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** [[RunningGag And then]] Shirou gets in on the action courtesy of Saber in chapter 13.
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* DudeShesLikeInAComa: [[spoiler: Ilya]] does this with Shirou to help him with his mana deprivation caused by Rider. Multiple times.
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-> ''But mostly? The [[ThirtyXanatosPileup assorted plans at play here]] would be going very, very wrong due to the actions of [[SpannerInTheWorks a no-name, no-count, utterly talentless Magus by the name of Shirou Emiya]]. [[NaiveNewcomer He had no magic worth mentioning, no combat experience of note, and no plan for or knowledge of the War he was about to enter]]. He did, however, have one trait that had derailed a countless number of such grand, far-reaching schemes throughout history.''

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-> ''But mostly? The [[ThirtyXanatosPileup [[GambitPileup assorted plans at play here]] would be going very, very wrong due to the actions of [[SpannerInTheWorks a no-name, no-count, utterly talentless Magus by the name of Shirou Emiya]]. [[NaiveNewcomer He had no magic worth mentioning, no combat experience of note, and no plan for or knowledge of the War he was about to enter]]. He did, however, have one trait that had derailed a countless number of such grand, far-reaching schemes throughout history.''
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Having believed Shirou to be - like [[DisappearedDad Kiritsugu Emiya]] - a heartless person, this act of kindness throws Ilya off her game. In addition to that, the effects of this meeting - though small at first - steadily propel the Holy Grail War into a never-before-seen direction, where friends might become foes, the people you trust are keeping secrets from you, and villains with far-reaching schemes find their plans derailed - and in some cases, ''[[OhCrap enhanced]]'' - by simple chance.

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Having believed Shirou to be - like [[DisappearedDad Kiritsugu Kiritsugu]] [[DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou Emiya]] - a heartless person, this act of kindness throws Ilya off her game. In addition to that, the effects of this meeting - though small at first - steadily propel the Holy Grail War into a never-before-seen direction, where friends might become foes, the people you trust are keeping secrets from you, and villains with far-reaching schemes find their plans derailed - and in some cases, ''[[OhCrap enhanced]]'' - by simple chance.
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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler:Caster Alter and her "pet" shadow monster, Lancer Alter]], in Chapter 12.

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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler:Caster Alter and (and her "pet" shadow monster, Lancer Alter]], Alter)]] in Chapter 12.



* FastballSpecial: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Hilariously]], Shirou does this to [[SmugSnake Shin]][[TheChewToy ji]] in Chapter 4.

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* FastballSpecial: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Hilariously]], Shirou does this to [[SmugSnake Shin]][[TheChewToy ji]] [[TheChewToy Shinji]] in Chapter 4.
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In this story, the change comes when Shirou Emiya first meets Ilyasviel von Einzbern, who in {{Canon}} delivers her warning to him about summoning a Servant before departing. Here however...:

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In this story, the change comes when Shirou Emiya first meets Ilyasviel von Einzbern, who in {{Canon}} delivers her warning to him about summoning a Servant before departing. Here however...:
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* AntiHero: Ilya is a [[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type III]].



** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler:Caster Alter and her "pet" shadow monster Lancer Alter]] in Chapter 12.

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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler:Caster Alter and her "pet" shadow monster monster, Lancer Alter]] Alter]], in Chapter 12.



* {{Protectorate}}: Ilya to [[IdiotHero Shirou]].

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* {{Protectorate}}: Ilya to [[IdiotHero Shirou]].Shirou]] is this for Ilya, as of Chapter 4.
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* EvilVersusEvil: [[LightIsNotGood Kirei]] [[SinisterMinister Kotomine]] vs. [[TheWormThatWalks Zouken]] [[SmugSnake Makiri]] vs. [[spoiler:[[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds Caster]] [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Alter]]]].
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* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler: Corrupted!Caster]].

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* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler: Corrupted!Caster]].[[spoiler:Caster Alter]].



* DarkActionGirl: Rider, of course. Also, arguably the new course for [[spoiler: [[SquishyWizard Caster]]]].

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* DarkActionGirl: Rider, of course. Also, arguably the new course for [[spoiler: [[SquishyWizard Caster]]]].Caster Alter]]]].



** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler: Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 12.

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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler: Caster [[spoiler:Caster Alter and her "pet" shadow monster]] monster Lancer Alter]] in Chapter 12.



