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** [[spoiler: The monster is later revealed to be a {{kaiju}} sized Anglerpony, easily big enough to dwarf most buildings and swallow a pony whole. However, the battle itself is something of a subversion of the usual tropes. While still extremely frantic and terrifying, the monster's size works against it, making several [[AttackItsWeakPoint obvious]] [[ForMassiveDamage vulnerabilities]] all the easier to hit and severely slowing its speed. This allows it to be brought down in half a chapter thanks to a sustained barrage from multiple tanks.]]

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** [[spoiler: The monster is later revealed to be a {{kaiju}} sized Anglerpony, easily big enough to dwarf most buildings and swallow a pony whole. However, the battle itself is something of a subversion of the usual tropes. While still extremely frantic and terrifying, the monster's size works against it, making several [[AttackItsWeakPoint obvious]] [[ForMassiveDamage vulnerabilities]] vulnerabilities all the easier to hit and severely slowing its speed. This allows it to be brought down in half a chapter thanks to a sustained barrage from multiple tanks.]]
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* MechaMooks: [[spoiler: Cerberus' entire army seems to be composed of these, of varying sizes and models. Standard Fallout robots serve as repair bots for the much larger and more menacing robo-dragons.]]

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* ElsewhereFic: Similar to its predicessor in this regard, but unique in that it follows in the wake of the original Fanfic/FalloutEquestria once the world has begun to recover. Very little is truly remarked upon save for the occasional mention of the conflict with the Enclave and occasional mentions of a near-legendary figure known as "the Lightbringer".

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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: Project Cerberus appears to be this, with a serving of YeOldeNuclearSilo going by the description of silo doors.
* ElsewhereFic: Similar to its predicessor predecessor in this regard, but unique in that it follows in the wake of the original Fanfic/FalloutEquestria once the world has begun to recover. Very little is truly remarked upon save for the occasional mention of the conflict with the Enclave and occasional mentions of a near-legendary figure known as "the Lightbringer".


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* EverythingsLouderWithBagpipes: Mad Jack, being a full {{Expy}} of "Fighting" Jack Churchill, naturally has a set of bagpipes alongside his longbow and basket-hilted broadsword inside his tank Avery.
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* ChekovsGun: Much as there is a level of AuthorAppeal in having one of the largest self-propelled siege mortars ever made featured, the massive one found in the Seahoof hangars serves as a rather literal example. [[spoiler: Shame it isn't fired by friendly forces, however.]]

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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Much as there is a level of AuthorAppeal in having one of the largest self-propelled siege mortars ever made featured, the massive one found in the Seahoof hangars serves as a rather literal example. [[spoiler: Shame it isn't fired by friendly forces, however.]]
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** Loads from the films found at the drive-in theatre, many titles copied verbatim; Film/TheIronGiant, Film/RockyHorrorPictureShow, Film/TheBigLebowski, Film/WhenTheWindBlows and [[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk Daring Do and the Raiders of the Lost Ark]].

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** Loads from the films found at the drive-in theatre, many titles copied verbatim; Film/TheIronGiant, Film/RockyHorrorPictureShow, Film/TheBigLebowski, Film/WhenTheWindBlows ''WesternAnimation/TheIronGiant'', ''Film/RockyHorrorPictureShow'', ''Film/TheBigLebowski'', ''Film/WhenTheWindBlows'' and [[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk ''[[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk Daring Do and the Raiders of the Lost Ark]].Ark]]''.
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*** [[spoiler: The situation with Hispano is rather interesting, as of page 82 she's revealed to have met and befriended Aerith some time prior to the events of Empty Quiver.]]
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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/{{Tremors}} Graboids]].

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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, WallOfWeapons, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/{{Tremors}} Graboids]].
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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/Tremors Graboids]].

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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/Tremors [[Franchise/{{Tremors}} Graboids]].
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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/Tremors Graboids.]]

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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Franchise/Tremors Graboids.]]Graboids]].
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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Series/Tremors Graboids.]]

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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Series/Tremors [[Franchise/Tremors Graboids.]]



** Upon discovering the entrance to a pre-war gunsmith's personal bomb shelter, Static is quick to remark that the massive cog-shaped door familiar to any Fallout fan has one odd quirk - it opens backwards, relative to the Stables they've seen previously. Older Fallout fans will recognize that the door opening outwards rather than inwards is a staple of the Vaults in the Fallout games prior to Videogame/{{Fallout3}}.

