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* GreenEyedMonster: The Old Palace Master is very, very jealous that Luo Binghe idolized Harry as a shizun instead of the old letch himself. This envy increases when Harry reveals that he is not trained in xianxia cultivation. The Old Palace Master is pretty much foaming at the mouth at the idea that an utter beginner like Harry could have trained a cultivator of Luo Binghe's calibre.
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** Qiu Haitang is visibly uneasy and guilty when she finds out that she attacked and persecuted Harry, whom she believes is Shen Qingqiu's underage son rather than Shen Qingqiu himself. This is increased when Harry reveals that he is not trained as a cultivator.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Harry's bond with Luo Binghe is ''heavily'' damaged when the half-demon attempts to molest his Shizun, moreso since this is how Harry learned Luo Binghe craved a romantic relationship with him.
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* RapunzelHair: In his new plant body, Harry's hair now reaches his thighs. Even after losing a few inches to escape a crazed Luo Binghe through a portal, it's still butt-length at the least.
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* RapunzelHair: RapidHairGrowth: In his new plant body, Harry's hair now reaches his thighs. Even after losing a few inches to escape a crazed Luo Binghe through a portal, it's still butt-length at the least.
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** Harry is pretty upset about being stranded in another world, separated from everyone he ever loved, and forced to deal with a very obsessive student who desperately needs some therapy and might go on a rampage without warning.
** Yue Qingyuan had to see someone else trying to impersonate Shen Qingqiu and not only he kept quiet about it, he decided to consider the new Qing Jing Peak Lord as family. Unfortunately, Harry is constantly threatened by his own student, with Luo Binghe openly laying siege to Cang Qiong to capture him, and Yue Qingyuan is powerless to prevent it.
** [[spoiler:Shen Jiu was stuck having to watch "Shen Yuan" stealing his identity and life. Even if he forgives Harry after an explanation about the transmigration and regaining his body, the man is paranoid about someone abusing his newfound adoptive son's naivety and sweetness.]]
** Harry is pretty upset about being stranded in another world, separated from everyone he ever loved, and forced to deal with a very obsessive student who desperately needs some therapy and might go on a rampage without warning.
** Yue Qingyuan had to see someone else trying to impersonate Shen Qingqiu and not only he kept quiet about it, he decided to consider the new Qing Jing Peak Lord as family. Unfortunately, Harry is constantly threatened by his own student, with Luo Binghe openly laying siege to Cang Qiong to capture him, and Yue Qingyuan is powerless to prevent it.
** [[spoiler:Shen Jiu was stuck having to watch "Shen Yuan" stealing his identity and life. Even if he forgives Harry after an explanation about the transmigration and regaining his body, the man is paranoid about someone abusing his newfound adoptive son's naivety and sweetness.]]
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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: For all Luo Binghe seethes over Liu Qingge constantly fighting him for Shen Qingqiu's corpse and being a potential romantic rival, the half-demon nonetheless acknowledges the purity of the War God's feelings.
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* PlantPerson: Harry, of course, since he gained his current body through the Sun-Moon Dew Mushroom. Also, the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect gives him a cover story by claiming he was born of the White Crane Plant.
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* PlantPerson: Harry, of course, since he gained his current body through the Sun-Moon Dew Mushroom. Also, the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect gives him a cover story by claiming he was born of the Crane's White Crane Plant.Eggplant.
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* IdenticalStranger: Downplayed, Harry's new plant body certainly looks related to Shen Jiu, helping to sell the story about him being the Qing Jing Peak Lord's child.
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* NoodleIncident: When the Ku Xing Peak Lord refuses to believe Harry is the Shen Qingqiu they interacted with for several years, Harry mentions some hand-drawn spring books thrown somewhere they shouldn't have been as a TrustPassword. The Ku Xing Peak Lord folds.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Harry's bond with Luo Binghe is ''heavily'' damaged when the half-demon attempts to molest his Shizun, moreso since this is how Harry learned Luo Binghe craved a romantic relationship with him.
