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** As a bonus, said GratuitousFrench translates to [[spoiler: "Soft Words Of The Ear"]] AKA [[spoiler:''Pillow Talk.'']]
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** Chapter 39 - [[spoiler: a group of Merchant thugs break into the Hebert household, looking for Taylor/Brushstroke. A PapaWolf - induced CurbStompBattle ensues, after which Taylor finally finds out her father is Chessman.]]

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** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} now prowling about Brockton Bay.]] The next few chapters show that [[spoiler: this wasn't an isolated incident - Chapter 34 starts with the PRT dead tired from a night of weird encounters, and Oni Lee later mentions one following him on Halloween.]]

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** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} now prowling about Brockton Bay.]] The next few chapters show that [[spoiler: this wasn't an isolated incident - Chapter 34 starts with the PRT dead tired from a night of weird encounters, (heavily implied to be more {{Youkai}}) and Oni Lee later mentions being followed by one following him on Halloween.Halloween in Ch. 35.]]
** Chapter 35 has [[spoiler: Purity ask Taylor set up a meeting with Battery at Pawprint Shrine.]] It's not until Chapter 38 that we find out why - [[spoiler: Purity wants to get out of Brockton Bay, and she's willing to turn information on the Empire to do so.
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** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} now prowling about Brockton Bay.]]

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** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} now prowling about Brockton Bay.]] The next few chapters show that [[spoiler: this wasn't an isolated incident - Chapter 34 starts with the PRT dead tired from a night of weird encounters, and Oni Lee later mentions one following him on Halloween.]]
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*** There's also mention of [[spoiler:Sophia Hess/Shadow Stalker being arrested and potentially joining the Wards. Velocity mentions that Alan Barnes vouched for her personally while talking to Chessman. Oh, and did we mention that this was ''after'' the above-mentioned meeting?]] While we don't see the aftermath, [[spoiler: Sophia never appears after this chapter...]]
** Chapter 12 - [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.

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*** There's also mention of [[spoiler:Sophia Hess/Shadow Stalker being arrested and potentially joining the Wards. Velocity mentions that Alan Barnes vouched for her personally while talking to Chessman. Oh, and did we mention that this was ''after'' Chessman... who had just gotten out of the above-mentioned meeting?]] meeting.]] While we don't see the aftermath, [[spoiler: Sophia never appears after this chapter...]]
** Chapter 12 - [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.



** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} prowling about Brockton Bay.]]

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** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} now prowling about Brockton Bay.]]

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** Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.
** Chapter 13. [[spoiler: The Protectorate has taken notice of Sunny's stunt in the last chapter and the sheer WeatherManipulation involved, and have begun to investigate the shrine.]]

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** Chapter 12. 12 - [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.
** Chapter 13. 13 - [[spoiler: The Protectorate has taken notice of Sunny's stunt in the last chapter and the sheer WeatherManipulation involved, and have begun to investigate the shrine.]]
** Chapter 33 - [[spoiler: On Halloween, Yuuta catches Emma and her new friend Karen taking down the flyers/exorcism charms made by Taylor... and Karen turns out to be a ''[[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]]'', proving that Sunny wasn't paranoid and there are {{Youkai}} prowling about Brockton Bay.
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*** Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.

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*** ** Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.
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* Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers.]] The fallout of this is shown in later chapters.

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* *** Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers.]] powers, in a way that makes it perfectly clear to Lung that this was the Kami's doing]]. The fallout of this act is shown in later chapters.
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* Chapter 12. [[spoiler: Lung finally confronts Taylor at the shrine, thinking that she's trying to muscle in on his territory. Taylor is understandably nervous at first, but eventually find her confidence, culminating in actually ''telling Lung off''. Lung strikes her and orders Oni Lee to dispose of her... and is immediately [[BoltOfDivineRetribution struck by lightning]] in one of the few direct demonstrations of Sunny/Amaterasu's powers.]] The fallout of this is shown in later chapters.
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* TheReasonYouuSuckSpeech: Taylor gives a short, but effective one to Lung when they first meet.

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* TheReasonYouuSuckSpeech: Taylor gives a short, but effective one to Lung when they first meet.
-->"You can't answer me, and that is why you have no claim here. This shrine does not belong to you, it belongs to the people of this city. And this city does not belong to you, because ''you do not belong to it''. You take, but never give."


