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** It's later revealed that [[spoiler:Dave still stole Terezi from Karkat]] as in canon, and that this is why Karkat hates Dave. As for Jack, he just wants to kill everyone, but his grudge against Dave is unexplained.
* GoldFishPoopGang: Team Bad.

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** It's later revealed that [[spoiler:Dave still stole Terezi from Karkat]] as in canon, and that this is why Karkat hates Dave. As for Jack, he just wants to kill everyone, but his grudge against Dave is unexplained.
unexplained. Unless, of course, they both just hate him from what happened in ''HartShapedLove'', as Dead Bowser comes directly from that fic -- maybe they did too.
* GoldFishPoopGang: GoldfishPoopGang: Team Bad.



* MomentKiller: Terezi and Dave are lying naked in bed after kissing, just as they are about to have sex, Will Turner bursts in the door and tells them that they can't have sex without "Condominiums". Then Dave realizes that he's got more important things to do than banging Terezi, such as exorcizing Giratina from his friend John and leaves her alone naked. The moment is further ruined when Karkat comes in and takes a naked picture of her. Then Jack uses it to blackmail her and stabs Will. Basically, this is the WORST ruined moment in history.

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* MomentKiller: Terezi and Dave are lying naked in bed after kissing, just as they are about to have sex, Will Turner bursts in the door and tells them that they can't have sex without "Condominiums". Then Dave realizes that he's got more important things to do than banging Terezi, such as exorcizing exorcising Giratina from his friend John John, and leaves her alone naked. The moment is further ruined when Karkat comes in and takes a naked picture of her. Then Jack uses it to blackmail her and stabs Will. Basically, this is the WORST ruined moment in history.


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* SpecialGuest: Dead Skeleton Bowser (usually just called Dedbowser) is transplanted from ''Fanfic/HartShapedLove''.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: This whole story. There's only two characters in this story that are actually FROM Pokemon: Professor Oak and a minor NPC from Red and Blue named Mr. Fuji.

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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: This whole story. There's only two three characters in this story that are actually FROM Pokemon: Professor Oak and Oak, a minor NPC from Red and Blue named Mr. Fuji.Fuji, and possibly "Elite Four Boss".
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* CompositeCharacter: Nickelback is one guy.



* NotBloodSiblings: [[strike:Ross]] Rose is now John's sister instead, so that she can be Dave's ex.
* OlympusMons: Dave receives the legendary GROUNDOON as his starter pokemon, and he steamrolls absolutely EVERYTHING with it.

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* NotBloodSiblings: [[strike:Ross]] Ross -- er, Rose is now John's sister instead, so that she can be Dave's ex.
* OlympusMons: Dave receives the legendary GROUNDOON as his starter pokemon, Pokemon, and he steamrolls absolutely EVERYTHING with it.


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** In-universe, Jack's unspecified Digimon is stronger than any legendary Pokemon.
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* NotBloodSiblings: [[strike:Ross]] Rose is now John's sister instead, so that she can be Dave's ex.

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* DroppedABridgetOnHim: "ZELDA WUZ KAFKAT? dave thog! NOOOO HE THOUGHT SHE WUZ HOTT!"


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* UnsettlingGenderReveal: "ZELDA WUZ KAFKAT? dave thog! NOOOO HE THOUGHT SHE WUZ HOTT!"
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Compare FanFic/TarvosAndFairieALoveStory.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: A typo shows up every few words. A lot of them are easy mistakes, with typo possibly being made because of the closeness of some keys to others. Other typos involve the letters being out of order, such as when Dave falls into Jack's "Tarp" in chapter 3.

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: A typo shows up every few words. A lot of them are easy mistakes, with typo possibly being made because of the closeness of some keys to others. Other typos involve the letters being out of order, such as when Dave falls into Jack's "Tarp" in chapter 3.3, as well as the frequent misspellings of Dave as "Dvea" and Jack as "Jcak".
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* DisabledLoveInterest: Averted, as many times in the series, it is shown that Terezi is not blind like she is in canon.

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Written by [=XxXCascadaerXxX=], this story combines..

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** It's later revealed that [[spoiler:Dave still stole Terezi from Karkat]] as in canon, and that this is why Karkat hates Dave. As for Jack, he just wants to kill everyone, but his grudge against Dave is unexplained.

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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: Kanto does not work that way. Examples range from the mild (Dave and Will being able to climb the InsurmountableWaistHighFence to get to Mt. Moon from Cerulean City isn't that difficult to imagine) to the weird (Cinnabar Island being landlocked) to the very bizarre (walking from Pewter City through Lavender Town in order to get to Vermilion City, without going through Cerulean at all).



* HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday: Dave is mentioned to be "not gay" several times during the adventure, mainly when the author takes time to describe the hotness of male characters
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: This whole story. There's only two characters in this story that are actually FROM Pokemon, Professor Oak, and a minor NPC from Red and Blue named Mr. Fuji.
* MomentKiller: Terezi and Dave are lying naked in bed after kissing, just as they are about to have sex, Will Turner bursts in the door and tells them that they can't have sex without "Condominuims". Then Dave realizes that he's got more important things to do than banging Terezi, such as exorcizing Giratina from his friend John and leaves her alone naked. The moment is further ruined when Karkat comes in and takes a naked picture of her. Then Jack uses it to blackmail her and stabs Will. Basically, this is the WORST ruined moment in history.

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* HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday: Dave is mentioned to be "not gay" several times during the adventure, mainly when the author takes time to describe the hotness of male characters
characters.
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: This whole story. There's only two characters in this story that are actually FROM Pokemon, Pokemon: Professor Oak, Oak and a minor NPC from Red and Blue named Mr. Fuji.
* MomentKiller: Terezi and Dave are lying naked in bed after kissing, just as they are about to have sex, Will Turner bursts in the door and tells them that they can't have sex without "Condominuims"."Condominiums". Then Dave realizes that he's got more important things to do than banging Terezi, such as exorcizing Giratina from his friend John and leaves her alone naked. The moment is further ruined when Karkat comes in and takes a naked picture of her. Then Jack uses it to blackmail her and stabs Will. Basically, this is the WORST ruined moment in history.



** Apparently, incredibly strong legendary pokemon are apparently REALLY easy to obtain as well, because Jack gets both Shadow Lugia AND Zekrom with absolutely no explanation as to how he obtained them

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** Apparently, incredibly strong legendary pokemon Pokemon are apparently REALLY easy to obtain as well, because Jack gets both Shadow Lugia AND Zekrom with absolutely no explanation as to how he obtained themthem.



* RunningGag: There's a weird one involving the "fact" that ghosts LOVE money, and an equally strange one where Karkat calls Dave gay whenever they fight

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* RunningGag: There's a weird one involving the "fact" that ghosts LOVE money, and an equally strange one where Karkat calls Dave gay whenever they fightfight.
* SacrificialLamb: Adrian Brody, the Gym Leader of Cinnabar Island.
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* DroppedABridgetOnHim: "ZELDA WUZ KAFKAT? dave thog! NOOOO HE THOUGHT SHE WUZ HOTT!"

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Written by XxXCascadaerXxX, this story combines..

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Written by XxXCascadaerXxX, [=XxXCascadaerXxX=], this story combines..



* AccidentalInnuendo: Chapter 13's title, "STEAMY SEX! WITH GOSTBUSTERS!" is an example of this. Yes, this chapter has a sex scene. No, the Ghostbusters are NOT INVOLVED WITH IT. They're just in the chapter. That's what the "WITH GOSTBUSTERS" means. They are not being sexed up in this chapter.

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The worst part? It's a month old, already 20 chapters long, and STILL UPDATING.

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The worst part? It's a month old, already 20 chapters long, and STILL UPDATING.


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* ActionGirl: Terezi has a pretty badass moment during the fight with Team Bad in chapter 22. She's also probably the most competent of Dave's crew.


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* DeathRay: Jake England has possession of the Dave Kill Lazer, which, like the name implies, can only kill Dave. It merely incapacitates others, and only has one shot before it needs to reload, so it kinda sucks.


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* GottaCatchEmAll: The Gym Badges


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* RunningGag: There's a weird one involving the "fact" that ghosts LOVE money, and an equally strange one where Karkat calls Dave gay whenever they fight
* StupidEvil: Team Bad is the epitome of this. The only thing they ever think about is how to kill off Dave, regardless of the situation. They often even go ridiculously far out of their way to do. Jake England is probably this too, as in one chapter, he goes off and murders a few Scythers because he's bored.
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[[http://edrobot.blogspot.com/2012/09/jake-englishs-mysterious-theater-of_24.html An MST is currently in the works,]] courtesy of Fanfic/JakeEnglishsMysteriousTheaterOfScientificRomanceFromTheYear3000.
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Oh yeah, Elite Four Boss too. He's kind of an asshole.
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The worst part? It's a month old, already 10 chapters long, and STILL UPDATING.