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** Upon discovering the entrance to a pre-war gunsmith's personal bomb shelter, Static is quick to remark that the massive cog-shaped door familiar to any Fallout fan has one odd quirk - it opens backwards, relative to the Stables they've seen previously. Older Fallout fans will recognize that the door opening outwards rather than inwards is a staple of the Vaults in the Fallout games prior to Videogame/{{Fallout3}}.Videogame/{{Fallout 3}}.
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* ChekovsGun: Much as there is a level of AuthorAppeal in having one of the largest self-propelled siege mortars ever made featured, the massive one found in the Seahoof hangars serves as a rather literal example. [[spoiler: Shame it isn't fired by friendly forces, however.]]


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** Later on, the group explores and raids the personal bunker of a pre-war and post-war gunsmith. Beyond the early Fallouts-style door, they find a proper WallOfGuns, the dead gunsmith's name being a rather familiar-sounding 'Back Gunner'. One has to wonder if he ever had to deal with [[Series/Tremors Graboids.]]


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** Hispano is a straighter example, as she comes straight from the story Fallout Equestria: Long Haul. Same for Marigold and the Seaddler, as well as a few of the medics brought in from Destruction Bay.


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** [[spoiler: An odd example with Hispano's 20mm autocannon, Suiza; the autocannon originally belonged to her sister, named Suiza. Following a crash-landing into a patch of killing joke with her cannon, they became one in the same. The autocannon wasn't just affectionately named by Hispano in remembrance, it ''literally is'' her sister.]]


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** Upon discovering the entrance to a pre-war gunsmith's personal bomb shelter, Static is quick to remark that the massive cog-shaped door familiar to any Fallout fan has one odd quirk - it opens backwards, relative to the Stables they've seen previously. Older Fallout fans will recognize that the door opening outwards rather than inwards is a staple of the Vaults in the Fallout games prior to Videogame/{{Fallout3}}.


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** Similarly on page 82, after Static and Night Strike finally get a reprieve from things and find the time to explore a gunsmith's bunker, the Valkyrie finishes processing the photos taken the page prior. [[spoiler: What they reveal is that Cerberus is now in control of a decent stockpile of proper tactical megaspell warheads, ones that while not as large as the Valkyrie's own are still multitudes more powerful than balefire eggs.]]
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* GuyInBack: The Valkyrie requires two to operate at full capacity, a pilot and another pony to work all the offensive, defensive, and surveillance equipment, operating the turrets or setting up the bombing computers for example. [[spoiler: After it is repaired and becomes airworthy again, Static fits this role.]]
** [[spoiler: During the attack on the remains of the Battered-Sea crater, Night Strike fills this role for Rangefinder and Fyre, acting as the gunner, loader, and commander for the tank while Rangefinder drove.]]
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** Mad Jack is one of [[{{Badass}} Fighting]] [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo Jack Churchill]].

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** Mad Jack is one of [[{{Badass}} Fighting]] [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo Fighting Jack Churchill]].
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* ElsewhereFic: Similar to its predicessor in this regard, but unique in that it follows in the wake of the original FalloutEquestria once the world has begun to recover. Very little is truly remarked upon save for the occasional mention of the conflict with the Enclave and occasional mentions of a near-legendary figure known as "the Lightbringer".

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* ElsewhereFic: Similar to its predicessor in this regard, but unique in that it follows in the wake of the original FalloutEquestria Fanfic/FalloutEquestria once the world has begun to recover. Very little is truly remarked upon save for the occasional mention of the conflict with the Enclave and occasional mentions of a near-legendary figure known as "the Lightbringer".

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** The primary weapon of Hispano, a griffon mercenary, is a 20mm autocannon. To put this in perspective, this is a gun as long as she is tall - and that's without the barrel extension, which adds another few feet to the length. Big Fucking Gun indeed.



* {{Crossover}}: The Seaddler's arrival serves as a short crossover with the short story Fallout Equestria: Frozen Contrails.
** Later on, mention of the character Hispano and several locations serve to tie Empty Quiver into the same canon as Fallout Equestria: Long Haul.
*** This comes to a head with both Hispano and her father Cora turning up in the Vanhoover Wasteland, albeit both ten years older than they were in Long Haul.



* {{Crossover}}: The Seaddler's arrival serves as a short crossover with the short story Fallout Equestria: Frozen Contrails.
** Later on, mention of the character Hispano and several locations serve to tie Empty Quiver into the same canon as Fallout Equestria: Long Haul.
*** This comes to a head with both Hispano and her father Cora turning up in the Vanhoover Wasteland, albeit both ten years older than they were in Long Haul.



