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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: UpToEleven; Seto refuses to even acknowledge Sophie as just a ''friend'', even though she sees him as such. Granted, their relationship is a bit more complicated than average.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: UpToEleven; Up to eleven; Seto refuses to even acknowledge Sophie as just a ''friend'', even though she sees him as such. Granted, their relationship is a bit more complicated than average.
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Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie [=McCallaghan=], a british NewTransferStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
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Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, bland SelfInsert, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie [=McCallaghan=], a british NewTransferStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: More or less inevitable, considering the canon character involved is Seto Kaiba, a well-known JerkAss AntiHero with a huge ego, and the fanfic makes a point of ''avoiding'' CharacterDerailment. As a result, Sophie and Seto start out disliking each other, and even after they gradually warm up, most of their exchange still consist in SnarkToSnarkCombat.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: More or less inevitable, considering the canon character involved is Seto Kaiba, a well-known JerkAss AntiHero with a huge ego, and the fanfic makes a point of ''avoiding'' CharacterDerailment.ego. As a result, Sophie and Seto start out disliking each other, and even after they gradually warm up, most of their exchange still consist in SnarkToSnarkCombat.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Sophie is quite snarky, and doesn't hesitate to deliver quips regarding how ridiculous she feels situations get around her. Of course, since Kaibe is quite a capable snarker of his own, [[SnarkToSnarkCombat this results in the interactions you'd expect]].
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Sophie, a regular human with no supernatural ability whatsoever and no skill as a duelist, tries to assault Yami Marik-- a psychopath with a Millenium item-- in a feat of rage after he defeated Joey. All she gets for her trouble is him badly slicing her hand.
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Sophie, a regular human with no supernatural ability whatsoever and no skill as a duelist, tries to assault Yami Marik-- a psychopath with a Millenium item-- in a feat of rage after he defeated Joey. All she gets for her trouble is him badly slicing her hand.
* LastNameBasis: Kaiba refers to Sophie by her last name as a way to maintain distance with her, much to her frustration.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story mostly stick to what happens in canon, with only very slight alterations to include Sophie as a spectator.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story mostly stick to what happens in canon, with only very slight alterations to include Sophie as a spectator.spectator.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: UpToEleven; Seto refuses to even acknowledge Sophie as just a ''friend'', even though she sees him as such. Granted, their relationship is a bit more complicated than average.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: UpToEleven; Seto refuses to even acknowledge Sophie as just a ''friend'', even though she sees him as such. Granted, their relationship is a bit more complicated than average.
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* TheAtoner: When Sophie confronts Kaiba about [[spoiler:Death-T]], he implies in his answer to her that he feels disgusted with himself for [[spoiler:his treatment of Mokuba]] back then, which led him to become even more protective of his brother.
-->'''Kaiba''': I do not need ''you'' to berate me too, Callaghan. Do you think that I don't regret it? That I haven't tried to put it behind me? That when I look at Mokuba I don't [[spoiler:remember the look on his face after I pushed the button to inflict the penalty game on him]]? [...] You read [[spoiler:my medical file]], Callaghan. You know what I went through. I [[spoiler:''deliberately'' made my brother go through that. I forced him, ''to teach him a lesson'']].
-->'''Kaiba''': I do not need ''you'' to berate me too, Callaghan. Do you think that I don't regret it? That I haven't tried to put it behind me? That when I look at Mokuba I don't [[spoiler:remember the look on his face after I pushed the button to inflict the penalty game on him]]? [...] You read [[spoiler:my medical file]], Callaghan. You know what I went through. I [[spoiler:''deliberately'' made my brother go through that. I forced him, ''to teach him a lesson'']].
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* EasilyForgiven: Averted; Toward the end of the Virtual Nightmare arc, Sophie finds out about [[spoiler:the events of the infamous Death-T story arc]], and is clearly ''horrified'' by what she learns about both Yugi and Kaiba. She still remains attached to both, but she is clearly shaken by the reveal, and not afraid to confront them about it.
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Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie McCallaghan, a british NewTransfertStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
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Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie McCallaghan, [=McCallaghan=], a british NewTransfertStudent NewTransferStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
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!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BelligerentSexualTension: More or less inevitable, considering the canon character involved is Seto Kaiba, a well-known JerkAss AntiHero with a huge ego, and the fanfic makes a point of ''avoiding'' CharacterDerailment. As a result, Sophie and Seto start out disliking each other, and even after they gradually warm up, most of their exchange still consist in SnarkToSnarkCombat.
* OnlySaneMan: Sophie, has never heard of Duel Monsters before, and is more or less an ordinary person; as such, she is completely ''baffled'' by how everyone around her take this Card Game as SeriousBusiness.
* OriginalCharacter: Sophie [=McCallaghan=], the protagonist. Granted, that was the entire point.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story mostly stick to what happens in canon, with only very slight alterations to include Sophie as a spectator.
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''Can You Have a Romance OC?'' is a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' Shipping Fanfic written by Ava-Connie.
Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie McCallaghan, a british NewTransfertStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
The fanfic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028697/1/Can-You-Have-A-Romance-OC on Fanfiction.net]].
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Taken by the writer as a challenge to prove you can write a romance between a canon character and an OriginalCharacter without the latter being a MarySue, this fanfic introduces the character of Sophie McCallaghan, a british NewTransfertStudent who recently moved to Domino City and befriends the main protagonists, as well as Seto Kaiba, who she instantly dislikes. The story then follows her perspective as she joins them during the Battle City Tournament. Unlike many other fanfics however, this one deviates as little as possible from the canon, instead giving Sophie's perspective on the various events, all while having her and Kaiba begrudgingly form a bound.
The fanfic can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6028697/1/Can-You-Have-A-Romance-OC on Fanfiction.net]].
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