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* OurElvesAreBetter: Like the previous story, the deer of the Shimmerwood show up, as well as mention of five other deer races.
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* OurElvesAreBetter: OurElvesAreDifferent: Like the previous story, the deer of the Shimmerwood show up, as well as mention of five other deer races.
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* BigBad: Reiziger.
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* BigBad: Reiziger.Reiziger, whose desire to consume and destroy all of existence is the chief cause of everything bad that happens in the story.
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* EvilVersusEvil: [[spoiler:Discord says that the reason that Reiziger is still around is because the deer need to be taught a lesson.]]
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* EvilVersusEvil: [[spoiler:Discord says that According to Discord, the reason that Reiziger is still around is because [[spoiler:that the deer need to be taught a lesson.]]lesson]].
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: In addition to the dragons and associated creatures introduced in the prequel, there are also various monsters created by Reiziger during the Deer War, which become part of his forces again when he returns:
** Wyverns resemble cobras with dragon wings and blue fire burning in their mouths, eyes, and a slit along their backs.
** [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Fell beasts]] are bigger, almost the size of a small dragon. They have only four limbs -- wings and taloned legs -- and their long necks and tails give them an almost wormlike appearance. [[BrownNote Their shrieks cause supernatural terror]].
** Wyverns resemble cobras with dragon wings and blue fire burning in their mouths, eyes, and a slit along their backs.
** [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Fell beasts]] are bigger, almost the size of a small dragon. They have only four limbs -- wings and taloned legs -- and their long necks and tails give them an almost wormlike appearance. [[BrownNote Their shrieks cause supernatural terror]].
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: In addition to the dragons and associated creatures introduced in the prequel, there are also various monsters created by Reiziger during the Deer War, which War and that become part of his forces again when he returns:
** Wyverns resemble cobras with dragon wings and blue fire burning in their mouths, eyes, and a slit along their backs.
**returns, including [[OurWyvernsAreDifferent wyverns]] and [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Fell beasts]] fell beasts]]. The latter are bigger, almost the size of a small dragon. They dragon, [[BrownNote cause supernatural fear]] with their shrieks and have only four limbs -- wings and taloned legs -- and their long necks and tails give them an almost wormlike appearance. [[BrownNote Their shrieks cause supernatural terror]].
** Wyverns resemble cobras with dragon wings and blue fire burning in their mouths, eyes, and a slit along their backs.
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* OurWyvernsAreDifferent: Wyverns were among the monsters bred by Reiziger and resemble cobras with dragon wings and blue fire burning in their mouths, eyes, and a slit along their backs