** [[spoiler: And once again the utilized method for thoroughly disabling a siege mortar laying waste to Hopeville. Serves to make Night Strike question if they're really the good guys, what with them throwing these things around willy-nilly.]]



** One of the medics from Destruction Bay, a moose named Jean, has a definite Canadian accent going on from the few lines she's had so far.



** Then on page 78, right after a calm and positive outing where the Valkyrie finally takes to the skies once more, [[spoiler: the groups witnesses a mushroom cloud rising over Hopeville.]]

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*** This comes to a head with both Hispano and her father Cora turning up in the Vanhoover Wasteland, albeit both ten years older than they were in Long Haul.



* INeedAFreakingDrink: An occasional reaction from Scouring Charge at moments of extreme stress, not that it seems to slow him down much.

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* INeedAFreakingDrink: An occasional reaction from Scouring Charge at moments of extreme stress, not that it seems to slow him down much. Also the usual secondary reaction to anyone learning about Night Strike's and Static's odd genealogy.



* ScheduleSlip: Between sabotage, failures, explosions and sabotage by shiny things, the group rarely manages to stay on target for long. In fact, []spoiler: it's so bad that it takes the Vanhoover Five weeks just to find the generator they need to fix the Valkyrie.]] Out of universe, this is subverted by the creators themselves. Despite writing the fic for well over a year and a half, barring a couple of breaks, the writers have churned out chapters week after week without fail.

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* ScheduleSlip: Between sabotage, failures, explosions and sabotage by shiny things, the group rarely manages to stay on target for long. In fact, []spoiler: [[spoiler: it's so bad that it takes the Vanhoover Five weeks just to find the generator they need to fix the Valkyrie.]] Out of universe, this is subverted by the creators themselves. Despite writing the fic for well over a year and a half, barring a couple of breaks, the writers have churned out chapters week after week without fail.
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** [[spoiler: Though not as large as the other examples, the 88mm AA guns at the sub pen count, being expies of the [[NazisWithGnarlyWeapons 8.8cm Flak 37 AA/AT gun]]. By extension, this also includes Rheinmetall's tank's cannon, which is effectively the same gun.]]

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** [[spoiler: Though not as large as the other examples, the 88mm AA guns at the sub pen count, being expies of the [[NazisWithGnarlyWeapons [[UsefulNotes/NazisWithGnarlyWeapons 8.8cm Flak 37 AA/AT gun]]. By extension, this also includes Rheinmetall's tank's cannon, which is effectively the same gun.]]
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: [[spoiler: Quite late into the story, the group runs into a pony adamantly convinces that megaspells are an urban myth. A ghoul pony no less.]]

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* ArbitrarySkepticism: [[spoiler: Quite late into the story, the group runs into a pony adamantly convinces convinced that megaspells [[FantasticNuke megaspells]] are an urban myth. A Even after becoming rendered a ghoul pony no less.by the one used to destroy the Battered-Sea, he still clings to this belief, much to Night Strike's frustration.]]



* HeroofAnotherStory: Played with. Scouring Charge has more combat experience than the other heroes combined, and more experience with the wider wasteland. He even has his own FiveManBand and better contacts among some major Wasteland organisations. While he plays second fiddle to Night Strike and Static Charge, he also disappears for chunks of the story to pursue his own goals.

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* HeroofAnotherStory: HeroOfAnotherStory: Played with. Scouring Charge has had more combat experience than the other heroes combined, and more experience with the wider wasteland. Vanhoover wasteland on the whole. He even has is part of his own FiveManBand and holds better contacts among some major Wasteland organisations.organizations. While he plays second fiddle to Night Strike and Static Charge, he also disappears for chunks of the story to pursue his own goals.



** [[spoiler: The same thing happens again on their later arrival, where the corrupt guards try to steal a rather large cannon the heroes are trying to sell off. It only takes Static a few seconds to make them realise how bad an idea this would be.]]

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** [[spoiler: The same thing happens again on their later arrival, where the corrupt guards try to steal a rather large cannon the heroes are trying to sell off. It only takes Static a few seconds to make them realise realize how bad an idea this would be.]]



* ScheduleSlip: Between sabotage, failures, explosions and sabotage by shiny things, the group rarely manages to stay on target for long. In fact, [spoiler: it's so bad that it takes the Hanhoover Five weeks just to find the generator they need to fix the Valkyrie.]] Out of universe, this is subverted by the creators themselves. Despite writing the fic for well over a year, and barring a couple of breaks, the writers have churned out chapters week after week without fail.

