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* DisproportionateRetribution: Kristoph dumped a cup of boiling tea and broke the cup on Apollo's head for daring to drink at his work desk.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Kristoph dumped a cup of boiling tea and broke the cup on Apollo's head for daring to drink at his workdesk.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Kristoph dumped a cup of boiling tea FatalMethodActing: Klavier nearly dies in his concert when Daryan tangles the chains with the moving platform's winch, causing the chains to tighten around his neck and broke the cup on Apollo's head asphyxiate him.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Klavier tells Apollo that Daryan has a limit to his abuse: he doesn't hurt Klavier's face, hands or his throat because he needs those fordaring show business. Later, Daryan tries to drink at his workdesk.kill Klavier by causing a set malfunction that would have strangled him to death during a concert.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Klavier tells Apollo that Daryan has a limit to his abuse: he doesn't hurt Klavier's face, hands or his throat because he needs those for
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** [[spoiler: This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere which drives Apollo to flee]] and he and Klavier[[RunForTheBorder flee the country]].]]
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** [[spoiler: This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere which drives Apollo to flee]] and he and Klavier[[RunForTheBorder Klavier [[RunForTheBorder immediately flee the country]].]]
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** This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThis
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** [[spoiler: This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThis[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere which drives Apollo to flee]] and he and Klavier[[RunForTheBorder flee the country]].]]
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Unintentionally, Phoenix destroyed Apollo and Klavier's post Vera Misham trail success and exposed their plot by asking two innocuous questions with the Magatama:
--> Phoenix (concerned): Is everything okay back there?
--> Phoenix (trying to lighten the suddenly serious mood after the first question): Just how long have you been madly in love with Prosecutor Gavin?
** This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThis
--> Phoenix (concerned): Is everything okay back there?
--> Phoenix (trying to lighten the suddenly serious mood after the first question): Just how long have you been madly in love with Prosecutor Gavin?
** This causes Apollo to break out in Psyche-Locks, [[ScrewThis
* {{Delinquents}}: Apollo had committed a car-jacking when he was 14. [[NeverLiveItDown This haunts Apollo]] because no law firm would hire someone with a criminal record.
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* PoliceAreUseless: The police are either in Daryan's pocket or like Winston Payne, ''don't care''
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* PoliceAreUseless: The police are would either makes things worse, in Daryan's their abuser's pocket or like Winston Payne, ''don't care''
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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist
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* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. [[spoiler: Then subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.]]
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* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. [[spoiler: Then subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The Obon Festival Arc that's in between case 4-3 and 4-4. Which is lampshaded by Klavier:
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* BreatherEpisode: The Obon Festival Arc that's in between case 4-3 the framing and 4-4.trial of Daryan and the Vera Misham case. Which is lampshaded by Klavier:
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who would listen to you talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. Klavier left his brother the first chance he got. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who would listen to you talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. Klavier left his brother the first chance he got. More chilling in that Klavier says he would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
* ChekhovsHobby: Apollo's humming of the Threepenny Opera [[spoiler: when Phoenix hears Klavier's cover of the same song, it leads him ask to a question that completely blew everything open.]]
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** Which is the tip of the iceberg, [[spoiler: as Apollo successfully pins Machi's murder of Romein LeTouse on Daryan]]
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** Which is the tip of the iceberg, [[spoiler: as Apollo successfully pins Machi's murder of Romein LeTouse [=LeTouse=] on Daryan]]
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* PoliceAreUseless: The police are either in Daryan's pocket or like Winston Payne, ''don't care''
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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist
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* TheDulcineaEffect: Klavier only known Apollo for a couple of hours before he decides will try to save Apollo from his brother for two reasons, one because Klavier feels that he owes Apollo since he would have been in his place if he hadn't left his brother the first chance he got. Second chance, Klavier is also stuck in a hopeless situation with Daryan and projects his own need to be rescued onto Apollo.
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* TheDulcineaEffect: Klavier only known Apollo for a couple of hours before he decides will try to save Apollo from his brother for two reasons, one because Klavier feels that he owes Apollo since he would have been in his place if he hadn't left his brother the first chance he got. Second chance, Second, Klavier is also stuck in a hopeless situation with Daryan and projects his own need to be rescued onto Apollo.
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* GenreSavvy: ''Winston Payne'' of all people!
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* GenreSavvy: ''Winston Payne'' of all people!people! First, he deliberately wastes Apollo's time with an interview when Apollo tries to look for Klavier at the Prosecutor's Office and find a job. Second, he [[BreakThemByTalking tells Klavier]] that through pattern recognition that Klavier will either [[ButNowIMustGo suddenly leave]] or in the route of most of their prosecutors, go to jail.
