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* INeedAFreakingDrink: After hastily coming up with a plan to cover the battle between Rider and Lancer post being chewed out by the Mage's Association, he breaks out his "special occasion" rum.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Illya thought [[spoiler:she summoned Anime/CasshanRobotHunter]] when she heard [[spoiler:his name as [[Anime/CasshernSins Casshern]]]]. One dream sequence later...

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Illya thought [[spoiler:she summoned Anime/CasshanRobotHunter]] when she heard [[spoiler:his name as [[Anime/CasshernSins Casshern]]]]. One dream sequence later...
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Shinji Matou.]] Too bad the villains were the ONLY ones GenreSavvy about this.

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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Shinji Matou.]] Too bad the villains were the ONLY ones GenreSavvy about this.]]
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** Saber continues to be outclassed in the sequel by getting her ass handed to her by Assassin. Once again, this is justified because all of the other Servants can screw the very strict laws of the Nasuverse on a whim. Taken to ButtMonkey levels in a later {{Omake}}: in an alternate summoning of Berserker, [[spoiler:Asura]] [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy doesn't even let Saber finish speaking]] [[TalkToTheFist before she gets]] {{Megaton Punch}}ed [[CurbStompBattle to the curb]].

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** Saber continues to be outclassed in the sequel by getting her ass handed to her by Assassin. Once again, this is justified because all of the other Servants can screw the very strict laws of the Nasuverse on a whim. Taken to ButtMonkey levels in a later {{Omake}}: in an alternate summoning of Berserker, [[spoiler:Asura]] [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy doesn't even let Saber finish speaking]] speaking [[TalkToTheFist before she gets]] {{Megaton Punch}}ed [[CurbStompBattle to the curb]].
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''Fate:Zero Sense'' is complete, but the sequel, ''Fate:Stay Away'', is officially a DeadFic as of April 1st, 2015

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''Fate:Zero Sense'' is complete, but the sequel, ''Fate:Stay Away'', is officially a DeadFic as of April 1st, 20152015.






* CoolVsAwesome: A regular occurance. In order: Deadpool almost defeating Saber ''with Monty Python References'', [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Gurren Lagann]] vs [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva Unit-01]], Sasuke's [[{{Naruto}} Susano'o]] vs Grimmjow's [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Gran Rey Cero]], ''more Monty Python references'', Vash's [[Anime/{{Trigun}} Angel Arm]] vs Saber's Excalibur [[spoiler:(Angel Arm wins)]], ''Grimmjow in Resurrecion vs ALL OF TEAM DAI-GURREN'', Gurren Lagann vs Eva Unit-01 rematch. Gurren Lagann wins[[spoiler:, although Rider dies from his wounds.]] And finally, MORE MONTY PYTHON REFERENCES. The HolyShitQuotient is surpassed at the first Monty Python reference. [[CrazyAwesome Yeah, it's that kind of fic.]]

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* CoolVsAwesome: A regular occurance. In order: Deadpool almost defeating Saber ''with Monty Python References'', [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Gurren Lagann]] vs [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva Unit-01]], Sasuke's [[{{Naruto}} [[Franchise/{{Naruto}} Susano'o]] vs Grimmjow's [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Gran Rey Cero]], ''more Monty Python references'', Vash's [[Anime/{{Trigun}} Angel Arm]] vs Saber's Excalibur [[spoiler:(Angel Arm wins)]], ''Grimmjow in Resurrecion vs ALL OF TEAM DAI-GURREN'', Gurren Lagann vs Eva Unit-01 rematch. Gurren Lagann wins[[spoiler:, although Rider dies from his wounds.]] And finally, MORE MONTY PYTHON REFERENCES. The HolyShitQuotient is surpassed at the first Monty Python reference. [[CrazyAwesome Yeah, it's that kind of fic.]]
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* VillainousFriendship: Kirei and Deadpool are a clear-cut Type I. After Kirei [[spoiler:breaks the Fourth Wall]] and he and Deadpool form a BigBadDuumvirate, they become very good friends. They get along very well and [[VillainsOutShopping act rather normal]] when not being evil or [[spoiler: following the author's orders]]. They're practically [=BFFs=]. They watch ''Series/GoldenGirls'' together, fanboy Bea Arthur, make tons of {{Shout Out}}s, mourn Heath Ledger's death, are also fans of Batman, practice their {{Evil Laugh}}s together, and make fun of the author's rather flimsy excuses to hide the existence of magecraft.

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* VillainousFriendship: Kirei and Deadpool are a clear-cut Type I. After Kirei [[spoiler:breaks the Fourth Wall]] and he and Deadpool form a BigBadDuumvirate, they become very good friends. They get along very well and [[VillainsOutShopping act rather normal]] when not being evil or [[spoiler: following the author's orders]]. They're practically [=BFFs=]. They watch ''Series/GoldenGirls'' ''Series/TheGoldenGirls'' together, fanboy Bea Arthur, make tons of {{Shout Out}}s, mourn Heath Ledger's death, are also fans of Batman, practice their {{Evil Laugh}}s together, and make fun of the author's rather flimsy excuses to hide the existence of magecraft.

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* {{Deconstruction}}: The prequel and this story can be considered a deconstruction of fictional characters being introduced into the Nasuverse and breaking the Fourth Wall. Kirei [[GoMadFromTheRevelation goes insane with the information]] he is not real, many people still die despite heroic characters being around, and though some things have improved, horrible events still occur. Plus, even the Servants suffer throughout the course of the stories. Shinji Ikari being a prime example: despite living a happier life he's still riddled with guilt over having caused Third Impact. [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu constantly reminding him through NightmareFuel-level dreams do not help his sanity]].

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* {{Deconstruction}}: The prequel and this story can be considered a deconstruction of fictional characters being introduced into the Nasuverse and breaking the Fourth Wall. Kirei [[GoMadFromTheRevelation goes insane with the information]] he is not real, many people still die despite heroic characters being around, and though some things have improved, horrible events still occur. Plus, even the Servants suffer throughout the course of the stories. Shinji Ikari being is a prime example: despite living a happier life he's still riddled with guilt over having caused Third Impact. [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu constantly reminding him through NightmareFuel-level Nightmare Fuel-level dreams do does not help his sanity]].



