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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their custody''. Due to the very recent transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people with many doubting their ability to rule over Liyue, leaving them running around to do damage control.]]
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* {{Workaholic}}: Between grinding his combat stats, spending time with Zhongli, grinding his non-combat stats through music, and keeping up on his cover job at the bank, Ajax averages about five hours of sleep per night and lives on sugar and caffeine. [[spoiler: And initially, he was also motivated to drown himself in work so he didn't have to think about the life he lost when he died.]]
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* {{Workaholic}}: Between grinding his combat stats, spending time with Zhongli, grinding his non-combat stats through music, and keeping up on his cover job at the bank, Ajax averages about five hours of sleep per night and lives on sugar and caffeine. [[spoiler: And initially, he was also motivated to drown himself in work so he didn't have to think about the life he lost when he died.]]]]
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* ChildSoldier: Tartaglia was fourteen years old when he was recruited into the Fatui. [[spoiler: When Ajax is being vetted by Diluc, Jean, and Kaeya, they are all horrified that a civilian child was sold into the Fatui military for a condition (Abyssal Taint) that no one had no idea how to treat or cared to treat at all]].
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* EveryoneHasStandards: [[spoiler: Even Diluc who isn't thrilled to be dealing with a former Harbinger is horrified that Tartaglia was essentially a civilian child sold off to an army with a harmful condition that their god purposely let fester before he was sent off to a suicide mission that he was likely to fail due to the fact that the Fatui's Vangard was possibly the worst person to send off on an assignment that required ''diplomacy''.]]
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** [[spoiler: Venti is sweating bullets when he realizes that Ajax's fiance is his old friend Morax who would likely subject him to being stoned by mountain should he realize that he's having Ajax cook for him.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: La Signora was so obsessed with getting revenge on Tartaglia that she [[spoiler: purposely framed him for releasing Osial and several murders of millileth officers with the hope that he would get incarcerated and likely executed for the crimes. This in turn leads to a number of events that eventually end up with her being demoted before being forced on the run as the Tsaritsa is forced to execute her and deliver her head to Morax lest he threaten to destroy the Cryo Archon's plans by telling Celestia about the rebellion she plans against them.]]
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* AngerBornOutOfWorry: [[spoiler: When Lumine and Paimon meet Ajax alive and well in Mondstadt, Lumine is so angry that she tries to skewer Ajax while screaming at him.]]
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* AngerBornOutOfWorry: AngerBornOfWorry: [[spoiler: When Lumine and Paimon meet Ajax alive and well in Mondstadt, Lumine is so angry that she tries to skewer Ajax while screaming at him.]]
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler: Even though Zhongli has mellowed out compared to how he was in the midst of the Archon Wars, he held the title of the Warrior God for a reason as the Tsaritsa and now Lumine are finding out. According to Venti, it would take the other six Archons to be able to land a blow against the oldest Archon.]]
* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Zhongli blames himself when he is told that Ajax is dead.]]
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* OhCrap: Ajax gets this when he visits Guyun Stone Forest and realizes just how ''dangerous'' [[EldritchAbomination Osial]] is in this universe.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Ajax gets this when he visits Guyun Stone Forest and realizes just how ''dangerous'' [[EldritchAbomination Osial]] is in thisuniverse.universe.
** [[spoiler: When Zhongli walks to the administrative building after being told that Ajax had 'died', everyone has this reaction when they feel the pressure of his power and realize that the Weirdo Funeral Consultant is actually an Adeptus.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganyu also has this reaction when she realizes that Rex Lapis isn't actually dead and that he's so angry not only is his power leaking out but his mortal disguise is barely holding itself together.]]
** Ajax gets this when he visits Guyun Stone Forest and realizes just how ''dangerous'' [[EldritchAbomination Osial]] is in this
** [[spoiler: When Zhongli walks to the administrative building after being told that Ajax had 'died', everyone has this reaction when they feel the pressure of his power and realize that the Weirdo Funeral Consultant is actually an Adeptus.]]
** [[spoiler: Ganyu also has this reaction when she realizes that Rex Lapis isn't actually dead and that he's so angry not only is his power leaking out but his mortal disguise is barely holding itself together.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their watch''. Due to the very recent transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people with many doubting their ability to rule over Liyue, leaving them running around to do damage control.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their watch''.custody''. Due to the very recent transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people with many doubting their ability to rule over Liyue, leaving them running around to do damage control.]]
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* AngerBornOutOfWorry: [[spoiler: When Lumine and Paimon meet Ajax alive and well in Mondstadt, Lumine is so angry that she tries to skewer Ajax while screaming at him.]]
-->[[spoiler: "WE THOUGHT YOU DIED AND YOU’VE JUST BEEN RELAXING IN MONDSTADT?! DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU’VE PUT US ALL THROUGH?"]]
