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* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: DaryanDaryan is a jerk who constantly beats and makes death threats to his lover, but for once he stopped being abusive, toned down his HairTriggerTemper and helped Klavier get ready for a stage act. Only to reveal that he found out that Klavier is cheating on him and Daryan has him nearly strangled to death.
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** Apollo tries to get Machi to implicate Daryan by convincing him that Daryan would help with his smuggling, it goes up in flames when Machi tries to cut a deal with Daryan and then steals Apollo's gun
* TheCameo
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* CouldntFindAPenCouldntFindAPen: [[spoiler: Whereas in canon it was played straight,]] Apollo writes [=LeTouse's=] Interpol ID number with a glove to fake evidence.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: Lamirior attempts to frame Klavier [[spoiler: when Machi kills [=LeTouse=]]] when they already had a deal to get Machi arrested during the concert so he would get arrested in the U.S. as opposed to executed in Borgnia.
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* NoHonorAmongThieves: Lamirior attempts to frame Klavier [[spoiler: when Machi kills [=LeTouse=]]] when they already had a deal to get Machi arrested during the concert by putting a cocoon in Klavier's guitar and setting it on fire so he would get arrested in the U.S. as opposed to executed in Borgnia.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Apollo's initial plan was to plant a fire bomb in Daryan's bag and set it off when Klavier's guitar goes on fire to implicate him. Then he meets Machi and tries to convince the latter to work with Daryan so he could get Daryan to implicate himself by working with Machi, but then Machi steals Apollo's gun. When Machi shots [=LeTouse=], Apollo covers up that Machi shot him by taking out the bullets and shooting [=LeTouse's=] corpse with [=LeTouse's=] gun so it would look impossible for Machi to have shot him. Then when he catches Lamiroir trying to frame Klavier, he convinces her to work with him so he can get Machi off on lesser charges and to get Daryan sent to jail.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Klavier plays up his goofball Eurotrash persona to either get people to put their guard down around him or in the case of Apollo to put him at ease or to cheer him up.
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** When Daryan reveals to Klavier that he knows the latter is cheating on him, reminding him of when he came home after supposedly celebrating his brother's incarceration all night smelling like cheap violet cologne.
-->If this is going to be a fight, princess, you know who wins. You like taking risks?
-->If this is going to be a fight, princess, you know who wins. You like taking risks?
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* ContinuityNod: Phoenix knows about TheThreepennyOpera because he used to have been a theater major.
** A lighter variant when Phoenix says after hearing Apollo hum TheThreepennyOpera "I know you don't like pop, given how snippy you get about Trucy's radio, but this really makes me wonder about you." [[spoiler: It is later found out that he used to have a relationship with Edgeworth.]]
* MurderTheHypotenuse: Daryan threatened to kill Apollo when he finds out who he who he is. So when Klavier finds out someone was shot and killed at his Los Angeles concern, he thought that Daryan was successful.
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** Daryan realizes something is up when Klavier has not slept with any women.
** Daryan realizes something is up when Klavier has not slept with any women.
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* CouldFindAPenCouldntFindAPen
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* ChekhovsHobby: Apollo's humming of the Threepenny Opera early in the story, Phoenix comments on it surprised that the non-musically inclined Apollo would know it. [[spoiler: When Phoenix hears Klavier's cover of the same song, it leads him ask to a question that completely blew everything open.]]
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* ChekhovsHobby: Apollo's humming of the Threepenny Opera TheThreepennyOpera early in the story, Phoenix comments on it surprised that the non-musically inclined Apollo would know it. [[spoiler: When Phoenix hears Klavier's cover of the same song, it leads him ask to a question that completely blew everything open.]]
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* BadDreams: Klavier has nightmares of Shadi's murder in the Borscht Bowl basement and hears the sound of him dying in his dreams.
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* BadDreams: Klavier has nightmares of Shadi's murder in the Borscht Bowl basement and hears the sound of him dying in his dreams.dreams, losing him nights of sleep.
* CouldFindAPen
* HugAndComment: In a non-comedic variant when Apollo's holding Klavier to sleep:
-->Klavier: You're...very romantic. I didn't notice before.
-->Klavier: You're...very romantic. I didn't notice before.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Plum Kitaki offers Klavier and Apollo her resources after they prevented Wocky from going to prison.prison.
* IRememberBecause: Klavier gets Apollo to remember [=LeTouse's=] ID number and phone number by making it into a song.
* IRememberBecause: Klavier gets Apollo to remember [=LeTouse's=] ID number and phone number by making it into a song.
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* ButNotTooBi: Klavier is mentioned to sleep with groupies often enough that he can use them as a legitimate excuse but seems to be romantically inclined towards men seeing how both his love interest are male and pointed out by Daryan that he hasn't actually slept with a woman within the story.
