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* ActionMom: Saki, Shirobara, Lusamine and Lampetia have all won duels against Obelisk Force members. Saki gets extra points for engaging in fisticuffs.



** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die. [[spoiler:This ends up becoming a WhamLine of ''14.5th Show'']]

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** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die. [[spoiler:This ends up becoming a WhamLine of for ''14.5th Show'']]



* BookEnds: Chapter 3 begins and ends with someone singing the lines to "Come Little Children".

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* BookEnds: Chapter 3 ''3rd Show'' begins and ends with someone singing the lines to "Come Little Children".



* CallForward: The end of the third chapter has Sen and Seto trying to find the door that would let them meet "three gay Caballeros" meaning that this is before their appearance in ''Legend of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' (which the author confirms)
* CircusOfFear: The Action Field for Yvonne/Yusho and Yuya/Zarc's duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' takes place at the Carnival of Souls, a dark .

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* CallForward: The end of the third chapter ''3rd Show'' has Sen and Seto trying to find the door that would let them meet "three gay Caballeros" meaning that this is before their appearance in ''Legend of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' (which the author confirms)
* CircusOfFear: The Action Field for Yvonne/Yusho and Yuya/Zarc's duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' takes place at the Carnival of Souls, a dark .dark carnival where the four sing songs that befit said circus. Yuya also debuts his new "Nightmare Mirror" archetype which are twisted circus version of people (and animals) in his life.



*** Earlier, Yvonne imitates killing herself using a retractable knife. [[spoiler:She uses this same trick on Yuya during the tag team duel in ''14.5th'' Show]]

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*** Earlier, Yvonne imitates killing herself using a retractable knife. [[spoiler:She uses this same trick on Yuya during the tag team duel in ''14.5th'' Show]]5th Show'']]



** There's a lot of hints about the end of ''14.5th Show'' having [[spoiler:Yusho dying by Yvonne's hands.]] This includes:

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** There's a lot of hints about the end of ''14.5th Show'' having [[spoiler:Yusho dying by Yvonne's hands.hands and becoming the Dark Signer of the Condor.]] This includes:



*** Mieru sees a vision of a black bird in her apple. [[spoiler:Wiraqocha Rasca is a humongous black condor.]]



* RepulsiveRingmaster: Both Zarc and Yuya dress up as this for the school festival. Yuya also has a Duel Monster version of this called Nightmare Mirror Ringmaster which is essentially an evil version of Yusho.



** In chapter 5, Yvonne puts Yuri into a trance by stating, [[Theatre/TheTempest "Hell is empty, and all the devils are here."]]

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** In chapter 5, ''5th Show'', Yvonne puts Yuri into a trance by stating, [[Theatre/TheTempest "Hell is empty, and all the devils are here."]]



** Yvonne continues this after Rin tells the former to let Yuzu go. Yvonne complies...and throws Yuzu onto Rin.

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** Yvonne continues this after Rin tells the former to let Yuzu go. Yvonne complies...and throws Yuzu onto Rin. She also decides to use AmbiguousSyntax on Edo when he tells her to "come with us".



** Chapter 6: while Dawn duels Sen, [[spoiler:Ayu is killed and becomes a Dark Signer.]]
** Chapter 8: [[spoiler:Ryoken has both Seto Kaiba ''and'' Sen under his control, ready to convert them into the Knights of Hanoi.]]
** Chapter 9: [[spoiler:Ayu fully becoming a Dark Signer and she plans on making Reira the Dark Signer for Cusillu.]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:Zarc has fully control of Yuya, Yuto and Yugo, the four have now entered Carroll City along with Edo Phoenix and Obelisk Force members.]]
** Chapter 11: [[spoiler: The invasion into Carroll City begins which includes Yusho reuniting with Yuzu and Yuya, Mieru killed trying to save Yusho from dying and Max defeating Edo and planning to have him transformed just like Ryo was. Oh and Seto has Katsuya hypnotized for nefarious reasons.]]
** Chapter 14: Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel, Yvonne ''killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience'' and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]

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** Chapter 6: ''6th Show'': while Dawn duels Sen, [[spoiler:Ayu is killed and becomes a Dark Signer.]]
** Chapter 8: ''8th Show'': [[spoiler:Ryoken has both Seto Kaiba ''and'' Sen under his control, ready to convert them into the Knights of Hanoi.]]
** Chapter 9: ''9th Show'': [[spoiler:Ayu fully becoming a Dark Signer and she plans on making Reira the Dark Signer for Cusillu.]]
** Chapter 10: ''10th Show'': [[spoiler:Zarc has fully control of Yuya, Yuto and Yugo, the four have now entered Carroll City along with Edo Phoenix and Obelisk Force members.]]
** Chapter 11: ''11th Show'': [[spoiler: The invasion into Carroll City begins which includes Yusho reuniting with Yuzu and Yuya, Mieru killed trying to save Yusho from dying and Max defeating Edo and planning to have him transformed just like Ryo was. Oh and Seto has Katsuya hypnotized for nefarious reasons.]]
** Chapter 14: ''14th/14th.5 Show'': Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel, Yvonne ''killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience'' and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]



-->'''Yusho:''' Tell me Yuya, have you mastered [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning?]]\\

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-->'''Yusho:''' Tell me Yuya, have you mastered the art of [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning?]]\\



* YaoiFangirl: Dawn loves watching her brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake" through security cameras.

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* YaoiFangirl: Dawn loves watching her brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake" through security cameras.
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* ActionGirl: Every single girl in Carroll City is capable of kicking ass in a duel.

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* ActionGirl: Every single girl female character in Carroll City named so far is capable of kicking ass in a duel.



** The second chapter has characters sing "The Jabberwocky" and the "Queen of Hearts" poems.

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** The second chapter ''2nd Show'' has characters sing "The Jabberwocky" and the "Queen of Hearts" poems.



** In chapter 10, Yuto and Yugo call Yuri their "white rabbit".
** In chapter 11, Yuya after he [[spoiler:stabs Ash in the stomach]] shouts "Oh frabjous day, callooh callay!"

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** In chapter 10, ''10th Show'' has Yuto and Yugo call Yuri their "white rabbit".
** In chapter 11, Yuya after he [[spoiler:stabs Ash in the stomach]] shouts "Oh frabjous day, callooh callay!"



** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die. [[spoiler:This ends up becoming the WhamLine of ''14.5th Show'']]

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** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die. [[spoiler:This ends up becoming the a WhamLine of ''14.5th Show'']]



** In the first chapter, we're lead to believe that Guignol uses a Gimmick Puppet deck due to how she dresses as a puppeteer and fights with living puppets. It's later revealed that she uses Shaddoll monsters, which she lampshades.

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** In the first chapter, ''1st Show'' we're lead to believe that Guignol uses a Gimmick Puppet deck due to how she dresses as a puppeteer and fights with living puppets. It's later revealed that she uses Shaddoll monsters, which she lampshades.



** The end of chapter 3 has Seto and Sen unmask the PlagueDoctor who hung himself on a tree to find out that it's [[spoiler: an alternate version of themselves...who quickly reveals that he's not dead (kinda) in the beginning of the next chapter.]]

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** The end of chapter 3 ''3rd Show'' has Seto and Sen unmask the PlagueDoctor who hung himself on a tree to find out that it's [[spoiler: an alternate version of themselves...who quickly reveals that he's not dead (kinda) in the beginning of the next chapter.]]

