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** Another bait-and-switch statement, also courtesy of Chrysalis:
--> “You see, that was a metaphor.” she explained on, “I have nothing against bugs. There are differences between them and [ponies]. One is a mindless, parasitic kind that takes over what does not belong to them and down nothing in return but spread disgusting, poisonous filth all over to make it theirs. And the others... are bugs.
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** Estermann is a borderline dogmatist who struggles with the moral and social stigma of defending an brutal tyrant.

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** Estermann is a borderline dogmatist who struggles with the moral and social stigma of defending an a brutal tyrant.

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** Mullan joking that Estermann should booze Chrysalis up with Poitin. Estermann just does that in a later chapter.

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** Mullan joking that Estermann should booze Chrysalis up with Poitin. Estermann does just does that in a later chapter.
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** Her superior Pierre Abel approaches both the UN and Equestrian high-handedness it with protest and open (if largely futile) defiance.

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** Her superior Pierre Abel approaches both the UN and Equestrian high-handedness it with protest and open (if largely futile) defiance.
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** Estermann is a borderline idealist who struggles with the moral and social stigma of defending an brutal tyrant.

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** Estermann is a borderline idealist dogmatist who struggles with the moral and social stigma of defending an brutal tyrant.

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* BlitheSpirit: Most of the main characters, in one way or another.

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* BlitheSpirit: Most of the main characters, characters are one, in one way or another.



** Edith Saric jumps the bureaucratic imitations of the UN with almost carefree disregard.

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** Edith Saric jumps the bureaucratic imitations hurdles and taboos of the her UN job with almost carefree disregard.



** Even prosecutor Pierman has to struggle against her own court's stringent rules of evidence in order to get to get to Chrysalis.

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** Even the prosecutor Pierman has to struggle against her own court's stringent rules of evidence in order to get to get to Chrysalis.Chrysalis.
** Arguably even Queen Chrysalis herself, since she sees herself as a [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters freedom fighter]] rather than ''the'' establishment.
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* BlitheSpirit: Most of the main characters, in one way or another.
** Estermann is a borderline idealist who struggles with the moral and social stigma of defending an brutal tyrant.
** Lyra struggles with the predisposed xenphobic leanings of Equestrian society.
** Edith Saric jumps the bureaucratic imitations of the UN with almost carefree disregard.
** Her superior Pierre Abel approaches both the UN and Equestrian high-handedness it with protest and open (if largely futile) defiance.
** Even prosecutor Pierman has to struggle against her own court's stringent rules of evidence in order to get to get to Chrysalis.
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** Prosecution aide (and Equestrian Royal Guard clerk) Indigo Beam at one point uses his immunity to threaten a difficult concierge.
--> Do not make me invoke it, lady.

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* ShadowArchetype: Alexander Estermann and Serafina Pierman bear a number of striking similarities, down to their very names: Both are dogged legal professionals who fight their battles out of sheer conviction, and both receive help from their overtly dedicated pony assistants (Lyra Heartstrings and Indigo Beam respectively).
* ShellShockedVeteran: Shining Armor shows signs of increasing paranoia and obsession as a direct result of Chrysalis' mind control. Estermann and Mjoberg lampshade this heavily.

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* ShadowArchetype: Alexander Estermann and Serafina the prosecutor Pierman bear a number of striking similarities, down to their very names: Both are dogged legal professionals who fight their battles out of sheer conviction, have a tendency of brooding in their office, and both receive help and guidance from their overtly dedicated pony assistants (Lyra Heartstrings and Indigo Beam respectively).
* ShellShockedVeteran: Shining Armor shows signs of increasing paranoia and obsession as a direct result of Chrysalis' mind control. Estermann and Mjoberg lampshade this heavily.
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* ShadowArchetype: Alexander Estermann and Serafina Pierman bear a number of striking similarities, down to their very names: Both are dogged legal professionals who fight their battles out of sheer conviction, and both receive help from their overtly dedicated pony assistants (Lyra Heartstrings and Indigo Beam respectively).
* ShellShockedVeteran: Shining Armor shows signs of increasing paranoia and obsession as a direct result of Chrysalis' mind control. Estermann and Mjoberg lampshade this heavily.
* ShowWithinAShow: One time, Chrysalis watches a ''supremely'' clichéd prison drama (while being in prison herself, naturally), complete with a DeepSouth setting, a [[WardensAreEvil sadistic warden]] and some heavily implied [[PrisonRape soap-droppin']]. [[WordOfGod The author]] calls it ''[[Film/TheShawshankRedemption 'The Shawshank Pretension']]''.



