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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. There's a Mark Sly and a Mark Rogers, neither of whom are [[JustForPun Marked Ones]].
* OutOfCharacter: ''Everyone'', by the author's own admission.
* OutOfCharacter: ''Everyone'', by the author's own admission.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. There's a Mark Sly and a Mark Rogers, neither of whom are [[JustForPun [[{{Pun}} Marked Ones]].
* %%* OutOfCharacter: ''Everyone'', by the author's own admission.
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* PurpleProse: To the extent that it's been likened to ''Literature/TheEyeOfArgon''. It's practically ultraviolet.
* PutOnABus: Happens to Harry's TrueCompanions in the first chapter.
* PutOnABus: Happens to Harry's TrueCompanions in the first chapter.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Everyone seems to be queuing up (sometimes literally) to give Harry this treatment, especially [[AuthorAvatar Madam Pomfrey]].
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets a dream of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: [[spoiler:Millicent]] gets has a dream of [[spoiler:[[MisterSeahorse Snape birthing more kids]]]].
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* TheLoinsSleepTonight: Harry is impotent, though this isn't revealed until Chapter 36 despite having free access to Harry's POV. Oddly enough, this is one of the few bits that make any biological sense (he states that it came about following the final battle with Voldemort - if anything would cause long-term impotence, it would be a psychological shock like that).
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* TheLoinsSleepTonight: Harry is impotent, though this isn't revealed until Chapter 36 despite having free access to Harry's POV. Oddly enough, this is one of the few bits that make any biological sense (he states that it came about following the final battle with Voldemort - -- if anything would cause long-term impotence, it would be a psychological shock like that).
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* NoIndoorVoice: Everyone in the fic spends half their time shouting. They make Harry as of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix Order of the Phoenix]]'' seem calm.
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* NoIndoorVoice: Everyone in the this fic spends half their time shouting. They make the Harry as of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix Order of the Phoenix]]'' seem calm.
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* AntiClimax:
-->[[spoiler:Harry]] took out his wand ready for battle, but just then [[spoiler:Ron]] walked in. Walked right up to him and took the wand away from [[spoiler:Harry]]. Then he turned to the other two Aurors: "Take him away."
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Millicent]] and her son have been thrown out of the house by her vindictive husband and the kid ''put up for sale'', yet the crossing of the MoralEventHorizon is supposed to be his naming the kid [[spoiler:[[MeaningfulName "Sin"]]]], [[AerithAndBob not even that bad a name by wizarding world standards]].
-->[[spoiler:Harry]] took out his wand ready for battle, but just then [[spoiler:Ron]] walked in. Walked right up to him and took the wand away from [[spoiler:Harry]]. Then he turned to the other two Aurors: "Take him away."
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Millicent]] and her son have been thrown out of the house by her vindictive husband and the kid ''put up for sale'', yet the crossing of the MoralEventHorizon is supposed to be his naming the kid [[spoiler:[[MeaningfulName "Sin"]]]], [[AerithAndBob not even that bad a name by wizarding world standards]].
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* AntiClimax:
-->[[spoiler:Harry]] took outAntiClimax: Just as [[spoiler:Harry]] takes his wand ready for battle, but just then [[spoiler:Ron]] walked in. Walked right up out to him and took the fight, [[spoiler:Ron Weasley]] walks in with a pair or Aurors, takes his wand away from [[spoiler:Harry]]. Then he turned to away, and tells the other two Aurors: "Take him away."
Aurors to take the former away.
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Millicent]] and her son have been thrown out of the house by her vindictivehusband and husband, with the kid being ''put up for sale'', yet sale''. The part that the crossing of the MoralEventHorizon story treats as unforgivable is supposed to be his naming that the kid [[spoiler:[[MeaningfulName "Sin"]]]], is named [[spoiler:"Sin"]], which isn't even [[AerithAndBob not even that bad a name by wizarding world standards]].