* EvilerThanThou: In Chapter 5's Omake short: [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Popo]], for if he were ever summoned, he would call the grail effortlessly and drink Angra Mainyu's soul.

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* EvilerThanThou: In Chapter 5's Omake short: [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Popo]], for if he were ever summoned, he would call the grail effortlessly and drink Angra Mainyu's soul.



* {{Irony}}:
** [[spoiler:The Servant that Berserker somewhat killed not too long ago, Lancer, is the servant Illya is afraid of the most.]]
** The Fourth War's Caster was a horrible hypocritical monster but died realizing how much of a monster he had become and gained a degree of atonement as he [[FaceDeathWithDignity Faced Death With Dignity]]. The Fifth War's [[spoiler:Caster]] is a noble, upstanding knight and dies hating and cursing the world, blaming people for things they didn't do like the Fourth War's Caster used to do.
** In canon, Sakura summons a good version of Medusa whose life was ruined by circumstances outside of her control. In this story, Sakura summons a Heroic Spirit whose life was ruined by a witch ''named'' Medusa.
** In the Fourth War, the Assassin was Saber's ArchEnemy and she hated him, but she comes to respect the Fifth War's Assassin and forms a powerful ActionDuo with him.



** [[spoiler:[[OneWingedAngel Zeruel]]. Even more bonus points because she manages to get an OhCrap reaction from ''[[PhysicalGod Simon The Digger]]''.]]
* KickTheSonOfABitch: How Wade survived without the Orphan Farm. He stored up prana by killing a bunch of two-bit tyrants, warlords, murderers, etc. Basically, he fed off of the scum of humanity.

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** [[spoiler:[[OneWingedAngel Zeruel]]. Even more bonus [[spoiler:Rei's Zeruel form]]. Bonus points because she manages to get an OhCrap "Oh, Crap!" reaction from ''[[PhysicalGod Simon The Digger]]''.]]
the Servant who's a PhysicalGod.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: How Wade survived without the Orphan Farm.orphan farm from canon. He stored up prana by killing a bunch of two-bit tyrants, warlords, murderers, etc. Basically, he fed off of on the scum of humanity.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Shinji Ikari, [[spoiler:having NO CLUE that Zeruel is Rei, goes out to fight her and nearly kills her before she calls out to him,]] prompting this reaction.

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Shinji Ikari, [[spoiler:having NO CLUE not knowing that Zeruel [[spoiler:Zeruel]] is Rei, actually [[spoiler:Rei]], goes out to fight her and nearly kills her before she calls out to him,]] him, prompting this reaction.reaction from him.



* NakedOnArrival: [[spoiler:Rei]] can bring herself back to life three times, but she is [[IncrediblyLamePun naked upon revival.]]

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* NakedOnArrival: NakedOnRevival: [[spoiler:Rei]] can bring herself back to life three times, but she is [[IncrediblyLamePun naked upon revival.]]



* OmniscientMoralityLicense: Though Kirei is most definitely NOT a hero, no one ever suspects him of being evil until the time is right. No matter how weird and blatantly evil he acts or how many times he breaks the FourthWall in front of people. However, this is justified because [[spoiler:he works for the author, who uses his powers to protect him.]] {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d and {{discussed|Trope}} by Kirei and Wade, the latter of whom calls it by name.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted with [[spoiler: Shinji Ikari and Shinji Matou]].
** [[DoubleSubversion Double subverted.]] [[spoiler:Matou is unceremonuosly killed by Kirei and Deadpool in a half-assed attempt to frame Caster.]] Oh, wait, [[spoiler:It's not half-assed anymore. It's ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome brilliant]]'' and ''[[KickTheDog sadistic]]'' at the same time. Did TIM take the [[{{Awesome/Bleach}} "DIE, AIZ--Oh, wait, sorry, Momo"]] scene to heart?]]

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* OmniscientMoralityLicense: Though Kirei is most definitely NOT a hero, no one ever suspects him of being evil until the time is right. No right, no matter how weird and blatantly evil he acts or how many times he breaks the FourthWall fourth wall in front of people. However, this is justified because [[spoiler:he works for the author, who uses his powers to protect him.]] {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d and {{discussed|Trope}} by Kirei and Wade, the latter of whom calls it by name.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted with [[spoiler: Shinji Ikari and Shinji Matou]].
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Matou]]. Later, [[DoubleSubversion Double subverted.]] double-subverted]] when [[spoiler:Matou is unceremonuosly killed by Kirei and Deadpool in a half-assed attempt to frame Caster.]] Oh, wait, [[spoiler:It's not half-assed anymore. It's ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome brilliant]]'' and ''[[KickTheDog sadistic]]'' at the same time. Did TIM take the [[{{Awesome/Bleach}} "DIE, AIZ--Oh, wait, sorry, Momo"]] scene to heart?]] Caster]].



* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler:Rei as Zeruel]]

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* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler:Rei as Zeruel]]Lancer's [[spoiler:Zeruel]] form.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Maiya delivers one to Kotomine. Kirei, who up until this point has been completely calm and in control, [[FreakOut goes ballistic]].
-->''[[spoiler:"Hmph." Maiya muttered, grinning slightly as she looked at the man in front of her. "You are pathetic, Kotomine Kirei." Kirei's eyes widened in shock while Maiya continued. "You are not following a 'script'. You're just taking the easy way out of the problem you are in. I don't care if there is a God, or simply just a man on a computer. I came here to face you because I chose to do so. Protecting Shirou and fulfilling my order to Kiritsugu were my decisions, and even if what you said is true, I would never regret a single moment I lived my life. However you, Kotomine Kirei, are nothing more than a man scared of taking control of your life. You are a pathetic, empty, shell of a man."]]''

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Maiya delivers one to Kotomine. Kirei, who up until this point has been completely calm and in control, [[FreakOut goes ballistic]].
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" Maiya muttered, grinning slightly as she looked at the man in front of her. "You are pathetic, Kotomine Kirei." Kirei's eyes widened in shock while Maiya continued. "You are not following a 'script'. You're just taking the easy way out of the problem you are in. I don't care if there is a God, or simply just a man on a computer. I came here to face you because I chose to do so. Protecting Shirou and fulfilling my order to Kiritsugu were my decisions, and even if what you said is true, I would never regret a single moment I lived my life. However you, Kotomine Kirei, are nothing more than a man scared of taking control of your life. You are a pathetic, empty, shell of a man."]]''"''



