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* DifficultySpike: As the game progresses, [[spoiler:in line with his goal of training them to be actual magus,]] it becomes more difficult. Even something like healing evolves from "Filling HP bar" to "Generating new flesh to stop bleeding" and will require the players to further research in order to survive.
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* DifficultySpike: As the game progresses, [[spoiler:in line with his goal of training them to be actual magus,]] it becomes more difficult. [[spoiler: Even something like healing evolves from "Filling HP bar" to "Generating new flesh to stop bleeding" and will require the players to further research in order to survive.survive the later floors.]]
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* DifficultySpike: As the game progresses, [[spoiler:in line with his goal of training them to be actual magus,]] it becomes more difficult. Even something like healing evolves from "Filling HP bar" to "Generating new flesh to stop bleeding" and will require the players to further research in order to survive.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Some players are reincarnated as monsters upon their death, to be killed and respawned endlessly.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Some players are reincarnated as monsters upon their death, to be killed and respawned endlessly.endlessly in order to further Kayaba's goals, so as to not waste the resources they provide or stir up more trouble in the real world by the multiple deaths.]]
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* ShownTheirWork: The third floor boss is based off the [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mongolian_death_worm Mongolian Death Worm.]]
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* ActionGirl: Ilya gets this early on. Asuna too, as per canon.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst. He's so good at it that he managed to accidentally go into the system and discover how to make steel.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst.Analysis. He's so good at it that he managed to accidentally go into the system and discover how to make steel.
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* TurnsRed: The bosses do this. It ''is'' an MMO, after all.
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* PowerGlows: The Sword Arts, as well as Shirou when he's using [[spoiler:Prana Burst]].
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* Hammerspace: Considering how they store their items and stuff.
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* Hammerspace: {{Hammerspace}}: Considering how they store their items and stuff.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Do we really need to say who at this point?
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* FanGirl: Silica is this to Shirou being the SixthRanger.
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* Hammerspace: Considering how they store their items and stuff.
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* TheAce: Shirou is considered this due to his skill when it comes to the game's magic system and combat skill, as well as discovering Steel early one. [[spoiler: It leaves Argo wondering if he is in league with Kayaba since he knows too much.]]
* HumbleHero: Shirou and Kirito, as per source material for both.
* KeepTheReward: Argo offers 50,000 Col for the secrets of Steel, due to the Death Game making it difficult to get information that should have been gleamed off a wikia, but he tells her to keep it as long as it goes in her guide book. She can't profit off of it, though.
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* NiceHat: Subverted. Ilya crafted a helmet with deer-like antlers for Shirou. Everybody but her thinks it looks ridiculous.
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* NiceHat: Subverted. Ilya crafted a helmet with deer-like antlers for Shirou. Everybody but her thinks it looks ridiculous.ridiculous until it gets an upgrade later on.
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* [[spoiler:PlayerKilling: Diabel used to be one in the beta test.]]
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* [[spoiler:PlayerKilling: Diabel used to be one in the beta test.test and Ilya was a monster by normal standards, to where Argo thought the police should keep a lookout.]]
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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Shirou's usual response to those who thank him for saving them.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Shirou wears a crimson one with his extra low-weight white jumpsuit. He moves and fights so quickly that its red afterimage is sometimes the only thing most people manage to see.
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* GenderBender: Ilya used a male Berserker-esque avatar during the Beta. After its form was reseted to match her real body, she kept her [STR]-focused build and plays as a CuteBruiser[=/=]PintsizedPowerhouse.
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* GenderBender: Ilya used a male Berserker-esque avatar during the Beta. After its form was reseted to match her real body, she kept her [STR]-focused build and now plays as like a CuteBruiser[=/=]PintsizedPowerhouse.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst. He's so good at it that he managed to accidentaly go into the system and discover how to make steel.
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* AdorablyPrecociousChild: The avatar that Ilya originally made for Shirou, deliberately designed to match his real life appearance when younger.
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst. He's so good at it that he managed toaccidentaly accidentally go into the system and discover how to make steel.
* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst. He's so good at it that he managed to
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* CastFromHitPoints: Using healing spells are easy, but they sap your HP. Using it too much without notice ends with you killing yourself like many other healers discovered.
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* CastFromHitPoints: Using Magic Spells will cause a HP penalty if the player cast them beyond their limits. Given that healing spells are easy, but they sap your HP. Using it too much one of the most useful and easiest to cast, many players killed themselves early in the game without notice ends with you killing yourself like many other healers discovered.noticing their HP gauge sapping to zero.
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* GenderBender: As anyone who follows Fate Stay/Night should know Saber is King Authur gender-bent into a girl
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* GenderBender: As anyone who follows Fate Stay/Night should know Saber is King Authur gender-bent into Ilya used a girlmale Berserker-esque avatar during the Beta. After its form was reseted to match her real body, she kept her [STR]-focused build and plays as a CuteBruiser[=/=]PintsizedPowerhouse.
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* HaveANiceDeath: Have three: Tiger Dojo (for non-combat related deaths), Lion Dojo (for combat-related deaths) and Kotomine's Church (for Bad Guys).
