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* WaxingLyrical: Yvonne quotes lines from [[Music/CreatureFeature Aim for the Head]] to Yusho when it comes to giving advice on how to duel with Yuya and Zarc.

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* CityOfWeirdos: Carroll City is Den City with a different name and populated with zombies, vampires, living puppets, and other strange delights heavily inspired out of ''Alice in Wonderland''.


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* QuirkyTown: Carroll City is Den City with a different name and populated with zombies, vampires, living puppets, and other strange delights heavily inspired out of ''Alice in Wonderland''.
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* CallForward: The end of ''3rd Show'' has Sen and Seto trying to find the door that would let them meet "three gay Caballeros" meaning that this is before their appearance in ''Legend of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' (which the author confirms)

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* CallForward: The end of ''3rd Show'' has Sen and Seto trying to find the door that would let them meet "three gay Caballeros" meaning that this is before their appearance in ''Legend of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' (which the author confirms)confirms). This reference is omitted in the [=AO3=] version however.



** Yusho's impulsive decision to go to the Fusion Dimension without notifying his son and wife backfires on him badly; because he never told anyone where he was going, it only ended up hurting Yuya more and more thus giving Zarc fuel to brainwash him with. Moreover, going alone means that he has no one to support him and no way to keep in contact with Reiji and he never considered having a backup plan to make sure his family is supported until he comes back.

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** Yusho's impulsive decision to go to the Fusion Dimension without notifying his son and wife backfires on him badly; because he never told anyone where he was going, it only ended up hurting Yuya more and more thus giving Zarc fuel to brainwash him with. Moreover, going alone means that he has no one to support him and no way to keep in contact with Reiji and he never considered having a backup plan to make sure his family is financially supported until he comes back.back. Plus even ''if'' he made it to the Professor, what's to say that the Professor didn't just card him? Yusho is skilled in lots of things but he has no foresight.
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* IronicEcho: Yvonne's remark about Yusho in the fourth chapter become this seven chapters later...
-->'''Yvonne:''' ''(after learning the reason why Yusho was traveling in the first place)'' And that's the problem with you. You're. too. soft.\\
'''[[spoiler:Yuya]]''': ''(laughing)'' I can't believe you fell for my sob story, Yusho~! But then again, that was your biggest flaw. You're. just. too. SOFT!



** How Yvonne shows her passive-aggressive side to Yusho.
-->'''Yvonne:''' And that's the problem with you, Yusho. You're. too. soft.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: In ''15th Show'', Ayu tears Himika apart for having a heart-motif yet she shows no love for anyone except herself, rather she loves looking beautiful to hide her black heart. This is so powerful that Kryu, Misty, Carly and Yusei actually laugh with glee at seeing their little sweetfish chewing out the Chairwoman.
* ActionGirl: Every single female character in Carroll City named so far is capable of kicking ass in a duel and many of them can kick ass in a brawl.

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: In ''15th Show'', Ayu tears Himika apart for having a heart-motif yet she shows no love for anyone except herself, rather she loves looking beautiful to hide her black heart. This is so powerful that Kryu, Kiryu, Misty, Carly and Yusei ''Yusei'' actually laugh with glee at seeing their little sweetfish chewing out the Chairwoman.
* ActionGirl: Every Nearly single female character in Carroll City named the story so far is capable of kicking ass in a duel and many of them can kick ass in a brawl.



** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. These kids have known nothing but what Leo Akaba taught them for ''years'' so if they hear something that doesn't line up with what they've been indoctrined with of course they're not going to turn away so easily. Notably, Edo is shown struggling with Yusho's philosophy in his duel with Max and ends up lashing out at him in anger over the idea of duelins being for fun.
** Reira, a ChildProdigy is dueling Kiryu in ''15th Show''. But Reira is still a ''child'' -- one who's still affected by PTSD -- compared to Kiryu being much more experienced in dueling and Kiryu easily tears through her C/C/C monsters without flinching.

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** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. These kids have known nothing but what Leo Akaba taught them for ''years'' so if they hear something that doesn't line up with what they've been indoctrined indoctrinated with of course they're not going to turn away so easily. Notably, Edo is shown struggling with Yusho's philosophy in his duel with Max and ends up lashing out at him in anger over the idea of duelins dueling being for fun.
** Reira, who is known to be quite a ChildProdigy skilled duelist despite her age, is dueling Kiryu in ''15th Show''. But Reira is still a ''child'' -- one who's still affected by PTSD and fighting for her goddamn life, not to mentioned bullied by her abusive mother -- compared to Kiryu being much more experienced in dueling and not having that much pressure put on him. Kiryu easily tears through her C/C/C monsters without flinching. compares the situation as a ChildProdigy going up against an experienced master: Reira may have skills but she doesn't have experience and the wisdom that comes from it.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: In ''15th Show'', Ayu tears Himika apart for having a heart-motif yet she shows no love for anyone except herself, rather she loves looking beautiful to hide her black heart. This is so powerful that Kryu, Misty, Carly and Yusei actually laugh with glee at seeing their little sweetfish chewing out the Chairwoman.
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And as this happens, Academia is somehow assaulted by a blue haired girl in a top hat and three puppets that decide to decapitate three Obelisk Force soldiers.