* FlatWhat: The response of Archer, Lancer, ''and'' True Assassin to [[spoiler: a Grail-Corrupted Caster]] in Chapter 9:

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* FlatWhat: The response of Archer, Lancer, ''and'' True Assassin to [[spoiler: a Grail-Corrupted Caster]] [[spoiler:Caster Alter]] in Chapter 9:



* KnightOfCerebus: [[spoiler: Caster]].

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* KnightOfCerebus: [[spoiler: Caster]].[[spoiler:Caster Alter]].



* {{Revenge}}: After [[spoiler: Kuzuki's death]], this becomes [[spoiler: Caster's]] motive.

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* {{Revenge}}: After [[spoiler: Kuzuki's [[spoiler:Kuzuki's death]], this becomes [[spoiler: Caster's]] [[spoiler:Caster's]] motive.



* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Caster, first, with Lancer following on from that]].

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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Caster, [[spoiler:Caster first, with Lancer following on from that]].



* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Caster]], and ''how''!

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* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Caster]], [[spoiler:Caster]], and ''how''!
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This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story. Started in 2010, it combines the Moczo-brand style of humour (''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' & ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'') with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}''), to create a worthwhile reading experience.

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This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely route while nonetheless telling its own story.unique tale. Started in 2010, it combines the Moczo-brand style of humour (''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' & ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'') with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}''), to create a worthwhile reading experience.
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This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story. Started in 2010, it combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' & ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'') with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}''), to create a worthwhile reading experience.

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This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story. Started in 2010, it combines the Mozco-brand Moczo-brand style of humour (''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' & ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'') with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}''), to create a worthwhile reading experience.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Rider, of course. Even when [[spoiler: she's takes some of Shirou's ''prana'' to ensure Sakura doesn't die]], she's very considerate about it.

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* FriendlyEnemy: Rider, of course. Even when [[spoiler: she's she takes some of Shirou's ''prana'' to ensure Sakura doesn't die]], she's very considerate about it.
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* ShutUpHannibal: After Shirou's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Shinji (above):
--> '''Shinji''': "H-how... how dare..."
--> '''Shirou''': "I was completely serious about beating you unconscious, Shinji."
--> Shinji stopped talking.
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** And then Archer does it to Rin in chapter 11.

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** And then Archer does it to Rin in chapter 11.10.
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* BigSisterInstinct: If you don't want Ilya to sic [[GameBreaker Berserker]] on you, then do ''not'' harm "a single hair on Shirou's head. [[spoiler: Rider]] found this out the hard way.

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* BigSisterInstinct: If you don't want Ilya to sic [[GameBreaker Berserker]] on you, then do ''not'' harm "a a single hair on Shirou's head. [[spoiler: Rider]] found this out the hard way.
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** And then Archer does it to Rin in chapter 11.
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* BigSisterInstinct: If you don't want Ilya to sic [[GameBreaker Berserker]] on you, then do ''not'' harm "a single hair on [Shirou's] head. [[spoiler: Rider]] found this out the hard way.

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* BigSisterInstinct: If you don't want Ilya to sic [[GameBreaker Berserker]] on you, then do ''not'' harm "a single hair on [Shirou's] Shirou's head. [[spoiler: Rider]] found this out the hard way.



--> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite [[TheSociopath what anyone else might say]], he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His [[OmnicidalManiac means of doing so]] was [[EvilFeelsGood bizarre]], [[Understatement perhaps]], but he cared only for other people.''

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--> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite [[TheSociopath what anyone else might say]], he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His [[OmnicidalManiac means of doing so]] was [[EvilFeelsGood bizarre]], [[Understatement [[{{Understatement}} perhaps]], but he cared only for other people.''
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* TheProtectorate: Ilya to [[IdiotHero Shirou]].

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* TheProtectorate: {{Protectorate}}: Ilya to [[IdiotHero Shirou]].

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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Put simply, just about ''every'' interaction between Ilya and Shirou either has or ''is'' one of these.


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* AntiVillain: Rin. Arguably qualifies as HeroAntagonist, to a degree.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Not said yet, but this is why [[JerkassWoobie Ilya]] grows fond of Shirou.

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* AntiVillain: Rin. Arguably qualifies Rin, as HeroAntagonist, to Shirou's opponent during this War, is essentially a degree.
HeroAntagonist.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Not said ''stated'' yet, but this is why [[JerkassWoobie Ilya]] grows fond of Shirou.