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* AdaptationalBadass: Many of the characters who dueled in their series get an overhaul here with the two major ones being Mokuba and Serenity.

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* AdaptationalBadass: Many of the characters who dueled in their series get an overhaul here with the two major ones being Mokuba and Serenity.here.



** Yusho was already known to be the best duelist in Maiami City but he ramps it up with two new things going for him: [[spoiler: Pendulum monsters in the form of his new Performapal Changeraffe and implications that he has even ''more'' Pendulum monsters on hand]] and [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning]] in Performapal Knightwolfe and Performapal Ladyhawke.



** Sixth chapter: [[spoiler:Ayu goes chasing off a girl who looks similar to Yuzu...and she ends up with her throat slit and revived by an Earthbound Immortal.]]
** Yusho gets a humongous dose of this in the eleventh chapter. [[spoiler:Finally reuniting with his son for the first time in three years, only to learn that Zarc has full control of Yuya like a puppet and no matter what he does, Yuya is completely gone and no longer sees Yusho as his true father.]]

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** Sixth chapter: ''6th Show'': [[spoiler:Ayu goes chasing off a girl who looks similar to Yuzu...and she ends up with her throat slit and revived by an Earthbound Immortal.]]
** Yusho gets a humongous dose of this in the eleventh chapter.''11th Show''. [[spoiler:Finally reuniting with his son for the first time in three years, only to learn that Zarc has full control of Yuya like a puppet and no matter what he does, Yuya is completely gone and no longer sees Yusho as his true father.]]



* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Yugo decides to [[spoiler:stab one of his feathers into Yuri's heart, the feather being filled with the 'feelings' Yugo has for Zarc, it looks eerily like he's trying to get Yuri into some sort of drug addiction. What doesn't help is Yuri's reactions after the feather is 'injected' into his body.]]

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything:
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When Yugo decides to [[spoiler:stab one of his feathers into Yuri's heart, the feather being filled with the 'feelings' Yugo has for Zarc, it looks eerily like he's trying to get Yuri into some sort of drug addiction. What doesn't help is Yuri's reactions after the feather is 'injected' into his body.]]]]
** The dynamic between Zarc and Yusho in regards to Yuya can sound like the two are a divorced couple with Yusho being a deadbeat dad who comes back to repair his relationship with Yuya and Yuya no longer considers Yusho his true father. There's also a lot of...tension between the two, as [[YaoiFangirl Dawn]] happily points out.



* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Each chapter is called 'Xth Show'' and are titled after Duel Monster cards.



** The third chapter has each scene open up with lyrics from either "Come Little Children" or "The Hanging Tree". WordOfGod states that this comes from a mash-up with the two songs.
** Chapter 11 has Yvonne, her mother, Ruri and Sora singing "Happyland" by Amanda Jessen while fighting off Obelisk Force.

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** The third chapter ''3rd Show'' has each scene open up with lyrics from either "Come Little Children" or "The Hanging Tree". WordOfGod states that this comes from a mash-up with the two songs.
** Chapter 11 ''11th Show'' has Yvonne, her mother, Ruri and Sora singing "Happyland" by Amanda Jessen while fighting off Obelisk Force.Force.
** ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' has Yuya, Zarc, Yvonne and Yusho alternating lines from [[Music/CreatureFeature "Greatest Show Unearthed" and "American Gothic"]] while Yuya and Yusho sing "The Circus Comes to Town" (the opening to ''[[WesternAnimation/BigTopScoobyDoo Big Top Scooby-Doo!]]''
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* CircusOfFear: The Action Field for Yvonne/Yusho and Yuya/Zarc's duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' takes place at the Carnival of Souls, a dark .

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*** Earlier, Yvonne imitates killing herself using a retractable knife. [[spoiler:She uses this same trick on Yuya during the tag team duel in ''14.5th'' Show]]



** There's a lot of hints about the end of ''14.5th Show'' having [[spoiler:Yusho dying by Yvonne's hands.]] This includes:
*** During the tag team duel in the first part of the chapter, ''14th Show'', Yuya states that "one of you shall soon perish" to Yvonne and Yusho. [[spoiler: Yvonne takes a glance at Yusho after Yuya states it, hinting that not only is Yusho going to die but that ''she'' is going to kill him.]]
*** Yusho tells Yvonne to GetItOverWith and Yvonne showing hesitance towards what he's mentioning. [[spoiler:He means to kill him now.]]
*** The subtle hints that Yvonne wants to make the duel last a little bit longer; [[spoiler:she doesn't ''want'' to kill Yusho but has no choice but to.]]



** Chapter 14: Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel and, most of all Yvonne killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]

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** Chapter 14: Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel and, most of all carousel, Yvonne killing ''killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience audience'' and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]


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** ''14th Show'' has Yusho show off ''two'' in quick succession.
-->'''Yusho:''' Tell me Yuya, have you mastered [[spoiler:Xyz Summoning?]]\\
'''Yusho:''' I unleash the [[spoiler:Overlay Network!]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: Yuya, Yuto, Yugo, a lot of Obelisk Force soldiers, [[spoiler:''Yusho Sakaki''...]] Yeah this story won't spare anyone.



** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die.

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** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die. [[spoiler:This ends up becoming the WhamLine of ''14.5th Show'']]



** The end of chapter 3 has Seto and Sen unmask the PlaugeDoctor who hung himself on a tree to find out that it's [[spoiler: an alternate version of themselves...who quickly reveals that he's not dead (kinda) in the beginning of the next chapter.]]
** in ''5th Show'', Brendan approaches Ruri for she has done something bad. Said something...taking his Blue Angel plushie without permission.

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** The end of chapter 3 has Seto and Sen unmask the PlaugeDoctor PlagueDoctor who hung himself on a tree to find out that it's [[spoiler: an alternate version of themselves...who quickly reveals that he's not dead (kinda) in the beginning of the next chapter.]]
** in In ''5th Show'', Brendan approaches Ruri for she has done something bad. Said something...taking his Blue Angel plushie without permission.


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** Various characters are eating sandwiches during the epic tag-team duel in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show''. Even Yvonne and Yusho get on it ''while they're going through the duel''.


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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: The tag team duel of Yuya and Zarc vs Yvonne and Yusho in ''14th Show'' and ''14.5th Show'' is just a humongous snark fest, mostly in regards to how Yuya and Zarc point how Yusho is essentially acting as Yvonne's dad.


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** Chapter 14: Pretty much ''everything'' about the tag-team duel is this but highlights include: [[spoiler:Yusho revealing that he has Pendulum Monsters and can Xyz Summon, Yvonne getting the Zefra Pendulum Monsters, the climatic final battle at the carousel and, most of all Yvonne killing Yusho Sakaki in front of a live audience and Yusho encountering ''Wiraqocha Rasca''.]]


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** The end of ''14.5th Show'': Yvonne asks Yusho if Yuzu gave him a message. When Yusho replies that he hasn't, Yvonne acts unlike her until she states:
-->'''Yvone:''' Yusho Sakaki...A...a...[[spoiler:a ''new purpose awaits you!'']]
*** And the final line of that chapter:
-->'''???:''' ''(to Yusho)'' But...you may call me [[spoiler:Wiraqocha Rasca]].