In the center of this all is Yuzu Hiiragi, who only wants to her best friend back, only to find that her best bet to get Yuya back is to team up with a set of duelists from another world who don't really care for her troubles as they are on stopping Academia's plans.

And things will be perfectly fine...right?

This [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17656319/chapters/41638697 fanfic]] is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in her ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')

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And as this happens, Academia is somehow assaulted by a blue haired girl in a puppeteer outfit and a top hat and three puppets that decide decided to decapitate three Obelisk Force soldiers.

In And in the center of this all Standard Dimension is Yuzu Hiiragi, who only wants to her best friend back, only to find that her best bet to get Yuya back is to team up with a set of duelists from another world who don't really care for her troubles as they are on stopping Academia's plans.

plans (and to make sure their You Show Duel School Festival goes off without a hitch).

And if Yuzu plays her cards right, things will be perfectly fine...right?

This [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17656319/chapters/41638697 fanfic]] is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in her ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')
Tenebris''). The characters aren't as they seem, and in this bloody theatrical tale of horror, drama and snark, nothing is at is seems and the people closest to you might have some secrets they don't want loose.



** Yusho was already known to be the best duelist in Maiami City but he ramps it up with two new things going for him: [[spoiler: Pendulum monsters in the form of his new Performapal Changeraffe and implications that he has even ''more'' Pendulum monsters on hand]] and [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning]] in Performapal Knightwolfe and Performapal Ladyhawke.

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** Yusho was already known to be the best duelist in Maiami City (despite only knowing Tribute Summoning) but he ramps it up with two new things going for him: [[spoiler: Pendulum monsters in the form of his new Performapal Changeraffe and implications that he has even ''more'' Pendulum monsters on hand]] and [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning]] in Performapal Knightwolfe and Performapal Ladyhawke.
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*** In the same vein as Reiji, Himika gets chewed out for her [[AbusiveParents treatment]] of Reira by the Dark Signer in that she sees Reira more like a trophy than a human being.

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* AccusationFic: Yusho Sakaki got away with his disappearing trick to the Xyz Dimension, never thinking to say goodbye to his family or make sure they were financially secure for the three years he was away. This story has multiple characters point out that this was AllForNothing as the Xyz Dimension is still destroyed, he's still stuck from home and his son is now a brainwashed puppet by Zarc. The only thing he's done -- barring gathering any turncoat Academia students to his side -- is make the people who worshipped him hate his goddamn guts. WordOfGod states that she just dislikes Yusho's actions in general in that beneath his charming smile is someone who has done very ''very'' stupid things.

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Yusho Sakaki got away with his disappearing trick to the Xyz Dimension, never thinking to say goodbye to his family or make sure they were financially secure for the three years he was away. This story has multiple characters point out that this was AllForNothing as the Xyz Dimension is still destroyed, he's still stuck far from home with no signs of stopping Professor Akaba and his son is now a brainwashed puppet by Zarc. The only thing he's done -- barring gathering any turncoat Academia students to his side -- is make the people who worshipped him and his teachings hate his goddamn guts. WordOfGod states that she just dislikes Yusho's actions in general in that beneath his charming smile is someone who has done very ''very'' stupid things.things.
** Reiji is also chewed out by Yusei in that he takes so much care with his plans, no matter the cost that he doesn't focus on a very dangerous situation that Reira is.



** Reira, a ChildProdigy is dueling Kiryu in ''15th Show''. But Reira is still a ''child'' -- one who's still affected by PTSD -- compared to Kiryu being much more experienced in dueling and Kiryu easily tears through her C/C/C monsters without flinching.



*** In the previous chapter, Lady Belladonna flips a card and looks in horror to find that it's the upright Nine of Swords, also known as the ''Nightmare Card''.

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*** In the previous chapter, after Yvonne and Lady Belladonna have a talk about Yvonne having to do something important [[spoiler:which was kill Yusho]], the latter flips a card and looks in horror to find that it's the upright Nine of Swords, Swords...also known as the ''Nightmare Card''.
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* AccusationFic: Yusho Sakaki got away with his disappearing trick to the Xyz Dimension, never thinking to say goodbye to his family or make sure they were financially secure for the three years he was away. This story has multiple characters point out that this was AllForNothing as the Xyz Dimension is still destroyed, he's still stuck from home and his son is now a brainwashed puppet by Zarc. The only thing he's done -- barring gathering any turncoat Academia students to his side -- is make the people who worshipped him hate his goddamn guts. WordOfGod states that she just dislikes Yusho's actions in general in that beneath his charming smile is someone who has done very ''very'' stupid things.