* CerebusSyndrome: The first few chapters aren't completely light-hearted, but even the action and tension is interspersed with humour. This isn't totally lost in [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Chapter 8]]]] onwards, but the tone appropriately becomes darker (and the story even ''more'' evidently arc-driven).
* TheChewToy: Shinji, arguably even ''[[BeyondTheImpossible more]]'' than in {{Canon}}. In Chapter

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* CerebusSyndrome: The first few chapters aren't completely couple of Chapters are pretty damn light-hearted, but even there's some dark moments to be found in the action story, and tension is interspersed with humour. This isn't increasingly so. It never totally lost in [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Chapter 8]]]] onwards, but the tone appropriately becomes darker (and the story even ''more'' evidently arc-driven).
loses it's humour and heartwarming, though.
* TheChewToy: Shinji, arguably even ''[[BeyondTheImpossible more]]'' than in {{Canon}}. In Chapter



* FastballSpecial: Shirou [[CrowningMomentOfFunny does this to Shinji]] in Chapter 4.

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* FastballSpecial: Shirou [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Hilariously]], Shirou does this to Shinji]] [[SmugSnake Shin]][[TheChewToy ji]] in Chapter 4.



* FriendlyEnemy: Rider, of course. Even when [[spoiler: she's takes some of Shirou's ''prana'' to ensure Sakura doesn't die]], she's very considerate about it.



* MyMasterRightOrWrong



* TheOjou: Ilya, according to Shirou.

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* TheOjou: Ilya, according to Shirou.Before he learns her name, this is how Shirou addresses Ilya.


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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Moczo siblings]] - who wrote ''FanFic/ManchesterLost'', ''FanFic/UninvitedGuests'' and ''Fanfic/Infinity'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Moczo siblings]] - who wrote ''FanFic/ManchesterLost'', ''FanFic/UninvitedGuests'' ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'', ''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' and ''Fanfic/Infinity'' ''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.



Started in 2010, this fic combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (much like that of their previous fics) with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (showcased, first, in ''Fanfic/Infinity''.

This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story.

It comes with ''very'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/FateStayNight high recommendations]] on TvTropes.

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Started in 2010, this fic combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (much like that of their previous fics) with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (showcased, first, in ''Fanfic/Infinity''.

This story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story.

It
story. Started in 2010, it combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' & ''Fanfic/ManchesterLost'') with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling (''Fanfic/{{Infinity}}''), to create a worthwhile reading experience.

This story
comes with ''very'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/FateStayNight high positive]] [[FanficRecommendations recommendations]] on TvTropes.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Moczo siblings]] - who wrote ''[[FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' and ''[[Fanfic/Infinity Infinity]]'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Moczo siblings]] - who wrote ''[[FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' ''FanFic/ManchesterLost'', ''FanFic/UninvitedGuests'' and ''[[Fanfic/Infinity Infinity]]'' ''Fanfic/Infinity'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Mozco siblings]] - who wrote ''[[FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' and ''[[FanFic/Infinity Infinity]]'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Mozco Moczo siblings]] - who wrote ''[[FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' and ''[[FanFic/Infinity ''[[Fanfic/Infinity Infinity]]'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.



Started in 2010, this fic combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (much like that of their previous fics) with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling.

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Started in 2010, this fic combines the Mozco-brand style of humour (much like that of their previous fics) with their other strengths of superb plotting, characterisation and story-telling.
story-telling (showcased, first, in ''Fanfic/Infinity''.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Mozco siblings]] - who produced of ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' and ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/Infinity Infinity]]'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6372400/1/Chaos_Theory Chaos Theory]] is a FanFic in the FateStayNight branch of the Nasuverse. Posted on Fanfiction.Net by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/31351/Moczo the Mozco siblings]] - who produced of ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/ManchesterLost wrote ''[[FanFic/ManchesterLost Manchester Lost]]'', ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests ''[[FanFic/UninvitedGuests UninvitedGuests]]'' and ''[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/Infinity ''[[FanFic/Infinity Infinity]]'' - it is a ForWantOfANail fanfic which deals with the ripple effect of how one seemingly insignificant choice can change several people's destiny's.

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* CerebusSyndrome: The first 8 chapters aren't completely light-hearted, but even the action and tension is interspersed with humour. This isn't lost in [[WhamEpisode Chapter 9]] onwards, but the tone appropriately becomes darker (and the story even more evidently arc-driven).

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* CerebusSyndrome: The first 8 few chapters aren't completely light-hearted, but even the action and tension is interspersed with humour. This isn't totally lost in [[spoiler: [[WhamEpisode Chapter 9]] 8]]]] onwards, but the tone appropriately becomes darker (and the story even more ''more'' evidently arc-driven).



** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler: Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 13.
* FastballSpecial: Shirou [[CrowningMomentOfFunny does this to Shinji]] in Chapter 5.
* FlatWhat: The response of Archer, Lancer, ''and'' True Assassin to [[spoiler: a Grail-Corrupted Caster]] in Chapter 10:

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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[spoiler: Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 13.
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* FastballSpecial: Shirou [[CrowningMomentOfFunny does this to Shinji]] in Chapter 5.
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* FlatWhat: The response of Archer, Lancer, ''and'' True Assassin to [[spoiler: a Grail-Corrupted Caster]] in Chapter 10:9:



* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Shirou doesn't yet know that the sweet little ''ojou'' he met in Chapter 1 is a participant of the Holy Grail War.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou (of all people) gives one to [[SmugSnake Shinji]] in Chapter 5.

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* TheOjou: Ilya, according to Shirou.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou (of all people) gives one to [[SmugSnake Shinji]] in Chapter 5.4.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: In Chapter 11, between [[spoiler: Archer, Lancer and True Assassin]].
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lancer says it, word-for-word, in Chapter 11.

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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: In Chapter 11, 10, between [[spoiler: Archer, Lancer and True Assassin]].
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lancer says it, word-for-word, in Chapter 11.10.



* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: Chapter 9.
* [[WorldOfCardboardSpeech "World of Cardboard" Internal Monologue]]: Ilya in Chapter 5, regarding [[SpannerInTheWorks Shirou]].

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* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: [[spoiler: Chapter 9.
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* [[WorldOfCardboardSpeech "World of Cardboard" Internal Monologue]]: Ilya in Chapter 5, 4, regarding [[SpannerInTheWorks Shirou]].
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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 13.

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** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[Caster [[spoiler: Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 13.

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Not said yet, but this is why [[TheWoobie Ilya]] grows fond of Shirou.

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* AntiVillain: Rin. Arguably qualifies as HeroAntagonist, to a degree.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Not said yet, but this is why [[TheWoobie [[JerkassWoobie Ilya]] grows fond of Shirou.



* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Put simply, just about ''every'' interaction between Ilya and Shirou either has one, or ''is'' one.

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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Put simply, just about ''every'' interaction between Ilya and Shirou either has one, or ''is'' one.one of these.



* EvenEvilHasStandard: Kirei has an ''internal monologue'' about this, comparing himself to [[CompleteMonster Zouken]]:
--> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite what anyone else might say, he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His means of doing so was bizarre, perhaps, but he cared only for other people.''

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* EvenEvilHasStandard: EvenEvilHasStandards: Kirei has an ''internal monologue'' about this, comparing himself to [[CompleteMonster Zouken]]:
--> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite [[TheSociopath what anyone else might say, say]], he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His [[OmnicidalManiac means of doing so so]] was bizarre, perhaps, [[EvilFeelsGood bizarre]], [[Understatement perhaps]], but he cared only for other people.''''
** More conventionally, [[SmugSuper Gilgamesh]] reacts this way to [[Caster and her "pet" shadow monster]] in Chapter 13.



--> '''Assassin''': The...

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--> '''Assassin''': '''True Assassin''': The...



* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Caster, first]], and following that, [[spoiler: Lancer]].

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* {{Revenge}}: After [[spoiler: Kuzuki's death]], this becomes [[spoiler: Caster's]] motive.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Caster, first]], and first, with Lancer following that, on from that]].
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: In Chapter 11, between
[[spoiler: Lancer]].Archer, Lancer and True Assassin]].
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-> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite what anyone else might say, he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His means of doing so was bizarre, perhaps, but he cared only for other people.''

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-> --> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite what anyone else might say, he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His means of doing so was bizarre, perhaps, but he cared only for other people.''



-> '''Lancer''': What...
-> '''Assassin''': The...
-> '''Archer''' (thinking): ''...Hell''?

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-> --> '''Lancer''': What...
-> --> '''Assassin''': The...
-> --> '''Archer''' (thinking): ''...Hell''?
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_> ''Shirou sprinted after the departing girl, shouting, "Wait, wait up a second!"''

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-> ''But mostly? The assorted plans at play here would be going very, very wrong due to the actions of [[SpannerInTheWorks a no-name, no-count, utterly talentless Magus by the name of Shirou Emiya]]. [[NaiveNewcomer He had no magic worth mentioning, no combat experience of note, and no plan for or knowledge of the War he was about to enter]]. He did, however, have one trait that had derailed a countless number of such grand, far-reaching schemes throughout history.''