* ShellShockedVeteran: Shining Armor shows signs of increasing paranoia and obsession as a direct result of Chrysalis' mind control. Estermann and Mjoberg lampshade this heavily.
* ShowWithinAShow: One time, Chrysalis watches a ''supremely'' clichéd prison drama (while being in prison herself, naturally), complete with a DeepSouth setting, a [[WardensAreEvil sadistic warden]] and some heavily implied [[PrisonRape soap-droppin']]. [[WordOfGod The author]] calls it ''[[Film/TheShawshankRedemption 'The Shawshank Pretension']]''.


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* VillainEpisode: Though they hardly qualify as villains, one chapter is dedicated to the prosecution, focusing on the trials and tribulations of Serafina Pierman and her two equine helpers, Indigo Beam and Ms Harshwhinny.
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* BrickJoke: Estermann's [[CueTheFlyingPigs (as of yet uneaten)]] hat.
** Mullan joking that Estermann should booze Chrysalis up with Poitin. Estermann just does that in a later chapter.

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* DiplomaticImpunity: Invoked, played straight, subverted and defied throughout the story. Many if not most of the characters have diplomatic protection in one way or another (since they work for governments, international organizations or are otherwise guaranteed immunity), and many try to exploit it, though it doesn't always work. [[spoiler:Pierre]] for instance quickly discovers that ''his'' immunity (functional immunity) doesn't extend to acts that are, in nature, unrelated to his UN work ([[spoiler:like breaking and entering or arson]]).

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* DiplomaticImpunity: Invoked, played straight, subverted and defied throughout the story. Many if not most of the characters have diplomatic protection in one way or another (since they work for governments, international organizations or are otherwise guaranteed immunity), and many try to exploit it, though it doesn't always work. [[spoiler:Pierre]]
** [[spoiler:The UN functionary Pierre]]
for instance quickly discovers that ''his'' immunity (functional immunity) doesn't extend to acts that are, in nature, unrelated to his UN work ([[spoiler:like breaking and entering or arson]]).arson]]).
** When Princess Twilight Sparkle [[spoiler:attacks Queen Chrysalis in the ICC]], there are no repercussions beyond kicking her off the premises.
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* DiplomaticImpunity: Invoked, played straight, subverted and defied throughout the story. Many if not most of the characters have diplomatic protection in one way or another (since they work for governments, international organizations or are otherwise guaranteed immunity), and many try to exploit it, though it doesn't always work. [[spoiler:Pierre]] for instance quickly discovers that ''his'' immunity (functional immunity) doesn't extend to acts that are, in nature, unrelated to his UN work ([[spoiler:like breaking and entering or arson]]).
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* Mundanger: Despite revolving around [[TheMagocracy powerful Magocracies]], [[EmotionEater emotion eaters]], [[{{Shapeshifting}} shapeshifters]] and [[MindManipulation mind controllers]], the ''most'' menacing and crucial dangers that are depicred are things such as [[FantasticRacism racial tension (between ponies, changelings and humans)]] and [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters war (of the undeclared civil kind)]], [[{{Realpolitik}} political power play (both foreign & domestic) and the grasping for strategic interests]], [[CorruptPolitician corruption (also of the non-magical kind)]] and [[ObstructiveBureaucrat crippling bureacracy (plus the subsequent inability of lawmakers and peacekeepers to do their jobs)]] as well as [[MyRuleFuIsStrongerThanYours the trappings of due process]] and [[KangarooCourt the perversion of justice]] (since it's a CourtroomDrama).