-->[[spoiler:Harry]] took out
* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler:Millicent]] and her son have been thrown out of the house by her vindictive
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%%* ADateWithRosiePalms: A particularly bizarre FillerArc in chapter 7.
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%%* SlashFic: Well, yeah.
* %% SmugSnake: Madam Pomfrey of all characters has her moments.
%%* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Dennis bemoans this in Chapter 39.
* %% SmugSnake: Madam Pomfrey of all characters has her moments.
%%* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Dennis bemoans this in Chapter 39.
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* AndThisIsFor: Harry does this when he's buggering Snape, culminating with "Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrre!"
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: It's inherent in the [[MisterSeahorse concept]].
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* AuthorAvatar: Madam Pomfrey seems to have become one.
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* BigNo: Several of them, to the point that it's almost an unintentional RunningGag.
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* CrapsackWorld: You have read the rest of this page, right?
* ADateWithRosiePalms: A particularly bizarre FillerArc in chapter 7.
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* ExactEavesdropping: Happens several times.
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* GooGooGodlike: Serena, so very much.
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* IdiotBall: It would be easier to list the characters who ''aren't'' holding it in this fic.
* IKEAErotica: Whenever there's a sex scene, sometimes for multiple paragraphs.
* IKEAErotica: Whenever there's a sex scene, sometimes for multiple paragraphs.
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* OffstageWaitingRoom: Happens frequently, as a consequence of the rather odd pacing.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: [[{{Narm}} "Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrre!"]]
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* SlashFic: Well, yeah.
* SmugSnake: Madam Pomfrey of all characters has her moments.
* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Dennis bemoans this in Chapter 39.
* SmugSnake: Madam Pomfrey of all characters has her moments.
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* TrrrillingRrrs: During an ImmodestOrgasm, no less.
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* {{Bishonen}}: Dennis.
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** Serena takes this UpToEleven when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.
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** Serena takes this UpToEleven up a notch when she's talking and using controlled wandless magic before her '''first''' birthday.
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* CrackFic: If you were in any doubt, this fic has [[spoiler:[[Crabbe shagging a house elf]]]].
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* CrackFic: If you were in any doubt, this fic has [[spoiler:[[Crabbe [[spoiler:Crabbe shagging a house elf]]]].elf]].
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* BurlyDetectiveSyndrome: "The Gryffindor" isn't a useful epithet in a scene where ''everyone'' was in Gryffindor.
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* UnfortunateNames: Invoked to {{Narm}}ful effect. See ArsonMurderAndJaywalking above.
** Then played unintentionally straight as the baby gets referred to throughout as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Baby"]].
** Then played unintentionally straight as the baby gets referred to throughout as [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin "Baby"]].
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* {{Wimpification}}: Snape and Draco.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] is actually an AtrociousAlias.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[spoiler:Sin]], which [[FelonyMisdemeanor we're supposed to believe]] AtrociousAlias: [[spoiler:Sin]] is actually an AtrociousAlias.treated this way, whatever the reader might think of it.
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* TheLoinsSleepTonight: Harry. Illogically, this isn't revealed until Chapter 36 despite having free access to Harry's POV. Oddly enough, this is one of the few bits that make any biological sense (he states that it came about following the final battle with Voldemort - if anything would cause long-term impotence, it would be a psychological shock like that).
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* TheLoinsSleepTonight: Harry. Illogically, Harry is impotent, though this isn't revealed until Chapter 36 despite having free access to Harry's POV. Oddly enough, this is one of the few bits that make any biological sense (he states that it came about following the final battle with Voldemort - if anything would cause long-term impotence, it would be a psychological shock like that).
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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.