** In the first fic, Waver summons [[MemeticBadass Kamina]] as Rider. [[spoiler: In the sequel, he summons [[PhysicalGod Simon the Digger]].

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** In the first fic, Waver summons [[MemeticBadass Kamina]] as Rider. [[spoiler: In the sequel, he [[spoiler:he summons [[PhysicalGod Simon the Digger]].Digger]]]].

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** Avenger gives a loud one when Rider first shows up, either out of general frustration with the other Servants (minus Saber) all being very powerful anime characters or because he knows [[GameBreaker how powerful]] Rider is. He gives a more restrained, "Shit," when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and notices which version it is.

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** Avenger gives a loud All of the Servant-Master teams end up gathered in one when Rider first shows up, either out of general frustration with the other Servants (minus Saber) location, and [[GenreSavvy Avenger]] knows who they all being very are and how powerful anime characters or because they are. Each Servant who shows up is more powerful than the last, finally culminating in [[PhysicalGod Rider's]] arrival. When he knows [[GameBreaker how powerful]] Rider is. sees Rider, Avenger can't take it anymore and gives a loud, vehement Precision F-Strike.
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He gives a more restrained, "Shit," when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and notices which version it is.



** In the first fic, Waver summons [[MemeticBadass Kamina]] as Rider. [[spoiler: In the sequel, he summons [[PhysicalGod Simon t]][[GameBreaker he Digger.]]]]

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** In the first fic, Waver summons [[MemeticBadass Kamina]] as Rider. [[spoiler: In the sequel, he summons [[PhysicalGod Simon t]][[GameBreaker he Digger.]]]]the Digger]].



* TakeThat: Surprisingly of his own humor and those who use the same premise of Zero Sense. TIM basically admits through Deadpool that his own humor sucks, and calls those who do the same type of fic and say they are 'inspired' by Zero Sense are not doing anything original and are even in some cases blatantly copy-and-pasting parts of the fic and claiming it as their own.
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Avenger's reaction when he recognizes what version of Casshern he is fighting.
** Taken UpToEleven when Avenger learns that one of his opponents is [[spoiler:[[PhysicalGod Simon the Digger]]]]. The normally unshakeable Avenger ''[[PrecisionFStrike flips]]''!

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* TakeThat: Surprisingly of his own humor and those who use the same premise of Zero Sense.''Zero Sense''. TIM basically admits through Deadpool that his own humor sucks, and calls those who do the same type of fic and say they are 'inspired' by Zero Sense are not doing anything original and are even in some cases blatantly copy-and-pasting parts of the fic and claiming it as their own.
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Avenger's reaction when he recognizes what version of Casshern he is fighting.
** Taken UpToEleven when Soon after, Avenger reacts vehemently this way when he learns that one of his opponents is [[spoiler:[[PhysicalGod Simon the Digger]]]]. The normally unshakeable Avenger ''[[PrecisionFStrike flips]]''!



* {{Tsundere}}: Rin is most obviously one (and Kirei will never let her forget it). Illya becomes an aborable {{Tsundere}} when trying to act like she doesn't care about Berserker/[[spoiler:Casshern]].

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* {{Tsundere}}: Rin is most obviously one (and Kirei will never let her forget it). Illya becomes an aborable {{Tsundere}} Tsundere when trying to act like she doesn't care about Berserker/[[spoiler:Casshern]].



* UnstoppableRage: Shinji loses it when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and immediately summons Unit-01 and almost beats it to death in rage and revenge for what it did to him and his friends in his homeworld, only stopping when he learns [[spoiler:that it is really Rei ''transformed'' into Zeruel, leading to a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment.]]

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* UnstoppableRage: Shinji loses it when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and immediately summons Unit-01 and almost beats it to death in rage and revenge for what it did to him and his friends in his homeworld, homeworld. He only stopping stops when he learns [[spoiler:that it is really Rei ''transformed'' into Zeruel, Zeruel]], leading to a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment.]]



** Things start getting serious before Chapter 15, but come that chapter it solidifies '''hard'''. How hard? If [[spoiler:the first Servant killed in the war '''declares a dying curse on the Grail''']], [[FromBadToWorse it's all downhill from there]].

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** Things start getting serious before Chapter 15, but come that chapter it solidifies '''hard'''. How hard? If [[spoiler:the first Servant killed in the war '''declares a dying curse Dying Curse on the Grail''']], [[FromBadToWorse it's all downhill from there]].



* [[invoked]] WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.

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* [[invoked]] WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] [[spoiler:ComicBook/ThePunisher]] as Avenger.
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* DynamicEntry: Waver and Rider make their entrance into the War by crushing Berserker with a giant drill.

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* DynamicEntry: Assassin appears on the scene of a battle with a whoop and a kick to Avenger's chest. Soon after, Waver and Rider make their entrance into the War by crushing Berserker with a giant drill.

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* {{Deconstruction}}: The prequel and this story can be considered a deconstruction of fictional characters being introduced into the Nasuverse and breaking the Fourth Wall. Kirei [[GoMadFromTheRevelation goes insane with the information]] he is not real, many people still die despite heroic characters being around, and though some things have improved, horrible events still occur. Not to mention, even the Servants suffer throughout the course of the stories, Shinji being a prime example because despite living a happier life he's still riddled with guilt towards causing Third Impact. [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu constantly reminding him through NightmareFuel-level dreams do not help his sanity]].

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* {{Deconstruction}}: The prequel and this story can be considered a deconstruction of fictional characters being introduced into the Nasuverse and breaking the Fourth Wall. Kirei [[GoMadFromTheRevelation goes insane with the information]] he is not real, many people still die despite heroic characters being around, and though some things have improved, horrible events still occur. Not to mention, Plus, even the Servants suffer throughout the course of the stories, stories. Shinji Ikari being a prime example because example: despite living a happier life he's still riddled with guilt towards causing over having caused Third Impact. [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu constantly reminding him through NightmareFuel-level dreams do not help his sanity]].sanity]].
* {{Defictionalization}}: InUniverse. The flimsy cover story in the fourth Grail War about a movie being made in Fuyuki got a lot of positive reaction, which led to the movie actually being made. It even produced a sequel.