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* ActionGirl: Every single girl in Carroll City is capable of kicking ass in a duel.
* AdaptationalBadass: Many of the characters who dueled in their series get an overhaul here with the two major ones being Mokuba and Serenity.
** Mokuba: Barring stealing someone's deck in Duelist Kingdom, he ''never'' duels in the anime or manga. Here, he's using a -tellarknight and hands Yuzu a solid defeat.
** Serenity: Only had one duel in the anime and even then it was 3 vs 1 while having only two bits of advice how to play (Tribute Summon and Fusion Summon). Here, she is dueling Yuto with an Orcust deck and plays all three of its Link monsters ''and'' its Xyz monster while Yuto has to struggle with giving her direct damage because Dingirsu was capable of kicking his ass if he didn't have anything else.
** Carly: While she already TookALevelInBadass while she was a Dark Signer, she shows off more badassery here thanks to the updated Fortune Lady cards.
** [[spoiler:Ayu: After becoming a Dark Signer, she gains a new Synchro based archetype and used her knowledge of Tribute Summoning to summon her Earthbound Immortal against the Obelisk Force soldier who killed her. Quite a change from the girl who forgot that she couldn't attack on the firs turn.]]



** Mieru dresses up like Alice while Yvonne's puppets are dressed as the Knave of Hearts (Yuya), the White Rabbit (Yuto), the Mad Hatter (Yugo) and the Cheshire Cat (Yuri).

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** Mieru dresses up like Alice while Yvonne's puppets are dressed as the Knave of Hearts (Yuya), the White Rabbit (Yuto), the Mad Hatter (Yugo) and the Cheshire Cat (Yuri). Kelly and Miette are dressed up as the White and Red Queen, respectively.



* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the citizens of Carroll City ''drip'' with snark. Yvonne is probably the snarkiest out of them all.



* DownTheRabbitHole: Mieru and Yuzu are dragged to Carroll City by Moon Knight (Mokuba) dragging them into a portal in ''3rd Show''.



* IronicEcho: Yvonne's remark about Yusho in the fourth chapter become this chapters later...

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* IronicEcho: Yvonne's remark about Yusho in the fourth chapter become this seven chapters later...



'''[[spoiler:Yuya]]''': I can't believe you fell for my sob story, Yusho~! But then again, that was your biggest flaw. You're. just. too. SOFT!

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'''[[spoiler:Yuya]]''': ''(laughing)'' I can't believe you fell for my sob story, Yusho~! But then again, that was your biggest flaw. You're. just. too. SOFT!



** She later has one for [[spoiler:Sora]] five chapters later by stating, [[spoiler:[[Theater/{{Macbeth}} Sora, hide your fires; and let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]]]

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** She later has one for [[spoiler:Sora]] five chapters later by stating, [[spoiler:[[Theater/{{Macbeth}} Sora, [[spoiler:[[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} "Sora, hide your fires; and let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]]]"]]]]
** [[spoiler:Yusuke Fujiwara's]] trigger is [[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} "Nothing is but what is not".]]


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* WorldOfSnark: Carroll City citizens utterly drip with snark and many of the ''Arc-V'' characters join in on the snarkfest.
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** in ''5th Show'', Brendan approaches Ruri for she has done something bad. Said something...taking his Blue Angel plushie without permission.


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** When Rin wakes up in the fourth chapter, the radio is playing [[Music/MyChemicalRomance "Kill All My Friends"]]. The flashback for the seventh chapter has [[spoiler:Zarc stating that Yuzu killed Yuya (With Yuto in Yuya's soul at that point) and Yugo to prevent them from reuniting.]]
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* BrickJoke: When Yvonne and Sora first clash, Yvonne (as Guignol) makes the comment that Academia is like Adolf Hitler and the concentration camps which ticks Sora off. Chapters later, Sora [[spoiler:now brainwashed to essentially being Yvonne's puppet]] explains Academia's goals of a perfect utopia before realizing, "Guignol was right; that ''does'' sound like Hitler and the concentration camps."


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* MundaneSolution: When May (Willow) duels Celina; Celina has Fusion summoned Lunalight Cat Dancer[[note]]Is not destroyed in battle[[/note]] and has played Lunar Eclipse so that her monster can't be affected by Spell or Trap Effects. How does May win? By summoning Vampire Vamp to take control of Cat Dancer because Celina didn't give her monster protection from ''monster'' effects.

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** Yvonne's backstory has her watch her brother be stuck in a coma and having the doctors pull the plug of him before she's kidnapped by the very same guy who caused her brother's coma about to kill her. Then she sees her puppets come to life and kill people before...

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** Yvonne's backstory has her watch her brother be stuck in a coma and having the doctors pull the plug of him before she's kidnapped by the very same guy who caused her brother's coma about to kill her. Then she sees her puppets come to life and kill people before...people.



** "A new purpose awaits you!" usually used as {{Foreshadowing}} that someone is gonna die.



* AssholeVictim: Viren, the mob boss who caused Yvonne's older brother, Xavier, to be forced into a coma and then decides to make the girl watch as his goons burn her beloved puppets before killing her. The minute the puppets come to life to kill everyone, you probably won't be shedding tears for them.
* BaitAndSwitch: In the first chapter, we're lead to believe that Guignol uses a Gimmick Puppet deck due to how she dresses as a puppeteer and fights with living puppets. It's later revealed that she uses Shaddoll monsters, which she lampshades.

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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
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Viren, the mob boss who caused Yvonne's older brother, Xavier, to be forced into a coma and then decides to make the girl watch as his goons burn her beloved puppets before killing her. The minute the puppets come to life to kill everyone, you probably won't be shedding tears for them.
** Academia is considered this to the residents of Carroll City. Considering that many of them hunt people down as a game and do not give two fucks about the destruction they caused, it's not hard to pity them being carded/murdered by Yvonne and the other members of Carroll City You Show Duel School.
* BaitAndSwitch: BaitAndSwitch:
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In the first chapter, we're lead to believe that Guignol uses a Gimmick Puppet deck due to how she dresses as a puppeteer and fights with living puppets. It's later revealed that she uses Shaddoll monsters, which she lampshades.



** The end of chapter 3 has Seto and Sen unmask the PlaugeDoctor who hung himself on a tree to find out that it's [[spoiler: an alternate version of themselves...who quickly reveals that he's not dead (kinda) in the beginning of the next chapter.]]



** Despite losing to Moon Knight, Yuzu does manage to destroy one of his Xyz Monsters, which is something he praises.

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** Despite losing to Moon Knight, Yuzu does manage to destroy one of his Xyz Monsters, Monsters in battle, which is something he praises.



*** Chapter 11 has a flashback that full expands on how Yvonne hypnotized Sora.

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*** Chapter 11 has a flashback that full fully expands on how Yvonne hypnotized Sora.



** Misty uses her ability to read faces to reveal that a new purpose awaits Ayu. Scenes later, [[spoiler:Ayu becomes a Dark Signer.]]

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** In the sixth chapter, Misty uses her ability to read faces to reveal that a new purpose awaits Ayu. Scenes later, [[spoiler:Ayu becomes a Dark Signer.]]



