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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about being a clone.
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''Dear Diary'' is a story adaptation of a [[SelfImposedChallenge Nuzlocke run]] of ''[[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black]]'' written by Troper @/{{deeman45}}.
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''Dear Diary'' is a story adaptation of a [[SelfImposedChallenge Nuzlocke run]] of ''[[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokémon Black]]'' ''VideoGame/PokemonBlack'' written by Troper @/{{deeman45}}.
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* CloningBlues: Stravin feels horrible about being a clone just created to be a novelty fossil Pokémon, while the rest of the team are unique individuals.
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: Stravin feels horrible about being a clone just created to be a novelty fossil Pokémon, while the rest of the team are unique individuals.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Opal constantly blames herself for not being a good enough leader and for the tragedies that befall the team. Strain sees himself as too cowardly to deserve to be on the team, not to mention his [[CloningBlues other issues.]]
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: HeroicSelfDeprecation:
** Opal constantly blames herself for not being a good enough leader and for the tragedies that befall theteam. team.
** Strain sees himself as too cowardly to deserve to be on the team, not to mention his[[CloningBlues [[CloneAngst other issues.]]
** Opal constantly blames herself for not being a good enough leader and for the tragedies that befall the
** Strain sees himself as too cowardly to deserve to be on the team, not to mention his
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeacute;mon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeacute;mon Pokémon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeacute;mon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeacute;mon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeémon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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The story is told in the form of a diary written by Prima, a [[ComMons Patrat]] who loved her home in the wild and never wanted to be captured and is stuck with the {{Jerkass}} trainer Blair, but is also increasingly fascinated by humanity and their accomplishments. All of this contrasts with the team's starter Opal, a WideEyedIdealist Oshawott who has been trained all her life to be TheLeader of the team and a hero helping to reform Unova, but finds that her belief in UndyingLoyalty between human and Pokeémon Pokeacute;mon has its own problems. As they are led by their trainer on an increasingly difficult and emotionally trying journey and meet new humans and teammates with very different opinions on the wild and on humanity's relationship with Pokémon, Prima and Opal rely on each other and begin to question their most basic assumptions, while being confronted by Blair's rival N, who is determined to convince them that Pokémon should be freed from humans altogether.
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* OutDamnedSpot: Blair can't get the image of [[spoiler:Stravin's death]] out of his mind. [[spoiler:Reshiram decides to "help" him.]]
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** Averted with Stravin.
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* CuteGhostGirl: Dusk.
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* CuteGhostGirl: Dusk. Dusk is a friendly and happy-go-lucky ghost who was a young girl as a [[WasOnceAMan human]] before she died.
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* DarkFic: Even by Nuzlocke standards, this story stands out by primarily focusing on the impact of the deaths and trauma the characters endure, featuring loads of RonTheDeathEater and conflicts that go from GrayAndGrayMorality to EvilVsEvil. Though this doesn't stop it from keeping the DeconReconSwitch theme of the games it is based on, just with no [[DebateAndSwitch easy way out]] to the reconstruction part.
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* DarkFic: Even by Nuzlocke standards, this story stands out by primarily focusing on the impact of the deaths and trauma the characters endure, featuring loads of RonTheDeathEater AdaptationalVillainy and conflicts that go from GrayAndGrayMorality to EvilVsEvil. Though this doesn't stop it from keeping the DeconReconSwitch theme of the games it is based on, just with no [[DebateAndSwitch easy way out]] to the reconstruction part.
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* EvilVsEvil: Reshiram vs. Zekrom.
* ExponentialPlotDelay: After the first three gyms, it takes increasingly longer to get from gym to gym due to the main plot of Blair's destiny with Reshiram getting in the way, notably taking only three chapters to get from Nacrene to Castelia City's gyms and 13 parts to get from Castelia's to Nimbasa's. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by members of Blair's team, who discuss how it took so long to get to Nimbus due to everything that happened in between Castelia and Nimbasa.
* ExponentialPlotDelay: After the first three gyms, it takes increasingly longer to get from gym to gym due to the main plot of Blair's destiny with Reshiram getting in the way, notably taking only three chapters to get from Nacrene to Castelia City's gyms and 13 parts to get from Castelia's to Nimbasa's. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by members of Blair's team, who discuss how it took so long to get to Nimbus due to everything that happened in between Castelia and Nimbasa.
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* TheEpic: Two opposed gods awaken and use two [[TheChosenOne chosen ones]] as their tools of a war that will rock the region, leading to a multi-faction civil war, as the Pokémon belonging to one of said chosen ones, who doesn't have the best intentions for the world, joining him on his long journey throughout the region try desperately to defy fate and stop the calamity.
* EvilVsEvil: Neither Reshiramvs. Zekrom.
nor Zekrom have the good of humanity or Pokémon at heart, and are happy to cause tons of destruction and death to get at each other.
* ExponentialPlotDelay: After the first three gyms, it takes increasingly longer to get from gym to gym due to the main plot of Blair's destiny with Reshiram getting in the way, notably taking only three chapters to get from Nacrene to Castelia City's gyms and 13 parts to get from Castelia's to Nimbasa's. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by members of Blair's team, who discuss how it took so long to get toNimbus Nimbasa due to everything that happened in between Castelia and Nimbasa.
* EvilVsEvil: Neither Reshiram
* ExponentialPlotDelay: After the first three gyms, it takes increasingly longer to get from gym to gym due to the main plot of Blair's destiny with Reshiram getting in the way, notably taking only three chapters to get from Nacrene to Castelia City's gyms and 13 parts to get from Castelia's to Nimbasa's. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by members of Blair's team, who discuss how it took so long to get to
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* AdaptationalVillainy: N starts out as the AntiVillain he is in canon but steadily gets a lot worse than in canon thanks to Zekrom's influence. Terrakion and [[spoiler:Cheren]] also become villains when they weren't in canon.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: N starts out as the AntiVillain he is in canon but steadily gets a lot worse than in canon thanks to Zekrom's influence. the influence of Zekrom's, who along with Reshiram is also an example since in canon they were loyal to their heroes' causes without having ulterior motives. Terrakion and [[spoiler:Cheren]] also become villains when they weren't in canon.canon, with the former becoming HeWhoFightsMonsters out of revenge and the latter allying with Team Plasma and JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope and. And then of course there's Blair, an adaptation of the heroic protagonist who in canon is assumed to be a paragon who cares for his Pokémon [[GameplayAndStorySegregation regardless of how the player actually treats them]], who is now abusive to his Pokémon and gets worse thanks to Reshiram.
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* RonTheDeathEater: Just about everyone. The protagonist/Blair, N, Reshiram, Zekrom, [[spoiler:Cheren, Terrakion]]...
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* AdaptationalVillainy: N starts out as the AntiVillain he is in canon but steadily gets a lot worse than in canon thanks to Zekrom's influence. Terrakion and [[spoiler:Cheren]] also become villains when they weren't in canon.
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* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Cenn is reluctant to pursue love again after his first love turned out to be a LiteralManeater who planned to eat him.
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* TheRedBaron: Opal "The Blue Blade".
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* TheRedBaron: RedBaron: Opal "The Blue Blade".