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* ScheduleSlip: Between sabotage, failures, explosions and sabotage by shiny things, the group rarely manages to stay on target for long. In fact, [spoiler: []spoiler: it's so bad that it takes the Hanhoover Vanhoover Five weeks just to find the generator they need to fix the Valkyrie.]] Out of universe, this is subverted by the creators themselves. Despite writing the fic for well over a year, year and a half, barring a couple of breaks, the writers have churned out chapters week after week without fail.



* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Night Strike and Static Charge are each obsessed with Nuka Cola and Sunshine Sasparilla respectively. Almost half the fic's running gags surround their unyielding war over which beverage is better.

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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Night Strike and Static Charge are each obsessed with Nuka Cola and Sunshine Sasparilla Sparkle-Cola and, well, food in general respectively. Almost half the fic's running gags surround their unyielding war over which beverage is better.



** Then on page 78, right after a calm and positive outing [[spoiler: the groups witnesses a mushroom cloud rising over Hopeville.]]

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* HeroofAnotherStory: Played with. Scouring Charge has more combat experience than the other heroes combined, and more experience with the wider wasteland. He even has his own FiveManBand and better contacts among some major Wasteland organisations. While he plays second fiddle to Night Strike and Static Charge, he also disappears for chunks of the story to pursue his own goals.
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* ScheduleSlip: Between sabotage, failures, explosions and sabotage by shiny things, the group rarely manages to stay on target for long. In fact, [spoiler: it's so bad that it takes the Hanhoover Five weeks just to find the generator they need to fix the Valkyrie.]] Out of universe, this is subverted by the creators themselves. Despite writing the fic for well over a year, and barring a couple of breaks, the writers have churned out chapters week after week without fail.
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Night Strike and Static Charge are each obsessed with Nuka Cola and Sunshine Sasparilla respectively. Almost half the fic's running gags surround their unyielding war over which beverage is better.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: [[spoiler: Quite late into the story, the group runs into a pony adamantly convinces that megaspells are an urban myth. A ghoul pony no less.]]


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** Then on page 78, right after a calm and positive outing [[spoiler: the groups witnesses a mushroom cloud rising over Hopeville.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Night Strike lapses into a particularly brutal murderous rampage against a group of gryphon mercenaries after seeing Static take a shotgun blast to the torso. It takes Crash Dive forcibly shoving her onto the ground to get her back to her senses.]]


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** [[spoiler: Night Strike exhibits some symptoms of [=PTSD=] upon arrival back at the lighthouse as well. The source is likely from the surprise attack against them in the train tunnel, as she woke up screaming after hearing a sound byte of a jet aircraft flying overhead followed by a bomb exploding, part of a song played on Radio [=KAOS=].]]
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* NukeEm/NuclearOption: [[spoiler: The discussed and eventually utilized method for handling the Anglerpony colony at Shady Shores Bio Research. Also the method used to destroy a submarine harboring Anglerponies.]]

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* NukeEm/NuclearOption: NukeEm[=/=]NuclearOption: [[spoiler: The discussed and eventually utilized method for handling the Anglerpony colony at Shady Shores Bio Research. Also the method used to destroy a submarine harboring Anglerponies.]]

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* BeyondTheImpossible: The TGAF trio have not had spectacular luck in aircraft construction, bringing us this little gem;
--> Sharpwing, while discussing the fireproof fabric used for the Stork's flight surfaces: "That, and, uh, this was all they had left of it. Heavy Strike said that Fast Track set most of what wasn't used in the airship's balloon on fire... somehow."



* BoringButPractical: Averted by almost every character in the fic when it comes to weapons, save for the odd exception such as Aerith's tommy gun. Equally, while it doesn't make much explode, Static's magic-vision goggles have been surprisingly helpful in picking out certain foes.

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* BoringButPractical: Averted by almost every character in the fic when it comes to weapons, save for the odd exception such as Aerith's tommy gun.gun or Static's Pulaski fire tool. Equally, while it doesn't make much explode, Static's magic-vision goggles have been surprisingly helpful in picking out certain foes.



** One of the three competing teams in the air race consisted of a trio of ponies, [[Creator/JeremyClarkson one obsessed with POWER and hammers]], [[Creator/JamesMay another known for being slow in the speed department]], and [[Creator/RichardHammond one with the nickname 'hamster']]. Their team name had the initials TGAF. [[Series/TopGear What a bunch of petrolheads were doing building aircraft, the world may never know.]]