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* MurderByMistake
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: While Klavier and Apollo are sympathetic, they are doing criminal/morally dubious acts to gain the upperhand on people worse than they are.
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: While Apollo and Klavier are sympathetic but will go through any length [[StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder possible to free each other from their abusers]]. Klavier frames his brother for murder he assisted in committing and would have killed Phoenix Wright if Shadi Enigmar [[spoiler: hadn't tried beating Olga Orly.]] Apollo are sympathetic, they are doing criminal/morally dubious acts tries to gain manipulate [[spoiler: Machi]] into killing [[spoiler: Daryan]], but manages to cover up [[spoiler: Machi's [[MurderByMistake murder of Romain [=LeTouse=] ]] ]] and pin the upperhand blame on people worse than they are.Daryan. But Daryan is a DirtyCop who has the police force in his backpocket and Kristoph is an AmoralAttorney and a BadBoss with [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections many connections]] who both threaten them with death and can get away with their murders.
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who listen to talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. Klavier left his brother the first chance he got. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who would listen to you talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. Klavier left his brother the first chance he got. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Klavier fled his home at age 16 to flee from his brother, only to end up in an abusive relationship with Daryan
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Klavier fled his home at age 16 15 to flee from his brother, only to end up in an abusive relationship with Daryan
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Kristoph threw a cup of hot tea at Apollo for daring to eat at his week when the latter hasn't eaten in hours
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Kristoph threw dumped a cup of hot boiling tea at Apollo and broke the cup on Apollo's head for daring to eat drink at his week when the latter hasn't eaten in hoursworkdesk.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The reason why Klavier and Apollo can't run away from their relationships. Daryan is a
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The reason why Klavier and Apollo can't run away from their relationships. Daryan is a DirtyCop who has police connections who inform if Klavier tries to run and can help cover up his murders. Apollo has no connections, seeing how his criminal record prevents any law firm beside Kristoph's from hiring him and he has no one else.
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* DramaticIrony: Phoenix gets Klavier and Apollo assigned to case 4-4 because of how they remained professional despite the fact Apollo put his mentor/meal ticket in jail and Klavier prosecuted his bandmate
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* DramaticIrony: Phoenix gets Klavier and compliments Apollo assigned to case 4-4 because of how they remained professional despite the fact Apollo put his mentor/meal ticket in jail that he and Klavier prosecuted his are very good at keeping their feelings out of cases seeing how they sent their bandmate or mentor to prison, regardless of personal feelings.
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* {{Irony}}: Lamiroir threatens Apollo for Machi's sake. [[spoiler: Lamiroir, Apollo's biological mother, threatens her biological son she abandoned for the son she emotionally adopted.
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* {{Irony}}: Lamiroir threatens Apollo for Machi's sake. [[spoiler: Lamiroir, Apollo's biological mother, threatens her biological son she abandoned for the son she emotionally adopted.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Kristoph and Klavier, stating that Kristoph was always been a horrible person and Klavier left him as soon as he could after their parents died.
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who listen to talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* CainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who listen to talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. Klavier left his brother the first chance he got. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* BreatherEpisode: The Obon Festival Arc that's in between case 4-3 and 4-4. Which is lampshaded by Klavier:
-->Klavier: Boring is so good.
-->Klavier: Boring is so good.
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* * AlternateCharacterInterpretation: The fic runs on it such as :
** Klavier being a BrokenAce
** Machi being DeliberatelyCuteChild and SpoiledBrat
** Lamiroir being a MamaBear to Machi
** Plum Kitaki being a CoolOldLady and such.
** Klavier being a BrokenAce
** Machi being DeliberatelyCuteChild and SpoiledBrat
** Lamiroir being a MamaBear to Machi
** Plum Kitaki being a CoolOldLady and such.
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* * AlternateCharacterInterpretation: The fic runs on it such as :
** Klavier being a BrokenAce
** Machi being DeliberatelyCuteChild and SpoiledBrat
** Lamiroir being a MamaBear to Machi
** Plum Kitaki being a CoolOldLady and such.
** Klavier being a BrokenAce
** Machi being DeliberatelyCuteChild and SpoiledBrat
** Lamiroir being a MamaBear to Machi
** Plum Kitaki being a CoolOldLady and such.
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* GambitPileup
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* GambitPileupGambitPileup: There's Klavier and Apollo's plan of framing Daryan and Kristoph, Phoenix's plan [[spoiler: of proving Kristoph guilty of the forgeries and the murder of Drew Misham and reforming the jury system]] and Kristoph's plan [[spoiler: of poisoning Vera Misham and getting away with both Misham's murder.]] It goes bad for everyone involved.
