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* ChildSoldiers: Heavily discussed before being played straight. One of the driving conflicts of the fic is that NERV doesn't want to employ the three children as child Soldiers in their war against the Others, in direct contradiction to how NERV operates in most versions of Evangelion, both official and fan related, where nobody seems to bat an eye at the usage of child soldiers, and if they do, it isn't enough to convince anyone to oppose it. Here, NERV avoids doing so for the longest time, constantly trying to find grown humans who can pilot them instead, until an attack by one of the Messengers forces [[spoiler:Naoko to put Rei into an Evangelion for the first time, leading to said Messenger's destruction]]. Afterwards, NERV begins to grudgingly accept that they will have to employ the children as pilots, though [[spoiler:Gendo and Yui have yet to bring Shinji back from America for piloting purposes]].
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** The first wave of attacks by the Others on Arrival day targeted South America, Australia, Africa and the Middle East.
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** The original NERV pact formed to develop defenses against the Others is constantly marred by infighting, due to Gendo and Yui's distaste for the GEHIRN supervisory council chairman Lorenz Kihl's growing ambitions. [[spoiler: Eventually, Gendo leads the bulk of NERV to secede along with their Americans, British and Japanese backers, leaving Kihl to reorganize the remnants of GEHIRN into SEELE with French and German support.]]
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** The original NERV pact formed to develop defenses against the Others is constantly marred by infighting, due to Gendo and Yui's distaste for the GEHIRN supervisory council chairman Lorenz Kihl's growing ambitions. [[spoiler: Eventually, Gendo leads the bulk of NERV to secede along with their Americans, American, British and Japanese backers, leaving Kihl to reorganize the remnants of GEHIRN into SEELE with French and German support.]]
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* AdultFear: As Japan became increasingly militaristic following Arrival Day, Yui dreaded the thought that her then-unborn son Shinji would one day die in a far-off battlefield with a rifle in hand, a fear not assuaged when her adopted teenage daughter Misato announced she wanted to enlist in the JSSDF to join the fight against the Others once she was old enough. [[spoiler: Eight years later, Misato is critically wounded during a JSSDF operation in Indonesia, when her convoy is ambushed by a local terrorist militia.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: As Japan became increasingly militaristic following Arrival Day, Yui dreaded the thought that her then-unborn son Shinji would one day die in a far-off battlefield with a rifle in hand, a fear not assuaged when her adopted teenage daughter Misato announced she wanted to enlist in the JSSDF to join the fight against the Others once she was old enough. [[spoiler: Eight years later, Misato is critically wounded during a JSSDF operation in Indonesia, when her convoy is ambushed by a local terrorist militia.]]
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* ItIsPronouncedTroPAY: Shinji's bodyguard Hunter Vaas insists that his name is pronounced ''XOON-ter''. Justified as he is a Afrikaner (white South African descended from Dutch settlers).
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* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Shinji's bodyguard Hunter Vaas, an Afrikaner, explains that his name is pronounced XOON-ter.
