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* TitledAfterTheSong: The title comes from "Clair De Lune" by Creator/ClaudeDebussy.
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* TitledAfterTheSong: The title comes from "Clair De Lune" by Creator/ClaudeDebussy.Music/ClaudeDebussy.
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Not to be confused with another Luna fic, ''Fanfic/ClareDeLune''.
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Not to be confused with another Luna fic, ''Fanfic/ClareDeLune''.
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* WeAreButMayflies: The average livespan of a pony is only live onto 25.
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* WeAreButMayflies: WeAreAsMayflies: The average livespan of a pony is only live onto 25.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/279/claro-de-luna Claro de Luna]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that tells a romance between Octavia and Princess Luna from beginning to end,
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/279/claro-de-luna Claro de Luna]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that tells a romance between Octavia and Princess Luna from beginning to end,
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* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir first date.
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* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir their first date.
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* CareerEndingInjury: Octavia develops arthritis that means she can't play the cello anymore. She opts to become a composer.
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* CareerEndingInjury: After Octavia develops arthritis that means in her hooves, she can't play the cello anymore. She opts to become a composer.
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* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir first date
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* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir first datedate.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/279/claro-de-luna Claro de Luna]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic that tells a romance between Octavia and Princess Luna from beginning to end,
The story begins when Celestia and Luna go to see a concert at the Canterlot Philarmonic. While there, Luna becomes enamoured with a cellist named Octavia. After meeting back stage, the two hit it off quickly. They go through various trials and hardships through their relationship, but eventually the reality of the differences in mortality come to limelight.
Written during the hiatus between season 1 and season 2, the fanfic has several inaccuracies compared to later episodes. Neither pony had much characterization in canon at the time so fans [[OCStandIn made up their own]]. Luna in the fanfic is shy and somewhat awkward, as was commonplace in fanworks at the time, and is in her original pilot design.
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!!''Claro de Luna'' provides examples of:
* AffectionateNickname: Luna calls her sister Celestia "Celly" and her lover Octavia "Tavy".
* CareerEndingInjury: Octavia develops arthritis that means she can't play the cello anymore. She opts to become a composer.
* CuteMute: She's more "elegant" than "cute", however Octavia still counts. She's a
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Octavia is mute due to a childhood injury. In canon, she was later shown to be able to speak.
* FurryReminder: Octavia met Luna when she was 6 years old and died of old age at 26.
* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir first date
* LoveAtFirstSight: Luna falls for Octavia the second she lays her eyes on her.
* MayflyDecemberRomance: Luna is [[TheAgeless functionally immortal]] while Octavia is just a normal pony. It's even more pronounced as, in this fanfic, ponies have lifespans comparable to real horses and rarely make it past 25.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Octavia's purple eyes get noted several times. The story even begins with Luna having a prophetic dream about them, even before meeting Octavia.
The story begins when Celestia and Luna go to see a concert at the Canterlot Philarmonic. While there, Luna becomes enamoured with a cellist named Octavia. After meeting back stage, the two hit it off quickly. They go through various trials and hardships through their relationship, but eventually the reality of the differences in mortality come to limelight.
Written during the hiatus between season 1 and season 2, the fanfic has several inaccuracies compared to later episodes. Neither pony had much characterization in canon at the time so fans [[OCStandIn made up their own]]. Luna in the fanfic is shy and somewhat awkward, as was commonplace in fanworks at the time, and is in her original pilot design.
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!!''Claro de Luna'' provides examples of:
* AffectionateNickname: Luna calls her sister Celestia "Celly" and her lover Octavia "Tavy".
* CareerEndingInjury: Octavia develops arthritis that means she can't play the cello anymore. She opts to become a composer.
* CuteMute: She's more "elegant" than "cute", however Octavia still counts. She's a
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Octavia is mute due to a childhood injury. In canon, she was later shown to be able to speak.
* FurryReminder: Octavia met Luna when she was 6 years old and died of old age at 26.
* LocalHangout: Visiting Pony Joe's Malt Shop is a reoccuring theme in the fanfic. Luna and Octavia go to it for heir first date
* LoveAtFirstSight: Luna falls for Octavia the second she lays her eyes on her.
* MayflyDecemberRomance: Luna is [[TheAgeless functionally immortal]] while Octavia is just a normal pony. It's even more pronounced as, in this fanfic, ponies have lifespans comparable to real horses and rarely make it past 25.
* WhatBeautifulEyes: Octavia's purple eyes get noted several times. The story even begins with Luna having a prophetic dream about them, even before meeting Octavia.