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*** Lung himself engages in this by showing up to the tea ceremony without formal wear or [[WalkingShirtlessScene even a shirt]]. Mind you, this is ''after'' Lung found out [[BoltOfDivineRetribution the hard way]] that you don't trifle with Sunny or her Miko.
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** There's also mention of [[spoiler:Sophia Hess/Shadow Stalker being arrested and potentially joining the Wards. Velocity mentions that Alan Barnes vouched for her personally while talking to Chessman. Oh, and did we mention that this was ''after'' the above-mentioned meeting?]] While we don't see the aftermath, [[spoiler: Sophia never appears after this chapter...]]

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** *** There's also mention of [[spoiler:Sophia Hess/Shadow Stalker being arrested and potentially joining the Wards. Velocity mentions that Alan Barnes vouched for her personally while talking to Chessman. Oh, and did we mention that this was ''after'' the above-mentioned meeting?]] While we don't see the aftermath, [[spoiler: Sophia never appears after this chapter...]]

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** Chapter 9- [[spoiler: Emma bullies Taylor again, only to be confronted by the ABB members looking out for Taylor. Later on, Taylor goes out painting and is nearly caught by Armsmaster, putting her and ''especially'' Sunny on the Protectorate's radar.]]

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** Chapter 9- [[spoiler: Emma 9 - [[spoiler:Emma bullies Taylor again, only to be confronted by the ABB members looking out for Taylor. Later on, Taylor goes out painting and is nearly caught by Armsmaster, putting her and ''especially'' Sunny on the Protectorate's radar.]]
** Chapter 11 - Danny and Taylor [[spoiler:get called into a meeting with Ms. Blackwell and Alan Barnes (Emma's father) about the incident in Ch. 9. Alan accuses Taylor of being an ABB member and sending gang members after Emma, even threatening to sue Danny, before being shut down by [[CharacterWitness Mr. Hendrick]] (who turns out to be the former superintendent of the school district, and was there for a tour with the current superintendent)]]. More importantly, the end of the chapter reveals that [[spoiler:Danny is a Protectorate cape by the name of Chessman]].
** There's also mention of [[spoiler:Sophia Hess/Shadow Stalker being arrested and potentially joining the Wards. Velocity mentions that Alan Barnes vouched for her personally while talking to Chessman. Oh, and did we mention that this was ''after'' the above-mentioned meeting?]] While we don't see the aftermath, [[spoiler: Sophia never appears after this chapter...
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** Chapter 9- [[spoiler: Emma bullies Taylor again, only to be confronted by the ABB members looking out for Taylor. Later on, Taylor goes out painting and is nearly caught by Armsmaster, putting her and ''especially'' Sunny on the Protectorate's radar.]]
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: Oni Lee to Lung - "I saw a shrine maiden." It has less to do with the response itself and more to do with the fact that Oni Lee [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness actually interrupted him.]]
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** Taylor meets Oni Lee this way when chasing after Sunny in the Asian district. [[spoiler: Fortunately, Oni Lee confuses her for a {{Miko}} and not only spares her, but ''apologizes''.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 1 ends with the implication that [[Taylor's father Danny had a [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger]] event.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 1 ends with the implication that [[Taylor's [[spoiler:Taylor's father Danny just had a [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger]] event.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 1 ends with the implication that [[Taylor's father Danny had a [[TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening Trigger]] event.]]



--> '''Bagrat:''' Oh, that? Don't worry about it, just trust me on this one. The little [[GratuitousFrench pêche]] has earned it.

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--> '''Bagrat:''' [[spoiler:'''Bagrat:''' Oh, that? Don't worry about it, just trust me on this one. The little [[GratuitousFrench pêche]] has earned it.]]
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* WhamLine: As early as chapter 2: "Amaterasu smiled."\

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* WhamLine: As early as chapter 2: "Amaterasu smiled."

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* WhamLine: As early as chapter 2: "Amaterasu smiled.""\
** Chapter 45 ends with one, mostly for the implication of '''who''' is saying it.
--> '''Bagrat:''' Oh, that? Don't worry about it, just trust me on this one. The little [[GratuitousFrench pêche]] has earned it.

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* BetrayalInsurance: Victoria tries to set up some in the possible event that her mother finds out that Chekov was given to the family by Brushstroke (a cape with a Master rating) and gives the kitten away out of paranoia, so she publishes Chekov's picture online and into the public eye to forestall Carol's reaction. Carol is stunned when she hears her daughter's rationale.