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* GreenEyedMonster: The source of Klavier's problems with Daryan. Originally Daryan was the lead singer in the band
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* GreenEyedMonster: The source of Klavier's problems with Daryan. Originally Daryan was the lead singer in the bandband until their label made him switch with Klavier because the latter had better vocal range and had better stage presence.
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* MeanBoss: Kristoph constantly belittles Apollo while the latter works and casually remain him that he practically owns him.
* OpenMouthInsertFoot
* [[PitySex Pity Kiss]]
* OpenMouthInsertFoot
* [[PitySex Pity Kiss]]
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* MeanBoss: Kristoph constantly belittles Apollo while the latter works and casually remain reminds him that he practically owns him.
*OpenMouthInsertFoot
OpenMouthInsertFoot: Apollo ends up poking Klavier's emotional weak points by generally lacking tact sometimes.
* [[PitySex PityKiss]]Kiss]]: When Klavier reveals to Apollo that he rather risking dying at Apollo than Daryan's, Apollo feels so sad that he kisses him out of pity and empathy.
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* [[PitySex Pity
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Klavier tries to become the prosecutor of case 4-1 the Chief Prosecutor denies his request, stating that his pushiness and his personal stake in case makes Klavier the very last person he would give the case to. The Chief Prosecutor cited his connection to the Phoenix Wright as the reason, when Klavier wanted Kristoph to the major suspect.
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* PromptFic: The original prompt opening: Strangers on a Train, judicial style.
* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Klavier tries to become the prosecutor of case 4-1 the Chief Prosecutor denies his request, stating that his pushiness and his personal stake in case makes Klavier the very last person he would give the case to. The Chief Prosecutor cited his connection to the Phoenix Wright as the reason, when Klavier wanted Kristoph to the majorsuspect.
Lampshadedsuspect. Which is lampshaded by Apollo:
* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Klavier tries to become the prosecutor of case 4-1 the Chief Prosecutor denies his request, stating that his pushiness and his personal stake in case makes Klavier the very last person he would give the case to. The Chief Prosecutor cited his connection to the Phoenix Wright as the reason, when Klavier wanted Kristoph to the major
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* SympatheticMurderer: Olga Orly killed Shadi Enigmar after he beats her with a wine bottle for somehow failing to spot Phoenix cheating at cards.
* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. Then quickly subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.
* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. Then quickly subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.
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* SympatheticMurderer: Olga Orly [[spoiler: killed Shadi Enigmar Enigmar]] after he beats her she gets beaten with a wine bottle for somehow failing to spot Phoenix cheating at cards.
* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. [[spoiler: Thenquickly subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.]]
* TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. [[spoiler: Then
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Klavier seemed to have embraced the fact that Daryan will kill him when he hasno longer amuses him.
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''WARNING: The fic contains spoilers for VisualNovel/ApolloJustice. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.''
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A clean-up version in progress available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1075868/chapters/2160789 here]]
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A clean-up cleaned-up version in progress available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1075868/chapters/2160789 here]]
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* DomesticAbuse: Klavier is physically and emotionally abused by his lover, Daryan for years.
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* DomesticAbuse: Klavier is physically and emotionally abused by his lover, Daryan for years.years, who also checks over Klavier's cellphones to know who he has been in contact with.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened
* ShoutOut: To LooneyTunes
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* RightForTheWrongReasons
RightForTheWrongReasons: When Klavier tries to become the prosecutor of case 4-1 the Chief Prosecutor denies his request, stating that his pushiness and his personal stake in case makes Klavier the very last person he would give the case to. The Chief Prosecutor cited his connection to the Phoenix Wright as the reason, when Klavier wanted Kristoph to the major suspect.
Lampshaded by Apollo:
-->Apollo: You sound all indignant about that. But your boss did the wrong math and got the right answer anyway.
*ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections
ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: The reason why Klavier and Apollo can't run away from their relationships. Daryan is a
*SerialRomeo
SerialRomeo: Klavier has a habit of falling in love with people he randomly meets and sometimes never sees again, although unlike other Serial Romeos he prefers to keep his feelings a secret and one-sided.
*ShameIfSomethingHappened
ShameIfSomethingHappened: Kristoph warns Apollo that if he's not at work on time, [[TroubleEntendre that if no one knows wheres he's supposed to be no one would notice if he goes missing]]
* ShoutOut: ToLooneyTunes
LooneyTunes and AgathaChristie
*SpoiledBrat
SpoiledBrat: Machi is an unrepentant smuggler coddled by Lamiroir, who enables him to get away with a lot of things and spoils him rotten.
