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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Music/NineDays This is the story of a girl.]] [[SubvertedTrope Who cried a river of blood and drank it all up.]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[WaxingLyrical This is the story of a girl.]] [[SubvertedTrope Who cried a river of blood and drank it all up.]]]]
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More accurate.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Every member of the Sang family has a name that starts with an "L".
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: AlliterativeFamily: Every member of the Sang family has a name that starts with an "L".
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* CallForward: Lucy first sees the Infernum's emblem on a wall at the beginning of Chapter 6. This is the very same spot where Carla Hyenandez will also see the emblem [[Fanfic/BornToBeWilde many years later]]. It even rips the description straight from that chapter, with the altered detail of it being in much better condition here.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 5. [[spoiler: [[{{Timeskip}} Three years have passed]] and Lucy gets pulled into a sudden and violent prison escape by the Felidae Infernum. Two early and [[ChekhovsGunman seemingly-innocuous]] characters are revealed to have been Infernum members the whole time and the Infernum itself turns out to be not just a criminal gang but an Illuminati-esque organization that has supposedly existed for a ''very'' long time. It ends with Lucy being brought to the Nocturnal District and into an Infernum base that is implied to be the future Belfry.]]
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* TheCaper: In Chapter 3, Lucy goes on a string of heists under the tutelage of [[spoiler: La Bruja]] to steal a bunch of items from around the prison.
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* TheCaper: In Chapter 3, Lucy goes on a string of heists under the tutelage of [[spoiler: La Bruja]] Bruja to steal a bunch of items from around the prison.
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* DescriptionCut: Three in a row at the beginning of Chapter 5, where Lucy denies Ci-Ci's claims that she's "changing", with each denial then cutting to a flashback that proves her claims accurate. Overlaps a bit with IResembleThatRemark, especially when she responds to the claim that she's becoming addicted to blood with "I can stop anytime I want!"
* GreatEscape: Teased in Chapter 3. [[spoiler: Actually happens in Chapter 5]].
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* SecretTest: [[spoiler: La Bruja]] gives Lucy a list of items to steal from around the prison, all items that would prove useful for a potential prison break. [[spoiler: As it turns out, the task was merely to test Lucy's thieving skills and La Bruja had no intention of escaping just yet. She never even told Lucy otherwise, just letting her make the assumption herself.]]
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* SecretTest: [[spoiler: La Bruja]] Bruja gives Lucy a list of items to steal from around the prison, all items that would prove useful for a potential prison break. [[spoiler: As it turns out, the task was merely to test Lucy's thieving skills and La Bruja had no intention of escaping just yet. She never even told Lucy otherwise, just letting her make the assumption herself.]]
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* {{Timeskip}}: Between chapters 4 and 5, of three years.
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* ForegoneConclusion: As tragic as her circumstances are initially, Lucy ''will' eventually become a full-blown villain. [[spoiler: Not only that but the Felidae Infernum, which Lucy ends up joining, will eventually be destroyed by her hand, its former existence literally becoming a RunningGag in Born To Be Wilde.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: As tragic as her circumstances are initially, Lucy ''will' ''will'' eventually become a full-blown villain. [[spoiler: Not only that but the Felidae Infernum, which Lucy ends up joining, will eventually be destroyed by her hand, its former existence literally becoming a RunningGag in Born ''Born To Be Wilde.Wilde''.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: As tragic as her circumstances are initially, Lucy ''will' eventually become a full-blown villain. [[spoiler: Not only that but the Felidae Infernum, which Lucy ends up joining, will eventually be destroyed by her hand, its former existence literally becoming a RunningGag in ''Born To Be Wilde''.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: As tragic as her circumstances are initially, Lucy ''will' eventually become a full-blown villain. [[spoiler: Not only that but the Felidae Infernum, which Lucy ends up joining, will eventually be destroyed by her hand, its former existence literally becoming a RunningGag in ''Born Born To Be Wilde''.Wilde.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: As tragic as her circumstances are initially, Lucy ''will' eventually become a full-blown villain. [[spoiler: Not only that but the Felidae Infernum, which Lucy ends up joining, will eventually be destroyed by her hand, its former existence literally becoming a RunningGag in ''Born To Be Wilde''.]]
