra.
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* TemptingFate: In Chapter 20, [[spoiler:a newbie Asgardian team of mages is sent to assist XCOM. To keep up morale, the leader quips about how the aliens really aren't that dangerous. Then he's nearly killed when he walks into a Muton, loses an arm at least, and is incapacitated for the duration of the chapter.]]
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* TemptingFate: In Chapter 20, [[spoiler:a newbie Asgardian team of mages is sent to assist XCOM. To keep up morale, the leader quips about how the aliens really aren't that dangerous. Then he's nearly killed when he walks into a Muton, loses an arm at least, and is incapacitated for the duration of the chapter.]]
* YouAreTooLate: In the climax, [[spoiler:Cap tells the Uber-Ethereal that XCOM could just use the Bifrost to destroy the Temple Ship, or get Hank Pym's help to smuggle nukes on board somehow. XCOM is not on a kill mission, they're on a ''capture'' mission.]]
* YouAreTooLate: In the climax, [[spoiler:Cap tells the Uber-Ethereal that XCOM could just use the Bifrost to destroy the Temple Ship, or get Hank Pym's help to smuggle nukes on board somehow. XCOM is not on a kill mission, they're on a ''capture'' mission.]]
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** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago.
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** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago.ago[[note]]Arguably an example of taking this a bit too far. Just because part of an idiom is outdated, doesn't mean it's going to suddenly change. People are still said to be "worth their salt", they can still "fall off the wagon", and a Spanish equivalent to "the coast is clear" is "there are no Moors on the coast", even though it's been well over a hundred years since the last time Moors raided Spain[[/note]].
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* CentralTheme: Secrets and lies. Seems like nearly every main character has one.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: One of the first things to happen in the fic; [[spoiler:Schmidt just rolls with Tony's joke about a chocolate on his pillow.]] One of the last things that happens in the fic; [[spoiler:Schmidt works with Tony to kill the Uber-Ethereal, thought Tony gets an ''eternal'' rest in the process.]]
* {{Nerf}}: In the climax, [[spoiler:the Uber-Ethereal is a lot weaker than it would normally be, since it recently downloaded into a modified human body.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: In Arc 3, [[spoiler:XCOM ends up using basically the same terrorist tactics as HYDRA did at the start of the fic. In Chapter 32, Miss Smith points this out to Captain America, discomfiting her.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: In Arc 3, [[spoiler:XCOM ends up using basically the same terrorist tactics as HYDRA did at the start of the fic. In Chapter 32, Miss Smith points this out to Captain America, discomfiting her.to the latter's discomfort.]]
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust''.
** HYDRA tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
** HYDRA tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''FanFic/AradsStardust''.
''FanFic/AradsStardust'', instead of limiting themselves to a single, bulnerable craft.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
** HYDRA simply tries attacking XCOM's satellite on the launchpad.
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* {{Retirony}}: In Arc 3, Schmidt notes that [[spoiler:she wants to spend more time with her kids when the mission is done. Clearly she's going to get killed during the final mission. Nope, that goes to Tony, who made the mistake of saying he had Girl Back Home (Pepper). Note that he wasn't the only one thinking about the subject, so it was a misdirect.]]
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** Chapter 28: Much of the game takes place in a 'data vault' run by the Epiphyte Corporation from ''Literature/Cryptonomicon''. [[spoiler:Okoye sits at Randy's desk, eats his Cap'n Crunch, and looks at the picture on his desk. Apparently Randy and Amy had a kid.]]
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** Chapter 28: Much of the game chapter takes place in a 'data vault' run by the Epiphyte Corporation from ''Literature/Cryptonomicon''. [[spoiler:Okoye sits at Randy's desk, eats his Cap'n Crunch, and looks at the picture on his desk. Apparently Randy and Amy had a kid.]]
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--''"I want my life back!"''
* ShownTheirWork: Like ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'' does with Young Justice and DC comics, this story heavily references obscure bits of the MCU and Marvel comics in general. For example, minor Iron Man villain Bruno Horgan[[note]]who appeared in the non-canon Iron Man video game, working for AIM, as well as a tie-in comic[[/note]] works for SHIELD instead of going after Tony, and the X-Ray eye from ''Series/AgentsOfShield'' is foreshadowed during the French convoy attack, then shows up properly in Arc 3.