** Zarc intervenes right at the time Yuto was absorbed into Yuya, taking them into an unknown location and brainwashing them to be his sons.
** Carroll City gets involved with the chaos because Yusho Sakaki somehow landed in their world years ago; when he showed off Action Duels to Yvonne, May and Dawn, it spurred them to help create their own You Show Duel School and build the resistance force to stop Academia.
*** Due to Yvonne and May going in for their massacre, Celina decides to leave for the Standard Dimension earlier than expected. [[spoiler:This leads to her bumping into Ayu earlier than expected, Ayu chasing after Celina and then promptly killed by an Obelisk Force soldier.]]

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** AS the summary states, Zarc intervenes right at the time Yuto was absorbed into Yuya, taking them and Yugo into an unknown location and brainwashing them to be his sons.
** Carroll City gets involved with the chaos because Yusho Sakaki somehow landed in their world 3 years ago; when he showed off Action Duels to Yvonne, May and Dawn, it spurred them to help create their own You Show Duel School and build the resistance force to stop Academia.
*** Due to Yvonne and May going in for their massacre, Celina decides to leave for the Standard Dimension earlier than expected. [[spoiler:This leads to her bumping into Ayu earlier than expected, Ayu, Ayu chasing after Celina and then promptly killed by an Obelisk Force soldier.soldier before being resurrected as a Dark Signer.]]



** Chapter 11 has Yvonne, her mother, Ruri and Sora singing "Happyland" by Amanda Jessen while fighting off Obelisk Force.



* PlagueDoctor: Tadzio's attire is this. What doesn't really help is that [[spoiler:he has the face of Seto Kaiba...]]



* ShoutOutToShakespeare: The title of the first act is called "Theatre/AComedyOfErrors" while Yvonne quotes phrases from various works.

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* ShoutOutToShakespeare: The title of the first act is called "Theatre/AComedyOfErrors" "Theatre/TheComedyOfErrors" while Yvonne quotes phrases from various his works.



** During his duel with Edo, Max tells Toon Dark Magician Girl to attack directly. When Edo points out that there's no Toon World on the field so she can't, Max drops on his knees in despair...before revealing that Toon Dark Magician Girl is the ''only'' Toon who doesn't need Toon World for her to attack directly.

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** During his duel with Edo, Max tells Toon Dark Magician Girl to attack directly. When Edo points out that there's no Toon World on the field so she can't, Max drops on to his knees in despair...before revealing that Toon Dark Magician Girl is the ''only'' Toon who doesn't need Toon World for her to attack directly.



* BaitAndSwitch: In "Karakuri Circus", Serenity states a long story about the origin of the "Court of Strings" and about the flower-girl who was pivotal to it all. When Brendan and Max asks if she was that little girl, Serenity answers that she wasn't. [[spoiler:The end of the story reveals that it was Lady Shirobara.]]

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* BaitAndSwitch: BaitAndSwitch:
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In "Karakuri Circus", Serenity states a long story about the origin of the "Court of Strings" and about the flower-girl who was pivotal to it all. When Brendan and Max asks if she was that little girl, Serenity answers that she wasn't. [[spoiler:The end of the story reveals that it was Lady Shirobara.]]
*** In the same episode, Joey's circus involves Frightfur monsters and Yvonne expects that his deck is based on this. Cue him summoning Karakuri monsters to which he states that the first rule of magic is deception.
* BigWhat: In "Karakuri Circus", Yvonne shouts this after learning (offscreen) that Joey Wheeler (her opponent) is [[spoiler:the reincarnation of the legendary master puppeteer of an old fairy tale.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: When dueling Joey in "Karakuri Circus", Joey states how the first rule of magic is deception. This is a clue on how he used Yvonne's puppets to lure her out [[spoiler:and hiding the fact that his ''true'' targets are Yusaku, Specter and Takeru since Yvonne [[ItMakesSenseInContext transformed them into puppets for her show.]])



* SmallRoleBigImpact: Yusho Sakaki is explained in the narration on having been hurled to Carroll City in his attempt to stop Professor Akaba. That, plus his encounter with Yvonne, May and Dawn is what would set up the You Show Duel School of Carroll City.

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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Yusho Sakaki is explained in the narration on having been hurled to Carroll City in his attempt to stop Professor Akaba. That, plus his encounter with Yvonne, May and Dawn is what would set up the You Show Duel School of Carroll City.City.
* WhamLine: "Karakuri Circus": After Serenity explains her past in regards to the Court of String, she drops this bombshell:
-->'''Serenity:''' Well, it seemed as if Lady Belladonna decreed that [[spoiler:he was to be the reincarnation of the master puppeteer.]]

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* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving either a character that is the focus of said chapter or Zarc with Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.

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* {{Flashback}}: {{Flashback}}:
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Each chapter starts with a flashback involving either a character that is the focus of said chapter or Zarc with Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.Yugo.
*** Chapter 11 has a flashback that full expands on how Yvonne hypnotized Sora.



** Mieru's narration for the seventh chapter has her state that she did a Tarot reading with her future card being the Three of Swords (which means heartbreak, confusion and deception) with Ash stating to look at it physically rather than symbolically. Four chapters later, Mieru finds herself heartbroken from seeing Yuya brainwashed by Zarc and then, like Ash said, [[spoiler:she is killed with three knives piercing her heart while trying to protect Yusho.]]



* MusicalEpisode:
** The third chapter has each scene open up with lyrics from either "Come Little Children" or "The Hanging Tree". WordOfGod states that this comes from a mash-up with the two songs.



** Rin, Ruri and Yuzu keep getting called their dub names (Rinrin, Lulu and Zuzu)

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** Rin, Ruri and Yuzu keep getting called their dub names (nick)names (Rinrin, Lulu and Zuzu)



* ShoutOutToShakespeare: The title of the first act is called "Theatre/AComedyOfErrors" while Yvonne quotes phrases from various works.



* WhatIsThingYouCallLove: Yuri has never been shown signs of affection before, so he's unsure of himself when Saki decides to hug him in the tenth chapter.

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* WhatIsThingYouCallLove: WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove: Yuri has never been shown signs of affection before, so he's unsure of himself when Saki decides to hug him in the tenth chapter.



* BaitAndSwitch: In "Karakuri Circus", Serenity states a long story about the origin of the "Court of Strings" and about the flower-girl who was pivotal to it all. When Brendan and Max asks if she was that little girl, Serenity answers that she wasn't. [[spoiler:The end of the story reveals that it was Lady Shirobara.]]



* MoodWhiplash: When Dawn enters the night garden in the first story, she accidentally steps on a flower. When she steps back to see what happened, the narration turns dark when it's revealed that she stepped on [[spoiler:a hand.]]



* SomethingAboutARose: Lady Shirobara in the first story uses the Black Garden Field Spell and Rose Dragons. Her name even means "White Rose".

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* SomethingAboutARose: Lady Shirobara in the first story uses the Black Garden Field Spell and Rose Dragons. Her name even means "White Rose".Rose" in Japanese.

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* ArcWords: "(Re)Purpose" or anything relating to that word. This is a term used by those in Carroll City when people are resurrected and must figure out what they want to do now that they are undead.



* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Yugo decides to [[spoiler:stab one of his feathers into Yuri's heart, the feather being filled with the 'feelings' Yugo has for Zarc, it looks eerily like he's trying to get Yuri into some sort of drug addiction. What doesn't help is Yuri's reactions after the feather is 'injected' into his body.]]



