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* TheComicallySerious: Adora is this when she deals [[spoiler:Drunk]] Catra.
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* TheComicallySerious: Adora is this when she deals with [[spoiler:Drunk]] Catra.
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** Catra realizes during one conversation that Frosta reminds her of herself at that age. Frosta takes it as a compliment when told this, before Catra explains that this a bad thing, since the attitude she had at the time led to a lot of regretful behavior. As such, she urges Frosta to not repeat the same mistakes she did growing up. The exchange causes Frosta to start treating Catra as a CoolBigSis, with the duo further bonding over a shared love of [[ThePrankster pranking]].
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** Catra realizes during one conversation that Frosta reminds her of herself at that age. Frosta takes it as a compliment when told this, before Catra explains that this is a bad thing, since the attitude she had at the time led to a lot of regretful behavior. As such, she urges Frosta to not repeat the same mistakes she did growing up. The exchange causes Frosta to start treating Catra as a CoolBigSis, with the duo further bonding over a shared love of [[ThePrankster pranking]].
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-->'''She-Ra Scouter Perfuma:''' (to Catra) "Just raise your hand to the sky and shout 'Pretty Princess Power'!"
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this seems like a better fit
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* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:Part of the reason Catra was able to see through Aroda's fake Adora during the doppelgänger fight was because she forgot to give that one a shadow.]]
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* SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:Part of the reason Catra was able to see through Aroda's fake Adora during the doppelgänger fight was because she forgot to give that one a shadow.]]
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The story would go on an unexpected from May 2021 to December 2023, with Monokub assuring readers that the story both wasn't dead and especially FAR from unfinished, although he admits that he doesn't have as much free time to devote to it.
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The story would go on an unexpected hiatus from May 2021 to December 2023, with 2023; when the story was finally updated, Monokub assuring assured readers that the story it both wasn't dead a DeadFic and especially FAR from unfinished, although he admits that he doesn't have as much free time to devote to it.