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''Deathkit's Omen'' is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
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''Deathkit's Omen'' is a ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet Website/FanFictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
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''Deathkit's Omen'' is a Literature/WarriorCats fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
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''Deathkit's Omen'' is a Literature/WarriorCats ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Pretty much the whole of The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: Practically all of the cats in The Votaries of Starrywhisker, and a few others.
* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: Practically all of the cats in The Votaries of Starrywhisker, and a few others.
* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
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* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
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* ColorContrast: Appears to be {{implied}}. The cats in [=GlareClan=] and [=ClowderClan=] have normal appearances (well, mostly), while the cats of The Votaries of Starrywhisker are all bright and neon colors. More especially Lupin.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Kitkit's name, at least until he becomes an apprentice.
* ADogNamedDog: Dog in The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
* DrugsAreBad: Appears to be {{implied}} with Weed.
* EverythingsDeaderWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
* EverythingsLouderWithBagpipes: {{Implied}} with Keyfeather, who has "loud tags".
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Kitkit's name, at least until he becomes an apprentice.
* ADogNamedDog: Dog in The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
* DrugsAreBad: Appears to be {{implied}} with Weed.
* EverythingsDeaderWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
* EverythingsLouderWithBagpipes: {{Implied}} with Keyfeather, who has "loud tags".
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* ColorContrast: Appears to be {{implied}}. The cats in [=GlareClan=] and [=ClowderClan=] have normal appearances (well, mostly), while the cats of The Votaries of Starrywhisker are all bright and neon colors. More especially Lupin.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment:Kitkit's name, at least One character is given the prefix of "Kit" for his name. As kitten names all use "Kit" as a suffix until he becomes an apprentice.
*they become apprentices, this makes his name Kitkit for the first six moons of his life.
%%* ADogNamedDog: Dog in The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
* %%* DrugsAreBad: Appears to be {{implied}} with Weed.
* %%* EverythingsDeaderWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
* %%* EverythingsLouderWithBagpipes: {{Implied}} with Keyfeather, who has "loud tags".
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%%* ADogNamedDog: Dog in The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
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** ''Yafflewing- brown tabby tom with a red stripe down her head''
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* HomosexualReproduction: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
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* StrawberryShorthand: With Strawberryfields.
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* VillainousFashionSense: Deathpaw looks so evil that it's crazy. However, he's actually our protagonist, [[spoiler:and Kitpaw is the evil one]].
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* VillainousFashionSense: Deathpaw looks so evil that it's crazy. However, he's actually our protagonist, [[spoiler:and Kitpaw is the evil one]].one]].
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* ACatInAGangOfDogs: {{Subverted}}. Dog is an actual dog who hangs out with his cat clanmates.
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* ACatInAGangOfDogs: {{Subverted}}. {{Inverted}}. Dog is an actual dog who hangs out with his their cat clanmates.
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* ACatInAGangOfDogs: {{Subverted}}. Dog is an actual dog who hangs out with his cat clanmates.
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* ADogNamedDog: Dog in The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
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It is likely a trollfic, due to the [[AmazingTechnicolorWildlife odd appearances of some of the cats]], the [[CaptainObvious somewhat-obvious prophecy]], and Deathpaw coughing up black water.
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* EverythingsBetterWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
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* EverythingsBetterWithZombies: EverythingsDeaderWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
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Hence the fanfic's name, it's mostly centered around Deathpaw. This fanfic is quite short, and was likely discontinued.
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Hence the fanfic's name, it's mostly centered around Deathpaw. This fanfic is quite short, and was likely discontinued.
discontinued. It was first published on March 7, 2019.
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Some other add-ons include that Kitpaw and Deathpaw are the grandchildren of the leader. They are also aware of a prophecy.
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* EverythingsLouderWithBagpipes: {{Implied}} with Keyfeather, who has "loud tags".
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* StrawberryShorthand: With Strawberryfields.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Pretty much the whole of The Votaries of Starrywhisker.
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* Cliche: So much of it. From the gathered around the pool prologue, to the "main character is bullied for being different" cliche.
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* Cliche: {{Cliche}}: So much of it. From the gathered around the pool prologue, to the "main character is bullied for being different" cliche.cliche.
* ColorContrast: Appears to be {{implied}}. The cats in [=GlareClan=] and [=ClowderClan=] have normal appearances (well, mostly), while the cats of The Votaries of Starrywhisker are all bright and neon colors. More especially Lupin.