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* HaveANiceDeath: Have three: Tiger Dojo (for non-combat related deaths), Dojo, Lion Dojo (for combat-related deaths) [[spoiler:(after a HostileShowTakeover)]] and Kotomine's Church (for Bad Guys).Guys).
* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: How Asuna fends off Ilya's teasing remarks about "equipping [{{Bishounen}}] (Kirito) as a boyfriend". In response Asuna tries to invoke this trope from Ilya, but the latter innocently says that "Shirou is just her [[JapaneseSiblingTerminology oniichan]]"... and then [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior her expression makes a 180]] and assures Asuna that is not like [[NotBloodSiblings her and Shirou are related by blood or anything]]. Cue sputtering.
* InnocentInnuendo: Chapter 6:2:
-->'''Ilya:''' "Shirou! I absolutely won't allow you to cheat on me with any other [Guild Leaders]! Hurry up and become mine!"\\
'''Asuna:''' [[LampshadeHanging "Ilya-chan... Couldn't you have phrased that in a less scandalous way?"]]
* {{Lolicon}}: As Kirito puts it, there are players in SAO with "[Weird Proclivities]". Ilya has [[ExploitedTrope no problems playing the bossy loli if it serves to her purposes]].
* HeIsNotMyBoyfriend: How Asuna fends off Ilya's teasing remarks about "equipping [{{Bishounen}}] (Kirito) as a boyfriend". In response Asuna tries to invoke this trope from Ilya, but the latter innocently says that "Shirou is just her [[JapaneseSiblingTerminology oniichan]]"... and then [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior her expression makes a 180]] and assures Asuna that is not like [[NotBloodSiblings her and Shirou are related by blood or anything]]. Cue sputtering.
* InnocentInnuendo: Chapter 6:2:
-->'''Ilya:''' "Shirou! I absolutely won't allow you to cheat on me with any other [Guild Leaders]! Hurry up and become mine!"\\
'''Asuna:''' [[LampshadeHanging "Ilya-chan... Couldn't you have phrased that in a less scandalous way?"]]
* {{Lolicon}}: As Kirito puts it, there are players in SAO with "[Weird Proclivities]". Ilya has [[ExploitedTrope no problems playing the bossy loli if it serves to her purposes]].
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** [[spoiler: BrokenMasquerade: [[spoiler:BrokenMasquerade: Kayaba's ultimate goal]]
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*[[spoiler: PlayerKilling: MythologyGag: Ilya dislikes {{Visual Novel}}s where sloppy writing makes the player think there is a flag for a route that simply doesn't exist. [[note]]WordOfGod said that there was an "Ilya route" planned for VisualNovel/FateStayNight, but it was scrapped due to time constrains and some elements from it were recycled into the route ''Heaven's Feel''. Supposedly, Shirou accepting Ilya's proposal during his kidnapping after triggering the right flags was the intended branching point (in the ''Fate'' route, doing that only leads to a Bad End)[[/note]]
* NiceHat: Subverted. Ilya crafted a helmet with deer-like antlers for Shirou. Everybody but her thinks it looks ridiculous.
* [[spoiler:PlayerKilling: Diabel used to be one in the beta test.]]
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* NiceHat: Subverted. Ilya crafted a helmet with deer-like antlers for Shirou. Everybody but her thinks it looks ridiculous.
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* StepfordSmiler: Grimlock[[spoiler: because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]
* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.[[spoiler: Fortunately for her, she ran into the one guy that knows how to [Make One] ]]
* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.[[spoiler: Fortunately for her, she ran into the one guy that knows how to [Make One] ]]
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* RPGMechanicsVerse: Kirito narrates events, even mundane conversations, as he were in one.
* StepfordSmiler:Grimlock[[spoiler: because, Grimlock [[spoiler:because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]
* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.[[spoiler: Fortunately [[spoiler:Fortunately for her, she ran into the one guy that knows how to [Make One] ]]One].]]
* YakuzaPrincess: From her cheerful ruthlessness, Argo thinks Ilya is one in real life. She and Kirito also wondered if Shirou is her bodyguard given the odd DarkLadyAndBlackKnight vibes they feel from them.
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* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.
* YakuzaPrincess: From her cheerful ruthlessness, Argo thinks Ilya is one in real life. She and Kirito also wondered if Shirou is her bodyguard given the odd DarkLadyAndBlackKnight vibes they feel from them.
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* TheMasquerade: Right now, everybody still thought that the Thaumaturgy patch is merely an innovative expansion to the game.
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* TheMasquerade: Right now, almost everybody still thought think that the Thaumaturgy patch is merely an innovative expansion to the game.
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* [[spoiler: PlayerKilling: Diabel used to be one in the beta test.]]
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* LossOfIdentity: Happens to Shirou if he's not careful.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Shirou's Structural Analyst. He's so good at it that he managed to accidentaly go into the system and discover how to make steel.