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* Mundanger: {{Mundanger}}: Despite revolving around [[TheMagocracy powerful Magocracies]], [[EmotionEater emotion eaters]], [[{{Shapeshifting}} shapeshifters]] and [[MindManipulation mind controllers]], the ''most'' menacing and crucial dangers that are depicred are things such as [[FantasticRacism racial tension (between ponies, changelings and humans)]] and [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters war (of the undeclared civil kind)]], [[{{Realpolitik}} political power play (both foreign & domestic) and the grasping for strategic interests]], [[CorruptPolitician corruption (also of the non-magical kind)]] and [[ObstructiveBureaucrat crippling bureacracy (plus the subsequent inability of lawmakers and peacekeepers to do their jobs)]] as well as [[MyRuleFuIsStrongerThanYours the trappings of due process]] and [[KangarooCourt the perversion of justice]] (since it's a CourtroomDrama).
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* Mundanger: Despite revolving around [[TheMagocracy powerful Magocracies]], [[EmotionEater emotion eaters]], [[{{Shapeshifting}} shapeshifters]] and [[MindManipulation mind controllers]], the ''most'' menacing and crucial dangers that are depicred are things such as [[FantasticRacism racial tension (between ponies, changelings and humans)]] and [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters war (of the undeclared civil kind)]], [[{{Realpolitik}} political power play (both foreign & domestic) and the grasping for strategic interests]], [[CorruptPolitician corruption (also of the non-magical kind)]] and [[ObstructiveBureaucrat crippling bureacracy (plus the subsequent inability of lawmakers and peacekeepers to do their jobs)]] as well as [[MyRuleFuIsStrongerThanYours the trappings of due process]] and [[KangarooCourt the perversion of justice]] (since this story is a CourtroomDrama first and foremost).

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* Mundanger: Despite revolving around [[TheMagocracy powerful Magocracies]], [[EmotionEater emotion eaters]], [[{{Shapeshifting}} shapeshifters]] and [[MindManipulation mind controllers]], the ''most'' menacing and crucial dangers that are depicred are things such as [[FantasticRacism racial tension (between ponies, changelings and humans)]] and [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters war (of the undeclared civil kind)]], [[{{Realpolitik}} political power play (both foreign & domestic) and the grasping for strategic interests]], [[CorruptPolitician corruption (also of the non-magical kind)]] and [[ObstructiveBureaucrat crippling bureacracy (plus the subsequent inability of lawmakers and peacekeepers to do their jobs)]] as well as [[MyRuleFuIsStrongerThanYours the trappings of due process]] and [[KangarooCourt the perversion of justice]] (since this story is it's a CourtroomDrama first and foremost).CourtroomDrama).
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* Mundanger: Despite revolving around [[TheMagocracy powerful Magocracies]], [[EmotionEater emotion eaters]], [[{{Shapeshifting}} shapeshifters]] and [[MindManipulation mind controllers]], the ''most'' menacing and crucial dangers that are depicred are things such as [[FantasticRacism racial tension (between ponies, changelings and humans)]] and [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters war (of the undeclared civil kind)]], [[{{Realpolitik}} political power play (both foreign & domestic) and the grasping for strategic interests]], [[CorruptPolitician corruption (also of the non-magical kind)]] and [[ObstructiveBureaucrat crippling bureacracy (plus the subsequent inability of lawmakers and peacekeepers to do their jobs)]] as well as [[MyRuleFuIsStrongerThanYours the trappings of due process]] and [[KangarooCourt the perversion of justice]] (since this story is a CourtroomDrama first and foremost).
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** At one point, Edith breaks a window and [[spoiler:jumps out to escape the burning Everfree archive]].
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** Edith's UN handler, Pierre Abel deserves special mention, as his obstructiveness seems to come from a genuine sense of moral obligation. ''His'' superior Tian Shouxin though, has no excuse other than cynical disregard for his job (and some implied corruption).

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* BrokenWindowWarning: Shortly before the story is set, Judge Mullan's window gets smashed by a hefty battery wrapped in a note reading, "Paardenneuker"[[note]]"Horse fucker" in Dutch[[/note]].



* DestinationDefenestration: In a later chapter, Twilight [[spoiler:punches Chrysalis through a security window in rage]].