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''[[http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600022825 Deserving]]'' by moonofthesea picks up the ''Franchise/HarryPotter'' ''Literature/HarryPotter'' story in the year 1998. The Second Wizarding War is over, and Literature/HarryPotter Harry Potter and friends must decide what to do with the surviving Death Eaters. This being fanfic-world, a marriage law is instituted whereby each "Marked One" must come under the supervision of a "Guide of the Light". Harry sacrifices everything he has to be Guide of the Light to Severus Snape (who in the fic survived ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Deathly Hallows]]''), and ''Deserving'' tells their story.
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* AndThisIsFor: Harry does this when he's buggering Snape, culminating with [[ItWasHisSled "Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrre!"]]
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* AndThisIsFor: Harry does this when he's buggering Snape, culminating with [[ItWasHisSled "Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrre!"]]"Dumbledorrrrrrrrrrre!"
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: [[DrinkingGame A shot for]] any of the following: [[SaidBookism "stated", "dared" as a dialogue tag]], [[{{Squick}} "rectum"]], "ministration(s)", "butt cheek", "entrance" in a sexual context, [[IKEAErotica "penetrate"]], [[DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch "git"]].
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* AuthorVocabularyCalendar: [[DrinkingGame A shot for]] any of the following: [[SaidBookism "stated", "dared" as a dialogue tag]], [[{{Squick}} "rectum"]], "rectum", "ministration(s)", "butt cheek", "entrance" in a sexual context, [[IKEAErotica "penetrate"]], [[DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch "git"]].
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* BodyHorror: Implicit in [[MisterSeahorse the concept]], of course, but see also the spoilered text under {{Squick}}.
* CampGay: [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/dennis%20the%20flaming%20stereotype Dennis]].
* CampGay: [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/dennis%20the%20flaming%20stereotype Dennis]].
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* BodyHorror: Implicit in [[MisterSeahorse the concept]], of course, but see also the spoilered text under {{Squick}}.
there's plenty more.
%% * CampGay: [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/dennis%20the%20flaming%20stereotype Dennis]].
%% * CampGay: [[http://szaleniec1000.livejournal.com/tag/dennis%20the%20flaming%20stereotype Dennis]].
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* ContinuationFic
* CrackFic: If you were in any doubt, this fic has [[spoiler:[[{{Squick}} Crabbe shagging a house elf]]]].
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* ContinuationFic
ContinuationFic: It picks up after ''Deathly Hallows''.
* CrackFic: If you were in any doubt, this fic has[[spoiler:[[{{Squick}} Crabbe [[spoiler:[[Crabbe shagging a house elf]]]].
* CrackFic: If you were in any doubt, this fic has
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* DependingOnTheWriter: The beta's disagreements with [=MotS=] herself, both in ideas and writing style, are speculated to be the cause of a lot of the fic's inconsistencies.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: The beta's disagreements with [=MotS=] moonofthesea herself, both in ideas and writing style, are speculated to be the cause of a lot of the fic's inconsistencies.
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* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[DivorceIsTemporary get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the {{ship|ping}} being ''the entire point of the fic''.
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* SecondHandStorytelling: Over the course of the story, Harry and Snape [[DivorceIsTemporary get married twice]], and both times are off-screen despite the {{ship|ping}} shipping being ''the entire point of the fic''.
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* TokenMinority: [[spoiler:Dennis]] is the only character who's depicted as being actually gay rather than subject to SituationalSexuality. The only purpose this seems to serve is to tell the rest of the cast that [[WordOfGay Dumbledore was gay]], because apparently he came out to him. Uh... thanks?
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* TokenMinority: [[spoiler:Dennis]] is the only character who's depicted as being actually gay rather than subject to SituationalSexuality. The only purpose this seems to serve is to tell the rest of the cast that [[WordOfGay Dumbledore was gay]], gay, because apparently he came out to him. Uh... thanks?him.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the MartyStu territory for Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: It comes with the MartyStu territory for WiseBeyondTheirYears:
** Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.
** Richard, who is fully fluent in LittleProfessorDialogue and offers accurate opinions on relationships and office politics (!) ''before he's three years old''.