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A World Wide Punomenon cleanup. Incredibly Lame Pun is the pothole magnet; World Of Pun is for worlds that use many puns
* {{Pun}}: After Ebony suggests Frenching passively to Draco, he starts insulting her ''in French''. Passively.
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: After Ebony suggests Frenching passively to Draco, he starts insulting her ''in French''. Passively.
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* ActionGirl: Charlie Plenty.
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* BigBad: Tara Gilesbe is the Big Bad of for the first one, with Jenny as her {{Dragon}}.
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* BigFuckingGun: Charlie has a couple.
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* ForTheLulz: Jenny admits to having helped write My Immortal [[{{Troll}} just for shits and giggles.]] Tara, on the other hand, is just that stupid.
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* ForTheLulz: ForTheEvulz: Jenny admits to having helped write My Immortal [[{{Troll}} just for shits and giggles.]] giggles]]. Tara, on the other hand, is just that stupid.
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* InteractiveNarrator: To the point where she can be taken hostage, show up to fight Jenny and Tara, be yelled at, and be killed and promptly replaced.
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* InteractiveNarrator: To the point where she can be taken hostage, show up to fight Jenny and Tara, be yelled at, and be killed and promptly replaced.InteractiveNarrator
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** JerkSue: Ebony
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** MarySueClassic:SapphireSapphire.
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* MeanBoss: Despite being a good guy, October is very strict and cold to her employees.
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* NotSoHarmless: Tara, while a complete idiot, is competent enough to tie up the narrator and run the fanfic herself for a whole chapter.
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* {{Wangst}}: Sapphire, ''constantly''. Lampshaded InUniverse:
-->"How tragic of a past can someone have?"
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* TheFaceless: [[spoiler:The Anonymous, who always keeps her face hidden, even from Missy.]]
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* VillainEpisode: Chapter 11 of ''Sapphire'' focuses solely on [[spoiler:Missy, [[BigBad the Anonymous]], and their efforts to get other bad fanfic writers to band together.]]
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* SequelHook: The epilogue of ''Ebony vs. Canon'' has Sapphire arrive.
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* NotSoStotic: [[spoiler:October when the HQ burns down.]]
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* NotSoStotic: NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:October when the HQ burns down.]]
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* NotSoStotic: [[spoiler:October when the HQ burns down.]]
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** And if October shows emotion beyond being annoyed, something's gone wrong.
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** When Sapphire pops up in the StarTrek universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
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** When Sapphire pops up in the StarTrek ''Franchise/StarTrek'' universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
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The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness verity. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces.
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The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness verity.variety. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces.
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: After Ebony suggests Franching passively to Draco, he starts insulting her ''in French''. Passively.
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* MarySueHunter: The entire point of the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association).
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* MoodWhiplash: Sapphire vs. Canon starts off as another humorous parody, but this time with an entire team of [[MarySueHunter Mary Sue exterminators]]! [[spoiler:Oh, and by the way, one of the interns for the MSEA is a traitor. Also, the HQ just caught on fire.]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If ''Charlie'' appears to be bothered by something, something really bad is going down.
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* WhamLine: Chapter 9 of ''Sapphire'':
-->'''Gigi:''' [[spoiler:Something's happened. The HQ caught on fire. Only one out of six people made it out.]]
-->'''Gigi:''' [[spoiler:Something's happened. The HQ caught on fire. Only one out of six people made it out.]]
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* AWorldwidePunomenon: After Ebony suggests Franching passively to Draco, he starts insulting her ''in French''. Passively.
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** She also says "Shit!" eight times in a row in chapter five. Charlie, of course, calls her out on this.
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** She also says "Shit!" eight times in a row in chapter five. Charlie, Brandon, of course, calls her out on this.
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** "[[WebOriginal/AtopTheFourthWall Eh, it's magic, so you don't have to explain it.]]"
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* GirlsWithGuns: Charlie
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* GunsAkimbo: Charlie holds two pistols in each hand during her first encounter with Sapphire.
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* GunsAkimbo: Charlie holds two pistols a pistol in each hand during her first encounter with Sapphire.
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* HostileShowTakeover: Tara barges into the narrator's office and takes over the fic for a chapter. The narrator still manages to get a few snarky comments in, though.
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** PuritySue: Sapphire
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* MSTMantra: The author advises her readers to follow this.
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* {{Wangst}}: Sapphire, ''constantly''. Lampshaded:
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* {{Wangst}}: Sapphire, ''constantly''. Lampshaded:Lampshaded InUniverse:
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* HereWeGoAgain: ''Ebony vs. Canon'' ends with a new Mary Sue showing up in her place.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Every time a Mary Sue dies, a new one is born in it's place. And the Sue that replaced Ebony is even WORSE.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Hermione's reaction to meeting Sapphire.
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* BadBoss: Despite being a good guy, October is very strict and cold to her employees.
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* [[ClusterFBomb Cluster SOB Bomb]]: October in chapter 6. In fact, for half the chapter, "son of a bitch" is all she says.
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* [[ClusterFBomb Cluster SOB Bomb]]: October in chapter 6. In fact, for half the chapter, "son of a bitch" is all she says.says.