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** Avenger delivers one when he learns that the previous Holy Grail War was fought almost entirely with characters from modern fictional series and that from what he's seen, the current one will be the same.

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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Gives little omake shorts at the end of a few chapters of characters summoning different servants aside from the ones they were given in the story. They are [[spoiler: [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka Langley Soryu]] as Lancer, [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Solf J. Kimblee]] as Caster, [[DeadmanWonderland Shiro]] as Berserker, [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Sui-Feng]] as Assassin, [[Anime/PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt Panty]] as Archer and [[Anime/{{FLCL}} Naoto Nandaba]] as Rider.]]

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* [[invoked]] WhatCouldHaveBeen: Gives little omake shorts at the end of a few chapters of characters summoning different servants aside from the ones they were given in the story. They are [[spoiler: [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka Langley Soryu]] as Lancer, [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Solf J. Kimblee]] as Caster, [[DeadmanWonderland [[Manga/DeadmanWonderland Shiro]] as Berserker, [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Sui-Feng]] as Assassin, [[Anime/PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt Panty]] as Archer and [[Anime/{{FLCL}} Naoto Nandaba]] as Rider.]]


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* ContinuityNod: Bazette's Servant mentions ''Neon Genesis Evangelion'' and Bazette, not having heard of it, asks if he means ''Neo'', a film that was made during the timeskip as a result of efforts to cover-up the fourth Holy Grail War.
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%%* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Played with.

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%%* * TheStationsOfTheCanon: Played with.with. The Infamous Man manages to parallel most of the events of canon--even minor ones--using the new Servants, though with some mixing up of which Servants are involved in each event.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[invoked]] Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.

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* [[invoked]] WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[invoked]] Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.
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** Everyone is worfed by Berserker. Repeat: every Servant gets worfed. At the same time. Except [[GameBreaker Ri]][[PhysicalGod der]].
** Then Berserker gets BRUTALLY worfed by Avenger in Chapter 12. How is that possible? Four words: [[spoiler:Nine Lives Blade Works]].
** [[spoiler: Taken to heartbreaking levels when Wade and Avenger are able to defeat Berserker, by launching a surprise attack and having him focus all his efforts on protecting Illya rather than fight them]].

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** Everyone is worfed by Berserker. Repeat: every Servant gets worfed. At the same time. Except [[GameBreaker Ri]][[PhysicalGod der]].
[[PhysicalGod Rider]].
** Then Berserker gets BRUTALLY brutally worfed by Avenger in Chapter 12. How is that possible? Four words: [[spoiler:Nine Lives Blade Works]].
** [[spoiler: Taken to heartbreaking levels when Wade [[spoiler:Wade and Avenger Avenger]] are able to defeat Berserker, [[spoiler:Berserker]] by launching a surprise attack and having him focus all his efforts on protecting Illya [[spoiler:protecting Illya]] rather than fight them]].them.



* WrongGenreSavvy: Ilya thought [[spoiler:she summoned Anime/CasshanRobotHunter]] when she heard [[spoiler:his name as [[Anime/CasshernSins Casshern]]]]. One dream sequence later...

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* WrongGenreSavvy: Ilya Illya thought [[spoiler:she summoned Anime/CasshanRobotHunter]] when she heard [[spoiler:his name as [[Anime/CasshernSins Casshern]]]]. One dream sequence later...
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** Things start getting serious before Chapter 15, but come that chapter it solidifies '''HARD'''. How hard? If [[spoiler:the first Servant killed in the war '''DECLARES A [=DYING CURSE=] ON THE GRAIL''']], [[FromBadToWorse it's all downhill from there]].

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** Things start getting serious before Chapter 15, but come that chapter it solidifies '''HARD'''. '''hard'''. How hard? If [[spoiler:the first Servant killed in the war '''DECLARES A [=DYING CURSE=] ON THE GRAIL''']], '''declares a dying curse on the Grail''']], [[FromBadToWorse it's all downhill from there]].



* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.

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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[invoked]] Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.
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* AssassinOutclassin: The main point of the fight between [[spoiler:Assassin ([[SoulEater Black*Star]]) and Archer ([[Manga/BlackCat Train Heartnet]]).]]

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* AssassinOutclassin: The main point of the fight between [[spoiler:Assassin ([[SoulEater ([[Manga/SoulEater Black*Star]]) and Archer ([[Manga/BlackCat Train Heartnet]]).]]



* BashBrothers: Shinji and [[spoiler:Rei]] have very similar abilities as Servants, but Shinji has better stats and Personal Skills whereas [[spoiler:Rei]] has better Noble Phantasms; [[spoiler:mainly, she has three extra lives and the ability to summon [[TheJuggernaut Zeruel.]]]] Even more so when [[spoiler:Rei is from the ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' continuity]] and Shinji is from [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion the original series]].

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* BashBrothers: Shinji and [[spoiler:Rei]] have very similar abilities as Servants, but Shinji has better stats and Personal Skills whereas [[spoiler:Rei]] has better Noble Phantasms; [[spoiler:mainly, she has three extra lives and the ability to summon [[TheJuggernaut Zeruel.]]]] Even more so when [[spoiler:Rei [[spoiler:Rei]] is from the ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' continuity]] continuity and Shinji is from [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion the original series]].



* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Assassin, a.k.a. [[spoiler:[[SoulEater Black*Star]]]], even moreso than his {{canon}} counterpart. He normally has his pre-CharacterDevelopment personality, but when a fight gets serious he reveals he has his manga counterpart's competence. He kicks both Saber's and Shinji Ikari's asses in his first fight.

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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Assassin, a.k.a. [[spoiler:[[SoulEater Black*Star]]]], [[spoiler:Black*Star]], even moreso than his {{canon}} counterpart. He normally has his pre-CharacterDevelopment personality, but when a fight gets serious he reveals he has his manga counterpart's competence. He kicks both Saber's and Shinji Ikari's asses in his first fight.