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* ActionMom: Saki, Shirobara, Lusamine and Lampetia have all won duels against Obelisk Force members. Saki gets extra points for engaging in fisticuffs.

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* ActionMom: Saki, Shirobara, Lusamine and Lampetia have all won duels against Obelisk Force members. Saki gets extra points for engaging in fisticuffs.fisticuffs and being a former gang leader.



** Mieru dresses up like Alice while Yvonne's puppets are dressed as the Knave of Hearts (Yuya), the White Rabbit (Yuto), the Mad Hatter (Yugo) and the Cheshire Cat (Yuri). Kelly and Miette are dressed up as the White and Red Queen, respectively.

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** Mieru dresses up like Alice while Yvonne's puppets are dressed as the Knave of Hearts (Yuya), the White Rabbit (Yuto), the Mad Hatter (Yugo) and the Cheshire Cat (Yuri). Kelly and Miette are dressed up as the White and Red Queen, respectively.respectively with Kelly having the ability to see the future like the White Queen of the story could.



** Saki's bar is called "Wool And Water", the title of one of the chapters in ''Through the Looking Glass''.



* ArcWords: "(Re)Purpose" or anything relating to that word. This is a term used by those in Carroll City when people are resurrected and must figure out what they want to do now that they are undead.

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"(Re)Purpose" or anything relating to that word. This is a term used by those in Carroll City when people are resurrected and must figure out what they want to do now that they are undead.



** "Through darkness and mirrors" is another phrase which is probably the Carroll City version of "Through the looking glass".



* BookEnds: ''3rd Show'' begins and ends with someone singing the lines to "Come Little Children".

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* BookEnds: ''3rd Show'' begins and ends with someone singing the lines opening/ending verse to "Come Little Children".



* CircusOfFear: The Action Field for Yvonne/Yusho and Yuya/Zarc's duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' takes place at the Carnival of Souls, a dark carnival where the four sing songs that befit said circus. Yuya also debuts his new "Nightmare Mirror" archetype which are twisted circus version of people (and animals) in his life.

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* CircusOfFear: The Action Field for Yvonne/Yusho and Yuya/Zarc's duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' takes place at the Carnival of Souls, a dark carnival where the four sing songs that befit said circus. Yuya also debuts his new "Nightmare Mirror" archetype which are twisted circus version of people (and animals) in his life. They also make numerous references to the famous story ''Literature/SomethingWickedThisWayComes'' for good measure.



** In Guignol's duel against Sora, she doesn't lose any of her lifepoints as she whittles all of Sora's with her Shaddoll monsters.
** In Willow's duel against Celina, Celina doesn't even have a chance to attack once Willow summons Vampire Vamp to take control of Lunalight Cat Dancer.

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** In Guignol's Yvonne/Guignol's duel against Sora, she doesn't lose any of her lifepoints as she whittles all of Sora's with her Shaddoll monsters.
** In Willow's May/Willow's duel against Celina, Celina doesn't even have a chance to attack once Willow summons Vampire Vamp to take control of Lunalight Cat Dancer.



** Yvonne and Yusho lose to Zarc and Yuya in their tag-team duel, but the two of them were able to destroy most, if not ''all'' of the monsters that Zarc and Yuya unleashed on them.

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** Brendan and Serenity lose their duels to Yugo and Yuto respectively but they do manage to push them into a corner where they had to think outside the box to win (and even then, victory wasn't the goal for the former two).
** Yvonne and Yusho lose to Zarc and Yuya in their tag-team duel, but the two of them were able to destroy most, if not ''all'' of the monsters that Zarc and Yuya unleashed on them.them and bring the two down to 300 lifepoints.



* DavidVersusGoliath: The final turn of Yuya and Zarc vs Yvonne and Yusho is Zarc's Supreme Dragon Vassal of the Soulless Heavens (which is roughly Zarc's size) vs Yvonne's El Shaddoll Construct (which is a giant). Stat wise, it looks like El Shaddoll Construct will win (Zarc's monster has only 2500 ATK vs El Shaddoll Construct's 2800 with the difference just enough for Zarc and Yuya to lose) but Zarc's Pendulum monsters strengthen the David of this battle to utterly annihilate the Goliath.



** Yusho's impulsive decision to go to the Fusion Dimension without notifying his son and wife backfires on him badly; because he never told anyone where he was going, it only ended up hurting Yuya more and more thus giving Zarc fuel to brainwash him with.