** She also says "shit!" a total of eight times in a row when she realizes she and her team aren't alone in the Room of Requirement.
* CuteWitch: Aphrodite, who is very good at magic and spells. She's not ''quite'' old enough to be a HotWitch yet.
** She also says "shit!" a total of eight times in a row when she realizes she and her team aren't alone in the Room of Requirement.
* CuteWitch: Aphrodite, who is very good at magic and spells. She's not ''quite'' old enough to be a HotWitch yet.
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* GilliganCut: About the Harry Potter characters helping the MSEA:
-->'''October:''' The answer is no, and that's final.
-->'''Ginny:''' ''(clears throat)''
-->''(next section)''
-->'''Aphrodite:''' ''(sitting with the HP characters in the MSEA lounge)'' [[LampshadeHanging How does she do that?]]
* GirlFriday: Gigi, whose main roles in the MSEA are to transport other exterminators, track Sues, and keep an eye on [[TheIntern Missy]].
* GirlsWithGuns: Charlie
-->'''October:''' The answer is no, and that's final.
-->'''Ginny:''' ''(clears throat)''
-->''(next section)''
-->'''Aphrodite:''' ''(sitting with the HP characters in the MSEA lounge)'' [[LampshadeHanging How does she do that?]]
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** She also says "Shit!" eight times in a row in chapter five. Charlie, of course, calls her out on this.
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* VerbalBusinessCard: Courtesy of Charlie.
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* [[ClusterFBomb Cluster SOB Bomb]]: October in chapter 6. In fact, for half the chapter, "son of a bitch" is all she says.
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* HypocriticalHumor: October has a strict "no swearing on the job" policy, and is show enforcing it, getting annoyed with Charlie for saying "hell" while she's on-duty. When Sapphire is revealed to be a RealityWarper, she lets out a "Oh, son of a bitch!" And she keeps on repeating the line for a good half-chapter or so.
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* LastNameBasis: October calls her team by their last names while she's on the job, but as shown with a couple lines, this isn't the case when she's off-duty.
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* GunsAkimbo: Charlie holds two pistols in each hand during her first encounter with Sapphire.
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* RealityWarper: Sapphire
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* ForTheLulz: Jenny admits to having helped write My Immortal [[{{Troll}} just for shits and giggles.]] Tara, on the other hand, is just that stupid.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Charlie's real name is Charlotte, but no one ever calls her that.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Sapphire, what with being a PuritySue and all.
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* MSTMantra: The author advises her readers to follow this.
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''Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way vs. Canon'' is a HarryPotter fanfiction by Cookie [=VanDeKamp=]. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7351304/1/ here.]] The story begins on a normal day for Ron, Hermione, and Harry. And then... [[Fanfic/MyImmortal a certain Mary Sue shows up.]] After a few chapters of watching Ebony torment the students of Hogwarts, the Trio, Ginny, Luna, and Draco make it their business to get rid of her, once and for all.
The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness verity. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces.
!Tropes found in these fanfics...
* AbusiveParents: Sapphire's adoptive father.
* ActionGirl: Charlie
* AffablyEvil: If you look over the fact that she helped unleash Ebony, Jenny isn't such a bad girl to be around.
* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: Aphrodite, October, Charlie.
** Luna, Hermione, Ginny.
* BetterThanABareBulb: Most tropes that pop up are lampshaded. Repeatedly.
* BigBad: Tara Gilesbe is the Big Bad of the first one, with Jenny as her {{Dragon}}.
** There appears to be a new BigBad for the second one, though we don't know who it is yet. [[spoiler:Missy appears to be a spy for her.]]
* BigFuckingGun: Charlie has a couple.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jenny, who turns out to be a pretty nasty piece of work.
* CuteWitch: Aphrodite, who is very good at magic and spells.
* DeadpanSnarker: Almost everyone is this at some point.
* DragonInChief: Jenny is far smarter, and thus, more dangerous than Tara.
* EnemyMine: Harry and co. call a truce with Draco so they can take out Ebony (and later, Sapphire).
* EvilDuo: Tara and Jenny.
* FairPlayVillain: Tara and Jenny, but mostly Jenny.
* FiveManBand: The MSEA
** TheHero: October
** TheLancer: Brandon
** TheBigGuy: Charlie
** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
** TheChick: Aphrodite
** TheSixthRanger: Missy
** The canon characters can also be viewed as this:
** TheHero: Harry
** TheLancer: Ron
** TheBigGuy: Ginny
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione
** TheChick: Luna
** TheSixthRanger: Draco
* {{Foil}}: Sapphire for Ebony. Both are Sues, but in completely different ways.
* GracefulLoser: After they are defeated, Jenny and Tara don't do much of anything besides say, "Not cool!" and then seem to leave it at that.
* InteractiveNarrator: To the point where she can be taken hostage, show up to fight Jenny and Tara, be yelled at, and be killed and promptly replaced.
* TheIntern: Missy Shadows, a high school student interning for the MSEA.
* KaleidoscopeEyes: Sapphire's eyes ''somehow'' change color every day.