* TheDreaded: Lancer eventually become this to everyone but Rider. Although she, herself, is actually a rather sub-par Servant, her ability to transform into [[spoiler:[[TheJuggernaut Zeruel]]]] will cause both [[GameBreaker Berserker]] and [[GameBreaker Avenger]] to retreat without question.

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* TheDreaded: Lancer eventually become this to everyone but Rider. Although she, herself, is actually a rather sub-par Servant, her ability to transform into [[spoiler:[[TheJuggernaut Zeruel]]]] will cause both [[GameBreaker Berserker]] Berserker and [[GameBreaker Avenger]] Avenger, each with game-breaking powers, to retreat without question.



* EvilerThanThou: In Chapter 5's Omake short: [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Popo]], for if he were ever summoned, he would call the grail effortlessly and drink Angra Mainyu's soul.]]

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* EvilerThanThou: In Chapter 5's Omake short: [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Popo]], for if he were ever summoned, he would call the grail effortlessly and drink Angra Mainyu's soul.]]



* FallenHero: Avenger, a.k.a. [[spoiler:EMIYA]], even more than his {{canon}} counterpart. Although in canon [[spoiler:EMIYA]] was very twisted, he could still be called a hero, albeit a TragicHero. This version is perfectly willing to kill Ilya, his counterpart's MoralityPet. [[spoiler:Justified reaction because '''this''' EMIYA's MoralityPet is not Ilya, but Sakura.]]
* FalseReassurance[=/=]ExactWords: Kirei, in his natural element. He tells Caster/[[spoiler:Erza]] that someone made a replica of one of her swords, used it to kill Shinji Matou, making Shirou and Sakura come after her, that the culprit did so to finally have an excuse to take out a Servant, and that the culprit was Assassin. She assumes he was talking about Sakura's Assassin. He's really talking about Deadpool.

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* FallenHero: Avenger, a.k.a. [[spoiler:EMIYA]], even more than his {{canon}} counterpart. Although in canon [[spoiler:EMIYA]] was very twisted, he could still be called a hero, albeit a TragicHero. This version is perfectly willing to kill Ilya, his counterpart's MoralityPet. [[spoiler:Justified reaction because '''this''' EMIYA's MoralityPet Morality Pet is not Ilya, but Sakura.]]
* FalseReassurance[=/=]ExactWords: Kirei, in his natural element. He tells Caster/[[spoiler:Erza]] that someone made a replica of one of her swords, swords and used it to kill Shinji Matou, making Shirou and Sakura come after her, that the culprit did so to finally have an excuse to take out a Servant, and that the culprit was Assassin. She assumes he was he's talking about Sakura's Assassin. He's really talking about Deadpool.



* HeroicBSOD: Saber temporarily enters one upon meeting Rider. [[spoiler:Why? Because by him following his Aniki's ideals, Saber realized that Kamina was right all along.]]

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* HeroicBSOD: Saber temporarily enters one upon meeting Rider. [[spoiler:Why? Because by at seeing him following his Aniki's ideals, Saber realized realizes that Kamina was right all along.]]



* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Because it's an easy way to [[GoodThingYouCanHeal show off]] his NighInvulnerability, this happens to Wade semi-frequently. Before the CerebusSyndrome kicks in, it becomes a RunningGag for Kirei to stab him in the forehead to [[NoFourthWall stop him from revealing spoilers]]. After it kicks in, he gets stabbed sideways through the head by Assassin's sword and later gets pinned to a wall by a sword through his chest.

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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Because it's an easy way to [[GoodThingYouCanHeal show off]] his NighInvulnerability, this happens to Wade semi-frequently. Before the CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome kicks in, it becomes a RunningGag for Kirei to stab him in the forehead to [[NoFourthWall stop him from revealing spoilers]]. After it kicks in, he gets stabbed sideways through the head by Assassin's sword and later gets pinned to a wall by a sword through his chest.



** In canon, Sakura summons a good version of Medusa whose life was been ruined by circumstances outside of her control. In this story, Sakura summons a Heroic Spirit whose life was ruined by a witch ''named'' Medusa.

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** In canon, Sakura summons a good version of Medusa whose life was been ruined by circumstances outside of her control. In this story, Sakura summons a Heroic Spirit whose life was ruined by a witch ''named'' Medusa.



** Following in Grimmjow's footsteps, Casshern proves himself to be pretty much invincible, taking on Saber, Lancer, Archer, Caster, Assassin, ''and'' Avenger at the same time and WINNING! [[spoiler: He even kills Rei, [[DeathIsCheap sort of.]]]] It takes [[GameBreaker Rider]] to stop him. That's right, Casshern is able to defeat SIX Servants. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis All. By. Himself.]]

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** Following in Grimmjow's footsteps, Casshern [[spoiler:Casshern]] proves himself to be pretty much invincible, taking on Saber, Lancer, Archer, Caster, Assassin, ''and'' Avenger at the same time and WINNING! [[spoiler: He even kills Rei, [[spoiler:Rei]], [[DeathIsCheap sort of.]]]] ]] It takes [[GameBreaker Rider]] Rider to stop him. That's right, Casshern [[spoiler:Casshern]] is able to defeat SIX Servants. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis All. By. Himself.]]



* KnightOfCerebus: Overlaps with CerebusSyndrome for Kirei and Wade. Their humorous natures just seem to enhance how something is incredibly '''wrong'' with them as their atrocities pile up.

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* KnightOfCerebus: Overlaps with CerebusSyndrome Cerebus Syndrome for Kirei and Wade. Their humorous natures just seem to enhance how something is incredibly '''wrong'' with them as their atrocities pile up.



* MythologyGag / TheStationsOfTheCanon: [[spoiler:Like in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', Bazette is screwed by Kirei, and like in ''VisualNovel/FateHollowAtaraxia'', Bazette summons Avenger.]] Just not necessarily in that order, in this fic.
** Shirou finally gets his... [[ItMakesSenseInContext "mana]] [[RunningGag transfer]] [[DontExplainTheJoke ritual"]]. [[spoiler:But he gets Luvia instead Rin.]]