* WindowPain: Shortly before the story is set, Judge Mullan's window gets smashed by a hefty battery wrapped in a note reading, "Paardenneuker"[[note]]"Horse fucker" in Dutch[[/note]].
** In a later chapter, Twilight [[spoiler:punches Chrysalis through a security window in rage]].
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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Estermann, unsurprisingly, runs into this territory while talking to Lyra. He ends up apologizing straight away.
--> "Because as far as I’m concerned, a pony's only good to be ridden and sliced up for sausage. How the hell am I supposed to make myself a picture of one's 'inner workings'?"
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* SillyReasonForWar: At one point, Estermann recounts the events kicking off the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/War_of_Jenkins War of Jenkin's Ear]] to Lyra, making the point that impressions don't need to be factual to have an impact.

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* SillyReasonForWar: At one point, Estermann recounts the events kicking off the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/War_of_Jenkins War of Jenkin's Jenkins' Ear]] to Lyra, making the point that impressions don't need to be factual to have an impact.

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* BadassBystander: The one guy who manages to [[spoiler:overpower Chrysalis by activating her magic suppressor as she tries to break out of the plane at the airport (and severely scorching his hand in the process)]] is a nameless USAF pilot who is never mentioned again.



* PublicBathhouseScene: Estermann and Mullan [[spoiler:and Lyra]] share one at one point. It's decidedly awkward, though not necessarily for all the ''expected'' reasons.


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* PublicBathhouseScene: Estermann and Mullan [[spoiler:and Lyra]] share one at one point. It's decidedly awkward, though not necessarily for all the ''expected'' reasons.


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** In the first chapter, a policeman [[BondOneLiner comments]] on Chrysalis being strapped into a dog muzzle with, "[[Film/SilenceOfTheLambs Dr Lecter]] sends his regards".

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* PublicBathhouseScene: Estermann and Mullan [[spoiler:and Lyra]] share one at one point. It's decidedly awkward, though not necessarily for all the ''expected'' reasons.



* BigBrotherInstinct: Or, well, Younger Sister instinct. Twilight Sparkle ''will'' stand up for her brother Shining.



* UsefulNotes/YanksWithTanks: Chrysalis is brought to the Netherlands in a US Air Force plane, and guided through her extradition by US Military Police.

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** In a later chapter, Twilight [[spoiler:punches Chrysalis through a security window in rage]].
* UsefulNotes/YanksWithTanks: Chrysalis is brought to the Netherlands in a US Air Force plane, and guided through her extradition by US Military Police.Police.
* YouWouldntHitAGuyWithGlasses: When Estermann gives Chrysalis a pair of glasses to wear in the courtroom, he cites this mentality might offer her some protection. [[spoiler:A few chapters in, she is quite literally punched in the face, courtesy of none other than [[BewareTheNiceOnes Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* DoorStopper: A minor one, having passed (and continuing from) the 200,000 word threshold after almost three years.

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* DoorStopper: A The story itself is a minor one, having passed (and currently continuing from) the 200,000 word threshold after almost three years.
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* DoorStopper: A minor one, having passed (and continuing from) the 200,000 word threshold after almost three years.
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* TrainingThePeacefulVillagers: The Royal Guard is seen levying Ponyville civilians in preparation for a large-scale search of the Everfree Forest for changelings.

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** [[spoiler:Golden Dirk]]'s assertion to "Follow the [[spoiler:footnotes]]!" might be a reference to [[Film/AllThePresidentsMen Deep Throat's]] "Follow the money!", especially seeing how similar their [[MysteriousInformant roles]] are.

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** [[spoiler:Golden Dirk]]'s Golden Dirk's assertion to "Follow the [[spoiler:footnotes]]!" might be a reference to [[Film/AllThePresidentsMen Deep Throat's]] "Follow the money!", especially seeing how similar their [[MysteriousInformant roles]] are.

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* MysteriousInformant: Sergeant Golden Dirk, service number two, two, seven, niner, three, eight, one...

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* MysteriousInformant: Sergeant Golden Dirk, service number two, two, seven, niner, three, eight, one... complete with a potential ShoutOut to [[Film/AllThePresidentsMen Deep Throat]].
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** [[spoiler:Golden Dirk]]'s assertion to "Follow the [[spoiler:footnotes]]!" might be a reference to [[Film/AllThePresidentsMen Deep Throat's]] "Follow the money!", especially seeing how similar their [[MysteriousInformant roles]] are.

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