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* BetrayalInsurance: Victoria tries to set up some in the possible event that her mother finds out that Chekov was given to the family by Brushstroke (a cape with a Master rating) and gives the kitten away out of paranoia, so she publishes Chekov's picture online and into the public eye to forestall Carol's reaction. [[ArmorPiercingResponse Carol is stunned when she hears her daughter's rationale.rationale]].



** In a much more minor example, Chekov will bat at your face if he wants you to wake up. As Mark and Vicky have found out, though, if you don't, those paws contain *claws*. It's purely innocent, but it does hurt and forces them to wake up.

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** In a much more minor example, Chekov [[CuteKitten Chekov]] will bat at your face if he wants you to wake up. As Mark and Vicky have found out, though, if you don't, those paws contain *claws*. It's purely innocent, but it does hurt and forces them to wake up.



*** Hitsuji, the sheep: Danny.



* {{Irony}}: When Taylor first meets Oni Lee at the shrine, her first instinct is to find some way to ''keep'' the situation from escalating.

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When Taylor first meets Oni Lee at the shrine, her first instinct is to find some way to ''keep'' the situation from escalating.escalating.
** As befitting the irony that comes with getting parahuman powers, Danny Hebert, the union man dedicated to helping workers and labourers get good, paying jobs, triggered with the power of TheMinionMaster, giving him all the cheap, unpaid labor that anyone could ask for.



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: [[TheMinionMaster Chessman]] (Danny) and his debut on the cape scene, detailed [[AllThereInTheManual in a separate post]]: In retaliation for an attack on the Docks by the E88, [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge he crashed an E88 rally]] with ''[[TankGoodness three fully-grown Sherman Tanks]]''.

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[[TheMinionMaster Chessman]] (Danny) and his debut on the cape scene, detailed [[AllThereInTheManual in a separate post]]: In retaliation for an attack on the Docks by the E88, [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge he crashed an E88 rally]] with ''[[TankGoodness three fully-grown Sherman Tanks]]''.Tanks]]''.
** After Purity makes her leave from Brockton Bay, a throwaway line in the next chapter mentions the Protectorate arresting the last few capes the Empire has left, eliminating the gang as a threat.



* OnSecondThought: When Sunny takes Taylor on a five-minute, hi-speed wolf-back ride to the Protectorate Rig, Taylor is indignant that she could do this and yet makes Taylor ride her bike everywhere. Then Sunny [[WalkOnWater runs across the bay]] and [[WallRun up the side of the rig]] to the meeting platform.
--> '''Taylor:''' I take it back. I'm fine with the bicycle.

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* OnSecondThought: OnSecondThought:
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When Sunny takes Taylor on a five-minute, hi-speed wolf-back ride to the Protectorate Rig, Taylor is indignant that she could do this and yet makes Taylor ride her bike everywhere. Then Sunny [[WalkOnWater runs across the bay]] and [[WallRun up the side of the rig]] to the meeting platform.
--> ---> '''Taylor:''' I take it back. I'm fine with the bicycle.bicycle.
** While Armsmaster is negotiating with Piggot for some actual time off, Piggot suggests that [[TheRival Dauntless]] get put in charge while he's away. [[GreenEyedMonster Armsmaster]] initially balks until he thinks of "inexperienced, naive, totally unprepared Dauntless" being in charge of the weird-hole that Brockton Bay has become, and agrees that that's a great idea.



*** Even Director Piggot gets put through some, when she makes the request that the capes under her command get more therapy, because it would make them happier.



** Taylor's outfit is this on the first day she met Oni Lee. He first saw her as a white girl near the site of an Empire drive-by shooting, and went to attack her... until he saw she was wearing a shrine maiden's outfit. He stops immediately and that kicks off a lot of changes for the ABB.



** Taylor's outfit is this on the first day she met Oni Lee. He first saw her as a white girl near the site of an Empire drive-by shooting, and went to attack her... until he saw she was wearing a shrine maiden's outfit. He stops immediately and that kicks off a lot of changes for the ABB.

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* {{Adorkable}}: Taylor, especially when she's playing with Sunny or {{Squee}}ing over meeting Protectorate heroes like Armsmaster and Legend. When [[spoiler: she finds out her father is the Protectorate hero Chessman]], she wonders if she can get ''all'' the autographs.