*StrangersOnATrainPlotMurderStrangersOnATrainPlotMurder: After meeting in a Rite-Aid, Apollo and Klavier end up taking down the other man's abuser. Although Apollo doesn't agree to it at first because he didn't believe that he could escape Kristoph and ends up agreeing ''after'' Klavier successfully frames Kristoph and they both get him sent to prison. Apollo and Klavier don't actually kill their tormentors themselves, they frame them for murders they enabled and get the actual murderers off.
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-->Apollo: You sound all indignant about that. But your boss did the wrong math and got the right answer anyway.
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* Irony: Lamiroir threatens Apollo for Machi's sake. [[spoiler: Lamiroir, Apollo's biological mother, threatens her biological son she abandoned for the son she emotionally adopted.
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* Irony: {{Irony}}: Lamiroir threatens Apollo for Machi's sake. [[spoiler: Lamiroir, Apollo's biological mother, threatens her biological son she abandoned for the son she emotionally adopted.
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* JustifiedCriminalJustifiedCriminal: Klavier and Apollo turn to crime so they wouldn't be murdered.
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* MealTicket: Kristoph was Apollo's meal ticket
ticket as he hired Apollo despite his criminal record and pays for his rent.
*MeanBossMeanBoss: Kristoph constantly belittles Apollo while the latter works and casually remain him that he practically owns him.
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* StrongFamilyResemblanceStrongFamilyResemblance: Klavier is initially mistaken to be Kristoph when he and Apollo first meet and Apollo has to remind himself sometimes that Klavier and Kristoph do have some physical differences when he gets startled.
** Klavier [[ExploitedTrope exploits]] his resemblance to disguise himself as Kristoph to frame his brother for murder.
** Klavier [[ExploitedTrope exploits]] his resemblance to disguise himself as Kristoph to frame his brother for murder.
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* TapOnTheHead
TapOnTheHead: Shadi smacks Olga with a wine bottle which disorients her for a little bit. Then quickly subverted as Shadi dies when Olga returns the favor with the help of Klavier.
*TheVillainKnowsWhereYouLiveTheVillainKnowsWhereYouLive: Kristoph pays the rent of Apollo's apartment, he definitely knows where he lives and gives Apollo an unpleasant remainder by visiting his apartment to drop off [[ImpliedDeathThreat drain cleaner]].
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* CainAndAbelCainAndAbel: Kristoph as the Cain and Klavier as the Abel. Noted while Kristoph hasn't done anything to physically harm his younger brother, Klavier describes his brother as the type who listen to talk about your favorite thing so he would know its your favorite when he's angry. More chilling in that Klavier would have been in Apollo's place if he hadn't left the first chance he got.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: KlavierKlavier fled his home at age 16 to flee from his brother, only to end up in an abusive relationship with Daryan
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** Which is the tip of the iceberg, [[spoiler: as Apollo successfully pins Machi's murder of Romein LeTouse on Daryan]]
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* HarmlessLadyDisguise
HarmlessLadyDisguise: After framing Kristoph, Klavier sneaks out of the Borsht Bowl wearing Olga Orly's coat and hat.
*ImagineSpotImagineSpot: Klavier with his Looney Tune choices, Apollo with his multiple choice answers and paper-bag theater.
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* IronyIrony: Lamiroir threatens Apollo for Machi's sake. [[spoiler: Lamiroir, Apollo's biological mother, threatens her biological son she abandoned for the son she emotionally adopted.
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* MamaBear: Lamiroir threatens to ''kill''
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* MamaBear: Lamiroir threatens Apollo with a gun [[spoiler: to ''kill''get Machi off the murder charges.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Kristoph and Klavier, stating that Kristoph was always been a
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* BadBoss: Kristoph abuses Apollo physically, emotionally and sexually, controls every aspect of Apollo's life and hired him because he had no one else and no one to turn to.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Kristoph and Klavier, stating that Kristoph was always beena
a horrible person and Klavier left him as soon as he could after their parents died.
*BlackAndGreyMorality:BlackAndGreyMorality: While Klavier and Apollo are sympathetic, they are doing criminal/morally dubious acts to gain the upperhand on people worse than they are.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Kristoph and Klavier, stating that Kristoph was always been
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* ChekhovsGun
ChekhovsGun: Apollo's first aid kit
*DarkAndTroubledPast
DarkAndTroubledPast: Klavier
*TheDogBitesBack
TheDogBitesBack: The core of the fanfic
*DramaticIrony
DomesticAbuse: Klavier is physically and emotionally abused by his lover, Daryan for years.