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* ButNotTooBi: ButNotTooBi[=/=]BiTheWay: Klavier is mentioned to sleep with groupies often enough that he can use them as a legitimate excuse but seems to be romantically inclined towards men seeing how both his love interest are male and pointed out by Daryan that he hasn't actually slept with a woman within the story.
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* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Klavier nearly distracts Trucy by getting her to tell them why did she wake so early to get donuts before she realizes that he's trying to change the subject so she wouldn't ask why Apollo was about to kiss him.
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* SorryToInterrupt: Trucy walks with donuts when Apollo and Klavier were having a romantic moment while trying to sneak the latter out of the office.
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* SorryToInterrupt: Trucy walks in with donuts right when Apollo and Klavier were having a romantic moment about to kiss while trying to sneak the latter out of the office.
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* EntitledBastardEntitledBastard: Daryan fully expects for Klavier to get the murder charge off despite his treatment of the latter, this works for Klavier's advantage as he doesn't figure out that Klavier threw him under the bus.
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* WasItReallyWorthIt: Plum asks Apollo did he ever think that Klavier wasn't worth it. He replies that he never did.
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** Daryan expects Klavier to get him off the murder charges not expecting that Klavier fully intends to turn throw him under the bus.
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* KimonoFanserviceKimonoFanservice: Klavier wears a yukata to the Obon Festival.
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* LongListLongList: Edgeworth lists their collective crimes as getting two people innocent of their supposed crimes jailed, letting the murderers responsible off, unlawful surveillance, breaking and entering, arson, possession of an unlicensed gun and etc.
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* MorningRoutineMorningRoutine: The morning of the Vera Misham trial the story details how Klavier and Apollo get ready in the morning as they deliberately dress themselves to look vulnerable to gain the sympathy of the jury.
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RecruitingTheCriminal: Edgeworth recruits Klavier and Apollo as his apprentices because they both have extremely good teamwork and a great understanding of the law.]]
*RelationshipUpgrade
RelationshipUpgrade: Klavier and Apollo upgrade from acquaintances and accomplices in a StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder to lovers after Kristoph is imprisoned and Apollo decides he will take care of Daryan.
*RequiredSecondaryPowersRequiredSecondaryPowers: Apollo's Perceive ability also means that he has a good eye for spotting small details which is helpful when he tampers with [=LeTouse's=] corpse by covering up the wounds that killed him by taking out the bullets and using a bigger gun to make it look like he was killed with a bigger caliber gun.
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* TheResenterTheResenter: Daryan seriously hates Klavier and is not afraid to show it
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* SecretKeeperSecretKeeper: When Trucy finds out about their relationship, Apollo and Klavier make her keep it a secret under the promise that they would come out around Christmas.
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* SingleWomanSeeksGoodManSingleWomanSeeksGoodMan: A large part of Klavier's attraction to Apollo that's not wrapped in TheDulcineaEffect and his initial SerialRomeo affection is that Apollo is a very caring and attentive lover.
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* SorryToInterruptSorryToInterrupt: Trucy walks with donuts when Apollo and Klavier were having a romantic moment while trying to sneak the latter out of the office.
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* TeethClenchedTeamworkTeethClenchedTeamwork: Apollo and Lamiroir begrudgingly work together for Apollo to become Machi's defense attorney and Lamiroir to implicate Daryan so Machi won't be executed for [=LeTouse's=] murder.
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* TheyCallMeMisterTibbsTheyCallMeMisterTibbs: Winston Payne deliberately irks Klavier by calling him "Mr. Gavin", which Kristoph was called.
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* ThinkNothingOfItThinkNothingOfIt: Klavier deflects Apollo's praise for him rescuing the latter, although this is because he believes that he owed Apollo for dealing with Kristoph and because he had helped someone kill a man in order to get his brother put away.
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* ToKnowHimIMustBecomeHimToKnowHimIMustBecomeHim: Apollo tries thinking like Kristoph in order to figure out what the latter wanted from Vera Misham and wwhat he would think of her.
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* WasItReallyWorthItWasItReallyWorthIt: Plum asks Apollo did he ever think that Klavier wasn't worth it. He replies that he never did.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDarkWhatYouAreInTheDark: Edgeworth noted that Klavier and Apollo could have left Vera Misham to rot but chose to face Kristoph for her sake anyways.
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* YouAreNotAloneYouAreNotAlone: Both Klavier and Apollo have given up the idea of being rescued by the time they first meet each other, only for the both of them to make an emotional connection that finally help them to escape their abusers.