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* TwinThreesomeFantasy: [[spoiler:As he stumbles upon Harry and Shen Jiu in the Mausoleum, Luo Binghe fantasizes about keeping both of them. It doesn't last with Shen Jiu's sparkling personality coming to the fore.]]
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* AttemptedRape: Luo Binghe is so overwhelmed by feelings of guilt (caused by learning the AwfulTruth regarding his fate) and fear (caused by Harry's MartyrWithoutACause tendences) when he's reunited with his Shizun, he steals Harry to the Huan Hua Palace and starts to molest him. Harry barely manages to escape through teleportation and is very much shaken afterwards.
* GreaterScopeVillain: The System is implied to be this -- it stuffed an amnesiac Harry within Shen Qingqiu's body [[spoiler:and would have deleted Shen Jiu's consciousness entirely if Harry's soul hadn't been able to hide it]], it prevented him from seeking help under pain of torture and is now pushing for the transmigrator to become Luo Binghe's lover in spite of Harry's extreme distaste for the prospect.
* NiceGuy: Yue Qingyuan is so sweet he decided to adopt the man impersonating his lost love as a younger brother. Harry muses the Sect Leader's kind disposition was enough for the extremely self-centered "Shen Yuan" feel bad for the amount of crap he has to tread.
* ObliviousToLove: Harry couldn't understand why Luo Binghe would be so anxious to be reunited with him -- until the half-demon tried to force himself upon the transmigrator. After that, Harry is very aware of Luo Binghe's crush and completely horrified by it.
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TrulySingleParent: Cang Qiong's cover story about Harry claims he was born of a plant tended by Shen Qingqiu, so the Qing Jing Peak Lord effectively would be a single father. Harry went along because his background is already a convoluted mess and he didn't want to add a mother in the mix.
*YaoiFangirlUnreliableNarrator: Harry tends to assume the worst regarding other people's opinion of him, has a very skewed sense of danger and insists Luo Binghe's worse tendences are wholly caused by Xin Mo when it's strongly hinted the sword is exacerbing already existing issues.
* YaoiFangirl: Liu Mingyan looks starry-eyed when she hears rumors about Luo Binghe pining after his Shizun and gasps in delight when Yue Qingyuan glomps Harry.
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* YaoiFangirl: Liu Mingyan looks starry-eyed when she hears rumors about Luo Binghe pining after his Shizun and gasps in delight when Yue Qingyuan glomps Harry.
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TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: What Luo Binghe thinks of Harry, mainly because the transmigrator is a bit of a MartyrWithoutACause and would sacrifice himself for any cause he thinks worthy of his life and there's a ''lot'' of these.
*ToServeManToServeMan: Several demon tribes won't hesitate to devour humans because of the famine currently ravaging the Demon Realm. Harry suggests to use pork as substitute, reasoning pigs are easy to farm, the taste won't be that different and it will lessen the hostility between cultivators and demons.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Harry. He's rather upset about it and longs for a way to come back to his former world.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Harry. He's rather upset about it and longs for a way to come back to his former world.
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LackOfEmpathy: Harry accuses "Shen Yuan" from having the empathy of a moldy nut, and that's a big part of the reason why he doesn't like his false persona.
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LethalChef: Hagrid, of course. Harry muses Luo Binghe's demonic hybrid body might allow him to actually consume the half-giant's infamously inedible rock cakes.
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NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler:Tianlang-jun likely wasn't expecting he would re-embody ''Shen Jiu'' when he tried to stole Harry's soul away through the ritual in the Mausoleum.]]
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ParentalMarriageVeto: [[spoiler:Shen Jiu would rather murder Luo Binghe than entertain the idle possibility of a relationship between the half-demon and Shen Jiu's adopted son Harry.]] Very much a sympathetic example when the suitor's borderline {{Yandere}} personality is taken in account.
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PlantPerson: Harry, of course, since he gained his current body through the Sun-Moon Dew Mushroom. Also, the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect gives him a cover story by claiming he was born of the White Crane Plant.