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Before their duel starts, Yvonne tells Sora "Stars, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires." [[spoiler:She states this nine chapters...but replace "Stars" with "Sora" and we learn that it's become his TriggerPhrase.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
**
Before their duel starts, Yvonne tells Sora "Stars, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires." [[spoiler:She states this nine chapters...but replace "Stars" with "Sora" and we learn that it's become his TriggerPhrase.]]
** Misty uses her ability to read faces to reveal that a new purpose awaits Ayu. Scenes later, [[spoiler:Ayu becomes a Dark Signer.]]
* ForWantOfANail:
** Zarc intervenes right at the time Yuto was absorbed into Yuya, taking them into an unknown location and brainwashing them to be his sons.
** Carroll City gets involved with the chaos because Yusho Sakaki somehow landed in their world years ago; when he showed off Action Duels to Yvonne, May and Dawn, it spurred them to help create their own You Show Duel School and build the resistance force to stop Academia.
*** Due to Yvonne and May going in for their massacre, Celina decides to leave for the Standard Dimension earlier than expected. [[spoiler:This leads to her bumping into Ayu earlier than expected, Ayu chasing after Celina and then promptly killed by an Obelisk Force soldier.]]
** [[spoiler:Ray deciding to go the extra mile to ''ensure'' Zarc didn't return, by possessing Yuzu to kill Yuya, is what kickstarts Zarc coming in to brainwash Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.]]
* FreakOut: Sen unleashes one after seeing Illusion Defender being destroyed by one of Dawn's monsters as it reminds him of [[spoiler: his Mokuba -- whom Illusion Defender actually is but he has no memories of that -- hurling Sen out of their world just as it got destroyed.
]]



* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Mieru screams the TropeNamer when she sees the Puppet Yus.

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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Mieru screams the TropeNamer when she sees the Puppet Yus.Yus in the seventh chapter.



* LaughingMad: Another trait from people of Carrol City is that they all have a crazy laugh.
* LightIsNotGood: Moon Knight dresses in white and uses the LIGHT based tellarknight monsters. He's also very deranged and cuckoo.



** In the second chapter, Dawn is munching on popcorn when she communicates with Willow (May) as she is watching her older brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake".
** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.

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** In the second chapter, Dawn is described as munching on popcorn when she communicates with Willow (May) as she is watching her older brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake".
** The duel in the eight eighth chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.



* RevengeFic: Comments on AO3 reveals that the author has little esteem for the Akabas or Yusho Sakaki, the former for having very apathetic personalities or being utterly useless and the latter for just up and abandoning his family ''without'' telling them why.

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* RevengeFic: Comments on AO3 [=AO3=] reveals that the author has little esteem for the Akabas or Yusho Sakaki, the former for having very apathetic personalities or being utterly useless and the latter for just up and abandoning his family ''without'' telling them why.



** One that is PlayedForDrama: people telling Yusho of his very [[SarcasmMode smart move]] to leave his family behind to stop Professor Akaba's scheme.

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** One that is PlayedForDrama: people telling Yusho of his very [[SarcasmMode smart move]] to leave his family behind to stop Professor Akaba's scheme.scheme without telling them or at least going back to visit.



*** In that very same chapter earlier on, Shoichi Kusanagi is ready to help [[spoiler:create cookies based off of Sen and Seto]] with Dawn stating,

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*** ** In that very same chapter earlier on, Shoichi Kusanagi is ready to help [[spoiler:create cookies based off of Sen and Seto]] with Dawn stating,


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* WhatIsThingYouCallLove: Yuri has never been shown signs of affection before, so he's unsure of himself when Saki decides to hug him in the tenth chapter.

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Before their duel starts, Yvonne tells Sora "Stars, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires." [[spoiler:She states this nine chapters...but replace "Stars" with "Sora" and we learn that it's become his TriggerPhrase.]]



* IronicEcho: Yvonne's remark about Yusho in the fourth chapter become this chapters later...
-->'''Yvonne:''' ''(after learning the reason why Yusho was traveling in the first place)'' And that's the problem with you. You're. too. soft.\\
'''[[spoiler:Yuya]]''': I can't believe you fell for my sob story, Yusho~! But then again, that was your biggest flaw. You're. just. too. SOFT!



** Justified in the eleventh chapter; the audience is munching on popcorn while Max duels Edo.

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** Justified in the eleventh chapter; the audience is munching on popcorn while Max duels Edo. And earlier on, Ash pulls out a sandwich from his hat while watching [[ItMakesSenseInContext Yuya and Yuto waltz.]]


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** Twice in the eleventh chapter: Zarc emphasis how he dressed [[spoiler:Yuya]] as a puppeteer ringmaster by stating to Yusho that [[spoiler:Yuya]] wanted to be "just. like. you." Scenes later, [[spoiler:Yuya]] tells Yusho that he's "just. too. SOFT!"
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** Sixth chapter: [[spoiler:Ayu goes chasing off a girl who looks similar to Ayu...and she ends up with her throat slit and revived by an Earthbound Immortal.]]

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** Sixth chapter: [[spoiler:Ayu goes chasing off a girl who looks similar to Ayu...Yuzu...and she ends up with her throat slit and revived by an Earthbound Immortal.]]
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* AdultFear:
** Yvonne's backstory has her watch her brother be stuck in a coma and having the doctors pull the plug of him before she's kidnapped by the very same guy who caused her brother's coma about to kill her. Then she sees her puppets come to life and kill people before...
** Sixth chapter: [[spoiler:Ayu goes chasing off a girl who looks similar to Ayu...and she ends up with her throat slit and revived by an Earthbound Immortal.]]
** Yusho gets a humongous dose of this in the eleventh chapter. [[spoiler:Finally reuniting with his son for the first time in three years, only to learn that Zarc has full control of Yuya like a puppet and no matter what he does, Yuya is completely gone and no longer sees Yusho as his true father.]]

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** Seven chapters later we get an additional scene to explain just how [[spoiler:Yvonne got Sora to be so loyal to her.]]



** Chapter 11: [[spoiler: The invasion into Carroll City begins which includes Yusho reuniting with Yuzu and Yuya, Mieru killed trying to save Yusho from dying and Max defeating Edo and planning to have him transformed just like Ryo was.]]

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** Chapter 11: [[spoiler: The invasion into Carroll City begins which includes Yusho reuniting with Yuzu and Yuya, Mieru killed trying to save Yusho from dying and Max defeating Edo and planning to have him transformed just like Ryo was. Oh and Seto has Katsuya hypnotized for nefarious reasons.]]


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*** In that very same chapter earlier on, Shoichi Kusanagi is ready to help [[spoiler:create cookies based off of Sen and Seto]] with Dawn stating,
-->'''Dawn:''' Glad you're on board. Then again...[[spoiler:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy you kinda have no choice but to be.]]]]