-->[[spoiler: "WE THOUGHT YOU DIED AND YOU’VE JUST BEEN RELAXING IN MONDSTADT?! DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU’VE PUT US ALL THROUGH?"]]
** [[spoiler: While helping Ajax break out of prison, Hu Tao purposely fakes Ajax's death by burning the corpse she brought along with her to make it unrecognizeable and have people believe that he died. Unfortunately, it works a little ''too'' well because the aftermath of faking Ajax's death leads to the Qixing having to deal with a political fall out from the citizens mourning Ajax's death and Snezhnaya who no doubt will demand answers for the death of the Harbinger that had died in their custody.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: How Xiao feels in the aftermath of Ajax's 'death' due to learning that the Geo Archon isn't really dead but had released Osial and endangered Liyue on the Tsaritsa ''and'' Rex Lapis orders. Even moreso when Zhongli is utterly shattered and his grief threatens to drown the nation.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: How Xiao feels in the aftermath of Ajax's 'death' due to learning that not only is the Geo Archon isn't not really dead dead, but that Ajax had released Osial and endangered Liyue on the Tsaritsa ''and'' Rex Lapis orders. Even moreso when Zhongli is utterly shattered and his grief threatens to drown the nation.]]
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: When Xiao confronts Ajax when the latter is in prison, he says this to the Yaksha to explain his role in the entire thing:]]
--> [[spoiler:"Because the gods will it, so it must be done."]]
--> [[spoiler:"Because the gods will it, so it must be done."]]
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* LovedByAll: The new, transmigrated Ajax manages to slowly build this reputation for Tartaglia once he takes over his life- though anyone who knew "Tartaglia" before the transmigration is significantly harder to win over.
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* LovedByAll: The new, transmigrated Ajax manages to slowly build this reputation for Tartaglia once he takes over his life- though anyone who knew "Tartaglia" before the transmigration is significantly harder to win over. [[spoiler: His reputation is so great that when Ajax is put on trial on trumped up charges, many people refuse to believe he is guilty and gather to protest. When he 'dies', the outrage and backlash is so great that the Qixing find themselves dealing with a large political fallout in the aftermath, having to run around and do damage control. And that doesn't even go into how Zhongli's grief alone is causing violent earthquakes that threaten to drown the city.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: How Xiao feels in the aftermath of Ajax's 'death' due to learning that the Geo Archon isn't really dead but had released Osial and endangered Liyue on the Tsaritsa ''and'' Rex Lapis orders. Even moreso when Zhongli is utterly shattered and his grief threatens to drown the nation.]]
--> [[spoiler:If only he had been kinder. If only he had asked more questions. If only he had stayed just a second longer. If only he had kept a more vigilant eye on things—]]
--> [[spoiler:Then, Childe would still be alive and his Lord Lapis wouldn’t be losing himself to his sorrow and terrifying rage.]]
--> [[spoiler:If only he had been kinder. If only he had asked more questions. If only he had stayed just a second longer. If only he had kept a more vigilant eye on things—]]
--> [[spoiler:Then, Childe would still be alive and his Lord Lapis wouldn’t be losing himself to his sorrow and terrifying rage.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their watch''. Due to the transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people and left them running around to do damage control.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their watch''. Due to the very recent transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people and left with many doubting their ability to rule over Liyue, leaving them running around to do damage control.]]
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* FrameUp: [[spoiler: Zigzagged in that while Ajax did release Osial, he ''was'' framed by La Signora for the murders of six milileth officers.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler: Despite the fact that Ajax is a Snezhnaya diplomat, he was a very popular figure among the people of Liyue to the point that there was outrage and backlash when he was arrested and hit with false charges. So Ajax's 'death' underneath the watch of the Qixing becomes a political nightmare for them, especially since they can't provide proper answers as to how the body in the cell was immolated when he was ''supposed to be under their watch''. Due to the transition of ruling power from Rex Lapis to the Qixing, the Qixing are in a very precarious position and Ajax's 'death' has cost them a lot of trust from the people and left them running around to do damage control.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: {{Downplayed}} and {{Justified}}. As elaborated on below, canon Childe is essentially a DecompositeCharacter in this fic. Ajax--also partly thanks to his different background--takes on the positive and 'good' aspects of his character while the other...
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* AdaptationalHeroism: {{Downplayed}} and {{Justified}}.[[JustifiedTrope Justified]]. As elaborated on below, canon Childe is essentially a DecompositeCharacter in this fic. Ajax--also partly thanks to his different background--takes on the positive and 'good' aspects of his character while the other...
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* DoubleStandardRapeSciFi: [[spoiler:Ajax is horror-struck when he finally understands ''who'' AR previously was, frantically apologizing for using Tartaglia's body to date Zhongli without a care for the original goods' gender preferences. AR is surprisingly cool with that, claiming he's dead and has no further use for his former body and as such, Ajax is allowed to do whatever he wishes with it.]]