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** Yusho's impulsive decision to go to the Fusion Dimension without notifying his son and wife backfires on him badly; because he never told anyone where he was going, it only ended up hurting Yuya more and more thus giving Zarc fuel to brainwash him with. Moreover, going alone means that he has no one to support him and no way to keep in contact with Reiji and he never considered having a backup plan to make sure his family is supported until he comes back.



* GutPunch: The end of ''14.5th Show'': So Yusho and Yvonne are walking off despite losing their epic duel against Yuya and Zarc. Yvonne starts asking if Yusho got the message from Yuzu...but when he asks "What message?" that's when the mood has dropped as Yvonne acts uncharacteristically of her. She apologizes to Yusho and ends it with the biggest WhamLine of the chapter before [[spoiler:slicing his throat in front of a live audience and screaming at what she's done while the last scene of the chapter has Yusho meeting with Wiraqocha Rasca.]] The author wasn't kidding in ''14th Show'' when she said that Yusho's challenge against Yuya would be the beginning of the end.

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* GutPunch: The end of ''14.5th Show'': So Yusho and Yvonne are walking off despite losing their epic duel against Yuya and Zarc. Yvonne starts asking if Yusho got the message from Yuzu...but when he asks "What message?" that's when the mood has dropped as Yvonne acts uncharacteristically of her. She apologizes to Yusho and ends it with the biggest WhamLine of the chapter before [[spoiler:slicing his throat in front of a live audience and screaming at what she's done while the last scene of the chapter has Yusho meeting with Wiraqocha Rasca.]] The author wasn't kidding in ''14th Show'' when she said that Yusho's challenge against Yuya would be the beginning of the end.end of everything.



** Yusho Sakaki learns the hard way that DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou is ''not'' a good excuse to go dimension hopping for three years. Zarc was easily able to influence Yuya because of the psychological issues Yuya had to go through for the past three years and Yusho learns that his plight to even stop Akaba was AllForNothing and no one in Carroll City is willing to forgive him for his impulsive decision
** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. These kids have known nothing but what Leo Akaba taught them for ''years'' so if they hear something that doesn't line up with what they've been indoctrined with of course they're not going to turn away so easily.

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** Yusho Sakaki learns the hard way that DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou is ''not'' a good excuse to go dimension hopping for three years. Zarc was easily able to influence Yuya because of the psychological issues Yuya had to go through for the past three years and Yusho learns that his plight to even stop Akaba was AllForNothing and no one in Carroll City is willing to forgive him for his impulsive decision
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** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. These kids have known nothing but what Leo Akaba taught them for ''years'' so if they hear something that doesn't line up with what they've been indoctrined with of course they're not going to turn away so easily. Notably, Edo is shown struggling with Yusho's philosophy in his duel with Max and ends up lashing out at him in anger over the idea of duelins being for fun.

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** In the anime, there's no repercussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going on his crusade to stop Professor Akaba, Yuya included. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid[[note]]Although in his defense, it was Edo who flung Yusho to the Fusion Dimension[[/note]], stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.

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** ** In the anime, there's no repercussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going on his crusade to stop Professor Akaba, Yuya included. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid[[note]]Although in his defense, it was Edo who flung Yusho to the Fusion Dimension[[/note]], stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.



* RealityEnsues: Yusho Sakaki learns the hard way that DaddyHasAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou is ''not'' a good excuse to go dimension hopping for three years. Zarc was easily able to influence Yuya because of the psychological issues Yuya had to go through for the past three years and Yusho learns that his plight to even stop Akaba was AllForNothing and no one in Carroll City is willing to forgive him for his impulsive decision
** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. Talking things out won't make them change their minds immediately.

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** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. Talking things out won't make These kids have known nothing but what Leo Akaba taught them change their minds immediately.for ''years'' so if they hear something that doesn't line up with what they've been indoctrined with of course they're not going to turn away so easily.

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* {{Deconstruction}}: In the anime, there's no repercussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going on his crusade to stop Professor Akaba, Yuya included. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid[[note]]Although in his defense, it was Edo who flung Yusho to the Fusion Dimension[[/note]], stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.



** In the anime, there's no repercussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going on his crusade to stop Professor Akaba, Yuya included. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid[[note]]Although in his defense, it was Edo who flung Yusho to the Fusion Dimension[[/note]], stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.



* RealityEnsues: Yusho Sakaki learns the hard way that DaddyHasAGoodReasoningForAbandoningYou is ''not'' a good excuse to go dimension hopping for three years. Zarc was easily able to influence Yuya because of the psychological issues Yuya had to go through for the past three years and Yusho learns that his plight to even stop Akaba was AllForNothing and no one in Carroll City is willing to forgive him for his impulsive decision.