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Boy howdy. The Pokémon characters in this story are not squeaky clean at all, and show now qualms in killing people, Yuya, Yuto and Yugo are dead in the beginning of the tale and Zarc is using mind control to get all of his "sons" together.
* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the citizens of Carroll City ''drip'' with snark.
* {{Deconstruction}}: In the anime, there's no reprecussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going to the Fusion Dimension to stop Professor Akaba. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid, stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.
* {{Elseworld}}: The author specifically uses this word to describe the story and its universe.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Boy howdy. The Pokémon characters in this story are not squeaky clean at all, and show now qualms in killing people, Yuya, Yuto and Yugo are dead in the beginning of the tale and Zarc is using mind control to get all of his "sons" together.
together. [[FromBadToWorse And this is just the first few chapters.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the citizens of Carroll City ''drip'' with snark. Yvonne is probably the snarkiest out of them all.
* {{Deconstruction}}: In the anime, there's no reprecussions repercussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going to the Fusion Dimension on his crusade to stop Professor Akaba. Akaba, Yuya included. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid, stupid[[note]]Although in his defense, it was Edo who flung Yusho to the Fusion Dimension[[/note]], stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.
* {{Elseworld}}: The author specifically uses this word to describe the story and its universe.universe in comparison to her ''Ab Initio'' verse.



* HowWeGotHere: ** The end of the eighth chapter has Ayu sobbing in the ruins of the warehouse district of Maiami City with the following chapter describing what happened prior.

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* HowWeGotHere: ** The end of the eighth chapter has Ayu sobbing in the ruins of the warehouse district of Maiami City with the following chapter describing what happened prior.



* TriggerPhrase:
** In chapter 5, Yvonne puts Yuri into a trance by stating, [[Theatre/TheTempest "Hell is empty, and all the devils are here."]]
** She later has one for [[spoiler:Sora]] five chapters later by stating, [[spoiler:[[Theater/{{Macbeth}} Sora, hide your fires; and let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]]]



-->'''Yvonne:''' [[spoiler:[[TriggerPhrase "Sora, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]]]

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-->'''Yvonne:''' [[spoiler:[[TriggerPhrase "Sora, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]]]desires!"]]]]

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In the center of this all is Yuzu Hiiragi, who only wants to her best friend back, only to find that her best bet to get Yuya back is to team up with a set of duelists who don't really care for her troubles as they are on stopping Academia's plans.

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In the center of this all is Yuzu Hiiragi, who only wants to her best friend back, only to find that her best bet to get Yuya back is to team up with a set of duelists from another world who don't really care for her troubles as they are on stopping Academia's plans.
plans.

And things will be perfectly fine...right?



** The city of that world is known as "Carroll City", named after Lewis Carroll. One location is known as Bandersnatch Park which has two theaters called the Toadstool Outdoor Theater and Wonderland Marionette Theater.

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** The main city of that world is known as "Carroll City", named after Lewis Carroll. One location is known as Bandersnatch Park which has two theaters called the Toadstool Outdoor Theater and Wonderland Marionette Theater.



** In chapter 10, Yuto and Yugo call Yuri their "white rabbit".
** In chapter 11, Yuya after he [[spoiler:stabs Ash in the stomach]] shouts "Oh frabjous day, callooh callay!"



* OnceMoreWithClarity:
** The first chapter has Guignol (Yvonne) ask Sora if he wants to be her friend and follows it with a scream. The flashback for the fourth chapter reveals [[spoiler:that she transformed Sora into a wooden puppet.]]
* PassThePopcorn:

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* OnceMoreWithClarity:
**
OnceMoreWithClarity: The first chapter has Guignol (Yvonne) ask Sora if he wants to be her friend and follows it with a scream. The flashback for the fourth chapter reveals [[spoiler:that she transformed Sora into a wooden puppet.]]
* PassThePopcorn: Carroll City characters just love to munch on something as shit goes down.


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** In the tenth chapter, Saki is having frozen yogurt when her daughter starts trolling Yuzu.
** Justified in the eleventh chapter; the audience is munching on popcorn while Max duels Edo.


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** During his duel with Edo, Max tells Toon Dark Magician Girl to attack directly. When Edo points out that there's no Toon World on the field so she can't, Max drops on his knees in despair...before revealing that Toon Dark Magician Girl is the ''only'' Toon who doesn't need Toon World for her to attack directly.


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** Chapter 11: [[spoiler: The invasion into Carroll City begins which includes Yusho reuniting with Yuzu and Yuya, Mieru killed trying to save Yusho from dying and Max defeating Edo and planning to have him transformed just like Ryo was.]]
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** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.

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* BaitAndSwitch: In the first chapter, we're lead to believe that Guignol uses a Gimmick Puppet deck due to how she dresses as a puppeteer and fights with living puppets. It's later revealed that she uses Shaddoll monsters, which she lampshades.
-->'''Guignol:''' You know, they say the most important rule of magic is deception.



* HowWeGotHere: ** The end of the eighth chapter has Ayu sobbing in the ruins of the warehouse district of Maiami City with the following chapter describing what happened prior.



* OnceMoreWithClarity:
** The first chapter has Guignol (Yvonne) ask Sora if he wants to be her friend and follows it with a scream. The flashback for the fourth chapter reveals [[spoiler:that she transformed Sora into a wooden puppet.]]



** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.

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** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.



** The tenth chapter has Sora trying to save Yuri and his MadnessMantra is already terrifying enough, it's what Yvonne says next that clearly shows that he's long gone.
-->'''Yvonne:''' [[spoiler:[[TriggerPhrase "Sora, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]

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** The tenth chapter has Sora trying to save Yuri and his MadnessMantra is already terrifying enough, it's what Yvonne says next that clearly shows that he's long gone.
gives a good picture of what she's done to him.
-->'''Yvonne:''' [[spoiler:[[TriggerPhrase "Sora, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]"]]]]

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** Rin and Ruri nearly defeat Miette and Kelly in their tag-team duel; had it not been for Kelly's Shrink card, they would have won.

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** Rin and Ruri nearly defeat Miette and Kelly in their tag-team duel; had it not been for Kelly's Shrink card, they would have won.won after Ruri attacked with Assault Nightingale.



* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the citizens of Carroll City drip with snark.

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* DeadpanSnarker: Most of the citizens of Carroll City drip ''drip'' with snark. snark.
* {{Deconstruction}}: In the anime, there's no reprecussions or people calling Yusho out for his very reckless move on going to the Fusion Dimension to stop Professor Akaba. Here, many characters -- Yusho included -- state that what he did was very ''very'' stupid, stating that his approach has done nothing over the past three years and that it's only made Yuya more susceptible to Zarc's influence in the end.



** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.

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** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.



* PunctuatedForEmphasis: How Yvonne shows her passive-aggressive side to Yusho.

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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: PunctuatedForEmphasis:
**
How Yvonne shows her passive-aggressive side to Yusho.



** Ruri screams at Yvonne to "Stop. Calling. Me. LULU!" in the tenth chapter.



* RunningGag:
** Rin, Ruri and Yuzu keep getting called their dub names (Rinrin, Lulu and Zuzu)
** One that is PlayedForDrama: people telling Yusho of his very [[SarcasmMode smart move]] to leave his family behind to stop Professor Akaba's scheme.



** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:Zarc has fully control of Yuya, Yuto and Yuri, the four have now entered Carroll City along with Edo Phoenix and Obelisk Force members.]]

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** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:Zarc has fully control of Yuya, Yuto and Yuri, Yugo, the four have now entered Carroll City along with Edo Phoenix and Obelisk Force members.]]

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** The city of that world is known as "Carroll City", named after Lewis Carroll. One location is known as Bandersnatch Park.

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** The city of that world is known as "Carroll City", named after Lewis Carroll. One location is known as Bandersnatch Park.Park which has two theaters called the Toadstool Outdoor Theater and Wonderland Marionette Theater.