*TheDulcineaEffect
DramaticIrony: Phoenix gets Klavier and Apollo assigned to case 4-4 because of how they remained professional despite the fact Apollo put his mentor/meal ticket in jail and Klavier prosecuted his bandmate
*DyingAloneTheDulcineaEffect: Klavier only known Apollo for a couple of hours before he decides will try to save Apollo from his brother for two reasons, one because Klavier feels that he owes Apollo since he would have been in his place if he hadn't left his brother the first chance he got. Second chance, Klavier is also stuck in a hopeless situation with Daryan and projects his own need to be rescued onto Apollo.
* DyingAlone: Kristoph implies this will be Apollo's fate as he doesn't have any family nor friends that would miss him.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Kristoph threw a cup of hot tea at Apollo
Apollo for daring to eat at his week when the latter hasn't eaten in hours
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FrameUp: Klavier frames his brother for killing Shadi Enigmar by disguising himself as Kristoph and helping Olga Orly kill Shadi in self-defense, Apollo pressures Olga to say she didn't see anything.
** Which is
*FramingTheGuiltyPartyFramingTheGuiltyParty: Klavier and Apollo play the Framing A Known Guilty Party variant, as Klavier and Apollo frame [[BigBad Kristoph]] and [[DirtyCop Daryan]] for murders they helped commit.
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*GreenEyedMonsterGreenEyedMonster: The source of Klavier's problems with Daryan. Originally Daryan was the lead singer in the band
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* SympatheticMurderer: Olga Orly [[spoiler: Orly killed Shadi Enigmar after]]
after he beats her with a wine bottle for somehow failing to spot Phoenix cheating at cards.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Klavier seemed to have embraced the fact that Daryan will kill him when he has
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AloneWithThePsycho: When Kristoph visits Apollo at his apartment, he doesn't enter the home but he does establish his dominance by nearly opening the front door and kicking it to let Apollo know that he knows he's there.
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--> Kristoph: Given enough time and drain cleaner, couldn't I just...rinse you away? I'd have to keep paying your rent, but then, that's nothing new.
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--> Kristoph: Given enough time and drain cleaner, couldn't I just...rinse you away? I'd have to keep paying your rent, but then, that's nothing new.
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A clean-up version available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1075868/chapters/2160789 here]]
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A clean-up version in progress available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1075868/chapters/2160789 here]]
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''[[http://bludhavens.livejournal.com/88397.html?thread=41790541#t41790541 Dirty Sympathy]]'' is a WhatIf alternate retelling of VisualNovel/ApolloJustice fanfic. The premise: GS4 is a StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder, Daryan never killed anyone and Kristoph never killed Shadi Smith. They were framed by a desperate Klavier and Apollo.
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''[[http://bludhavens.livejournal.com/88397.html?thread=41790541#t41790541 Dirty Sympathy]]'' is a WhatIf alternate retelling of VisualNovel/ApolloJustice fanfic. The premise: GS4 VisualNovel/ApolloJustice is a StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder, Daryan never killed anyone and Kristoph never killed Shadi Smith.Enigmar. They were framed by a desperate Klavier and Apollo.
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AdultFear: Apollo and Klavier are trapped in abusive relationships with people that have the power to cover up their murders and they have no where to turn to.
*AllTakeAndNoGiveAllTakeAndNoGive: Variant two, with Kristoph as the Giver and Apollo as the Taker. Kristoph controls every aspect Apollo's life as he provides the latter with employment and transportation, pays his rent and drives the latter around but Apollo is completely dependent on him and has no one else to turn to when Kristoph physically abuses him.
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A clean-up version available [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1075868/chapters/2160789 here]]
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''[[http://bludhavens.livejournal.com/88397.html?thread=41790541#t41790541 Dirty Sympathy]]'' is a WhatIf alternate retelling of VisualNovel/ApolloJustice fanfic. The premise: GS4 is a StrangersOnATrainPlotMurder, Daryan never killed anyone and Kristoph never killed Shadi Smith. They were framed by a desperate Klavier and Apollo.
The story begins with Apollo visiting a pharmacy to get medicine to treat his wounds after Kristoph threw a cup of tea on him for trying drinking tea while working. Another customer spots his injuries and offers to help Apollo to treat his wounds at the man's hotel room. Seeing how the other man is injured and Apollo has no one else to turn to, he agrees.
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The story begins with Apollo visiting a pharmacy to get medicine to treat his wounds after Kristoph threw a cup of tea on him for trying drinking tea while working. Another customer spots his injuries and offers to help Apollo to treat his wounds at the man's hotel room. Seeing how the other man is injured and Apollo has no one else to turn to, he agrees.
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