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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: Taken UpToEleven with the sea monster - it's mentioned to make the ''Empire State Building'' look tiny!
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* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: Taken UpToEleven up to eleven with the sea monster - it's mentioned to make the ''Empire State Building'' look tiny!
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: The sea monster, whose mouth is ''fifteen feet long.''
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* BreakTheCutie: Implied to happen to our two main protagonists in the trailer.
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* BreakTheCutie: Implied to happen Happens to our two main protagonists in due to being too long on the trailer.boat.
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** Calvin and Hobbes will suffer this.
** Calvin and Hobbes will suffer this.
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The author intends to remake this story with {{Creator/garfieldodie}}, like the first movie. Though it seemed to be stuck in DevelopmentHell, it was eventually confirmed that it would come out in 2014. After garfieldodie finished the rewritten Fanfic/CanYouImagineThat, he posted [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/10184493/1/Calvin-and-Hobbes-II-Lost-at-Sea-REWRITTEN the first chapter chapter]] of the remake, and has taken over the project due to Swing's busy schedule.
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** And it turned out that Rupert was [[MoralEventHorizon willing to do this to his own crew to keep them in line.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The remake's trailer implies a psychological horror bent that wasn't there before, as Calvin and Hobbes, both [[SanitySlippage delusional]] from their bout on the boat, attack each other.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Dr Brainstorm is horrified when he realizes that [[spoiler:Rupert put shock collars on his own crew.]]
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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate: Dr Brainstorm might be a HarmlessVillain most of the time [[spoiler:but he does have enough medical knowledge to be useful in an emergency]].
* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
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* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
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* AndIMustScream: Prision Prison wasn't good for Rupert.
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* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
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* SanitySlippage: It is implied that Calvin and Hobbes will suffer this.this.
** Rupert, to the point where he's even ''more'' bloodthirsty and deranged.
** Rupert, to the point where he's even ''more'' bloodthirsty and deranged.
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* AndIMustScream: Prision wasn't good for Rupert.
** This later happens to Calvin and Hoobes.
** This later happens to Calvin and Hoobes.
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* EnemyMine: The other four main characters (who aren't stranded on a cruise ship) and Dr Brainstorm and Jack.
* PetTheDog: Jack uses his nanobots to help Dr Brainstorm build his boat.
* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
* PetTheDog: Jack uses his nanobots to help Dr Brainstorm build his boat.
* NeckLift: After escaping prison, Rupert does this to Lenny, Carl, and Earl simultaneously; the first two when they complained after being in there for a few hours while he was trapped in there for nine months, while Earl apparently took too long to rescue him.
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And if you want to know how many jets there were, you can do the math yourself. I'm a very busy writer trying to make a movie here.
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And if you want to know how many jets there were, you can do the math yourself. I'm a very busy writer trying to make a movie here.[[note]]2000 / 3 ≈ 666.67[[/note]]
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The author intends to remake this story with {{Creator/garfieldodie}}, like the first movie. Though it seemed to be stuck in DevelopmentHell, it was eventually confirmed that it would come out in 2014. After garfieldodie finished the rewritten Fanfic/CanYouImgineThat, Fanfic/CanYouImagineThat, he posted the first chapter of the remake, and has taken over the project due to Swing's busy schedule.
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The author intends to remake this story with {{Creator/garfieldodie}}, like the first movie. Though it seemed to be stuck in DevelopmentHell, it was eventually confirmed that it would come out in 2014. After garfieldodie finished the rewritten Fanfic/CanYouImgineThat, he posted the first chapter of the remake, and has taken over the project due to Swing's busy schedule.
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* BreakTheCutie: Implied to happen to our two main protagonists in the trailer.
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And if you want to know how many jets there were, you can do the math yourself. I'm a very busy writer trying to make a movie here.here.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The remake's trailer implies a psychological horror bent that wasn't there before, as Calvin and Hobbes, both [[SanitySlippage delusional]] from their bout on the boat, attack each other.