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* MythologyGag / TheStationsOfTheCanon: [[spoiler:Like in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', ''Fate/stay night'', Bazette is screwed by Kirei, and like in ''VisualNovel/FateHollowAtaraxia'', Bazette summons Avenger.]] Just not necessarily in that order, in this fic.
** Shirou finally gets his... [[ItMakesSenseInContext "mana]] [[RunningGag transfer]] [[DontExplainTheJoke ritual"]]. [[spoiler:But he gets Luvia instead of Rin.]]



* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:Zeruel, the Angel of Might]], and it lives up to its name by causing both [[GameBreaker Berserker]] and [[GameBreaker Avenger]] to run away from it really fast.

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: [[spoiler:Zeruel, the Angel of Might]], and it lives up to its name by causing both [[GameBreaker Berserker]] Berserker and [[GameBreaker Avenger]] Avenger to run away from it really fast.



* PunchClockVillain: Kirei and Wade manage to be this ''and'' [[CardCarryingVillain Card-Carrying Villains]] at the same time. Although they are both unrepentantly evil, they also [[spoiler:work for the author and follow his orders]], and when not being evil or breaking the FourthWall they live rather normal lives.

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* PunchClockVillain: Kirei and Wade manage to be this ''and'' [[CardCarryingVillain Card-Carrying Villains]] at the same time. Although they are both unrepentantly evil, they also [[spoiler:work for the author and follow his orders]], and when not being evil or breaking the FourthWall fourth wall they live rather normal lives.

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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic takes a very dark turn with the [[spoiler: death of Caster at the hands of Berserker]] in chapter eleven. Not that [[spoiler:Caster and Uryuu]] [[KickTheSonOfABitch didn't deserve it]], but their deaths do begin the darkening of the plot.

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* CerebusSyndrome: The fic takes a very dark turn with the [[spoiler: death of Caster [[spoiler:Caster at the hands of Berserker]] in chapter eleven. Not that [[spoiler:Caster and Uryuu]] don't [[KickTheSonOfABitch didn't deserve it]], but their deaths do begin the darkening of the plot.



* CrackFic: Big time.
* CuttingOffTheBranches: [[spoiler:The Heaven's Feel route of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' is made impossible by the events of the epilogue.]]

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* CrackFic: Big time.
''Fate:Zero Sense'' is one, moreso in the beginning.
* CuttingOffTheBranches: [[spoiler:The Heaven's Feel route route]] of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' ''Fate/stay night'' is made impossible by the events of the epilogue.]]



* DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: First Archer and then Rider.]]

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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler: First Archer [[spoiler:Archer]] and then Rider.]][[spoiler:Rider]] go out on a badass note.



** [[spoiler: Nah, his betrayal was done because the author ordered it as a part of a BatmanGambit.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: All Servants that pass on save for [[spoiler:Saber]], really. [[spoiler:Berserker]] in particular, despite losing epicly to [[spoiler:Rider]], is at least content he went down fighting instead of being backstabbed.
** Soon after that [[spoiler:Rider himself gets killed. His final words to Waver parallel his final speech to Simon, including, [[TearJerker "Later, buddy."]]]]

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** [[spoiler: Nah, his betrayal was done because the author ordered it as a part of a BatmanGambit.Batman Gambit.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: All Servants that pass on save for [[spoiler:Saber]], really. [[spoiler:Berserker]] in particular, despite losing epicly to [[spoiler:Rider]], is at least content he went down fighting instead of being backstabbed.
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backstabbed. Soon after that [[spoiler:Rider himself [[spoiler:Rider]] gets killed. His final words to Waver [[spoiler:Waver]] parallel his final speech to Simon, [[spoiler:Simon]], including, [[TearJerker "Later, buddy."]]]]"]]



* InSpiteOfANail: {{Invoked}}, Zigzagged, and played straight. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for Kotomine, despite his plans to "destroy canon" many of the same events happen in order to allow for a {{Sequel}} set during ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight.]]

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* InSpiteOfANail: {{Invoked}}, Zigzagged, and played straight. [[spoiler: Unfortunately [[spoiler:Unfortunately for Kotomine, despite his plans to "destroy canon" many of the same events happen in order to allow for a {{Sequel}} set during ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight.''Fate/stay night''.]]



* TheJuggernaut: Berserker, full stop, to the point where he's considered an in-universe GameBreaker. Archer and Saber can't hurt him. He shrugs off Caster's [[spoiler: Amaterasu]] like it's nothing and punches through his [[spoiler: Susano'o]] like it's made of cardboard. The only thing stopping him from slaughtering everyone but Rider is that Kariya is his Master and can't handle the amount of prana/mana that would require. Even then, it takes [[spoiler:all of Team Dai-Gurren and a Giga Drill Breaker]] to take him down.
* KnightOfCerebus: In the first half of the story, Caster and Uryuu are the main source of drama and nothing about their actions is PlayedForLaughs; all of their murders are played dead-straight and whenever they show up, the laughs stop. [[spoiler:Ironically, their deaths are what ''start'' the fic's CerebusSyndrome.]]

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* TheJuggernaut: Berserker, full stop, to the point where he's considered an in-universe InUniverse GameBreaker. Archer and Saber can't hurt him. He shrugs off Caster's [[spoiler: Amaterasu]] like it's nothing and punches through his [[spoiler: Susano'o]] like it's made of cardboard. The only thing stopping him from slaughtering everyone but Rider is that Kariya is his Master and can't handle the amount of prana/mana that would require. Even then, it takes [[spoiler:all of Team Dai-Gurren and a Giga Drill Breaker]] to take him down.
* KnightOfCerebus: In the first half of the story, Caster and Uryuu are the main source of drama and nothing about their actions is PlayedForLaughs; all of their murders are played dead-straight and whenever they show up, the laughs stop. [[spoiler:Ironically, their deaths are what ''start'' the fic's CerebusSyndrome.Cerebus Syndrome.]]



** Berserker's entire relationship with Kariya is one gigantic PetTheDog. Berserker begins to actually care for him and goes out of his way to help him. In the end he uses Kariya and Sakura to motivate himself during his final battle with [[spoiler: Rider]].