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* StealthPunStealthPun: Apollo lives in a closet while having a SecretRelationship with another man.
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* VisualPunVisualPun: Trucy tells Apollo "So I guess you don't live in a closet" after catching Klavier leaving Apollo's room, which is a converted storage closet.
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** Kristoph killed his friend in a car accident out of curiosity.
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* GreenEyedMonster: The source of Klavier's problems with Daryan. Originally Daryan was the lead singer and Klavier was the bassist in the band until they switched on a dare. Which their label made permanent because Klavier had better vocal range and had better stage presence.
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* GreenEyedMonster: The source of Klavier's problems with Daryan. Originally Daryan was the lead singer and Klavier was the bassist guitarist in the band until they switched on a dare.their label made them switch. Which their label made permanent because Klavier had better vocal range and had better stage presence.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Since the fic was written a year before ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorneyDualDestinies'' and the reveal of Clay Terran, this Apollo is depicted of having no friends prior to going the Wright Anything Agency.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Since the fic was written a year before ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorneyDualDestinies'' and the reveal of Clay Terran, this Apollo is depicted of as having no friends prior to going joining the Wright Anything Agency.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecationHeroicSelfDeprecation: Apollo jokes about his clumsiness and his height when confronted with Kristoph
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanonAcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Since the fic was written a year before ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorneyDualDestinies'' and the reveal of Clay Terran, this Apollo is depicted of having no friends prior to going the Wright Anything Agency.
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* BodyMotifsBodyMotifs: The story has a continuing focus on the throat and neck. The story opens with Apollo trying to find medicine to treat his neck injury, courtesy of Kristoph and it's what attracts Klavier's attention to him in the first place. Klavier is nearly strangled to death with chains wrapped around his throat. When Apollo feels immense guilt he describes it as a pressure on his throat.
* CharacterDevelopment: Apollo initially refuses to leave his job and Kristoph despite the danger to his own life because he would lose the one dream he had left and the life he knows and would be forced to start over. This turns Klavier's desire to help Apollo into a StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder. [[spoiler: Later, Apollo willingly abandons his career and leaves California for good and tries to take the blame for plot in order to protect Klavier.]]
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* DontTellMama: Machi is horrified at the thought of Lamoroir Lamirior finding out about his crimes.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Most of the cast can see that Klavier and Apollo have the hots for each other, although unusually for this trope they already are together.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Most of the cast can see that Klavier and Apollo have the hots for each other, other and either encourage or mock them for it, although unusually for this trope they already are together.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfManGetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Apollo forces Klavier to calm after the latter starts freaking out in guilt over having to kill a man.
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* HiddenInPlainSightHiddenInPlainSight: Daryan never figures out that the man Klavier invited to their concert, the ''same'' man who is accusing him of a murder he didn't commit is the one that Klavier is cheating on him for.
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* ProductPlacement: Klavier and Apollo meet in a Rite-Aid, Klavier gets a phone from Verizon Wireless. It's to add realism and to remain the viewer that the fic is supposed to take place in California.
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* ProductPlacement: Klavier and Apollo meet in a Rite-Aid, Klavier gets a phone from Verizon Wireless. It's to add realism and to remain remind the viewer that the fic is supposed to take place in California.
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PuppyDogEyes: Klavier is very good at these and can use them to get Apollo to do what he wants.
*PyrrhicVictoryPyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler: Phoenix gets Kristoph imprisoned, finally proven his innocence with the forged evidence and proven the effectiveness of the jury system...but he loses his apprentice and the most honest attorney he knew, finds out that they committed a multitude of crimes, lives with the knowledge that his success was based on a crime Kristoph was innocent of and might have to start his crusade over.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheAtoner: Klavier and Apollo become this when they take Edgeworth's offer of apprenticeship to atone for their crimes.]]
* [[spoiler: AtonementDetective: Klavier and Apollo become this when they take Edgeworth's offer of apprenticeship to atone for their crimes.]]
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* GoodIsNotDumbGoodIsNotDumb: It's noted that while Trucy is silly most of the time, she is very perceptive and very good at reading in between the lines. Exemplified when she calls out Apollo for being angry at Phoenix being secretive when she knows that Apollo and Klavier would have to been together much longer than then they told her.
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* GotVolunteeredGotVolunteered: Apollo and Klavier try to everything possible to not get assigned to the Vera Misham case as the defense and prosecution only to foiled by Phoenix, as head of committee, volunteered them thinking they are perfect for the job.
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* ShutUpKirk: Apollo gives a mental one to Phoenix after he asks, "You know, after Kristoph's trial this spring, I thought I was hiring a kid who wanted to make a difference in the world. What did I get instead?" .