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* RealityEnsues: Yusho Sakaki learns the hard way that DaddyHasAGoodReasoningForAbandoningYou DaddyHasAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou is ''not'' a good excuse to go dimension hopping for three years. Zarc was easily able to influence Yuya because of the psychological issues Yuya had to go through for the past three years and Yusho learns that his plight to even stop Akaba was AllForNothing and no one in Carroll City is willing to forgive him for his impulsive decision.decision
** As Yusho tells Mieru, trying to convince many Academia students to change their ways is not going to be a walk in the park. Talking things out won't make them change their minds immediately.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: ''Arc-V'' was already a deconstruction of traditional Yu-Gi-Oh tropes, so this is a given.
** The implications of people appearing from a different dimension to cause wanton destruction is frightening, but (most of) Academia believe that it's for a good cause. To them, they are the freedom fighters for a new utopia. So here's a question: what happens if these people are fighting off against the same type of people they ''truly'' are...except they don't have an end goal of an utopia? End result: Carroll City and their massacre of these students and acting just like they are -- cold, apathetic and relishing in killing them as if this was all a game.


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* CerebusRetcon: At the end of ''10th Show'', Yvonne tells Yuzu to tell Yusho, "we're ready to fight". However, she (and the readers) completely forgot about this request. Why is it so important, anyway? [[spoiler:Answer, it's Yusho's TriggerPhase which makes him remember information only when someone tells it to him.]]

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*** All of Yvonne's interactions with Yusho (including but not limited to snark, trolling and telling Yusho he's too soft and how he stupidly went to talk to Professor Akaba without saying goodbye to his family) are seen in a BlackComedy light. It isn't until ''15th Show'' that we see [[spoiler:Yvonne not wanting to kill Yusho and her true feelings about him.
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** The flashback of ''15th Show'' has a retroactive one.
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* CerebusRetcon: At the end of ''10th Show'', Yvonne tells Yuzu to tell Yusho, "we're ready to fight". However, she (and the readers) completely forgot about this request. Why is it so important, anyway? [[spoiler:Answer, it's Yusho's TriggerPhase which makes him remember information only when someone tells it to him.]]

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** In ''7th Show'' Yuzu suggests Mieru follow Serenity to find where Yusho is. Three chapters later, she regrets doing this but without getting Mieru's phone number because she needed Mieru's tracking skills to locate Ruri and Rin.

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** In ''7th Show'' Yuzu suggests Mieru follow Serenity to find where Yusho is. Three chapters later, she regrets doing this but without getting Mieru's phone number because she needed now needs Mieru's tracking skills to locate Ruri and Rin.



** There's a lot of hints about the end of ''14.5th Show'' having [[spoiler:Yusho dying by Yvonne's hands and becoming the Dark Signer of the Condor.]] This includes:

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** At the end of ''10th Show'', Yvonne asks Yuzu to tell Yusho "we're ready to fight". Most readers would forget this little detail. [[spoiler:Chapters later, we find out why this is so important...it's Yusho's TriggerPhase.]]
*** In addition, when Yvonne suggests she adds herself to the duel with Yusho against Zarc and Yuya, Serenity and Ash state to Yuzu that Yvonne didn't hypnotize Yusho to let her join the duel. [[spoiler:But she ''did'' hypnotize him with important information...]]



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This fanfic is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in her ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')

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This fanfic [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17656319/chapters/41638697 fanfic]] is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in her ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')

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* AnyoneCanDie: Yuya, Yuto, Yugo, a lot of Obelisk Force soldiers, [[spoiler:Ayu, Mieru, ''Yusho Sakaki''...]] Yeah this story won't spare anyone.

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* AnyoneCanDie: Yuya, Yuto, Yugo, a lot of Obelisk Force soldiers, [[spoiler:Ayu, Mieru, [[spoiler:Ayu Ayukawa, Mieru Hochun, ''Yusho Sakaki''...]] Yeah this story won't spare anyone.



* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The author's notes for ''11th Show'' shows off a list of bloody and gorey stuff that will be contained for the rest of Part 1, with the last item being "and classic Yvonne snark".



** In ''14.5th Show'', Yusho tells Yvonne to stop playing around and to "Get it over with. Now." all while looking at her right hand and showing off her Court of Strings mark. You would first assume he meant "Transform me into a puppet like you did Sora". [[spoiler:As revealed at the end of the chapter, he meant "Kill me. Now."]]

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** In ''14.5th Show'', Yusho tells Yvonne to stop playing around and to "Get it over with. Now." all while looking at her right hand and showing off her Court of Strings mark. You would first assume he meant "Transform me into a puppet like you did Sora". [[spoiler:As revealed at the end of the chapter, he meant "Kill me. Now."]]