* AnimalNemesis: PlayedForLaughs; after Armsmaster is stymied by Sunny/Good Dog, he gains a rather noticeable fixation on trying to figure out exactly what she is, aside from being a potential master projection. His teammates are quite bemused by the idea.
--> '''Battery:''' I know a probable new Master in town is a big deal, but I'm kind of having trouble moving past the fact that Armsmaster has a canine nemesis.



** Throughout the story, characters have given Taylor and Sunny a gift of a handful of beads or some jewelry, which she has placed in a partitioned box with segments corresponding to the 13 zodiac animals. Time will tell what significance this will play.

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** Throughout the story, characters have given Taylor and Sunny a gift of a handful of beads or beads, some jewelry, jewelry or the like, which she has placed in a partitioned box with segments corresponding to the 13 zodiac animals. Time will tell what significance this will play.



*** ??: Kayden.
*** ??: Emma.

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*** ??: Ushi, the ox: Kayden.
*** ??: Emma.Uma, the horse: Emma.
*** Tora, the tiger: Lung.



** And later, we have this exchange after Lung asks what the Kami wants from him.
---> '''Taylor:''' I would like you to start [[WalkingShirtlessScene wearing a shirt]].
---> '''Lung:''' ''[[SeriousBusiness Never.]]''



* TheManBehindTheMan: Sophia was this for Emma. With her reinforcing the "Hunter-Prey" line, and providing backup in the form of physical strength and numbers, Emma was able to bully Taylor with relatively little stopping her. Once Sophia is caught in her Shadow Stalker outfit, things rapidly go downhill for her. While some of this can be laid at the hands of Taylor getting a character witness and the ABB closing ranks around "Miko," she notably worsens once Sophia is permanently out of the scene, undergoing a minor mental breakdown.

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* TheManBehindTheMan: Sophia was this for Emma. With her reinforcing the "Hunter-Prey" line, and providing backup in the form of physical strength and numbers, Emma was able to bully Taylor with relatively little stopping her. Once Sophia is caught in her Shadow Stalker outfit, things rapidly go downhill for her. While some of this can be laid at the hands of Taylor getting a character witness and the ABB closing ranks around "Miko," she notably worsens once Sophia is permanently out of the scene, picture, undergoing a minor mental breakdown.


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* {{Squee}}: Taylor's inner hero {{fangirl}} often pops up in this fic; she has to hold herself back when Battery invites her into the inner workings of the Protectorate Rig, or when Armsmaster visits the shrine.
** When Legend pays a visit to Brockton Bay, she wonders if he'll stick around long enough for an autograph, and when [[spoiler: she finds out her father is the Protectorate hero Chessman]], she wonders if she can get ''all'' the autographs.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: After Good Dog goes on a spree of dismantling the Empire capes to be easily arrested, the Protectorate need to find out more about Good Dog and her apparent master Brushstroke. But after investigation proves inconclusive and surveillance is off the table, Director Piggot instructs the heroes to just go to the shrine and employ the one tactic they haven't used yet.
--> '''Piggot:''' It's called... ''talking''.


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** And when the Ōkami decides she wants something from him, she starts showing up everywhere he goes, in the bar having a drink, on his car outside his meetings, even at a strip club being fawned over by the girls, until finally Lung caves.


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* WalkingShirtlessScene: Justified in Lung's mind in that his bare chest is an icon of his strength and disregard for propriety, as he is the dragon, and covering up for any reason would be a sign of weakness, of retreat. Taylor/Brushstroke/Miko takes offense to this.
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* ApronMatron: The "Baachans", and their willingness to make Taylor know everything about being local Miko.

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* ApronMatron: The "Baachans", and their willingness to make sure Taylor know knows everything about being local Miko.



** It's noted that if you're far enough away, or Sunny isn't paying attention, several members of the Protectorate point out that Sunny is ''way'' too big and clearly not a domestic breed of dog.

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** It's noted that It seems to be weaker if you're far enough away, or Sunny isn't paying attention, several members of the Protectorate point out that Sunny is ''way'' too big and clearly not a domestic breed of dog.
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** Oni Lee's response to several mercenaries holding him at gunpoint and demanding he turn over the little girl they just chased onto the shrine's grounds?
--> '''Oni Lee:''' “I will need to clean my tools again.”
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* CityOfWeirdos: Yuuta receives absolutely NoSympathy for being bothered by a shrine maiden riding off on a wolf the size of a donkey.
-->'''Souta:''' ''How'' long you lived in the Bay?
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** In a much more minor example, Chekov will bat at your face if he wants you to wake up. As Mark and Vicky have found out, though, if you don't, those paws contain *claws*. It's purely innocent, but it does hurt and forces them to wake up.