* TheRemake
* SanitySlippage: It is implied that Calvin and Hobbes will suffer this.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The remake's trailer implies a psychological horror bent that wasn't there before, as Calvin and Hobbes, both [[SanitySlippage delusional]] from their bout on the boat, attack each other.
* TheRemake
* SanitySlippage: It is implied that Calvin and Hobbes will suffer this.
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* SequelHook: TheStinger shows [[spoiler:Rupert and Earl returning.]]
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--> '''Mom:''' Where are we going to do this? [[TheWizardOfOz [[Film/TheWizardOfOz The Land of Oz?]]
** Calvin attempts to watchWesternAnimation/TomAndJerry.''WesternAnimation/TomAndJerry''.
** Calvin attempts to watch
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* TheStinger: Rupert [[spoiler:Rupert and Earl returning.]]
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The author intends to remake this story as well with {{Creator/garfieldodie}}. For a long while, {{Creator/garfieldodie}}, like the first movie. Though it seemed it had been to be stuck in DevelopmentHell, but garfieldodie later it was eventually confirmed that they're working on it, along with the fifth season finale of ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries''.it would come out in 2014.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2386133/1/Calvin_and_Hobbes_II_Lost_at_Sea Calvin and Hobbes II: Lost at Sea]]'' is a sequel to ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2386133/1/Calvin_and_Hobbes_II_Lost_at_Sea Calvin and Hobbes II: Lost at Sea]]'' is a sequel to ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie''.
''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie'', and thus another entry in [[Fanfic/Swing123AndGarfieldodiesCalvinverse the Calvinverse.]]
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The author intends to remake this story as well. Whether or not well with {{Creator/garfieldodie}}. For a long while, it will happen? [[DevelopmentHell Only time will tell.]]seemed it had been stuck in DevelopmentHell, but garfieldodie later confirmed that they're working on it, along with the fifth season finale of ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries''.
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** Calvin attempts to watch TomAndJerry.
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* EverythingsBetterWithBob: There's an alien named Bob on Rupert and Earl's crew.
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* ExcitedEpisodeTitle: Chapters 5, 6, and 7 ("NOT AGAIN!", "SEA MONSTER!", and "Death to Radios!", respectively)
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* LostInTrasmission: Rupert's crew attempts to record a conversation [[TechnologyMarchesOn with a cassette player,]] but its batteries start running out.
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* FiveFiveFive: Calvin's parents' phone number is 555-7957.
* AntiClimax: Hobbes manages to divert the monster's attention by telling it he'd seen three blue whales.
* AntiClimax: Hobbes manages to divert the monster's attention by telling it he'd seen three blue whales.
* BoundAndGagged: Calvin and Hobbes, once again.
** "It was then that Calvin wished he had listened to his swim teacher."
* EverythingsBetterWithBob: There's an alien named Bob on Rupert and Earl's crew.
* {{Irony}}: Calvin and Hobbes end up ''fishing'' in Chapter 8. The whole reason they had got onto the boat in the first place was to avoid their dad's fishing trip.
* MediumAwareness: The bonus chapter's introduction.
--> "Welcome!" Calvin yelled. "In this bonus chapter on um... What's this place called again?"\\
"[[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.]]" Hobbes yawned.\\
"Oh yeah. ...On Fan-friction, you'll see a trailer for CALVIN AND HOBBES III: DOUBLE TROUBLE, a soundtrack for songs, and a quick preview! I hope ya like it!"
--> "Welcome!" Calvin yelled. "In this bonus chapter on um... What's this place called again?"\\
"[[FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.]]" Hobbes yawned.\\
"Oh yeah. ...On Fan-friction, you'll see a trailer for CALVIN AND HOBBES III: DOUBLE TROUBLE, a soundtrack for songs, and a quick preview! I hope ya like it!"
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Calvin ends up smashing the radio in Chapter 7, destroying their main means of contact.
* ThePowerOfRock: Defied by the aliens.
* TheStinger: Rupert and Earl returning.
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* WolverineClaws: The sea monster.monster.