-> ''[[SamaritanSyndrome You see, he really, really wanted to be a hero]].''

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-> ''But mostly? The [[ThirtyXanatosPileup assorted plans at play here here]] would be going very, very wrong due to the actions of [[SpannerInTheWorks a no-name, no-count, utterly talentless Magus by the name of Shirou Emiya]]. [[NaiveNewcomer He had no magic worth mentioning, no combat experience of note, and no plan for or knowledge of the War he was about to enter]]. He did, however, have one trait that had derailed a countless number of such grand, far-reaching schemes throughout history.''

-> ''[[SamaritanSyndrome You see, he really, really wanted wanted]] to be [[TheMessiah a hero]].''



This fic comes with ''very'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/FateStayNight high recommendations]] on TvTropes.

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This fic story - considered by some fans to be a {{Fanon}} interpretation of the never-made "Ilya Route", takes many elements from the ''Heaven's Feel'' story path, but is largely its own story.

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comes with ''very'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/FateStayNight high recommendations]] on TvTropes.TvTropes.

!! ''Chaos Theory'' contains examples of:

* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler: Corrupted!Caster]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Not said yet, but this is why [[TheWoobie Ilya]] grows fond of Shirou.
* BigSisterInstinct: If you don't want Ilya to sic [[GameBreaker Berserker]] on you, then do ''not'' harm "a single hair on [Shirou's] head. [[spoiler: Rider]] found this out the hard way.
* CerebusSyndrome: The first 8 chapters aren't completely light-hearted, but even the action and tension is interspersed with humour. This isn't lost in [[WhamEpisode Chapter 9]] onwards, but the tone appropriately becomes darker (and the story even more evidently arc-driven).
* TheChewToy: Shinji, arguably even ''[[BeyondTheImpossible more]]'' than in {{Canon}}. In Chapter
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Put simply, just about ''every'' interaction between Ilya and Shirou either has one, or ''is'' one.
* DarkActionGirl: Rider, of course. Also, arguably the new course for [[spoiler: [[SquishyWizard Caster]]]].
* EnemyMine: Notably ''averted'' between Shirou and Rin - because [[spoiler: Ilya choses not to attack]], the Emiya-Tohsaka alliance hasn't formed yet (and so far, there's no indication that it even ''will'').
* EvenEvilHasStandard: Kirei has an ''internal monologue'' about this, comparing himself to [[CompleteMonster Zouken]]:
-> ''But at the very least, even on those rare occasions that his conscience (yes, despite what anyone else might say, he did have one) flared up, he could always say 'At least I'm not Zouken'. The elderly Magus disgusted him, repelled him in every way and on every level. Kirei was, after all, completely selfless in his own way. His means of doing so was bizarre, perhaps, but he cared only for other people.''
* FastballSpecial: Shirou [[CrowningMomentOfFunny does this to Shinji]] in Chapter 5.
* FlatWhat: The response of Archer, Lancer, ''and'' True Assassin to [[spoiler: a Grail-Corrupted Caster]] in Chapter 10:
-> '''Lancer''': What...
-> '''Assassin''': The...
-> '''Archer''' (thinking): ''...Hell''?
* ForWantOfANail
* FreakOut: Archer goes into borderline ''hysterics'' when he realises that on the Holy Grail War's first night [[spoiler: Ilya and Berserker didn't launch their first attack]].
* HeelRealisation: Ilya's is a slow-burning one, but it's coming.
* KnightOfCerebus: [[spoiler: Caster]].
* MoralityPet: Though he doesn't yet know it, Shirou is quickly becoming one for Ilya.
* MyMasterRightOrWrong
* OhCrap: After the FreakOut mentioned above, Archer quickly realises that the War he's currently in is ''not'' the same one he'd originally dealt with when [[spoiler: he was alive]].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou (of all people) gives one to [[SmugSnake Shinji]] in Chapter 5.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [[spoiler: Caster, first]], and following that, [[spoiler: Lancer]].
* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lancer says it, word-for-word, in Chapter 11.
* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler: Caster]], and ''how''!
* [[WhamEpisode Wham Chapter]]: Chapter 9.
* [[WorldOfCardboardSpeech "World of Cardboard" Internal Monologue]]: Ilya in Chapter 5, regarding [[SpannerInTheWorks Shirou]].

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