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RapunzelHair: In his new plant body, Harry's hair now reaches his thighs. Even after losing a few inches to escape a crazed Luo Binghe through a portal, it's still butt-length at the least.
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SecretSecretKeeper: Yue Qingyuan never was fooled by "Shen Yuan" attempting to impersonate Shen Qingqiu, but couldn't bring himself to actually say it loud, resolving to watch over the new Qing Jing Peak Lord instead to honor Shen Jiu's memory.
*StudentTeacherRomanceSomeoneToRememberHimBy: After revealing his SecretSecretKeeper status, Yue Qingyuan confesses he soldiered on because he decided to love and care for Harry as if he was Shen Jiu's child. Harry is moved and accepts to be seen as such.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Shen Jiu didn't die from the qi deviation, Harry's soul protecting his being from deletion by the System, and later regains control of his body courtesy of Tianlang-jun's intervention.]]
* StudentTeacherRomance: Deconstructed by Harry who cannot see the relationship as anything beyond an horrendous abuse of trust and influence, to Luo Binghe's utter dismay since the half-demon very much craves his Shizun as a lover and argues his ascension as Junshang puts them on a more equal foot.
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* StudentTeacherRomance: Deconstructed by Harry who cannot see the relationship as anything beyond an horrendous abuse of trust and influence, to Luo Binghe's utter dismay since the half-demon very much craves his Shizun as a lover and argues his ascension as Junshang puts them on a more equal foot.
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CultureClash: Harry has to explain Luo Binghe about the supernatural being very much feared in the West, to the point civilians would hunt and kill witches as they would demons.
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EveryoneHasStandards:
** Harry disapproves of the Dementor's Kiss, no matter the victim. Yes, it includes Umbridge.
** Shen Yuan was rather self-centered and bent on treating everyone around him as mere characters in a novel, but even he felt bad about making the hopelessly nice Yue Qingyuan suffer.
** For all his loathing towards Luo Binghe, [[spoiler:Shen Jiu]] is extremely disturbed by the Old Palace Master's thwarted lust for Su Xiyan being reported upon her son.
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FateWorseThanDeath: How Harry describes the Dementor's Kiss, since it actually destroys the soul and prevents it from ever being reborn, meaning the victim will never be able to redeem themselves.
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HappilyAdopted: The Cang Qiong Mountain Peak Lords decide to formally add Harry to their rolls as Shen Qingqiu's child, and treat him as such. [[spoiler:A freshly re-corporated Shen Jiu approves the decision and tells Harry to call him "baba".]]
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IHatePastMe: Harry feels quite ashamed of his "Shen Yuan" persona for being horrendously naive, self-centered and stubbornly insisting on denying people around him were actual people.
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InelegantBlubbering: Luo Binghe's reaction when he gets to hear he was fated to raze Cang Qiong to the ground, rape any pretty woman on his path and gruesomely torture the man he loves until death. He's sobbing with such strength, he barely manages to beg for his Shizun's forgiveness.
*JustAKid{{Irony}}: "Shen Yuan" attempted to mimic Shen Jiu's mannerisms only to make obvious that he wasn't the original goods in spite of his frantic desire to fool everyone on Cang Qiong. After regaining his memories, Harry decides he doesn't care anymore about hiding and promptly does a better job of emulating the former Qing Jing Peak Lord's behaviour than his false persona ever could, something Yue Qingyuan ruefully points.
* JustAKid: The other Cang Qiong Peak Lords immediately freak out when Harry candidly reveals he's younger than Liu Mingyan. Harry doesn't appreciate and points he did a very good job of managing Qing Jing Peak, but it doesn't appease them.
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** Shen Yuan was rather self-centered and bent on treating everyone around him as mere characters in a novel, but even he felt bad about making the hopelessly nice Yue Qingyuan suffer.
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AbhorrentAdmirer: Luo Binghe is a rather tragic example of one. He does genuinely love Harry, but his obsessive behaviour and refusal to respect his beloved's privacy ultimately destroy any chance for the transmigrator to ever return his feelings.
