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--> '''Swordo''': Ritsuka got Guda's [[OnlySaneMan responsibility]], [[CluelessChickMagnet harem potential]] and [[SenpaiKohai Mashu]], Kana got Guda's [[MagneticHero charisma]], [[FunPersonified chill]] and [[TheGadfly memery]].
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--> '''Swordo''': Ritsuka got Guda's [[OnlySaneMan responsibility]], [[CluelessChickMagnet harem potential]] and [[SenpaiKohai Mashu]], Mashu, Kana got Guda's [[MagneticHero charisma]], [[FunPersonified chill]] and [[TheGadfly memery]].
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** Arturia also apparently tried to be one for [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]], once she discovered the latter's existence, trying to show her affection and compassion. Later, Arturia thinks she failed her by not realizing that Gray wanted meaning, not affection.
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** Arturia also apparently tried to be one for [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles [[Literature/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]], once she discovered the latter's existence, trying to show her affection and compassion. Later, Arturia thinks she failed her by not realizing that Gray wanted meaning, not affection.
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* HeroicBSOD: Years before the story began, when Shirou, Rin and Arturia were in England, there was an accidental swap of Arturia and [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]] and by that time Gray looked almost identical to Arturia, causing Shirou and Rin to not realize the swap had occurred for hours. Gray did ''not take it well''.
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* HeroicBSOD: Years before the story began, when Shirou, Rin and Arturia were in England, there was an accidental swap of Arturia and [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles [[Literature/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]] and by that time Gray looked almost identical to Arturia, causing Shirou and Rin to not realize the swap had occurred for hours. Gray did ''not take it well''.
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* PalsWithJesus: Elizabeth II of Britain is friends with ''Arturia''. Also, [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]] was adopted by the House of Windsor, both out of kindness and to prevent any complications regarding a potential competing claimant to the throne, especially in the modern political climate.
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* PalsWithJesus: Elizabeth II of Britain is friends with ''Arturia''. Also, [[LightNovel/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles [[Literature/LordElMelloiIICaseFiles Gray]] was adopted by the House of Windsor, both out of kindness and to prevent any complications regarding a potential competing claimant to the throne, especially in the modern political climate.
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* CallForward: Since this fanfic started ''after'' the first chapter of the game was long done in Japan (and the third singularity's events were written after the end of Chapter 1 of the English version), there are several nods to things that would otherwise be major spoilers for the later singularities, as YouShouldKnowThisAlready.
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* CallForward: Since this fanfic started ''after'' the first chapter of the game was long done in Japan (and the third singularity's events were written after the end of Chapter 1 of the English version), there are several nods to things that would otherwise be major spoilers for the later singularities, as YouShouldKnowThisAlready.singularities.
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* {{Troll}}: Magi☆Mari trolls Roman regularly, and Roman and Ritsuka get into an argument over her, with Ritsuka wondering how the hell they're able to access the internet in any capacity with the rest of the world burned down, and Roman insisting that Magi☆Mari is a good girl. [[spoiler:The fic isn't even subtle about how it's Merlin using a chat client to troll Roman.]]
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** Magi☆Mari trolls Roman regularly, and Roman and Ritsuka get into an argument over her, with Ritsuka wondering how the hell they're able to access the internet in any capacity with the rest of the world burned down, and Roman insisting that Magi☆Mari is a good girl. [[spoiler:The fic isn't even subtle about how it's Merlin using a chat client to troll Roman.]]]]
** EMIYA takes every opportunity to annoy Gilgamesh, who retaliates by pulling Ea out and letting EMIYA's abilities try to make sense of it, with the associated headache when they inevitably fail.
** Magi☆Mari trolls Roman regularly, and Roman and Ritsuka get into an argument over her, with Ritsuka wondering how the hell they're able to access the internet in any capacity with the rest of the world burned down, and Roman insisting that Magi☆Mari is a good girl. [[spoiler:The fic isn't even subtle about how it's Merlin using a chat client to troll Roman.
** EMIYA takes every opportunity to annoy Gilgamesh, who retaliates by pulling Ea out and letting EMIYA's abilities try to make sense of it, with the associated headache when they inevitably fail.
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* TheMaidenNameDebate: Implied - while Shirou kept the name 'Emiya', his kids inherited his wife's family name, as Tohsaka has significantly more clout and prestige than his.
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* NomDeMom: While Shirou kept the name 'Emiya', his kids inherited his wife's family name, as Tohsaka has significantly more clout and prestige than his.
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* AdaptationalBadass: The Okeanos side-story actually ''restores'' Jason's physical competency, mixing it with his tactical prowess to give Ritsuka, Kana and Mashu a ''lot'' of trouble, whereas in the game he's a dreadful fighter.
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''"W-What," Ritsuka and Roman both say, their voices barely whispers.''
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** [[spoiler: Turns out Ruby didn't just flip Ritsuka's gender when she turned him into a MagicalGirl; she took traits from various alternate Ritsukas and stitched them together into an ideal vessel. This made fixing Ritsuka ''much'' harder and Rin had to ask Zelretch for help.]]