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* IRegretNothing: The author's notes state that she does not regret thinking that Zarc's dub voice should've been Wayne Grayson (who voices Leo Akaba) and that she sees Dartz in the former.
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** In ''14.5th Show'', Yusho tells Yvonne to stop playing around and to "Get it over with. Now." all while looking at her right hand and showing off her Court of Strings mark. You would first assume he meant "Transform me into a puppet like you did Sora". [[spoiler:As revealed at the end of the chapter, he meant "Kill me. Now."]]
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** A very minor one: ''11th Show'' has Yvonne sing the chorus to Queen's "Killer Queen". Three chapters later, we later learn that her brother also was a fan of Queen, presumably "Show Must Go On".

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** A very minor one: ''11th Show'' has *** When Yvonne sing enters The Euphemism to talk to Lady Belladonna, the chorus to Queen's "Killer Queen". Three chapters later, we later learn that her brother also was a fan of Queen, presumably latter is singing [[Music/{{Queen}} "Show Must Go On".On"]] which Yvonne states was her brother's favorite song. The song was released close to the end of Freddie Mercury's life, stating how he'd perform despite being seriously ill. [[spoiler:This alludes to both Yvonne and Yusho -- despite knowing their little plan, they're still going to be performing. The show (Action Duel) continues despite Yvonne feeling so broken as what's to come.]]
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* CityOfWeird: Carroll City is Den City with a different name and populated with zombies, vampires, living puppets, and other strange delights.

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* CityOfWeird: CityOfWeirdos: Carroll City is Den City with a different name and populated with zombies, vampires, living puppets, and other strange delights.delights heavily inspired out of ''Alice in Wonderland''.



* GutPunch: The end of ''14.5th Show'': So Yusho and Yvonne are walking off despite losing their epic duel against Yuya and Zarc. Yvonne starts asking if Yusho got the message from Yuzu...but when he asks "What message?" that's when the mood has dropped as Yvonne acts uncharacteristically of her. She apologizes to Yusho and ends it with the biggest WhamLine of the chapter before [[spoiler:slicing his throat in front of a live audience and screaming at what she's done.]]

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* GutPunch: The end of ''14.5th Show'': So Yusho and Yvonne are walking off despite losing their epic duel against Yuya and Zarc. Yvonne starts asking if Yusho got the message from Yuzu...but when he asks "What message?" that's when the mood has dropped as Yvonne acts uncharacteristically of her. She apologizes to Yusho and ends it with the biggest WhamLine of the chapter before [[spoiler:slicing his throat in front of a live audience and screaming at what she's done.]]done while the last scene of the chapter has Yusho meeting with Wiraqocha Rasca.]] The author wasn't kidding in ''14th Show'' when she said that Yusho's challenge against Yuya would be the beginning of the end.



** ''14th/14th.5 Show'': Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel, Yvonne ''killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience'' and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]

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** ''14th/14th.5 Show'': Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel, Yvonne ''killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience'' and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.Rasca'' which the implications being that he is becoming the Dark Signer of the Raptor.]]

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* GutPunch: The end of ''14.5th Show'': So Yusho and Yvonne are walking off despite losing their epic duel against Yuya and Zarc. Yvonne starts asking if Yusho got the message from Yuzu...but when he asks "What message?" that's when the mood has dropped as Yvonne acts uncharacteristically of her. She apologizes to Yusho and ends it with the biggest WhamLine of the chapter before [[spoiler:slicing his throat in front of a live audience and screaming at what she's done.]]



'''Yusho:''' I unleash the [[spoiler:Overlay Network!]]

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'''Yusho:''' I unleash build the [[spoiler:Overlay Network!]]
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And everyone who watched Episode 37 knows how it ends: Yuto sacrifices himself to protect Yuya from a direct attack and gets absorbed into his soul then Yuzu teleports Yugo away. Simple as that.



In this world, Zarc wishes to reunite with his sons -- Yuya, Yuto, Yugo and Yuri -- and he'll do anything he can to ensure his revenge on the ones who caused him to be separated from his family.

And at the same time, Academia finds themselves assaulted by strange people who don't have any qualms on murdering people instead of just carding them.

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In Yuya somehow wakes up in a dark realm with a strange spiral mark on his arm and it turns he's somehow found his way into the arms of Zarc along with Yuto and Yugo.

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this world, Zarc wishes to reunite with his sons -- Yuya, Yuto, Yugo and Yuri -- and he'll do anything he can to ensure his revenge on the ones who caused him to be separated from his family.

And at the same time,
happens, Academia finds themselves is somehow assaulted by strange people who don't have any qualms on murdering people instead of just carding them.
a blue haired girl in a top hat and three puppets that decide to decapitate three Obelisk Force soldiers.