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** Berserker's entire relationship with Kariya is one gigantic PetTheDog.Pet the Dog. Berserker begins to actually care for him and goes out of his way to help him. In the end he uses Kariya and Sakura to motivate himself during his final battle with [[spoiler: Rider]].[[spoiler:Rider]].



* TakeUpMySword: [[spoiler: Rider leaves Waver his nodachi moments before he dies, encouraging him to continue on as a member of Team Dai-Guren.]] [[spoiler: [[ChekhovsGun This proves important in the sequel]], as Waver summons Simon as the next Rider.]]

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* TakeUpMySword: [[spoiler: Rider [[spoiler:Rider]] leaves Waver [[spoiler:Waver]] his nodachi moments before he dies, encouraging him to continue on as a [[spoiler:a member of Team Dai-Guren.]] [[spoiler: [[ChekhovsGun This proves important in the sequel]], as Waver [[spoiler:Waver summons Simon as the next Rider.]]



* VillainousBreakdown: Kirei has one when, [[spoiler:during his duel with Kiritsugu, things start going out of control for him and he starts to realize the Author has OutGambitted him. It's at this point that he stops acting confident and humoristic, and outright tries to kill Kiritsugu with an insane look on his face.]]

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* VillainousBreakdown: Kirei has one when, when [[spoiler:during his duel with Kiritsugu, Kiritsugu]] things start going out of control for him and he starts to realize the Author realizes [[spoiler:the author]] has OutGambitted him. It's at this point that he stops acting confident and humoristic, and outright tries to kill Kiritsugu [[spoiler:Kiritsugu]] with an insane look on his face.]]



* WhatTheHellHero: Kamina, Vash, and even Shinji think that what Saber wants is stupid, because what they want wouldn't cause a massive time paradox and at the same time make their Masters' wishes meaningless.
* TheWorfEffect: [[ButtMonkey Saber]] constantly gets this treatment. Though it's justified, considering her competition and her lack of versatility compared to the other Servants, it's still rather egregious. She only killed [[spoiler: Archer]] [[WorfHadTheFlu because he threw the fight.]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Kamina, Vash, [[spoiler:Kamina]], [[spoiler:Vash]], and even Shinji [[spoiler:Shinji]] think that what Saber wants is stupid, because what they want wouldn't cause a massive time paradox and at the same time make their Masters' wishes meaningless.
* TheWorfEffect: [[ButtMonkey Saber]] constantly gets this treatment. Though it's justified, considering her competition and her lack of versatility compared to the other Servants, it's still rather egregious. She only killed [[spoiler: Archer]] kills [[spoiler:Archer]] [[WorfHadTheFlu because he threw the fight.]]



** The only reason why Lancer/[[spoiler: Shinji]] is able to kill [[spoiler: Rider/Kamina]] is because he is heavily wounded after fighting Berserker. Even then, Rider manages to destroy [[spoiler: Unit-01]] before [[spoiler:he dies.]]

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** The only reason why Lancer/[[spoiler: Shinji]] is able to kill [[spoiler: Rider/Kamina]] is because he the latter is heavily wounded after fighting Berserker. Even then, Rider [[spoiler:Rider]] manages to destroy [[spoiler: Unit-01]] before [[spoiler:he he dies.]]



-->If I didn't know you were banging Kiritsugu, I would say you need to get laid.

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* ArchEnemy: Saber absolutely ''loathes'' Assassin with a hate that could be considered holy. Assassin promotes this trope both for his own amusement and [[spoiler: because the author told him to.]]

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* ArchEnemy: Saber absolutely ''loathes'' Assassin with a hate that could be considered holy. Assassin promotes this trope both for his own amusement and [[spoiler: [[BreakingTheFourthWall because the author told him to.]]to]].



* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: The entire fic]] was a massive BatmanGambit created by [[spoiler:the author]] to make sure he had a proper [[spoiler:BigBad (i.e., Kirei) for the sequel]].

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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: The entire fic]] was turns out to be a massive BatmanGambit Batman Gambit created by [[spoiler:the author]] to make sure he had would have a proper [[spoiler:BigBad [[spoiler:Big Bad (i.e., Kirei) for the sequel]].
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Following ''Zero Sense'' is the sequel ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8429877/1/Fate_Stay_Away Fate: Stay Away]]'', set during the events of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''. It features ''Manga/BlackCat'' character [[spoiler:Ex-Number Train Heartnet]] as Archer, ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' character [[spoiler:Frozen girl, Rei Ayanami,]] as Lancer, ''Manga/FairyTail'' character [[spoiler: Erza Scarlet]] as Caster, ''Anime/CasshernSins'' character [[spoiler: the titular Casshern]] as Berserker, ''Manga/SoulEater'' character [[spoiler:the arrogant Black*Star]] as Assassin, ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' character [[spoiler: Simon the Digger]] as Rider, and (amazingly) the ''Fate/Stay Night'' character [[spoiler: Counter Guardian EMIYA]] as Avenger.

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Following ''Zero Sense'' is the sequel ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8429877/1/Fate_Stay_Away Fate: Stay Away]]'', set during the events of ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''. ''Fate/stay night''. It features ''Manga/BlackCat'' character [[spoiler:Ex-Number Train Heartnet]] as Archer, ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' character [[spoiler:Frozen girl, Rei Ayanami,]] as Lancer, ''Manga/FairyTail'' character [[spoiler: Erza [[spoiler:Erza Scarlet]] as Caster, ''Anime/CasshernSins'' character [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the titular Casshern]] as Berserker, ''Manga/SoulEater'' character [[spoiler:the arrogant Black*Star]] as Assassin, ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' character [[spoiler: Simon the Digger]] as Rider, and (amazingly) the ''Fate/Stay Night'' ''Fate/stay night'' character [[spoiler: Counter [[spoiler:Counter Guardian EMIYA]] as Avenger.



Fate Zero Sense itself was completed, but the sequel Fate Stay Away is officially a DeadFic as of April 1st, 2015

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* AdaptationalBadass: Rider. Though unquestionably awesome in his original anime, Iskander didn't have access to [[spoiler: a Reality Marble containing all of team Dai-Gurren]].

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* AdaptationalBadass: Rider. Though unquestionably awesome in his original anime, Iskander Kamina didn't have access to [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:a Reality Marble containing all of team Dai-Gurren]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.