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The worst part? It's a month old, already 10 20 chapters long, and STILL UPDATING.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: Chapter 13's title, "STEAMY SEX! WITH GOSTBUSTERS!" is an example of this. Yes, this chapter has a sex scene. No, the Ghostbusters are NOT INVOLVED WITH IT. They're just in the chapter. That's what the "WITH GOSTBUSTERS" means. They are not being sexed up in this chapter.
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* CluelessMystery: Both subverted and played straight in Chapter 20. When both Nickelback is shot and Link is beaten to death, Dave, Terezi, Will, Team Bad, and Elite Four Boss all split up to solve the mystery. [[spoiler: It turns out Elite Four Boss shot Nickelback, which makes sense if you note his rather nonchalant behavior when the murder is first revealed. However, he didn't kill Link. Link was beaten to death by Rocky Balboa, who was working for Elite Four Boss and disguised himself as Professor Oak. The problem? Rocky never once appeared in the story before this point, and there were NO clues pointing to him at all.

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* CluelessMystery: Both subverted and played straight in Chapter 20. When both Nickelback is shot and Link is beaten to death, Dave, Terezi, Will, Team Bad, and Elite Four Boss all split up to solve the mystery. [[spoiler: It turns out Elite Four Boss shot Nickelback, which makes sense if you note his rather nonchalant behavior when the murder is first revealed. However, he didn't kill Link. Link was beaten to death by Rocky Balboa, who was working for Elite Four Boss and disguised himself as Professor Oak. The problem? Rocky never once appeared in the story before this point, and there were NO clues pointing to him at all.]]
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* CluelessMystery: Both subverted and played straight in Chapter 20. When both Nickelback is shot and Link is beaten to death, Dave, Terezi, Will, Team Bad, and Elite Four Boss all split up to solve the mystery. [[spoiler: It turns out Elite Four Boss shot Nickelback, which makes sense if you note his rather nonchalant behavior when the murder is first revealed. However, he didn't kill Link. Link was beaten to death by Rocky Balboa, who was working for Elite Four Boss and disguised himself as Professor Oak. The problem? Rocky never once appeared in the story before this point, and there were NO clues pointing to him at all.
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* NoNameGiven: Elite Four Boss is only referred to by his title. This is very confusing in a MassivelyMultiplayerCrossover like this.

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* DeadpanSnarker: Jack Noir and Elite Four Boss



* MartyStu: Both subverted AND played somewhat straight with Dave. He himself is absolutely pathetic, but he possess the gamebreaking power of GROUNDOON.
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* ForTheEvulz: Jack and Karkat, who want to kill Dave and take his Pokemon for NO REASON. They wanted this since the first chapter, when they haven't even met Dave yet.


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* SurroundedByIdiots: Jack Noir, as seen in the page quote.

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->''" YOU DUMBTARD GIVE ME THAT CAMERA."''

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->''" YOU DUMBTARD GIVE ME THAT CAMERA."''why am i stuck with all these homos?"''



->''" and now i will poach YOU!"''
--> -- '''Jake England The Evil Poacher'''

->''" my bro is an eviel ninja who raps!"''
--> -- '''Dave Stdider'''

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->''" and now i will poach YOU!"''
--> -- '''Jake England The Evil Poacher'''

->''" my bro is an eviel ninja who raps!"''
--> -- '''Dave Stdider'''
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*FacePalm: Jack does this THREE TIMES in Chapter 17

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* FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: Dave & Co. seem to be complete okay with just stopping to chat with Team Bad while they're fighting and/or trying to kill Dave, no matter what the situation or location. Most notably on the cruise ship.

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* FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: Dave & Co. seem to be complete okay with just stopping to chat Done very frequently with Team Bad while they're fighting and/or trying Bad, to kill Dave, no matter what the situation or location. Most notably on point where the cruise ship.author flat out forgets the setting and puts whiteboards on desert islands, and random unexplained helicopters in ice caves.



* TransplantedCharacterFic: This story basically takes every character from everything ever from their source material and dumps them into the pokemon world with no explanation. Most notably, Will Turner and pretty much all the Legend Of Zelda Characters.

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* TransplantedCharacterFic: This story basically takes every character from everything ever from their source material and dumps them into the pokemon world with no explanation. Most notably, Will Turner and pretty much all the Legend Of Zelda Characters.Characters.
*VillainExitStageLeft: Jake England escapes into a submarine after Dave & co. (With Team Bad) defeat him.
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-{{Pokemon}}

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-{{Pokemon}}
-Franchise/{{Pokemon}}



-SuperMarioBros

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-SuperMarioBros
-Franchise/SuperMarioBros



-TheLegendOfZelda

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-TheLegendOfZelda
-Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda

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->''" NO YOU RETARDED TROLL."''
--> -- '''Jack Noir''', while scolding Karkat.