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** Tattletale gets upset because [[PokeInTheThirdEye Sunny somehow keeps photobombing her powers.]]

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Amaterasu is incredibly friendly and affectionate, but when [[PrideBeforeAFall Lung backhands Taylor]], Amaterasu responds by [[spoiler: smiting him with a literal BoltOfDivineRetribution ...from clear skies.]]

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Amaterasu Amaterasu/Sunny is incredibly friendly and affectionate, but when [[PrideBeforeAFall Lung backhands Taylor]], Amaterasu responds by [[spoiler: smiting him with a literal BoltOfDivineRetribution ...from clear skies.]]



** [[spoiler: Another occasion is when she goes after Skidmark and the Merchants for attacking the Hebert household]] Let's just say the sun that morning was less warming and more oppressive.

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** [[spoiler: Another occasion is when she Amaterasu goes after Skidmark and the Merchants for attacking the Hebert household]] Let's just say the sun that morning was less warming and more oppressive.



* ButNowIMustGo: After Kayden agrees to turning herself into the Protectorate in exchange for safety for her children, she asks to say goodbye to Taylor and Sunshine before she is escorted to another city.



* ChekhovsGift: Throughout the story, characters have given Taylor and Sunny a gift of a handful of beads, which she has placed in a partitioned box with segments corresponding to the 13 zodiac animals. Time will tell what significance this will play.
** Nezumi, the rat: Oni Lee.
** Ondori, the rooster: Mrs. Henrick, her neighbour.
** Inoshishi, the boar: Baachan, Yuuta's grandmother.
** Saru, the monkey: Haru, Yuuta and Souta.
** Earlier in the story, Danny is given a beautifully painted chimera model by Taylor. When Merchants attack his house, he uses it to fend them off.

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Throughout the story, characters have given Taylor and Sunny a gift of a handful of beads, beads or some jewelry, which she has placed in a partitioned box with segments corresponding to the 13 zodiac animals. Time will tell what significance this will play.
** *** Nezumi, the rat: Oni Lee.
** *** Ondori, the rooster: Mrs. Henrick, her neighbour.
** *** Inoshishi, the boar: Baachan, Yuuta's grandmother.
** *** Saru, the monkey: Haru, Yuuta and Souta.
*** ??: Kayden.
*** ??: Emma.
** Earlier in the story, Danny is given a beautifully painted chimera model by Taylor. When Merchants attack his house, he grows it to full size with his power and uses it to fend them off.



* GetOut: [[spoiler: What happens to Skidmark after he gets Sunshine on his case: she drags him to the highway, [[BulletDancing shoots some ink bullets at his feet]], and basically runs him out of town.]]

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* GetOut: [[spoiler: What happens to Skidmark [[spoiler: Skidmark]] after he gets Sunshine on his case: she drags him to the highway, [[BulletDancing shoots some ink bullets at his feet]], and basically runs him out of town.]]



* ImpliedAnswer: After a HeelRealization at Pawprint Shrine, Armsmaster heads back to base and [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes a sick day]], and when Dragon checks in on him, he asks her if he's an asshole. The "Um" she gives is all the confirmation he needs, prompting her to quickly clarify herself.



* LetMeGetThisStraight: Taylor makes the following statement after some of Sunshine's antics prove to have a very clear motive.
--> '''Taylor:''' Sunny, did you ''wipe out the Empire'', dig a ''hundred miles'' or so of tunnels, and then ''manipulate Lung'' into buying up the street… [[spoiler: ''[[SuddenlyShouting SO YOU COULD OWN A HOT SPRING?!]]'']]
--> '''Sunny:''' ''[[BluntYes Mmmmmbark]].''



* MadnessMantra: "Tea time is courtesy time."
** After learning this from the Baachans, Taylor repeats this over and over in her head during the 4-way meeting between herself, the ABB, the PRT, and Purity at the shrine to get through it without losing herself to panic.



** A pair of twins come visit Pawprint Shrine, but are suddenly terrified by Sunshine dropping back in and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere quickly take their leave]]. Perhaps the [[{{Kitsune}} fox-tails]] [[GlamourFailure on their rears]] had something to do with it.