* ShownTheirWork: Like ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'' does with Young Justice and DC comics, this story heavily references obscure bits of the MCU and Marvel comics in general. For example, minor Iron Man villain Bruno Horgan[[note]]who appeared in the non-canon Iron Man video game, working for AIM, as well as a tie-in comic[[/note]] works for SHIELD instead of going after Tony, and the X-Ray eye from ''Series/AgentsOfShield'' is foreshadowed during the French convoy attack, then shows up properly in Arc 3.
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* ShownTheirWork: Like ''Fanfic/WithThisRing'' does with Young Justice and DC comics, this story heavily references obscure bits of the MCU and Marvel comics in general. For example, minor Iron Man villain Bruno Horgan[[note]]who appeared in the non-canon Iron Man video game, working for AIM, as well as a tie-in comic[[/note]] works for SHIELD instead of going after Tony, and the X-Ray eye from ''Series/AgentsOfShield'' is foreshadowed during the French convoy attack, then shows up properly in Arc 3. [[spoiler:And at Tony's funeral.]]
** The series also tends to use GratuitousForeignLanguage, and appropriate idioms. Such as when a Japanese character describes herself as a [[https://www.tofugu.com/japan/conformity-in-japan/ "sticking up nail".]] Later on, a nickel drops instead of [[https://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/280900.html a penny]] for a Canadian character, because Canada discontinued pennies a while ago.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''AradsStardust''.
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** XCOM also has multiple Skyrangers, much like in ''AradsStardust''.''FanFic/AradsStardust''.
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Most of the equipment is named after Greco-Roman figures. This is revealed to be because [[spoiler:Director Schmidt has a mythology degree.]]
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* ReligiousAndMythologicalThemeNaming: Most of the equipment is named after Greco-Roman figures. This is revealed to be because Because [[spoiler:Director Schmidt has a mythology degree.]]
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: The main feature of the alien Infiltrators, which are this fic's Thin Men. And that's before one gets [[spoiler:plasma sniper rifles.]]
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: The main feature of the alien Infiltrators, which are this fic's Thin Men. And that's before one gets they get [[spoiler:plasma sniper rifles.]]
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** Arc 3 makes occasional references to "Moscow" and some kind of disaster. [[spoiler:We finally find out what happened in Chapter 33.]]
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** Arc 3 makes occasional references to "Moscow" and some kind of disaster. [[spoiler:We finally find out what happened in Chapter 33.33; the aliens "accidentally" crashed a failing ship in the city (presumably trying to kill Thor) and turned it into Priypat 2.0.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The finale ends with [[spoiler:Tony dead. Not only does Rogers let her "Captain America" persona drop, but she actually says "goddamn".]]
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** In Chapter 33, a secret agent quotes Michael from ''Series/BurnNotice''. The writer is a self-admitted fan. For bonus points, it's set up in a way that references ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
--''"I want my life back!"''
--''"I want my life back!"''
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* ShutUpElves: In chapter 20, [[spoiler:a group of Asgardians, superhuman beings who are nigh-immortal, practically immune to bullets, and practically view themselves as gods, joke to one another how weak these aliens are (and how the PunyHumans must be overestimating their threat)... right before their leader ''literally'' walks into a Muton and gets most of his torso obliterated. One of the other team members manages to kill the muton, but the group is now panicked.]]
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* ShutUpElves: In chapter 20, [[spoiler:a group of Asgardians, superhuman beings who are nigh-immortal, practically immune to bullets, and practically view themselves as gods, joke to one another how weak these aliens are (and how the PunyHumans must be overestimating their threat)... right before their leader ''literally'' walks into a Muton and gets most of his torso obliterated. One of the other team members manages to kill the muton, but the group is now panicked.panicked and later seem traumatized.]]
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** Arc 3 makes occasional references to "Moscow" and some kind of disaster. [[spoiler:We finally find out what happened in Chapter 33.]]
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: XCOM and SHIELD troops tend to insert random words from their native language, [[ShowTheirWork especially under stress]].
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: XCOM and SHIELD troops tend to insert random words from their native language, [[ShowTheirWork [[ShownTheirWork especially under stress]].