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* HappilyMarried: Fluttershy and Discord. Obviously.
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* HappilyMarried: Fluttershy and Discord. Obviously.As Twilight said at their wedding "Never in the history of Equestria has there been a love as powerful and strong"
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* AdaptationDistillation: Certain details in the fanfic aren't seen in the audio version, while other details are given more depth.
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* AdaptationDistillation: Certain details in the fanfic aren't seen in the audio version, while other details are given more depth.
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** Don't insult Fluttershy. He threatens and attacks his own reflection for doing so. However, this pales into comparison to if you ''threaten to hurt her''. The timberwolves tried that and Discord roars like Godzilla at them before using his magic on them.
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** Don't insult Fluttershy. He threatens and attacks his own reflection for doing so. However, this pales into comparison to if you ''threaten to hurt her''. The timberwolves tried that and Discord roars like Godzilla at them before using his magic on them. and if you do hurt her...
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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Discord is one to Screwball by taking an immediate dislike to her love interest, and going as far as to call said love interest's entire species "heartless monsters", which is his own berserk button.
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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Discord is one to Screwball by taking an immediate dislike to her love interest, interest and going as far as to call said love interest's entire species "heartless monsters", which is his own berserk button.
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* DaddysGirl: Screwball is clearly her father's daughter, and nowhere is this more clear then when he takes her to a baseball game and she makes it more interesting by making the ball zip around the field on its own. [[spoiler: It's how she gets her cutie mark]].
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* DaddysGirl: Screwball is clearly her father's daughter, and nowhere is this more clear clearer then when he takes her to a baseball game and she makes it more interesting by making the ball zip around the field on its own. [[spoiler: It's how she gets her cutie mark]].
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* HappilyMarried: Fluttershy and Discord.
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* HappilyMarried: Fluttershy and Discord. Obviously.
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* HonoraryUncle: The Mane Six's children refer to the other members, their husbands, and The CMC, as their aunts and uncles.
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* HonoraryUncle: The Mane Six's children refer to the other members, their husbands, and The the CMC, as their aunts and uncles.
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* LastOfTheirKind: [[spoiler: Discords' confides Fluttershy that his parents along with his entire species was wiped out when he was a child in the Hearth's Warming Blizzard. [[AvertedTrope Becoming slowly averted]] in the sequel with Fluttershy and Discords' children: Screwball and Zany possessing their fathers' Chaotic Powers.]]
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* LastOfTheirKind: [[spoiler: Discords' Discord confides to Fluttershy that his parents along with his entire species was wiped out when he was a child in the Hearth's Warming Blizzard. [[AvertedTrope Becoming slowly averted]] in the sequel with Fluttershy and Discords' Discord's children: Screwball and Zany possessing their fathers' Chaotic Powers.]]
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* NestedStoryReveal: At the end of the ''Daughter Of Discord'' audio drama, it's revealed that [[spoiler: Twilight]] was telling the story to [[spoiler: a slightly older Zany and Applespike as well as her daughter Twinkle and Rarity's youngest daughter Jewel the whole time (the latter two making an EarlyBirdCameo]]).
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* NestedStoryReveal: At the end of the ''Daughter Of of Discord'' audio drama, it's revealed that [[spoiler: Twilight]] was telling the story to [[spoiler: a slightly older Zany and Applespike as well as her daughter Twinkle and Rarity's youngest daughter Jewel the whole time (the latter two making an EarlyBirdCameo]]).
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvulz.
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, marriage and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvulz.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: A rather literal case with Screwball and Dinky, who were not only ''born on the same day'', but met and became friends in the hospital nursery on said day, striking a close friendship to last a lifetime.
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*HappilyMarried: Fluttershy and Discord.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: A rather literal case with Screwball and Dinky, who were not only ''born on the sameday'', day'' but met and became friends in the hospital nursery on said day, striking a close friendship to last a lifetime.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: A rather literal case with Screwball and Dinky, who were not only ''born on the same
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LaserGuidedKarma: After bullying Screwball as a foal when Gold Digger grows up he has to work on a rock farm and he gets cut off from the family fortune.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: After bullying Screwball as a foal when Gold Digger grows up he has to work on a rock farm and he gets cut off from the family fortune.
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LaserGuidedKarma: After bullying Screwball as a foal when Gold Digger grows up he has to work on a rock farm and he gets cut off from the family fortune.