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* SelfDepreciation: Lucy receives a mysterious note signed by an "LB". She spends the beginning of the next chapter wracking her brain over what it could stand for and is relieved to find out soon after, remarking that it would have gotten really annoying had it been dragged out much longer. This is a jab at the similar unknown acronym "HB" in ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'', which took much longer to be revealed.
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* SelfDepreciation: SelfDeprecation: Lucy receives a mysterious note signed by an "LB". She spends the beginning of the next chapter wracking her brain over what it could stand for and is relieved to find out soon after, remarking that it would have gotten really annoying had it been dragged out much longer. This is a jab at the similar unknown acronym "HB" in ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'', which took much longer to be revealed.
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* SelfDepreciation: Lucy receives a mysterious note signed by an "LB". She spends the beginning of the next chapter wracking her brain over what it could stand for and is relieved to find out soon after, remarking that it would have gotten really annoying had it been dragged out much longer. This is a jab at the similar unknown acronym "HB" in ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'', which took much longer to be revealed.
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* AlliterativeName: Every member of the Sang family has a name that starts with an "L".
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''Bloodlines'' is a ''{{Disney/Zootopia}}'' fanfic co-authored by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~berserker88 Berserker88]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6260989/Mind-Jack Mind Jack]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7047344/upplet Upplet]].
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''Bloodlines'' is a ''{{Disney/Zootopia}}'' ''{{WesternAnimation/Zootopia}}'' fanfic co-authored by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/~berserker88 Berserker88]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6260989/Mind-Jack Mind Jack]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7047344/upplet Upplet]].
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* BroadStrokes: Its relationship with ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls'' may be a bit unclear at first, given that Upplet is one of the authors but the story itself is explicitly in the ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' canon. But in short, everything in ''Bloodlines'' is canon to ''When Instinct Falls'' as well, except for anything that outright contradicts it.
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* BroadStrokes: Its relationship with ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls'' may be a bit unclear at first, given that Upplet is one of the authors but the story itself is explicitly in the ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' canon. But in In short, everything in ''Bloodlines'' is canon to ''When Instinct Falls'' as well, except for anything that outright contradicts it.
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* BroadStrokes: Its relationship with ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls'' may be a bit unclear at first, given that Upplet is one of the authors but the story itself is explicitly in the ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' canon. Basically, everything in ''Bloodlines'' is canon to ''When Instinct Falls'' as well, except for anything that outright contradicts it.
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* BroadStrokes: Its relationship with ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls'' may be a bit unclear at first, given that Upplet is one of the authors but the story itself is explicitly in the ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' canon. Basically, But in short, everything in ''Bloodlines'' is canon to ''When Instinct Falls'' as well, except for anything that outright contradicts it.
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Serving as a side-story and prequel to both ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' and ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls''[[note]] although [=BtBW=] canon moreso when there's a contradiction[[/note]], ''Bloodlines'' stars sadistic villainous Lucy Sang [[StartOfDarkness and how she became]] sadistic villainous Lucy Sang. Originally, she was just aspiring artist Lucy Sang, struggling to fulfill her dreams of creative greatness while held back by a strict upbringing. She's a bit of a rebel and prone to occasional violent outbursts, but all great artists have their eccentricities, right?
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Serving as a side-story and prequel to both ''Fanfic/BornToBeWilde'' and ''Fanfic/WhenInstinctFalls''[[note]] although [=BtBW=] canon moreso overrules [=WIF=] canon when there's there’s a contradiction[[/note]], ''Bloodlines'' stars sadistic villainous Lucy Sang [[StartOfDarkness and how she became]] sadistic villainous Lucy Sang. Originally, she was just aspiring artist Lucy Sang, struggling to fulfill her dreams of creative greatness while held back by a strict upbringing. She's a bit of a rebel and prone to occasional violent outbursts, but all great artists have their eccentricities, right?
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* WorstWhateverEver: When Lucy is taken out of her cell in solitary (where she had no perspective of the time) and brought to the shower room under threatening circumstances, she comments on it being the "Worst ambiguous time of day ever".
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* WorstWhateverEver: When Lucy is taken out of her cell in solitary (where she had no perspective of the time) and brought to the shower room under threatening circumstances, she comments on it being the "Worst ambiguous time of day ever".ever!”.