This fanfic is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in the ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')

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This fanfic is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in the her ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')



* ActionGirl: Every single female character in Carroll City named so far is capable of kicking ass in a duel.

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* ActionGirl: Every single female character in Carroll City named so far is capable of kicking ass in a duel.duel and many of them can kick ass in a brawl.



* AnyoneCanDie: Yuya, Yuto, Yugo, a lot of Obelisk Force soldiers, [[spoiler:''Yusho Sakaki''...]] Yeah this story won't spare anyone.

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* AnyoneCanDie: Yuya, Yuto, Yugo, a lot of Obelisk Force soldiers, [[spoiler:''Yusho [[spoiler:Ayu, Mieru, ''Yusho Sakaki''...]] Yeah this story won't spare anyone.



* BlackAndGrayMorality: On one side, we have Academia and their goals of carding people, another side is Zarc and his plans on revenge against the Akabas and reuniting with his sons and Carroll City who are shown to be fine murdering Academia personnel.

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* BlackAndGrayMorality: On one side, we have Academia and their goals of carding people, another side is Zarc and his plans on revenge against the Akabas and reuniting with his sons and then there's Carroll City who are shown to be fine murdering Academia personnel.personnel but seem to have issues with Zarc's machinations.



* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Citizens from Carroll City are...off, to say the least. The most notable one is Carroll City's version of ''Seto Kaiba'' who is shown napping by ''hanging himself on a tree'', and thinks it's fun to joke around [[ItMakesSenseInContext on eating his brother's corpse]] to the point that he makes ''Sen'' (who those who read ''Legends of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' would know how crazy he is) completely sane

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Citizens from Carroll City are...off, to say the least. The most notable one is Carroll City's version of ''Seto Kaiba'' who is shown napping by ''hanging himself on a tree'', and thinks it's fun to joke around [[ItMakesSenseInContext on eating his brother's corpse]] to the point that he makes ''Sen'' (who (for those who read ''Legends of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' would know how crazy he is) completely sane



* DidNotThinkThisThrough: In ''7th Show'' Yuzu suggests Mieru follow Serenity to find where Yusho is. Three chapters later, she regrets doing this but without getting Mieru's phone number because she needed Mieru's tracking skills to locate Ruri and Rin.

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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: DidNotThinkThisThrough:
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In ''7th Show'' Yuzu suggests Mieru follow Serenity to find where Yusho is. Three chapters later, she regrets doing this but without getting Mieru's phone number because she needed Mieru's tracking skills to locate Ruri and Rin.Rin.
** Yusho's impulsive decision to go to the Fusion Dimension without notifying his son and wife backfires on him badly; because he never told anyone where he was going, it only ended up hurting Yuya more and more thus giving Zarc fuel to brainwash him with.



*** Yusho tells Yvonne to GetItOverWith and Yvonne showing hesitance towards what he's mentioning. [[spoiler:He means to kill him now.]]

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*** In the funhouse, Yusho tells Yvonne to GetItOverWith and Yvonne showing hesitance towards what he's mentioning. [[spoiler:He means to kill him now.]]



* SchoolFestival: Carroll City's branch of You Show Duel School is celebrating its first one in the story.

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* SchoolFestival: Carroll City's branch of You Show Duel School is celebrating its first one in the first part of the story.

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** A very minor one: ''11th Show'' has Yvonne sing the chorus to Queen's "Killer Queen". Three chapters later, we later learn that her brother also was a fan of Queen, presumably "Show Must Go On".



** AS the summary states, Zarc intervenes right at the time Yuto was absorbed into Yuya, taking them and Yugo into an unknown location and brainwashing them to be his sons.

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** AS As the summary states, Zarc intervenes right at the time Yuto was absorbed into Yuya, Yuya (ep 37), taking them and Yugo into an unknown location [[spoiler:(the Sunken Realm)]] and brainwashing them to be his sons.



** People eating food whenever drama ensues.



* ShoutOutToShakespeare: The title of the first act is called "Theatre/TheComedyOfErrors" while Yvonne quotes phrases from his works.

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* ShoutOutToShakespeare: The title of the first act is called "Theatre/TheComedyOfErrors" while Yvonne quotes phrases from his works. Moreover, many of the {{Trigger Phrase}}s are actually lines from Shakespeare plays (see below).


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*** In the previous chapter, Lady Belladonna flips a card and looks in horror to find that it's the upright Nine of Swords, also known as the ''Nightmare Card''.

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** Yvonne and Yusho lose to Zarc and Yuya in their tag-team duel, but the two of them were able to destroy most, if not ''all'' of the monsters that Zarc and Yuya unleashed on them.



