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The '''[=EQ=]'''uestria '''G'''irls '''M'''arvel '''U'''niverse ('''EQGMU''') is a series of fanfics by Equestrian Defender that adapts that characters from ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' into a shared universe with the ''MarvelUniverse'', heavily influenced by the ''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse'' but also has other bits and pieces of other Marvel pieces sprinkled in.
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The '''[=EQ=]'''uestria '''G'''irls '''M'''arvel '''U'''niverse ('''EQGMU''') is a series of fanfics by Equestrian Defender that adapts that characters from ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls'' into a shared universe with the ''MarvelUniverse'', ''Franchise/MarvelUniverse'', heavily influenced by the ''Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse'' but also has other bits and pieces of other Marvel pieces sprinkled in.
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** Miles Morales uses "Kid Arachnid" as his superhero name when he joins Team Spider. This is the name he used for himself in WesternAnimation/UltimateSpiderMan due to being on a team with the original Spider-Man so they don't use the same name.
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** Miles Morales uses "Kid Arachnid" as his superhero name when he joins Team Spider. This is the name he used for himself in WesternAnimation/UltimateSpiderMan ''WesternAnimation/UltimateSpiderMan2012'' due to being on a team with the original Spider-Man so they don't use the same name.
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** When Flash was bitten by the radioactive spider, he claims his scream was an impression of Tom from WesternAnimation/TomAndJerry.
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** When Flash was bitten by the radioactive spider, he claims his scream was an impression of Tom from WesternAnimation/TomAndJerry.''WesternAnimation/TomAndJerry''.
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** The Rainbooms all show disgust at the infamous sewer orgy from Literature/{{It}}. Rainbow even asks what the hell Stephen King was smoking when he thought of that scene.
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** The Rainbooms all show disgust at the infamous sewer orgy from Literature/{{It}}.''Literature/{{It}}''. Rainbow even asks what the hell Stephen King was smoking when he thought of that scene.
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* CurseCutShort: Spider-Girl interrupts Stinger when he tries cursing at her twice, by [[TalkToTheFist attacking him while he tries to curse]].
-->'''Spider-Girl:''' WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE!
-->'''Spider-Girl:''' WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE!
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* FauxAffablyEvil: The leader of the thugs that tries to rape Derpy tries to talk sweet to her, only further highlighting his disgusting actions. He calls her "luv" and promises they will let her and her daughter go once he is done having "fun" with her, saying this to her even as he has her pinned down and has a [[SlasherSmile lecherous grin]] on his face, and his two other thugs have Dinky restrained, only to immediately follow this up by warning her to cooperate and stop struggling or else Dinky will get raped too.
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* CreateYourOwnHero: Twilight becomes Spider-Girl in the wake of her brother's murder. She decides to avenge him by becoming a hero and taking down the assassin and the Storm King, the one who ordered the murder. When she confronts Stinger, she even tells him that she is "a monster he and the Storm King created".
* SlasherSmile: The thug that tries to rape Derpy has an absolutely lecherous grin as he pins her down.
* TermsOfEndangerment: The thug that tries to rape Derpy addresses her as "luv".
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* AttemptedRape: Three thugs attack Derpy and Dinky, with the leader pinning Derpy down to rape her while the other two thugs restrain Dinky. The leader claims they'll let the two of them go once he is done having "fun" with her, but if she doesn't stop struggling then [[WouldHurtAChild one of the thugs will have some "fun" of his own with Dinky]]. Luckily, before any of them can do anything, Spider-Girl swings to the rescue, knocking out the would-be-rapists and saving the mother and daughter from harm.
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* WouldHurtAChild: When Derpy and Dinky are attacked by three rapists, two of them hold down Dinky together while their leader has Derpy pinned down. The leader also says that if Derpy keeps struggling, he'll let Bosco, one of the other thugs, have some "fun" of his own with her daughter. Luckily they never get the chance to do anything, with SPider-Girl swinging in and knocking the rapists out.
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* WouldHurtAChild: When Derpy and Dinky are attacked by three rapists, two of them hold down Dinky together while their leader has Derpy pinned down. The leader also says that if Derpy keeps struggling, he'll let Bosco, one of the other thugs, have some "fun" of his own with her daughter. Luckily they never get the chance to do anything, with SPider-Girl Spider-Girl swinging in and knocking the rapists out.
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* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Spider-Girl does this to Dinky when the child thanks her for saving her and her mother.
* AgeLift: Derpy in canon is a teenager attending CHS, but here she is an adult and has a daughter.
* AgeLift: Derpy in canon is a teenager attending CHS, but here she is an adult and has a daughter.
* AndThisIsFor: When Spider-Girl successfully lures Stinger into an ambush, she silently says that this is for her brother, Shining Armor.
* BigDamnHeroes: Shortly after taking down Stinger and leaving him for the police, Spider-Girl notices Derpy and Dinky being attacked and restrained by three rapists. As soon as she hears what the leader says to Derpy, she immediately swings into action, knocking out all three thugs and rescuing the mother and daughter from harm.
* CurbStompBattle: Spider-Girl dishes one out to Stinger, leaving him with several broken bones in various places, including cracked ribs, a broken right arm, two broken legs, and a broken jaw. Shortly after this, she delivers another less brutal but just as satisfying one to three rapists who attack Derpy and Dinky.
* InUniverseCatharsis: Stormy Sentry and several other cops feel this when they see Stinger beaten to a bloody pulp and webbed up for them, with enough evidence nearby to put him away for life.
* StarterVillain: The first criminal Spider-Girl takes down in her superhero career is Stinger, the hitman that murdered her brother.
* TeethFlying: Spider-Girl knocks out several of Stinger's teeth when she attacks him.
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* WhoAreYou: The dirty cop Loose Brick asks this when he's attacked by Spider-Girl. She replies "ImYourWorstNightmare."
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* WhoAreYou: The dirty cop Loose Brick asks this when he's attacked by Spider-Girl. She replies "ImYourWorstNightmare."" Stinger later asks the same thing when she attacks him, and this time she replies "[[ImAMonster I'm the monster you and the Storm King created]],".
* WouldHurtAChild: When Derpy and Dinky are attacked by three rapists, two of them hold down Dinky together while their leader has Derpy pinned down. The leader also says that if Derpy keeps struggling, he'll let Bosco, one of the other thugs, have some "fun" of his own with her daughter. Luckily they never get the chance to do anything, with SPider-Girl swinging in and knocking the rapists out.
* WhyWontYouDie: Stinger screams at Spider-Girl to "JUST DIE!" when she dodges a shot from his gun. When she continues to dodge he is reduced to shouting "DIE!" each time he shoots.
* WouldHurtAChild: When Derpy and Dinky are attacked by three rapists, two of them hold down Dinky together while their leader has Derpy pinned down. The leader also says that if Derpy keeps struggling, he'll let Bosco, one of the other thugs, have some "fun" of his own with her daughter. Luckily they never get the chance to do anything, with SPider-Girl swinging in and knocking the rapists out.
* WhyWontYouDie: Stinger screams at Spider-Girl to "JUST DIE!" when she dodges a shot from his gun. When she continues to dodge he is reduced to shouting "DIE!" each time he shoots.
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* ShoutOut: Spike and Flurry Heart watch ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls'', which Flurry Heart really enjoys.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Spike and Flurry Heart watch ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls'', which Flurry Heart really enjoys.
** Spike and Flurry Heart watch ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls'', which Flurry Heart really enjoys.