* BlackAndGrayMorality: On one side, we have Academia and their goals of carding people, another side is Zarc and his plans on revenge against the Akabas and reuniting with his sons and Carroll City who are shown to be fine murdering Academia personnel.



* CurbStompCushion: Despite losing to Moon Knight, Yuzu does manage to destroy one of his Xyz Monsters, which is something he praises.

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* CurbStompCushion: CurbStompCushion:
**
Despite losing to Moon Knight, Yuzu does manage to destroy one of his Xyz Monsters, which is something he praises.praises.
** Rin and Ruri nearly defeat Miette and Kelly in their tag-team duel; had it not been for Kelly's Shrink card, they would have won.



* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving either a character of Carroll City or Zarc with Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.

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* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving either a character that is the focus of Carroll City said chapter or Zarc with Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.



* PassThePopcorn: Dawn is munching on popcorn when she communicates with Willow (May) as she is watching her older brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake".

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* PassThePopcorn: PassThePopcorn:
** In the first chapter, while seeing Sora about to go through the effects of the "Gone Mad" Action Card, Guignol props herself onto a bench and starts eating seaweed rice crackers. Her puppets watch the duel while eating chocolate covered pretzel sticks.
** In the second chapter,
Dawn is munching on popcorn when she communicates with Willow (May) as she is watching her older brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake".paddycake".
** The duel in the eight chapter takes place in a café so the audience is eating while Rin and Ruri duel Miette and Kelly.



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6: while Dawn duels Sen, [[spoiler:Ayu is killed and becomes a Dark Signer.]]
* WhamLine: The second chapter has Guignol about to return to her world only to stop when she senses someone behind him. Said someone?

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* WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
**
Chapter 6: while Dawn duels Sen, [[spoiler:Ayu is killed and becomes a Dark Signer.]]
** Chapter 8: [[spoiler:Ryoken has both Seto Kaiba ''and'' Sen under his control, ready to convert them into the Knights of Hanoi.]]
** Chapter 9: [[spoiler:Ayu fully becoming a Dark Signer and she plans on making Reira the Dark Signer for Cusillu.]]
** Chapter 10: [[spoiler:Zarc has fully control of Yuya, Yuto and Yuri, the four have now entered Carroll City along with Edo Phoenix and Obelisk Force members.]]
* WhamLine: WhamLine:
**
The second chapter has Guignol about to return to her world only to stop when she senses someone behind him. Said someone?


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** The tenth chapter has Sora trying to save Yuri and his MadnessMantra is already terrifying enough, it's what Yvonne says next that clearly shows that he's long gone.
-->'''Yvonne:''' [[spoiler:[[TriggerPhrase "Sora, hide your fires; let not light see my dark and deep desires."]]


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* CallForward: In the "Karakuri Circus" story, Joey states that the first rule about magic is deception; Guignol (Yvonne) would state something on those lines when she duels Sora in ''Mors Omnibus''.

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** Mieru dresses up like Alice while Yvonne's puppets are dressed as the Knave of Hearts (Yuya), the White Rabbit (Yuto), the Mad Hatter (Yugo) and the Cheshire Cat (Yuri).



* BreatherEpisode: Chapters 4 and 5 are about everyone preparing for the School Festival and, barring a scene with Professor Akaba, lighthearted compared to the murder and bloodshed of previous chapters.



* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving the focus character from Carroll City.

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* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving the focus either a character from of Carroll City.City or Zarc with Yuya, Yuto and Yugo.
* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Mieru screams the TropeNamer when she sees the Puppet Yus.


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* TemptingFate: Near the end of chapter 8, Mieru hopes that things are okay in Maiami City. Cut to Ayu crying her eyes out with the warehouse district totaled and then [[spoiler:revealing herself as a Dark Signer and planning on having Reira become the Dark Signer for Cusillu.]]

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A collection of stories that take place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus'' is being written. ''Mors Tua, Vita Mia'' depict the lives of everyone in Carroll City as they build You Show Duel School, encounter strange beings and struggle with their feelings in this crazy and chaotic world.

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A collection of stories that take place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus'' is being written. written: ''Mors Tua, Vita Mia'' depict the lives of everyone in Carroll City as they build You Show Duel School, encounter strange beings and struggle with their feelings in this crazy and chaotic world.world while ''Mea Culpa'' explains the story of Dawn's repurposement.



* DeadpanSnarker: All of the invaders drip with snark.

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* DeadpanSnarker: All Most of the invaders citizens of Carroll City drip with snark.



** Yvonne continues this after Rin tells the former to let Yuzu go. Yvonne complies...and throws Yuzu onto Rin.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6: while Dawn duels Sen, [[spoiler:Ayu is killed and becomes a Dark Signer.]]



* {{Prequel]}: The collection takes place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus''.
* SomethingAboutARose: Lady Shirobara in the first story uses the Black Garden Field Spell and Rose Dragons.

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* {{Prequel]}: {{Prequel}}: The collection takes place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus''.
* SomethingAboutARose: Lady Shirobara in the first story uses the Black Garden Field Spell and Rose Dragons. Her name even means "White Rose".

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Citizens from Carroll City are...off, to say the least. The most notable one is Carroll City's version of ''Seto Kaiba'' who is shown napping by ''hanging himself on a tree'', and thinks it's fun to joke around [[ItMakesSenseInContext on eating his brother's corpse]] to the point that he makes ''Sen'' (who those who read ''Legends of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' would know) is crazy enough as it is.

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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Citizens from Carroll City are...off, to say the least. The most notable one is Carroll City's version of ''Seto Kaiba'' who is shown napping by ''hanging himself on a tree'', and thinks it's fun to joke around [[ItMakesSenseInContext on eating his brother's corpse]] to the point that he makes ''Sen'' (who those who read ''Legends of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' would know) is know how crazy enough as it is. he is) completely sane


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* LaughingMad: Another trait from people of Carrol City is that they all have a crazy laugh.

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A collection of stories that take place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus'' is being written. ''Mors Tua, Vita Mia'' depict the lives of everyone in Carroll City as they build You Show Duel School, encounter strange beings and struggle with their feelings in this crazy and chaotic world.



* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Citizens from Carroll City are...off, to say the least. The most notable one is Carroll City's version of ''Seto Kaiba'' who is shown napping by ''hanging himself on a tree'', and thinks it's fun to joke around [[ItMakesSenseInContext on eating his brother's corpse]] to the point that he makes ''Sen'' (who those who read ''Legends of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' would know) is crazy enough as it is.



* PunctuatedForEmphasis: How Yvonne shows her passive-aggressive side to Yusho.
-->'''Yvonne:''' And that's the problem with you, Yusho. You're. too. soft.



-->'''Guignol:'' ''(smirks)'' [[spoiler:Yusho Sakaki]]...I knew'd you come.

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-->'''Guignol:'' -->'''Guignol:''' ''(smirks)'' [[spoiler:Yusho Sakaki]]...I knew'd you come.



* YaoiFangirl: Dawn loves watching her brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake" through security cameras.

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* YaoiFangirl: Dawn loves watching her brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake" through security cameras.cameras.