* OnSecondThought: When Sunny takes Taylor on a five-minute, hi-speed wolf-back ride to the Protectorate Rig, Taylor is indignant that she could do this and yet makes Taylor ride her bike everywhere. Then Sunny [[WalkOnWater runs across the bay]] and [[WallRun up the side of the rig]] to the meeting platform.
--> '''Taylor:''' I take it back. I'm fine with the bicycle.



** Lung finds that Oni Lee has managed to defy him in one way- the tea ceremony that Taylor was taught for this particular occasion will force him to be in the Sieza position for ''four hours,'' demonstrating his displeasure with his boss' former lack of any politeness. [[TheStoic Or Oni Lee genuinely didn't see a problem with this as he has frankly inhuman levels of patience.]] Lung's not sure which.

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** Lung finds that Oni Lee has managed to defy him in one way- the tea ceremony that Taylor was taught for this particular occasion will [[SeizaSquirm force him to be in the Sieza position seiza position]] for ''four hours,'' demonstrating his displeasure with his boss' former lack of any politeness. [[TheStoic Or Oni Lee genuinely didn't see a problem with this as he has frankly inhuman levels of patience.]] Lung's not sure which.



* PsychologicalProjection: When Emma finally confronts Taylor at Pawprint Shrine at the end of a very long TraumaCongaLine, she makes a big speech about how she hates Taylor, that Taylor ruins everything she touches, is so needy, no-one actually likes her, is always clinging to the past, and that Taylor is the worst. The fact that Emma is sobbing throughout this whole ordeal makes it fairly evident that it isn't Taylor she's really talking about.



* SurvivalMantra: Or Sanity Mantra in this case: Taylor has to repeat "Tea time is courtesy time" to herself to reassure herself that nothing will go wrong. Given the procession of insanity that is her life now, it's not surprising.

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* SurvivalMantra: Or Sanity Mantra in this case: Taylor has to repeat "Tea "[[SacredHospitality Tea time is courtesy time" time]]" to herself to reassure herself that nothing will go wrong. wrong, even when the Protectorate, Lung, Oni Lee and Purity have all sat down to tea at her shrine. Given the procession of insanity that is her life now, it's not surprising.surprising.
* TakeBackYourGift: Attempted by Emma when she gives Taylor the earrings that they traded when they got their ears pierced together so long ago, [[WeUsedToBeFriends when they were still best friends]], as a last means of making a clean break. Time will tell if this is successful.



* TraumaCongaLine: Things really haven't been going Emma's way at all. She was mugged, almost killed, latched on to her rescuer Sophia as her new friend, abandoned and turned on her old friend Taylor to prove her strength, had her bullying confronted by the ABB, [[spoiler: suddenly had Sophia removed when her CharacterWitness came under scrutiny]], tried to find a new friend in Karen, [[spoiler: only to find out that Karen was a [[{{Youkai}} Jorogumo]] wanting to eat her]]. [[spoiler: Yuuta befriending her after rescuing her from said Jorogumo]] and not abandoning her was the first good thing that happened to her for a while, and it's taking some time for her to rearrange her thoughts.

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* TraumaCongaLine: Things really haven't been going Emma's way at all. She was mugged, almost killed, latched on to her rescuer Sophia as her new friend, abandoned and turned on her old friend Taylor to prove her strength, had her bullying confronted by the ABB, [[spoiler: suddenly had Sophia removed when her CharacterWitness came under scrutiny]], tried to find a new friend in Karen, [[spoiler: only to find out that Karen was a [[{{Youkai}} [[TsuchigumoAndJorogumo Jorogumo]] wanting to eat her]]. [[spoiler: Yuuta befriending her after rescuing her from said Jorogumo]] and not abandoning her was the first good thing that happened to her for a while, and it's taking some time for her to rearrange her thoughts.



* TsuchigumoAndJorogumo: A jorougumo shows up, manipulating and trying to eat Emma Barnes, and is promptly exorcised by some ofuda that Sunny/Ameratsu had had Taylor make in the lead-up to Halloween.

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* TsuchigumoAndJorogumo: A jorougumo shows up, manipulating and trying to eat [[spoiler: Emma Barnes, Barnes]], and is promptly exorcised by some ofuda that Sunny/Ameratsu Sunny/Amaterasu had had Taylor make in the lead-up to Halloween.

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