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* ShutUpKirk: Apollo gives a mental one to Phoenix after he asks, "You know, after Kristoph's trial this spring, I thought I was hiring a kid who wanted to make a difference in the world. What did I get instead?" .instead?"
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* UnholyMatrimonyUnholyMatrimony: Since they are [[VillainProtagonist both villain protagonists]], their relationship is pretty much this.
* UnknownRival: A rather unique variant, Daryan doesn't know that Apollo sees him as his rival for Klavier's affections despite that Klavier hating Daryan and greatly preferring Apollo. He knows that Klavier has a lover but never finds out that it's Apollo.
* UnknownRival: A rather unique variant, Daryan doesn't know that Apollo sees him as his rival for Klavier's affections despite that Klavier hating Daryan and greatly preferring Apollo. He knows that Klavier has a lover but never finds out that it's Apollo.
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* [[spoiler: TheApprentice]]TheApprentice: After Edgeworth decides to let Klavier and Apollo go, he offers them the opportunity to become his apprentices if they want to continue practicing law and to make up for what they have done. ]]
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* BeneathNoticeBeneathNotice: Klavier's act of giving Trucy backstage passes and low-priced tickets is his way of making sure Apollo escaped Daryan's notice and to get him to the concert with the excuse of accompanying Trucy.
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BetterAsFriends: It's implied that Edgeworth and Phoenix did have romantic feelings for each other but never went further than that because they both saw that eventually the price for the other's affections would one day get too high]]
*BigBrotherBullyBigBrotherBully: Kristoph was one to Klavier, so there is no love lost when Klavier frames him.
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Klavier and Apollo can never return to U.S. without being sent to jail by Phoenix and both of them lost their careers. Apollo and Trucy never find out they're blood-related and will never see each other again. Phoenix's plans of restoring the Jurist system might be for naught as Kristoph's rightful convinction is dependent on a crime he didn't commit. Edgeworth decides not to rekindle his relationship with Phoenix, seeing the price for it too high and will lead to inevitable disappointment. But Klavier and Apollo are free of the tormentors and are given a second chance at life. Klavier and Apollo are happily in love with each other and won't be sent to prison. Phoenix gets his reputation back and can start using his connections to start doing major good and Edgeworth gains two apprentices to help him]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Klavier and Apollo can never return to U.S. without being sent to jail by Phoenix and both of them lost their careers. Apollo and Trucy never find out they're blood-related and will never see each other again. Phoenix's plans of restoring the Jurist system might be for naught as Kristoph's rightful convinction conviction is dependent on a crime he didn't commit. Edgeworth decides not to rekindle his relationship with Phoenix, seeing the price for it too high and will lead to inevitable disappointment. But Klavier and Apollo are free of the tormentors and are given a second chance at life. Klavier and Apollo are happily in love with each other and won't be sent to prison. Phoenix gets his reputation back and can start using his connections to start doing major good and Edgeworth gains two apprentices to help him]]
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* CoincidentalBroadcastCoincidentalBroadcast: Trucy is watching the news in the background when the entertainment segment starts ten minutes early with breaking news of Klavier's "stage accident", telling Apollo that Klavier was nearly killed. Justified that a rock star's near-deathly accident would make a headliner.
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* CoverInnocentEyesAndEarsCoverInnocentEyesAndEars: The police guard makes Trucy turn around and cover her ears when he tells Apollo what he thinks will be Daryan's fate in prison.
--> A dirty cop pretty boy with a famous face? Your shark is about to be tunafish.
--> A dirty cop pretty boy with a famous face? Your shark is about to be tunafish.
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* EurekaMoment: Apollo has one in Klavier's office when he realizes that the bracelet helps pinpoint [[LivingLieDetector lies.]]
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* EurekaMoment: Apollo has one in Klavier's office when he Apollo realizes that the bracelet helps him pinpoint [[LivingLieDetector lies.]]lies]] when he asks Klavier whether he wants to stay with Daryan and if he wants to be with Apollo and then asks him to tell a lie.
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* FriendlessBackgroundFriendlessBackground: When Vera is hospitalized for poisoning Apollo, Klavier and Trucy are the only people that visit her because her only family is dead and she was a Hikikomori, she doesn't have any friends.
-->Trucy: It's not like she has any friends besides us!
-->Apollo (thinking): You mean she has any friends ''including'' us.
-->Trucy: It's not like she has any friends besides us!
-->Apollo (thinking): You mean she has any friends ''including'' us.
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* FormerTeenRebel: Apollo was a [[{{Delinquents}} delinquent]] and had committed a car-jacking when he was 14. [[NeverLiveItDown This haunts Apollo]] because no law firm would hire someone with a criminal record.
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