!Tropes for ''Mors Tua, Vita Mia''
* AudienceSurrogate: Mokuba acts like this for the first chapter when Yvonne, May and Dawn explain the purpose of the You Show Duel School and their plan to build a team of duelists to stop Professor Akaba and Academia.
* FramingDevice: Trip (as his role of [[Series/CreepedOut The Curious]]) provides a narration for each story before bringing in the storyteller (the focus character) to begin each tale.
* {{Prequel]}: The collection takes place three years prior to ''Mors Omnibus''.
* SomethingAboutARose: Lady Shirobara in the first story uses the Black Garden Field Spell and Rose Dragons.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Yusho Sakaki is explained in the narration on having been hurled to Carroll City in his attempt to stop Professor Akaba. That, plus his encounter with Yvonne, May and Dawn is what would set up the You Show Duel School of Carroll City.
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* AscendedExtra: Comments on the [=AO3=] reveals that Mieru Hochun, Masumi Kotsu and Yuu Sakuragi are going to have bigger roles in the story.


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* SchoolFestival: Carroll City's branch of You Show Duel School is celebrating its first one in the story.

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* BloodierAndGorier: The end of the prologue has three members of Obelisk Force and the first chapter involves Grande Lorde Guignol slicing someone's neck before she and her puppets massacre an entire classroom of Osiris Red students.

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* BloodierAndGorier: The end of the prologue has three members of Obelisk Force killed off and the first chapter involves Grande Lorde Guignol slicing someone's neck before she and her puppets massacre an entire classroom of Osiris Red students.



* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Mind control is prevalent throughout the story. Zarc uses this to erase Yuya, Yugo and Yuto's memories, Ryoken is using hypno-therapy on Yusaku and Guignol uses this both on Sora and [[spoiler: Yuri.]]



* WhatIf: The author based this story after one called "Signs of Renewal" which is what would happen if Rin and Ruri became Dark Signers. Instead, she now asks what if the ''boys'' became Dark Signers.

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* WhatIf: The author based this story after one called "Signs of Renewal" which is what would happen if Rin and Ruri became Dark Signers. Instead, she now asks what if the ''boys'' became Dark Signers.Signers.
* YaoiFangirl: Dawn loves watching her brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake" through security cameras.
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* AssholeVictim: Viren, the mob boss who caused Yvonne's older brother, Xavier, to be forced into a coma and then decides to make the girl watch as his goons burn her beloved puppets before killing her. The minute the puppets come to life to kill everyone, you probably won't be shedding tears for them.


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* CallForward: The end of the third chapter has Sen and Seto trying to find the door that would let them meet "three gay Caballeros" meaning that this is before their appearance in ''Legend of the Three Caballeros: Dark Signs of the Sun'' (which the author confirms)
* CoolMask: A requisite of those from Carroll City is that they wear masks to cover their identities.
* CurbStompBattle: Carroll City: 1, Academia: 0
** In Guignol's duel against Sora, she doesn't lose any of her lifepoints as she whittles all of Sora's with her Shaddoll monsters.
** In Willow's duel against Celina, Celina doesn't even have a chance to attack once Willow summons Vampire Vamp to take control of Lunalight Cat Dancer.
* CurbStompCushion: Despite losing to Moon Knight, Yuzu does manage to destroy one of his Xyz Monsters, which is something he praises.


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* DeadpanSnarker: All of the invaders drip with snark.
* {{Elseworld}}: The author specifically uses this word to describe the story and its universe.
* {{Flashback}}: Each chapter starts with a flashback involving the focus character from Carroll City.
* LightIsNotGood: Moon Knight dresses in white and uses the LIGHT based tellarknight monsters. He's also very deranged and cuckoo.
* PassThePopcorn: Dawn is munching on popcorn when she communicates with Willow (May) as she is watching her older brother and his boyfriend "play paddycake".
* PlagueDoctor: Tadzio's attire is this. What doesn't really help is that [[spoiler:he has the face of Seto Kaiba...]]
* PunctuatedPounding: After being trolled by Moon Knight, Yuzu tackles him and screams "WHERE. IS. YUYA?!" while pounding him with each word.


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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Dawn is the younger sister of Yusaku in this world.
* RevengeFic: Comments on AO3 reveals that the author has little esteem for the Akabas or Yusho Sakaki, the former for having very apathetic personalities or being utterly useless and the latter for just up and abandoning his family ''without'' telling them why.
* {{Troll}}: Those who live in Carroll City learn how to be expert trolls.
** Both Willow and Moon Knight use ExactWords on Celina and Yuzu when they demand for the former to to "Tell them" what they know immediately. Moon Knight even lampshades that the look on Yuzu's face is priceless.
* WhamLine: The second chapter has Guignol about to return to her world only to stop when she senses someone behind him. Said someone?
-->'''Guignol:'' ''(smirks)'' [[spoiler:Yusho Sakaki]]...I knew'd you come.
* WhamShot: Who is the one dressed as the Plague Doctor in chapter 3? [[spoiler:An alternate version of Seto Kaiba.]]
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Everyone who watched [[Anime/YuGiOhArcV Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V]] knows what the true story was about: a man wants to unite the dimensions in order to be reunited with someone he loves.

This...is not that story.

In this world, Zarc wishes to reunite with his sons -- Yuya, Yuto, Yugo and Yuri -- and he'll do anything he can to ensure his revenge on the ones who caused him to be separated from his family.

And at the same time, Academia finds themselves assaulted by strange people who don't have any qualms on murdering people instead of just carding them.

In the center of this all is Yuzu Hiiragi, who only wants to her best friend back, only to find that her best bet to get Yuya back is to team up with a set of duelists who don't really care for her troubles as they are on stopping Academia's plans.

This fanfic is penned by Green Phantom Queen of ''Between my Brother and Me: Ab Initio'' fame in which the characters of that world are rewritten into different versions of themselves (the author herself stated to think the story as an {{Elseworld}} version of ''Ab Initio'') which mostly focuses on characters from ''ARC-V'' and ''VRAINS''. It is also darker and bloodier than most of the stories in the ''Ab Initio'' stories (barring perhaps ''Lux ex Tenebris'')
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!Provides Examples Of:
* AliceAllusion: While the ''Ab Inito'' stories had a lot of references to Wonderland (and a story that involves ''going'' to Wonderland), this one takes the cake.
** The city of that world is known as "Carroll City", named after Lewis Carroll. One location is known as Bandersnatch Park.
** The second chapter has characters sing "The Jabberwocky" and the "Queen of Hearts" poems.
** The Action Card Sora uses in his duel against Guignol is called "Gone Mad" depicting a girl in a blue dress clutching her head in agony while people laugh at her.
* BloodierAndGorier: The end of the prologue has three members of Obelisk Force and the first chapter involves Grande Lorde Guignol slicing someone's neck before she and her puppets massacre an entire classroom of Osiris Red students.
* BookEnds: Chapter 3 begins and ends with someone singing the lines to "Come Little Children".
* DarkerAndEdgier: Boy howdy. The Pokémon characters in this story are not squeaky clean at all, and show now qualms in killing people, Yuya, Yuto and Yugo are dead in the beginning of the tale and Zarc is using mind control to get all of his "sons" together.
* ReferenceOverdosed: The first chapter comes complete with an entire section of references used throughout the chapter and continues to use it for subsequent chapters.
* WhatIf: The author based this story after one called "Signs of Renewal" which is what would happen if Rin and Ruri became Dark Signers. Instead, she now asks what if the ''boys'' became Dark Signers.

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