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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[SamuraiChamploo [[Anime/SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Rider. Though unquestionably awesome in his original anime, Kamina didn't have access to [[spoiler: a Reality Marble containing all of team Dai-Gurren]].

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* AdaptationalBadass: Rider. Though unquestionably awesome in his original anime, Kamina Iskander didn't have access to [[spoiler: a Reality Marble containing all of team Dai-Gurren]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Gives little omake shorts at the end of a few chapters of characters summoning different servants aside from the ones they were given in the story. They are [[spoiler: [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka Langley Soryu]] as Lancer, [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Solf J. Kimblee]] as Caster, [[DeadmanWonderland Shiro]] as Berserker, [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Sui-Feng]] as Assassin, [[PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt Panty]] as Archer and [[Anime/{{FLCL}} Naoto Nandaba]] as Rider.]]

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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Gives little omake shorts at the end of a few chapters of characters summoning different servants aside from the ones they were given in the story. They are [[spoiler: [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka Langley Soryu]] as Lancer, [[Manga/FullmetalAlchemist Solf J. Kimblee]] as Caster, [[DeadmanWonderland Shiro]] as Berserker, [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Sui-Feng]] as Assassin, [[PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt [[Anime/PantyAndStockingWithGarterbelt Panty]] as Archer and [[Anime/{{FLCL}} Naoto Nandaba]] as Rider.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.

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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Furthers the tradition of small omakes of could-have-been Servants with [[spoiler:BOTH [[SamuraiChamploo Jin and Mugen]]]] as Assassin, [[spoiler:[[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged Abridged!Mr. Popo]]]] as Caster, [[spoiler:[[Manga/SoulEater Death the Kid]]]] as Archer, [[spoiler:[[Manga/{{Bleach}} Madarame Ikkaku]]]] as Lancer, [[spoiler:[[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Asura]]]] as Berserker, [[spoiler:[[CowboyBebop [[spoiler:[[Anime/CowboyBebop Spike Spiegel]]]] as Rider, and [[spoiler:ThePunisher]] as Avenger.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Because it's an easy way to [[GoodThingYouCanHeal show off]] his NighInvulnerability, this happens to Wade semi-frequently. Before the CerebusSyndrome kicks in, it becomes a RunningGag for Kirei to stab him in the forehead to [[NoFourthWall stop him from revealing spoilers]]. After it kicks in, he gets stabbed sideways through the head by Assassin's sword and later gets pinned to a wall by a sword through his chest.



** The Fourth War's Caster was a horrible hypocritical monster but died realizing how much of a monster he had become and gained a degree of atonement as he [[FaceDeathWithDignity Faced Death With Dignity]]. The Fifth War's [[spoiler:Caster]] was a noble, upstanding knight and died hating and cursing the world, blaming people for things they didn't do like the Fourth War's Caster used to do.
** In canon, Sakura summoned a good version of Medusa whose life had been ruined by circumstances outside of her control. In this story, Sakura summons a Heroic Spirit whose life was ruined by a witch ''named'' Medusa.

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** The Fourth War's Caster was a horrible hypocritical monster but died realizing how much of a monster he had become and gained a degree of atonement as he [[FaceDeathWithDignity Faced Death With Dignity]]. The Fifth War's [[spoiler:Caster]] was is a noble, upstanding knight and died dies hating and cursing the world, blaming people for things they didn't do like the Fourth War's Caster used to do.
** In canon, Sakura summoned summons a good version of Medusa whose life had was been ruined by circumstances outside of her control. In this story, Sakura summons a Heroic Spirit whose life was ruined by a witch ''named'' Medusa.


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* RunningGag: Pre-Cerebus Syndrome, Kirei gets into the habit of stabbing Wade in the forehead to [[NoFourthWall stop him from revealing spoilers]].

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* DramaPreservingHandicap: Rider and Waver always show up late to the fights.

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Rider and Waver always show up late to the fights.fights.
** Having been struck by lightning at some point in the ten years between wars, Volumen Hydragyrum's automatic defense now only responds to projectiles, giving Waver a much less perfect defense than it did Kayneth.



* DyingCurse: Wow, [[spoiler:Caster!]] Taking a page from [[spoiler:[[FateZero Zero Lancer]]]], this is in [[spoiler:her]] own words:

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* DyingCurse: Wow, [[spoiler:Caster!]] [[spoiler:Caster]]! Taking a page from [[spoiler:[[FateZero Zero Lancer]]]], [[spoiler:''VisualNovel/FateZero's'' Lancer]], this is in [[spoiler:her]] own words:

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* PrecisionFStrike: Avenger gives a loud one when Rider first shows up, either out of general frustration with the other Servants (minus Saber) all being very powerful anime characters or because he knows [[GameBreaker how powerful]] Rider is. He gives a more restrained, "Shit," when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and notices which version it is.

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Avenger gives a loud one when Rider first shows up, either out of general frustration with the other Servants (minus Saber) all being very powerful anime characters or because he knows [[GameBreaker how powerful]] Rider is. He gives a more restrained, "Shit," when he sees [[spoiler:Zeruel]] and notices which version it is.is.
** Kotomine Kirei gives one when he sees that [[spoiler:Maiya pulled the pins on her last three grenades and dropped them on the floor of the bell tower before he threw her off, and he has nowhere to go]].
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* FalseReassurance[=/=]ExactWords: Kirei, in his natural element. He tells Caster/[[spoiler:Erza]] that someone made a replica of one of her swords, used it to kill Shinji Matou, making Shirou and Sakura come after her, that the culprit did so to finally have an excuse to take out a Servant, and that the culprit was Assassin. She assumes he was talking about Sakura's Assassin. He's really talking about {{Deadpool}}.

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* FalseReassurance[=/=]ExactWords: Kirei, in his natural element. He tells Caster/[[spoiler:Erza]] that someone made a replica of one of her swords, used it to kill Shinji Matou, making Shirou and Sakura come after her, that the culprit did so to finally have an excuse to take out a Servant, and that the culprit was Assassin. She assumes he was talking about Sakura's Assassin. He's really talking about {{Deadpool}}.Deadpool.

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