* ColorContrast: Appears to be {{implied}}. The cats in [=GlareClan=] and [=ClowderClan=] have normal appearances (well, mostly), while the cats of The Votaries of Starrywhisker are all bright and neon colors. More especially Lupin.
* EverythingsBetterWithZombies: Zombie. No further explaination needed.
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* TechnicolorEyes: Galewind, the [=ClowderClan=] medicine cat, has gold and pink eyes
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* TechnicolorEyes: Galewind, the [=ClowderClan=] medicine cat, has gold and pink eyeseyes.
* TheUndead: Zombie is said to be undead.
* TheUndead: Zombie is said to be undead.
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We begin with the typical "kits become apprentices", and then we get into a training session with cats from both [=GlareClan=] and [=ClowderClan=], where Kitpaw straight up attacks Deathpaw, his own brother.
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[[caption-width-right:350:To be completely fair, neither of the protagonists have the appearance of this cat.]]
''Deathkit's Omen'' is a Literature/WarriorCats fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
Hence the fanfic's name, it's mostly centered around Deathpaw. This fanfic is quite short, and was likely discontinued.
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!This fanfic contains examples of...
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: Practically all of the cats in The Votaries of Starrywhisker, and a few others.
* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
* CaptainObvious: The prophecy mentions "the paws of a kit" and "bones of death" which sound oh, so similar to the names of the main characters! Gee, wonder what it could be!
* Cliche: So much of it. From the gathered around the pool prologue, to the "main character is bullied for being different" cliche.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Kitkit's name, at least until he becomes an apprentice.
* DrugsAreBad: Appears to be {{implied}} with Weed.
* GenderBender: At first, Yafflewing is said to be a tom, but then the description uses "her" almost directly after.
** ''Yafflewing- brown tabby tom with a red stripe down her head''
* MeaningfulName: Vulturestar has a furless head.
* MarkOfTheSupernatural: Deathpaw has bone-like stripes.
* PintSizedKid: Dirtstripe. Kitpaw is said to tower over him, despite being a new apprentice.
* ShortStory: We get allegiances, a prologue, and one chapter. That's it.
* TechnicolorEyes: Galewind, the [=ClowderClan=] medicine cat, has gold and pink eyes
* VillainousFashionSense: Deathpaw looks so evil that it's crazy. However, he's actually our protagonist, [[spoiler:and Kitpaw is the evil one]].
[[caption-width-right:350:To be completely fair, neither of the protagonists have the appearance of this cat.]]
''Deathkit's Omen'' is a Literature/WarriorCats fanfiction, written by Website/FanfictionDotNet user [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9262333/UnderdogFan1254 UnderdogFan1254]].
Hence the fanfic's name, it's mostly centered around Deathpaw. This fanfic is quite short, and was likely discontinued.
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!This fanfic contains examples of...
* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: Practically all of the cats in The Votaries of Starrywhisker, and a few others.
* AnatomicallyImpossibleSex: In the [=ClowderClan=] allegiances, Koipond is said to be expecting Dragonclaw's kits, although Dragonclaw is also a she-cat.
* CaptainObvious: The prophecy mentions "the paws of a kit" and "bones of death" which sound oh, so similar to the names of the main characters! Gee, wonder what it could be!
* Cliche: So much of it. From the gathered around the pool prologue, to the "main character is bullied for being different" cliche.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Kitkit's name, at least until he becomes an apprentice.
* DrugsAreBad: Appears to be {{implied}} with Weed.
* GenderBender: At first, Yafflewing is said to be a tom, but then the description uses "her" almost directly after.
** ''Yafflewing- brown tabby tom with a red stripe down her head''
* MeaningfulName: Vulturestar has a furless head.
* MarkOfTheSupernatural: Deathpaw has bone-like stripes.
* PintSizedKid: Dirtstripe. Kitpaw is said to tower over him, despite being a new apprentice.
* ShortStory: We get allegiances, a prologue, and one chapter. That's it.
* TechnicolorEyes: Galewind, the [=ClowderClan=] medicine cat, has gold and pink eyes
* VillainousFashionSense: Deathpaw looks so evil that it's crazy. However, he's actually our protagonist, [[spoiler:and Kitpaw is the evil one]].