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** One of the three competing teams in the air race consisted of a trio of ponies, [[Creator/JeremyClarkson one obsessed with POWER and hammers]], [[Creator/JamesMay hammers, another known for being slow in the speed department]], department, and [[Creator/RichardHammond one with the nickname 'hamster']]. 'hamster'. Their team name had the initials TGAF.TGAF, and they named their eventual competing aircraft the Reliant Robin. [[Series/TopGear What a bunch of petrolheads were doing building aircraft, the world may never know.]]

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** One of the three competing teams in the air race consisted of a trio of ponies, [[Creator/JeremyClarkson one obsessed with POWER and hammers]], [[Creator/JamesMay another known for being slow in the speed department]], and [[Creator/RichardHammond one with the nickname 'hamster']]. Their team name had the initials TGAF. [[Series/TopGear What a bunch of petrolheads were doing building aircraft, the world may never know.]]



* NukeEm: [[spoiler: The discussed and eventually utilized method for handling the Anglerpony colony at Shady Shores Bio Research. Also the method used to destroy a submarine harboring Anglerponies.]]

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* NukeEm: NukeEm/NuclearOption: [[spoiler: The discussed and eventually utilized method for handling the Anglerpony colony at Shady Shores Bio Research. Also the method used to destroy a submarine harboring Anglerponies.]]


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** Happens again as they finally reach the Vanhoover Air Base, their last chance for finding a generator. [[spoiler: They do manage to find one, bolted to the back of a truck at that, but first there's a small matter of an [[ThoseMagnificentFlyingMachines air race...]]]]

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*** And brought on to be parodied by herself, upon realizing what actually was now living in the glowing remains of the battered-Sea Power Station.
--> "Hey, Rangefinder, can I see Fyre's gun for a sec? I need to... live up to my catchphrase."



** Another jab at Fallout comes in the form of Night Strike dispatching a raider ghoul that was charging them with a lead pipe. Upon closer inspection, the raider was revealed to have a grenade rifle on him, with ammunition, and left unused. This is a behavior notably seen with the [[Videogame/FalloutNewvegas Boomers]] of Nellis AFB, if made an enemy.



* {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw plenty of feral ghouls into its mists, and just happens to be home to a Kaiju.]]

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* {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw turn the local population into plenty of feral ghouls into in its mists, and just happens to be home to a Kaiju.]]



* [[spoiler: The monster is later revealed to be a {{kaiju}} sized Anglerpony, easily big enough to dwarf most buildings and swallow a pony whole. However, the battle itself is something of a subversion of the usual tropes. While still extremely frantic and terrifying, the monster's size works against it, making several [[AttackItsWeakPoint obvious]] [[ForMassiveDamage vulnerabilities]] all the easier to hit and severely slowing its speed. This allows it to be brought down in half a chapter thanks to a sustained barrage from several tanks.]]

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* ** [[spoiler: The monster is later revealed to be a {{kaiju}} sized Anglerpony, easily big enough to dwarf most buildings and swallow a pony whole. However, the battle itself is something of a subversion of the usual tropes. While still extremely frantic and terrifying, the monster's size works against it, making several [[AttackItsWeakPoint obvious]] [[ForMassiveDamage vulnerabilities]] all the easier to hit and severely slowing its speed. This allows it to be brought down in half a chapter thanks to a sustained barrage from several multiple tanks.]]



** Upon arriving at the remains of the Battered-Sea, the group encounters an [[spoiler: almost comically small]] anglerpony with an odd mutation granting it glowing eyes, mirroring the Red Death from [[Videogame/Fallout4 Far Harbor]]. [[spoiler: Unlike how the quest involving the Red Death actually concludes, the real monster of the Glowing-Sea crater proves far more dangerous and threatening.]]



* SuicidalOverconfidence: [[spoiler: Yeah Strikey, just wander off into the heavily irradiated crater alone while everyone's asleep, that'll end well. Static understandably chews her out over this after rescuing her from some ghouls.]]

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* SuicidalOverconfidence: [[spoiler: Yeah Strikey, just wander off into the heavily irradiated crater area surrounding a megaspell detonation alone while everyone's asleep, that'll end well. Static understandably chews her out over this after rescuing picking her up from some ghouls.just inside the irradiated zone.]]
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* {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw plenty of feral ghouls into its mists, and just happens to be hiding a Kaiju.]]

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* {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw plenty of feral ghouls into its mists, and just happens to be hiding home to a Kaiju.]]
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* Mordor: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw plenty of feral ghouls into its mists, and just happens to be hiding a Kaiju.]]

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* Mordor: {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler: Exploring the aftermath of a nuclear explosion is hardly the most hospitable location in Equestria, especially when it's had time to draw plenty of feral ghouls into its mists, and just happens to be hiding a Kaiju.]]

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