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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Dexter delivers a rather scathing one during the 12th chapter of the story [[spoiler: to Celestia after a very long fight with her, rendering the alicorn temporarily mortal and severely injuring her. He calls her out for sacrificing her citizens for her own needs. He ends his speech by saying she needs to remember her defeat as a harsh lesson on what she didn't know or had forgotten long ago.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Dexter delivers a rather scathing one during the 12th 16th chapter of the story [[spoiler: to Celestia after a very long fight with her, rendering the alicorn temporarily mortal and severely injuring her. He calls her out for sacrificing her citizens for her own needs. He ends his speech by saying she needs to remember her defeat as a harsh lesson on what she didn't know or had forgotten long ago.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Dexter delivers a rather scathing one during the 12th chapter of the story [[spoiler: to Celestia after a very long fight with her, rendering the alicorn temporarily mortal and severely injuring her. He calls her out for sacrificing her citizens for her own needs. He ends his speech by saying she needs to remember her defeat as a harsh lesson on what she didn't know or had forgotten long ago.]]
--> '''Dexter:''' [[spoiler: You are not a god, Celestia. So don't play one.]]
--> '''Dexter:''' [[spoiler: You are not a god, Celestia. So don't play one.]]
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** In the side story Nightmare Trip: Nightmare Moon [[spoiler: kickes Dexter through a stone pillar to prevent him from delivering the elements to Celestia. Without his high tech armour he surely would have died, even with it he was badly injured. Luna spent her entire banishment believing she killed a foal, it's not clear if Celestia filled her in on Dexter's survival upon her return to Equestria in the first MLP:FIM episode]].
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** In the side story Nightmare Trip: Nightmare Moon [[spoiler: kickes kicks Dexter through a stone pillar to prevent him from delivering the elements to Celestia. Without his high tech armour he surely would have died, even with it he was badly injured. Luna spent her entire banishment believing she killed a foal, it's not clear if Celestia filled her in on Dexter's survival upon her return to Equestria in the first MLP:FIM episode]].
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: In Chaper 8 Colt of Genius Vs Changeling, Dexter is instructing his computer to interrogate the changeling.
--> '''Dexter:''' You. Are. Not. To. Hurt. The. Changeling. Understood?”
--> '''Dexter:''' You. Are. Not. To. Hurt. The. Changeling. Understood?”
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** [[spoiler: The changeling posing as Cheerilee was willing to hurt Dexter to find out what he knew about the diagnostic machine. She later claims she was only trying to intimidate and wouldn't actually have actually injured the colt, it's not clear if she's saying that to gain sympathy or if she's being honest]].
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** [[spoiler: The changeling posing as Cheerilee was willing to hurt Dexter to find out what he knew about the diagnostic machine. She later claims she was only trying to intimidate and wouldn't actually have actually injured the colt, it's not clear if she's saying that to gain sympathy or if she's being honest]].
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** In the side story Nightmare Trip: Dexter meets [[spoiler: the physical personification (ponyfication?) of the elements of harmony in a dream and they take the forms of the mane 6 as avatars because that's how he knows them. Up to this point he has yet to interact with Fluttershy other than seeing her in passing, when the Element of Kindness is speaking to him he can't hear her because he hasn't heard the real Fluttershy's voice yet. The other elements fill him in on what she said.]]
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** In the side story Nightmare Trip: Dexter meets [[spoiler: the physical personification (ponyfication?) of the elements of harmony in a dream and they take the forms of the mane 6 as avatars [[AFormYouAreComfortableWith avatars]] because that's how he knows them. Up to this point he has yet to interact with Fluttershy other than seeing her in passing, when the Element of Kindness is speaking to him he can't hear her because he hasn't heard the real Fluttershy's voice yet. The other elements fill him in on what she said.]]