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* HaveANiceDeath: Have three: Tiger Dojo (for non-combat related deaths), Lion Dojo (for combat-related deaths) and Kotomine's Church (for Bad Guys).
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* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.[[spoiler: Fortunately for her, she ran into the one guy that knows how to [Make One]]]
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* UnSorcerer: Argo. She can use the [Generate Od] spell, but she doesn't have any Magic Circuits.[[spoiler: Fortunately for her, she ran into the one guy that knows how to [Make One]]]
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* TheBlacksmith: Shirou becomes one after he retire from Sixth Ranger activities.
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* TheMasquerade: Right now, everybody still thought that the Thaumaturgy patch is merely an innovative expansion to the game.
** [[spoiler: BrokenMasquerade: Kayaba's ultimate goal]]
** [[spoiler: BrokenMasquerade: Kayaba's ultimate goal]]
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* Gender Bender: GenderBender: Testing
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* DrivenToSuicide: Several players, much like in SAO, have thrown themselves off the edge of Aincrad. Shirou recalls one in specific that he desperately tried to save but was unable to do so.
* EquivalentExchange: In accordance to {{Nasuverse}} rules due to the cross over nature, you pay for your magecraft no matter what.
* EquivalentExchange: In accordance to {{Nasuverse}} rules due to the cross over nature, you pay for your magecraft no matter what.
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* StepfordSmiler: Grimlock[[spoiler: because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]
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* StepfordSmiler: Grimlock[[spoiler: because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]]]
* WitchSpecies: Like in the regular series, Magus like Shirou and Ilya are born, but somehow Kayaba has managed to induce Magic Circuits into most other players allowing them to use Magecraft.
* WitchSpecies: Like in the regular series, Magus like Shirou and Ilya are born, but somehow Kayaba has managed to induce Magic Circuits into most other players allowing them to use Magecraft.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Some players are reincarnated as monsters upon their death, to be killed and respawned endlessly.]]
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* RedBaron: Shirou's is literally the SixthRanger because he showed up at the last moment.
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* RedBaron: Shirou's is literally the SixthRanger because he showed up at the last moment.moment.
* StepfordSmiler: Grimlock[[spoiler: because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]
* StepfordSmiler: Grimlock[[spoiler: because, unlike canon, he's an actual Magus and once his wife decided to participate in the game she became a Magic-User and accomplice to Kayaba by proxy. If the Magic Association shows up they will kill her.]]
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* RedBaron: Shirou's is literally the SixthRanger because he showed up at the last moment.
* RedBaron: Shirou's is literally the SixthRanger because he showed up at the last moment.
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The premise is that SHirou and Ilya participate in the Sword Art Online game and are trapped along with the others, however, Akihiko Kayaba is a magus had created the Death Game with a Thurmatology Patch allowing for Magecraft to be used. In order to figure out his goal, escape alive, and save as many people as possible, Shirou and Ilya are forced to play the game.
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The premise is that SHirou Shirou and Ilya participate in the Sword Art Online game and are trapped along with the others, however, Akihiko Kayaba is a magus had created the Death Game with a Thurmatology Patch allowing for Magecraft to be used. In order to figure out his goal, escape alive, and save as many people as possible, Shirou and Ilya are forced to play the game.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9740933/1/Fate-Revelation-Online Fate Revelation Online]] by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/314218/daniel-gudman Daniel-Gudman]] is an crossover of the SwordArtOnline universe with the [[{{FateStayNight}} Fate Stay Night]].
The premise is that SHirou and Ilya participate in the Sword Art Online game and are trapped along with the others, however, Akihiko Kayaba is a magus had created the Death Game with a Thurmatology Patch allowing for Magecraft to be used. In order to figure out his goal, escape alive, and save as many people as possible, Shirou and Ilya are forced to play the game.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AbsurdlyHighStakesGame: Same as canon.
* ActionGirl: Ilya gets this early on.
* BigDamnHeroes: Shirou bolsters his [AGI] stat solely so he can pull this off.
* BloodlessCarnage: Due to the game engine, it's merely a red line and blood isn't shown.
* CastFromHitPoints: Using healing spells are easy, but they sap your HP. Using it too much without notice ends with you killing yourself like many other healers discovered.
* FunctionalMagic
* HarmfulToMinors
The premise is that SHirou and Ilya participate in the Sword Art Online game and are trapped along with the others, however, Akihiko Kayaba is a magus had created the Death Game with a Thurmatology Patch allowing for Magecraft to be used. In order to figure out his goal, escape alive, and save as many people as possible, Shirou and Ilya are forced to play the game.
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!!Tropes found in this fanfiction:
* AbsurdlyHighStakesGame: Same as canon.
* ActionGirl: Ilya gets this early on.
* BigDamnHeroes: Shirou bolsters his [AGI] stat solely so he can pull this off.
* BloodlessCarnage: Due to the game engine, it's merely a red line and blood isn't shown.
* CastFromHitPoints: Using healing spells are easy, but they sap your HP. Using it too much without notice ends with you killing yourself like many other healers discovered.
* FunctionalMagic
* HarmfulToMinors