* MarySueTropes: [[LampshadeHanging All]] [[DiscussedTrope used]] [[ParodiedTrope extensively]] {{InUniverse}}.
** JerkSue: Ebony
** MarySueClassic: Sapphire
** PuritySue: Sapphire
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Missy is apparently working for the BigBad.]]
* NoFourthWall: '''''NONE.'''''
* NonActionGuy: Brandon
* NotSoHarmless: Tara, while a complete idiot, is competent enough to tie up the narrator and run the fanfic herself for a whole chapter.
* PurpleProse: Whenever a Sue's outfit is described. PlayedForLaughs and often lampshaded.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Draco, towards Ebony. Justified, as, well, she isn't. Good luck telling her that, though.
* ShoutOut:
** "[[Film/ThePrincessBride Hello.]] [[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Charlie Duncan.]] You killed my favorite series. PrepareToDie."
** "[[WebOriginal/AtopTheFourthWall Eh, it's magic, so you don't have to explain it.]]"
** When Sapphire pops up in the StarTrek universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
* SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler:Missy]]
* TeensAreMonsters: Jenny and Tara
* TownGirls: The three main female members of the MSEA. Aphrodite is the femme one, Charlie is the butch one, and October is the neutral one.
* {{Wangst}}: Sapphire, ''constantly''. Lampshaded:
-->"How tragic of a past can someone have?"
* WorldOfSnark
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Aphrodite's electric blue hair
The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness verity. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces.
!Tropes found in these fanfics...
* AbusiveParents: Sapphire's adoptive father.
* ActionGirl: Charlie
* AffablyEvil: If you look over the fact that she helped unleash Ebony, Jenny isn't such a bad girl to be around.
* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: Aphrodite, October, Charlie.
** Luna, Hermione, Ginny.
* BetterThanABareBulb: Most tropes that pop up are lampshaded. Repeatedly.
* BigBad: Tara Gilesbe is the Big Bad of the first one, with Jenny as her {{Dragon}}.
** There appears to be a new BigBad for the second one, though we don't know who it is yet. [[spoiler:Missy appears to be a spy for her.]]
* BigFuckingGun: Charlie has a couple.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jenny, who turns out to be a pretty nasty piece of work.
* CuteWitch: Aphrodite, who is very good at magic and spells.
* DeadpanSnarker: Almost everyone is this at some point.
* DragonInChief: Jenny is far smarter, and thus, more dangerous than Tara.
* EnemyMine: Harry and co. call a truce with Draco so they can take out Ebony (and later, Sapphire).
* EvilDuo: Tara and Jenny.
* FairPlayVillain: Tara and Jenny, but mostly Jenny.
* FiveManBand: The MSEA
** TheHero: October
** TheLancer: Brandon
** TheBigGuy: Charlie
** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
** TheChick: Aphrodite
** TheSixthRanger: Missy
** The canon characters can also be viewed as this:
** TheHero: Harry
** TheLancer: Ron
** TheBigGuy: Ginny
** TheSmartGuy: Hermione
** TheChick: Luna
** TheSixthRanger: Draco
* {{Foil}}: Sapphire for Ebony. Both are Sues, but in completely different ways.
* GracefulLoser: After they are defeated, Jenny and Tara don't do much of anything besides say, "Not cool!" and then seem to leave it at that.
* InteractiveNarrator: To the point where she can be taken hostage, show up to fight Jenny and Tara, be yelled at, and be killed and promptly replaced.
* TheIntern: Missy Shadows, a high school student interning for the MSEA.
* KaleidoscopeEyes: Sapphire's eyes ''somehow'' change color every day.
* MarySueTropes: [[LampshadeHanging All]] [[DiscussedTrope used]] [[ParodiedTrope extensively]] {{InUniverse}}.
** JerkSue: Ebony
** MarySueClassic: Sapphire
** PuritySue: Sapphire
* TheMole: [[spoiler:Missy is apparently working for the BigBad.]]
* NoFourthWall: '''''NONE.'''''
* NonActionGuy: Brandon
* NotSoHarmless: Tara, while a complete idiot, is competent enough to tie up the narrator and run the fanfic herself for a whole chapter.
* PurpleProse: Whenever a Sue's outfit is described. PlayedForLaughs and often lampshaded.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Draco, towards Ebony. Justified, as, well, she isn't. Good luck telling her that, though.
* ShoutOut:
** "[[Film/ThePrincessBride Hello.]] [[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Charlie Duncan.]] You killed my favorite series. PrepareToDie."
** "[[WebOriginal/AtopTheFourthWall Eh, it's magic, so you don't have to explain it.]]"
** When Sapphire pops up in the StarTrek universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
* SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler:Missy]]
* TeensAreMonsters: Jenny and Tara
* TownGirls: The three main female members of the MSEA. Aphrodite is the femme one, Charlie is the butch one, and October is the neutral one.
* {{Wangst}}: Sapphire, ''constantly''. Lampshaded:
-->"How tragic of a past can someone have?"
* WorldOfSnark
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Aphrodite's electric blue hair
