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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's final chapter posted on the [[Website/SpacebattlesDotCom Spacebattles.com]] forum for review on April 24, 2018(The fact that this was also the day of the release of the [[VideoGame/BattleTech BattleTech video game]] is not exactly a coincidence).
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''Davion & Davion (Deceased)'' is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by drakensis in 2017 and 2018 ("Book 1: Idealist" was written for the 2017 National Novel Writing Month). The first draft of "Book 2: Loyalist" was completed by Christmas 2017 and finished posting by April 2018. "Book 3: [[spoiler: Secessionist]]", which concludes the trilogy, had it's its final chapter posted on the [[Website/SpacebattlesDotCom Spacebattles.com]] forum for review on April 24, 2018(The fact that this was also the day of the release of the [[VideoGame/BattleTech BattleTech video game]] is not exactly a coincidence).
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** The treaty that formed the Star League said that the position of Star Lord would always go to a ''descendant'' of the first Star Lord, not the ''heir'' of the first Star Lord. This causes a SuccessionCrisis when the position of Director-General of the Terran Hegemony falls to a Cameron who is from a different branch of the family, which means that he does not have the right to claim the title of Star Lord by right of birth.
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** The treaty that formed the Star League said that the position of Star First Lord would always go to a ''descendant'' of the first Star First Lord, not the ''heir'' of the first Star First Lord. This causes a SuccessionCrisis when the position of Director-General of the Terran Hegemony falls to a Cameron who is from a different branch of the family, which means that he does not have the right to claim the title of Star First Lord by right of birth.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: As in canon, the most critical strategic success of the Rim Worlds is successfully seizing control of the SLDFs Space Defense Grid across the Terran Hegemony during the coupe. The M3 and M5 'Casper' automated warship drones essentially even the playing field against the overwhelming might of the SLDF and ensure that by the time the guns finally fall silent, the SLDF is a pale shadow of itself.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: As in canon, the most critical strategic success of the Rim Worlds is successfully seizing control of the SLDFs [=SLDF=]'s Space Defense Grid across the Terran Hegemony during the coupe. The M3 and M5 'Casper' automated warship drones essentially even the playing field against the overwhelming might of the SLDF and ensure that by the time the guns finally fall silent, the SLDF is a pale shadow of itself.
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* WarIsHell: By the liberation of Terra many of the SLDF are worn down to the point of medical relief for PTSD.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: As in canon, the most critical strategic success of the Rim Worlds is successfully seizing control of the SLDFs Space Defense Grid across the Terran Hegemony during the coupe. The M3 and M5 'Casper' automated warship drones essentially even the playing field against the overwhelming might of the SLDF and ensure that by the time the guns finally fall silent, the SLDF is a pale shadow of itself.
* WarIsHell: By the liberation of Terra many of the SLDF are worn down to the point of medical relief forPTSD.PTSD after some incredibly brutal fighting lasting years - albeit still a much better outcome than the timeline Hanse remembers due to he and John working hard to end the war quickly.
* WarIsHell: By the liberation of Terra many of the SLDF are worn down to the point of medical relief for
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** Mary Kaga and Weiss (White) Plains are [[VideoGame/KantaiCollection Kancolle]] references. Marge Pritchard’s entire crew are named for ''Literature/HammersSlammers'' characters.
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** Mary Kaga and Weiss (White) Plains are [[VideoGame/KantaiCollection Kancolle]] VideoGame/KanColle references. Marge Pritchard’s entire crew are named for ''Literature/HammersSlammers'' characters.