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Invoked -- [[spoiler:when Ajax ultimately finds himself unable to unleash Osial, AR hijacks their body to assume the role of the Eleventh Harbinger, claiming Childe is too soft-hearted in front of Lumine and Paimon.]]
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* MysteriousPast: In-universe, the "original" Genshin Impact game that Ajax played didn't give Tartaglia a backstory. The world Ajax finds himself in uses the IRL-cannon backstory about Tartaglia falling into the Abyss, which Ajax has to piece together from context clues.
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* MysteriousPast: In-universe, the "original" Genshin Impact game that Ajax played didn't give Tartaglia a backstory. The world Ajax finds himself in uses the IRL-cannon IRL-canon backstory about Tartaglia falling into the Abyss, which Ajax has to piece together from context clues.
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See this post for why these don't fit the trope.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Ajax, as is typical for the protagonists of the "reincarnated into a piece of media" type of SubGenre, initially takes his situation in stride. [[spoiler: However, as mentioned above, it doesn't take long for him to be increasingly reminded of the fact that he's ''dead'' in his old world and that his loved ones are gone to him with no hope of reconnecting. The earlier chapters show him, essentially, dealing with the five stages of grief as he's forced to confront the gravity of how he ended up in his situation.]]
** This is also the case for the "reincarnated as an already existing character" trope of said sub-genre, with Ajax becoming more and more [[spoiler: unnerved at the idea of taking over the life of another person--including lying to that person's possible loved ones and learning personal information about them.]]
** This is also the case for the "reincarnated as an already existing character" trope of said sub-genre, with Ajax becoming more and more [[spoiler: unnerved at the idea of taking over the life of another person--including lying to that person's possible loved ones and learning personal information about them.]]
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* MirrorCharacter: [[spoiler: One of the side-chapters, as well as Ajax's backstory, implies that Ajax was chosen as a transmigrator specifically because he's one of these for the original Tartaglia. He looked like a scrawnier version of Tartaglia in his original world, and they have the same birth name.]]
** Personality-wise, Ajax is what Tartaglia could've become if A) [[TheCorruption Abyssal Taint]] wasn't a thing, B) society had punished him for using violence to express his childhood trauma, instead of [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority making him a high-ranking officer]] in a DecadentCourt, and C) his mental health, festered by said Abyssal Taint and the mistreatment of his peers, wasn't deliberately neglected by the adults who govern him.
** Personality-wise, Ajax is what Tartaglia could've become if A) [[TheCorruption Abyssal Taint]] wasn't a thing, B) society had punished him for using violence to express his childhood trauma, instead of [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority making him a high-ranking officer]] in a DecadentCourt, and C) his mental health, festered by said Abyssal Taint and the mistreatment of his peers, wasn't deliberately neglected by the adults who govern him.
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* MirrorCharacter: [[spoiler: One of the side-chapters, as well as Ajax's backstory, implies that Ajax was chosen as a transmigrator specifically because he's one of these for the original Tartaglia. He looked like a scrawnier version of Tartaglia in his original world, and they have the same birth name.]]
**]] Personality-wise, Ajax is what Tartaglia could've become if A) [[TheCorruption Abyssal Taint]] wasn't a thing, B) society had punished him for using violence to express his childhood trauma, instead of [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority [[AsskickingLeadsToLeadership making him a high-ranking officer]] in a DecadentCourt, and C) his mental health, festered by said Abyssal Taint and the mistreatment of his peers, wasn't deliberately neglected by the adults who govern him.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: La Signora is ''infuriated'' to learn that [[spoiler:Morax is gleefully seducing the Eleventh Harbinger, one of the most high-ranked followers of the Tsaritsa]], considering it "an insult to Her Imperial Highness".
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* {{Irony}}: Rex Lapis is more happy and delighted to receive Ajax's genuine and loving prayers and worship than Liyue's devotion, in spite of the Harbinger being a follower of the Cryon Archon.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The Adepti are slightly baffled to see how ''possessive'' Rex Lapis is towards a mortal who technically worhips another Archon, but very much support the relationship because they want for their lord to finally enjoy a lifetime of happiness after all his millenia of watching over Liyue.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The Adepti are slightly baffled to see how ''possessive'' Rex Lapis is towards a mortal who technically worhips another Archon, but very much support the relationship because they want for their lord to finally enjoy a lifetime of happiness after all his millenia of watching over Liyue.
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* {{Irony}}: Rex Lapis is more happy and delighted to receive Ajax's genuine and loving prayers and worship than Liyue's devotion, in spite of the Harbinger being a follower of the Cryon Cryo Archon.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The Adepti are slightly baffled to see how ''possessive'' Rex Lapis is towards a mortal who technicallyworhips worships another Archon, but very much support the relationship because they want for their lord to finally enjoy a lifetime of happiness after all his millenia of watching over Liyue.
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The Adepti are slightly baffled to see how ''possessive'' Rex Lapis is towards a mortal who technically