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->''" NO YOU RETARDED TROLL.DUMBTARD GIVE ME THAT CAMERA."''
--> -- '''Jack Noir''', while scolding Karkat.
Noir'''

->''" and now i will poach YOU!"''
--> -- '''Jake England The Evil Poacher'''

->''" my bro is an eviel ninja who raps!"''
--> -- '''Dave Stdider'''



* TransplantedCharacterFic: This story basically takes every character from everything ever from their source material and dumps them into the pokemon world with no explanation. Most notably, Will Turner and pretty much all the Legend Of Zelda Characters.

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* TransplantedCharacterFic: This story basically takes every character from everything ever from their source material and dumps them into the pokemon world with no explanation. Most notably, Will Turner and pretty much all the Legend Of Zelda Characters.
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* MomentKiller: Terezi and Dave are lying naked in bed after kissing, just as they are about to have sex, Will Turner bursts in the door and tells them that they can't have sex without "Condominuims". Then Dave realizes that he's got more important things to do than banging Terezi, such as exorcizing Giratina from his friend John and leaves her alone naked. The moment is further ruined when Karkat comes in and takes a naked picture of her. Then Jack uses it to blackmail her and stabs Will. Basically, this is the WORST ruined moment in history.



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->''" NO YOU RETARDED TROLL."''
--> -- '''Jack Noir''', while scolding Karkat.

'''DAVE STDIDER POKEMON TRANER''' could quite possibly be in the running for the worst fanfiction to ever exist in this world. It is truly a special kind of awful in a way that not even MY IMMORTAL could hope to be. Reading DAVE STDIDER is a feeling comparable to getting a colonoscopy performed on you with a cactus.

Basically, it's really, ''really'' bad.

Written by XxXCascadaerXxX, this story combines..

-{{Pokemon}}

-{{Homestuck}}

-SuperMarioBros

-PiratesOfTheCaribbean

-TheLegendOfZelda

...And more. FAR more.

The story details Dave Strider's quest to obtain the Kanto Region's 8 badges and become champion with the help of his friends Will Turner and Terezi Pyrope. Along the way he catches ghosts, meets Thor, enters the battle of the bands, goes on a cruise, and more, all the while thwarting the evil Team Bad (Made up of Homestuck characters Karkat Vantas and Jack Noir) and JAKE ENGLAND THE EVIL POACHER.

The worst part? It's a month old, already 10 chapters long, and STILL UPDATING.

You can find it here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7942034/1/DAVE_STDIDER_POKEMON_TRANER

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*DisguisedInDrag: When Karkat and Jack dress up as Zelda and the King respectively to trick Dave into getting them the Triforce. Karkat complains about it, blowing their cover.
*EvilPlan: Jack's plan to trap Dave in Mt. Moon
*EvilPoacher: Jake England is literally described as this EVERY TIME HE IS MENTIONED.
*EvilVersusEvil: In Chapter 9, Jack and Karkat team up with Dave and friends briefly to take down Jake England, or try to at least.
*FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue: Dave & Co. seem to be complete okay with just stopping to chat with Team Bad while they're fighting and/or trying to kill Dave, no matter what the situation or location. Most notably on the cruise ship.
*GoldFishPoopGang: Team Bad.
*HeroicAlbino: Dave is this in Homestuck canon, so it can be assumed that he is here as well.
*HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday: Dave is mentioned to be "not gay" several times during the adventure, mainly when the author takes time to describe the hotness of male characters
*MartyStu: Both subverted AND played somewhat straight with Dave. He himself is absolutely pathetic, but he possess the gamebreaking power of GROUNDOON.
*MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: This whole story. There's only two characters in this story that are actually FROM Pokemon, Professor Oak, and a minor NPC from Red and Blue named Mr. Fuji.
*OlympusMons: Dave receives the legendary GROUNDOON as his starter pokemon, and he steamrolls absolutely EVERYTHING with it.
**Apparently, incredibly strong legendary pokemon are apparently REALLY easy to obtain as well, because Jack gets both Shadow Lugia AND Zekrom with absolutely no explanation as to how he obtained them
*OutOfCharacter: Everyone except possibly Jack. Especially Will Turner, who has a habit of saying things like "Bro" and "Rad"
*PaperThinDisguise: In Chapter 8, Jack and Karkat attempt to sneak on a cruise ship by wearing fake mustaches. The nameless "ticket taker guy" calls them out on it and Jack shanks him.
*RougeAnglesOfSatin: A typo shows up every few words. A lot of them are easy mistakes, with typo possibly being made because of the closeness of some keys to others. Other typos involve the letters being out of order, such as when Dave falls into Jack's "Tarp" in chapter 3.
*ThoseTwoBadGuys: Team Bad's Jack and Karkat.
*TransplantedCharacterFic: This story basically takes every character from everything ever from their source material and dumps them into the pokemon world with no explanation. Most notably, Will Turner and pretty much all the Legend Of Zelda Characters.

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