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** Harry is pretty upset about being stranded in another world, separated from everyone he ever loved, and forced to deal with a very obsessive student who desperately needs some therapy and might go on a rampage without warning.
** Yue Qingyuan had to see someone else trying to impersonate Shen Qingqiu and not only he kept quiet about it, he decided to consider the new Qing Jing Peak Lord as family. Unfortunately, Harry is constantly threatened by his own student, with Luo Binghe openly laying siege to Cang Qiong to capture him, and Yue Qingyuan is powerless to prevent it.
** [[spoiler:Shen Jiu was stuck having to watch "Shen Yuan" stealing his identity and life. Even if he forgives Harry after an explanation about the transmigration and regaining his body, the man is paranoid about someone abusing his newfound adoptive son's naivety and sweetness.]]
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AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Shen Jiu didn't die from the qi deviation, his soul kept safe in Harry's Horcux-less mind. Meaning he saw "Shen Yuan" stealing his hard-won name and achievements, completely upending his life and being alright with letting someone Shen Jiu couldn't stand lust after their body.]]
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AwfulTruth: Learning what happened in the ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' utterly horrifies the Cang Qiong Mountain Peak Lords, and blatantly traumatizes Luo Binghe since the half-demon was supposed to become the VillainProtagonist.
*BeCarefulWhatYouWishForBeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Luo Binghe wanted to learn why his beloved Shizun was so skittish around him. After hearing everything supposed to happen in the canon timeline, the half-demon is nothing short of traumatized.
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** Yue Qingyuan had to see someone else trying to impersonate Shen Qingqiu and not only he kept quiet about it, he decided to consider the new Qing Jing Peak Lord as family. Unfortunately, Harry is constantly threatened by his own student, with Luo Binghe openly laying siege to Cang Qiong to capture him, and Yue Qingyuan is powerless to prevent it.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34954174/chapters/87049129 Fate Ends]]'' is a crossover fanfic between ''Scumbag System'' and ''Literature/HarryPotter'', written by Araceil on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
In which Harry Potter finds himself forced into witness protection after the last battle against Voldemort, donning the false persona of Shen Yuan, sickly chinese fuerdai.
The thing is, it never was intended to be permanent. So when Harry wakes up in a grave, blessed with a brand-new body courtesy of the Sun-Moon Dew Mushroom, he's rather upset by his past decisions.
Actually, screw that, he's furious. Fuck Fate for dragging him into yet another mess! And fuck the System for throwing him at Luo Binghe!
!Contains the following tropes
* AbhorrentAdmirer
* AdultFear
* AndIMustScream
* AwfulTruth
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
* CultureClash
* EveryoneHasStandards
* FateWorseThanDeath
* {{Irony}}
* JustAKid
* LethalChef
* PlantPerson
* RapunzelHair
* SecretSecretKeeper
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy
* SparedByTheAdaptation
* StudentTeacherRomance
* TheTasteOfLongPorkPies
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth
* TrulySingleParent
* YaoiFangirl
In which Harry Potter finds himself forced into witness protection after the last battle against Voldemort, donning the false persona of Shen Yuan, sickly chinese fuerdai.
The thing is, it never was intended to be permanent. So when Harry wakes up in a grave, blessed with a brand-new body courtesy of the Sun-Moon Dew Mushroom, he's rather upset by his past decisions.
Actually, screw that, he's furious. Fuck Fate for dragging him into yet another mess! And fuck the System for throwing him at Luo Binghe!
!Contains the following tropes
* AbhorrentAdmirer
* AdultFear
* AndIMustScream
* AwfulTruth
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor
* CultureClash
* EveryoneHasStandards
* FateWorseThanDeath
* {{Irony}}
* JustAKid
* LethalChef
* PlantPerson
* RapunzelHair
* SecretSecretKeeper
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy
* SparedByTheAdaptation
* StudentTeacherRomance
* TheTasteOfLongPorkPies
* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth
* TrulySingleParent
* YaoiFangirl