** Mieru's narration for the seventh chapter has her state that she did a Tarot reading with her future card being the Three of Swords (which means heartbreak, confusion and deception) with Ash stating to look at it physically rather than symbolically. Four chapters later, Mieru finds herself heartbroken from seeing Yuya brainwashed by Zarc and then, like Ash said, [[spoiler:she is killed with three knives piercing her heart while trying to protect Yusho.]]

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** Mieru's narration for the seventh chapter has her state that she did a Tarot reading with her future card being the Three of Swords (which means heartbreak, confusion (representing heartbreak and deception) confusion) with Ash stating to look at it physically rather than symbolically. Four chapters later, Mieru finds herself heartbroken from seeing Yuya brainwashed by Zarc and then, like Ash said, [[spoiler:she is killed with three knives piercing her heart while trying to protect Yusho.]]



*** During the tag team duel in the first part of the chapter, ''14th Show'', Yuya states that "one of you shall soon perish" to Yvonne and Yusho. [[spoiler: Yvonne takes a glance at Yusho after Yuya states it, hinting that not only is Yusho going to die but that ''she'' is going to kill him.]]

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*** During the tag team duel in the first part of the chapter, ''14th Show'', Yuya states that "one of you shall soon perish" to Yvonne and Yusho. [[spoiler: Yvonne states "Well, ''that's'' reassuring" then takes a glance at Yusho after Yuya states it, hinting that not only is Yusho going to die but that ''she'' is going to kill him.]]



*** There is a three card spread at the funhouse (See TarotTroubles below) and Yusho asks if it's a good thing to which Yvonne states that it is. [[spoiler:Those who know their tarot would read it as "Yusho has gone through hardships, is about to be given a blessing, and will soon spearhead his plot into action"...said action most likely him being turned into a Dark Signer.]]



** Various characters are eating sandwiches during the epic tag-team duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show''. Even Yvonne and Yusho get on it ''while they're going through the duel''.

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** Various characters are eating sandwiches during the epic tag-team duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show''. Even Yvonne and Yusho get on it ''while they're going through despite the duel''.two of them currently in an Action Duel!



* RewatchBonus: After you know how [[spoiler: Yvonne is planning to kill Yusho Sakaki at the end of ''14.5th Show'']], the dynamic between [[spoiler:Yvonne and Yusho]] in this chapter and the one prior makes much more sense.

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* RewatchBonus: After you know how [[spoiler: Yvonne is planning to kill Yusho Sakaki at the end of ''14.5th Show'']], the dynamic between [[spoiler:Yvonne and Yusho]] in this chapter and the one prior makes make much more sense.



* TarotTroubles:
** Mieru's opening narrations of ''7th Show'' has her explain a reading that she's done with the cards for what is about to happen in her future. The cards are Nine of Cups (Upright. an important event has lead her to Carroll City), Two of Pentagrams (Inverted, going through plenty of concerns) and Three of Swords (Upright, something dark approaches) [[spoiler:True to form, that last card has her be killed off trying to save Yusho.]]
** In ''14.5th Show'', there are three playing cards (Five of Diamonds, Six of Diamonds and Jack of Clubs) spread out. Yusho asks Yvonne if it's a good thing, and she says yes.[[note]]Five of Diamonds/Coins means hardship, Six of Diamonds/Coins means getting a gift to help forge ahead and Jack of Clubs/Wands means the pursuit of an idea.[[/note]]



-->'''Yvone:''' Yusho Sakaki...A...a...[[spoiler:a ''new purpose awaits you!'']]

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-->'''Yvone:''' Yusho Sakaki...A...a...[[spoiler:a ''new ''[[ArcWords new purpose awaits you!'']]you!]]'']]
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: In ''7th Show'' Yuzu suggests Mieru follow Serenity to find where Yusho is. Three chapters later, she regrets doing this but without getting Mieru's phone number because she needed Mieru's tracking skills to locate Ruri and Rin.

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*** The subtle hints that Yvonne wants to make the duel last a little bit longer; [[spoiler:she doesn't ''want'' to kill Yusho but has no choice but to.]]

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*** The subtle hints that Yvonne wants to make the duel last a little bit longer; longer and for Yusho to focus on the present; [[spoiler:she doesn't ''want'' to kill Yusho but has no choice but to.to and is trying not to think about it.]]


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*** When Dragon Vassal of Twisted Resurrection offers himself to activate Supreme Dragon Vassal of the Soulless Heavens's special ability -- he slices his throat all while tears in his eyes and a smile on his face -- Yvonne can only comment that it's "wrong". [[spoiler:Most likely, it's reminding her of how she has to offer Yusho up as she's seen crying when she does it.]]


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* RewatchBonus: After you know how [[spoiler: Yvonne is planning to kill Yusho Sakaki at the end of ''14.5th Show'']], the dynamic between [[spoiler:Yvonne and Yusho]] in this chapter and the one prior makes much more sense.

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