* WritersCannotDoMath: Lampshaded:
--> Up in the sky, The Alien Mother Ship, sent down twenty hundred troops, three in each space jet.\\
And if you want to know how many jets there were, you can do the math yourself. I'm a very busy writer trying to make a movie here.
* WritersCannotDoMath: Lampshaded:
--> Up in the sky, The Alien Mother Ship, sent down twenty hundred troops, three in each space jet.\\
And if you want to know how many jets there were, you can do the math yourself. I'm a very busy writer trying to make a movie here.
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!!This fic provides examples of:
* AttackOfTheFiftyFootWhatever: Taken UpToEleven with the sea monster - it's mentioned to make the ''Empire State Building'' look tiny!
* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Bigfoot is mentioned:
--> '''Calvin:''' Well, what about Bigfoot? Maybe while we're at the edge, we'll see a big...\\
'''Hobbes:''' I doubt it.
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Lampshaded in the author's notes of Chapter 6:
--> ''Yaaahhh! Cliff Hanger! Something's gonna happen! But what? Don't kill me for leaving it off like this. The next chapter will be here soon.''
* ContinuityNod: Hobbes isn't so eager on going into the woods after the last movie.
* DramaticIrony: Every time something about Rupert Chill is aired on the TV, nobody is there to see. Aside from Hobbes.
* ExcitedEpisodeTitle: Chapters 5, 6, and 7 ("NOT AGAIN!", "SEA MONSTER!", and "Death to Radios!", respectively)
* {{Foreshadowing}} and TitleDrop:
--> '''Calvin:''' I wish Dad would put me on my OWN boat.\\
'''Mom:''' Don't be silly, Calvin. If you were on a separate boat, you'd get lost out at sea!
** In the end of Chapter 5 ("NOT AGAIN!"), Calvin and Hobbes scream "NOT AGAIN!" as they're lost at sea.
** Then there's the beginning of Chapter 6:
--> '''Mom:''' Dear, Calvin has more of a chance of meeting a sea monster then hitting the Bermuda Triangle.
* LostInTrasmission: Rupert's crew attempts to record a conversation [[TechnologyMarchesOn with a cassette player,]] but its batteries start running out.
* HappyDance: Calvin's father does one that's described as looking like a petrified chicken hopping around. This leads to one of the most bizarre lines ever typed:
--> He then petrified chickened out of the room, singing a cheerful and somewhat stupid song.
* MadnessMantra: "Su... su... su... s'''u'''... su... '''SU'''...su...su...su... su... su... s'''u'''... su... '''SU'''...su...su..."
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: A driving force behind the fic.
* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: The sea monster, whose mouth is ''fifteen feet long.''
* OhNoNotAgain: The duo scream "NOT AGAIN!" at the end of Chapter 5.
* PunnyName: The C'mon Inn.
* ShoutOut:
--> '''Mom:''' Where are we going to do this? [[TheWizardOfOz The Land of Oz?]]
** Calvin attempts to watch TomAndJerry.
* SkeletonKey: Rupert Chill has one, ordered from the Alien Shopping Network.
* StockNessMonster: The original is mentioned:
--> '''Calvin:''' Or maybe we'll prove the existence of the [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Lock]] Ness Monster!\\
'''Hobbes:''' That's in Scotland.
* WolverineClaws: The sea monster.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2386133/1/Calvin_and_Hobbes_II_Lost_at_Sea Calvin and Hobbes II: Lost at Sea]]'' is a sequel to ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheMovie''.
It chronicles Calvin going on a fishing trip with his father, only to end up separated. Now he and Hobbes must get back to their home before something disastrous happens...
The author intends to remake this story as well. Whether or not it will happen? [[DevelopmentHell Only time will tell.]]
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It chronicles Calvin going on a fishing trip with his father, only to end up separated. Now he and Hobbes must get back to their home before something disastrous happens...
The author intends to remake this story as well. Whether or not it will happen? [[DevelopmentHell Only time will tell.]]
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