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* DeathOfAChild: Molekit dies of illness in the third chapter. His death stuns the Clan. It especially fills Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw with AdultFear for their own children.
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* DeathOfAChild: Molekit dies of illness in the third chapter. His death stuns the Clan. It especially fills Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw with AdultFear them worried for their own children.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Brambleclaw isn't kept in the dark on Lionblaze, Hollyleaf, and Jayfeather being adopted. He knows from the get-go.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Unlike in canon, Brambleclaw isn't kept in the dark on Lionblaze, Hollyleaf, and Jayfeather being adopted. He knows from the get-go.
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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Leafpool had [[ChildOfForbiddenLove a litter of kits]] despite being a medicinecat (and from a non-[=ThunderClan=] cat at that). To save face, Leafpool allows her sister Squirrelflight to adopt her newborns and raise them as her own.
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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Leafpool had [[ChildOfForbiddenLove a litter of kits]] despite being a medicinecat medicine cat (and from a non-[=ThunderClan=] cat at that). To save face, Leafpool allows her sister Squirrelflight to adopt her newborns and raise them as her own.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11908380/chapters/26906397 Clementine]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Warrior|Cats}}s'' fic by goosemixtapes. It's an AlternateUniverseFic where Brambleclaw was in on his kits' adoption.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11908380/chapters/26906397 Clementine]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Warrior|Cats}}s'' fic by goosemixtapes. It's an AlternateUniverseFic where Brambleclaw was is in on his kits' adoption.
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* DaddysGirl: Hollyleaf has always been closest to her mother Squirrelflight, in contrast with her MommasBoy brothers.
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* DaddysGirl: Hollyleaf has always been closest to her mother Squirrelflight, father Brambleclaw, in contrast with her MommasBoy brothers.
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* ChocolateBaby: Anyone who knows about cat genetics would be able to tell they weren't Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw's, but all the cats take their parentage at face value. It helps that they take after their adopted parents in mannerisms. Only their biological father Crowfeather gets suspicious when he rescues Jaypaw.
* DaddysGirl: Hollyleaf has always been closest to her mother Squirrelflight, in contrast with her MommasBoy brothers.
* DeathOfAChild: Molekit dies of illness in the third chapter. His death stuns the Clan. It especially fills Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw with AdultFear for their own children.
* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Leafpool had [[ChildOfForbiddenLove a litter of kits]] despite being a medicinecat (and from a non-[=ThunderClan=] cat at that). To save face, Leafpool allows her sister Squirrelflight to adopt her newborns and raise them as her own.
* MeaningfulName:
** Played straight with Lionkit, who is named for his resemblance to a lion.
** Subverted with Hollykit. Brambleclaw thinks of giving her a descriptive name that fits her fur, like Blackkit or Nightkit, but finds them too simplistic. He also thinks about naming her "Snowkit" because she was born in the winter, but decides that doesn't fit. Brambleclaw gives her a FloralThemeNaming by naming her after the berries he sees in the forest.
* DaddysGirl: Hollyleaf has always been closest to her mother Squirrelflight, in contrast with her MommasBoy brothers.
* DeathOfAChild: Molekit dies of illness in the third chapter. His death stuns the Clan. It especially fills Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw with AdultFear for their own children.
* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Leafpool had [[ChildOfForbiddenLove a litter of kits]] despite being a medicinecat (and from a non-[=ThunderClan=] cat at that). To save face, Leafpool allows her sister Squirrelflight to adopt her newborns and raise them as her own.
* MeaningfulName:
** Played straight with Lionkit, who is named for his resemblance to a lion.
** Subverted with Hollykit. Brambleclaw thinks of giving her a descriptive name that fits her fur, like Blackkit or Nightkit, but finds them too simplistic. He also thinks about naming her "Snowkit" because she was born in the winter, but decides that doesn't fit. Brambleclaw gives her a FloralThemeNaming by naming her after the berries he sees in the forest.
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->''“We’ll raise them together,” Brambleclaw says, twining his tail with hers and staring deep into her eyes, willing her to trust him. “We’ll tell the Clan that they’re our kits.”''
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Squirrelflight doesn't listen to her sister's wishes. She tells her mate Brambleclaw that they're adopting Leafpool's kits and passing them as their own. Brambleclaw reacts positively and the two raise the triplets - Hollykit, Jaykit, and Lionkit - together knowing the secret to their kit's parentage.
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Squirrelflight doesn't listen to her sister's wishes. She tells her mate Brambleclaw that they're Leafpool is having kits. She also tells them that she plans on adopting Leafpool's kits and passing them as their her own. Brambleclaw reacts positively agrees and the two raise the triplets - Hollykit, Jaykit, and Lionkit - together together, both knowing the secret to their kit's parentage.
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* ShoutOut: The title comes from the song "Clementine" by Music/SarahJaffe.
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* ShoutOut: The title comes from the song "Clementine" by Music/SarahJaffe.Music/SarahJaffe.
* TitledAfterTheSong: The title comes from Music/SarahJaffe's song "Clementine".
* TitledAfterTheSong: The title comes from Music/SarahJaffe's song "Clementine".
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* AllLowercaseLetters: The title of the fic is ''clementine'', all in lowercase.
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* LowercaseTitle: The title of the fic is ''clementine'', all in lowercase.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11908380/chapters/26906397 Clementine]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Warrior|Cats}}s'' fic by goosemixtapes. It's an AlternateUniverseFic where Brambleclaw was in on his kits' adoption.
Squirrelflight doesn't listen to her sister's wishes. She tells her mate Brambleclaw that they're adopting Leafpool's kits and passing them as their own. Brambleclaw reacts positively and the two raise the triplets - Hollykit, Jaykit, and Lionkit - together knowing the secret to their kit's parentage.
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!!''Clementine'' provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Brambleclaw isn't kept in the dark on Lionblaze, Hollyleaf, and Jayfeather being adopted. He knows from the get-go.
* LowercaseTitle: The title of the fic is ''clementine'', all in lowercase.
* ShoutOut: The title comes from the song "Clementine" by Music/SarahJaffe.
Squirrelflight doesn't listen to her sister's wishes. She tells her mate Brambleclaw that they're adopting Leafpool's kits and passing them as their own. Brambleclaw reacts positively and the two raise the triplets - Hollykit, Jaykit, and Lionkit - together knowing the secret to their kit's parentage.
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!!''Clementine'' provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Brambleclaw isn't kept in the dark on Lionblaze, Hollyleaf, and Jayfeather being adopted. He knows from the get-go.
* LowercaseTitle: The title of the fic is ''clementine'', all in lowercase.
* ShoutOut: The title comes from the song "Clementine" by Music/SarahJaffe.