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* HistoryRepeats: Just as w
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* HistoryRepeats: Just as wFluttershy and her daughter both married members of different species
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* PapaWolf: Don't threaten Discord's family, Chrysalis found that out the hard way.
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* PapaWolf: Don't threaten Discord's family, [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Don't. threaten. Discord's. family.]] Chrysalis found that out the hard way.
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** Applejack and Spike adopt two earth ponies, Cinnamon Stick and Cinnamon Roll, thinking it isn't possible for them to have a biological child.
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** Applejack and Spike adopt two earth ponies, Cinnamon Stick and Cinnamon Roll, thinking it isn't possible for them to have a biological child. [[spoiler: it is]]
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* PapaWolf: Don't threaten Discord's family, Chrysalis found that out the hard way.
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** As stated in the summary, the first story is basically an ''MLP'' version of ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast'' with the sequel ''Daughter of Discord'' being lightly influenced by ''Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet'', with a touch of ''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing2SimbasPride''.
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** As stated in the summary, the first story is basically an ''MLP'' version of ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast'' with the sequel ''Daughter of Discord'' being lightly influenced by ''Theatre/RomeoAndJuliet'', with a touch of ''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing2SimbasPride''.''WesternAnimation/TheLionKingIISimbasPride''.
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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Discord is one to Screwball by taking an immediate dislike to her love interest, and going as far as to call said love interest's entire species "heartless monsters", which is his own berserk button.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Discord is one to Screwball by taking an immediate dislike to her love interest, and going as far as to call said love interest's entire species "heartless monsters", which is his own berserk button.
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** ''CMC: The Next Generation'' has Lemon Drop, the adopted son of Lyra and Bon Bon, who is also a case of HasTwoMommies.
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** ''CMC: The Next Generation'' has Lemon Drop, the adopted son of Lyra and Bon Bon, who is also a case of HasTwoMommies.Bon.
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* StarCrossedLovers: Screwball and Mothball are this is ''Daughter of Discord''.
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%% * StarCrossedLovers: Screwball and Mothball are this is ''Daughter of Discord''.Discord''.
* TimeTravelersBaby: In ''Daughter of Discord'', Derpy has a daughter named Ditzy Doo. As for the absence of the foal's father Doctor Whooves, Derpy is so thick-headed that she has to be told outright that he time-traveled. The audio drama expands on this with her explaining that Whooves accidentally time-traveled while she was pregnant.
* TimeTravelersBaby: In ''Daughter of Discord'', Derpy has a daughter named Ditzy Doo. As for the absence of the foal's father Doctor Whooves, Derpy is so thick-headed that she has to be told outright that he time-traveled. The audio drama expands on this with her explaining that Whooves accidentally time-traveled while she was pregnant.
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: Screwball and Mothball share one during the climax of ''Daughter of Discord'' to drive Chrysalis away, much to Discord's protests.]]
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* ElectricJoybuzzer: Discord subjects Mothball to this when he finally accepts him dating Screwball. Screwball confirms that this is just his way of showing he likes ponies, (Thunder and Cinnamon Stick confirm this).
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* PhlebotinumOverload: [[spoiler: Chrysalis' weakness: while she absorbs love, too much of it can send her flying.]]
* PostKissCatatonia: [[spoiler: Mothball is left in a daze after his first kiss with Screwball.]]
* PostKissCatatonia: [[spoiler: Mothball is left in a daze after his first kiss with Screwball.]]
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvilz.
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvilz.ForTheEvulz.
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvils.
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvils.ForTheEvilz.
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* RelationshipSabotage: Chrysalis does quite a bit of this in ''Daughter of Discord''. Not only does she have two of her minions pose as Fluttershy and a stallion to make Discord think she was being unfaithful, but she also disguised herself as Fleur and threw herself at Fancy Pants to wreck Rarity's marriage, and took on Twilight's form to break her up with Flash Sentry. While the former was part of her grand scheme, the latter two were ForTheEvils.
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* ManaBear: When Filthy Rich calls Screwball a demon child after the incident between her and his son, Fluttershy slaps him across the face.
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* ManaBear: MamaBear: When Filthy Rich calls Screwball a demon child after the incident between her and his son, Fluttershy slaps him across the face.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Discord has one. Apparently it's so bad, Fluttershy feels the need keep a bucket of water around their home, so he doesn't burn it down through fury.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Discord has one. Apparently it's so bad, Fluttershy feels the need to keep a bucket of water around their home, so he doesn't burn it down through fury.