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Unfortunately, as of January 2016, which was when the last chapter was updated, it has become dormant and thus now a [[DeadFic dead fic]]
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** Inverted in that it turns out that the reason that humans can't be both Biotics and Benders at the same time is that [[spoiler: Biotics is a ''form'' of Bending, just not one that anyone knew about. And since Humans can't bend multiple elements (except the Avatar), you can either be a biotic or a bender but not both. In fact, Shepard's "Natural" bending state is that of biotics, and the reason that she was capable of using airbending is because she was the Avatar.]]

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** [[DoingInTheScientist Inverted in that it turns out that that]] the reason that humans can't be both Biotics and Benders at the same time is that [[spoiler: Biotics is a ''form'' of Bending, just not one that anyone knew about. And since Humans can't bend multiple elements (except the Avatar), you can either be a biotic or a bender but not both. In fact, Shepard's "Natural" bending state is that of biotics, and the reason that she was capable of using airbending is because she was the Avatar.]]

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What this means for the universe besides Shepard being the Avatar is that Bending is a present and practiced phenomenon among all the races of the Citadel as well as the presence of spirits and certain other aspects of the Avatar universe. Interesting not just because of the crossover itself but because it shows an Avatar who is fundamentally broken and has spent most of her life (including parts of this story) making things worse for herself rather than the spiritual growth that we've seen the other Avatars go through. Fight scenes are excellent and detailed, with most enemies that Shepard faces being competent, and not just because some of them are better at bending then she is. Canon names being included in regard to humans actually ''does'' get explained, so don't let that throw you off.

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What this means for the universe besides Shepard being the Avatar is that Bending is a present and practiced phenomenon among all the races of the Citadel as well as the presence of spirits and certain other aspects of the Avatar universe. Interesting

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not just because of the crossover itself but because it shows an Avatar who is fundamentally broken and has spent most of her life (including parts of this story) making things worse for herself rather than the spiritual growth that we've seen the other Avatars go through. Fight scenes are excellent and detailed, with most enemies that Shepard faces being competent, and not just because some of them are better at bending then she is. Canon names being included in regard to humans actually ''does'' get explained, so don't let that throw you off.
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It has a Spacebattles thread dedicated to its updates, available [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/avatar-of-victory-me-crossover.223851/ here.]]

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It has a Spacebattles thread dedicated to its updates, available [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/avatar-of-victory-me-crossover.223851/ here.]]
here]] and continuing [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/avatar-of-victory-thread-2.268680/ here]] after the original thread became too long.
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** [[spoiler: As in MassEffect canon, despite starting from much nobler intentions, Weaver ultimately succumbs to indoctrination, though he accepts it and gracefully--more or less--bows out of action and sets Samsara/Phoenix on the path to self-destruction, rather than fighting to the bitter end against Shepard.]]

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** [[spoiler: As in MassEffect Franchise/MassEffect canon, despite starting from much nobler intentions, Weaver ultimately succumbs to indoctrination, though he accepts it and gracefully--more or less--bows out of action and sets Samsara/Phoenix on the path to self-destruction, rather than fighting to the bitter end against Shepard.]]



** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit similar, if not identical, to the one she pioneered in ''[[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]]'', getting the trousers from a dead Phoenix trooper, and the belt from one of her (male) students (she had been gassed in the shower, leaving her naked by the time she was found by [[spoiler:Zia]]).

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** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit similar, if not identical, to the one she pioneered in ''[[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]]'', ''VideoGame/MassEffect2'', getting the trousers from a dead Phoenix trooper, and the belt from one of her (male) students (she had been gassed in the shower, leaving her naked by the time she was found by [[spoiler:Zia]]).

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** RealityEnsues: However, powerful as it may be, Samsara's pockets aren't bottomless (unlike Cerberus…). [[spoiler: Resurrecting Shepard and reconstructing the Normandy (both massively-expensive projects)]] threw the organization into an immense debt, to the point that [[spoiler: Siwang Weaver had to fund the company with his own money for a short time and ask Shepard to pawn off any interesting stuff she found during her missions.]]



* NeverLiveItDown: In-Universe; Asha's ancestor, while a decent commander, accidentally got Avatar Hong killed. Her family has been considered jinxed since then, and her desire to be TheAtoner is part of the reason why she joins Shepard. It really doesn't help matters that Shepard died on Asha's watch as well…

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* NeverLiveItDown: In-Universe; InUniverse; Asha's ancestor, while a decent commander, accidentally got Avatar Hong killed. Her family has been considered jinxed since then, and her desire to be TheAtoner is part of the reason why she joins Shepard. It really doesn't help matters that Shepard died on Asha's watch as well…



* PlayingWithFire[=/=]KillItWithFire: Garrus finds out he's a firebender during the attack on the Citadel.

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* RealityEnsues: [[MegaCorp Samsara's]] pockets aren't bottomless (unlike Cerberus…). [[spoiler: Resurrecting Shepard and reconstructing the Normandy (both massively-expensive projects)]] threw the organization into an immense debt, to the point that [[spoiler: Siwang Weaver had to fund the company with his own money for a short time and ask Shepard to pawn off any interesting stuff she found during her missions.]]
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** During a conversation between Aethyta and Shepard, the former provides an old saying that is almost exactly [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWBlKy7SLdY Renegade Shepard's summarization of the Council Races]] in the second game[[note]]Which you can only access by talking to two grounded asari on the Citadel (the ones you need to give the forged IDs), which can only occur if you [[spoiler:let the Council die]] in the first game.[[/note]], except replace the last part's answer ("If you want a problem solved…") from "human" to "quarian".

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** During a conversation between Aethyta and Shepard, the former provides an old saying that is almost exactly [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWBlKy7SLdY Renegade Shepard's summarization of the Council Races]] in the second game[[note]]Which you can only access by talking to two grounded asari on the Citadel (the ones you need to give the forged IDs), [=IDs=]), which can only occur if you [[spoiler:let the Council die]] in the first game.[[/note]], except replace the last part's answer ("If you want a problem solved…") from "human" to "quarian".
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** The Chapter 38 Codex entry contains a history of the Salarian First Contact War, an event bearing a strong resemblance to the Video Game [[VideoGame/XComUFODefense X-COM]]

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** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit similar, if not identical, to the one she pioneered in [[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]].

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** During a conversation between Aethyta and Shepard, the former provides an old saying that is almost exactly [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SWBlKy7SLdY Renegade Shepard's summarization of the Council Races]] in the second game[[note]]Which you can only access by talking to two grounded asari on the Citadel (the ones you need to give the forged IDs), which can only occur if you [[spoiler:let the Council die]] in the first game.[[/note]], except replace the last part's answer ("If you want a problem solved…") from "human" to "quarian".
** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit similar, if not identical, to the one she pioneered in [[Franchise/MassEffect ''[[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]].2]]'', getting the trousers from a dead Phoenix trooper, and the belt from one of her (male) students (she had been gassed in the shower, leaving her naked by the time she was found by [[spoiler:Zia]]).



* OhCrap: Shepard's reaction upon hearing that the seemingly numberless hordes of Geth that she was fighting throughout the first part of her mission... were only about five percent of ''all'' Geth.

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* OhCrap: Shepard's reaction upon hearing that the seemingly numberless hordes of Geth that she was fighting throughout the first part of her mission... mission… were only about five percent of ''all'' Geth.

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** [[spoiler:Abylon]] does this to Vega while they (and Garrus and Tali) were on what the turian would eventually call his favortie spot in the Citadel. [[spoiler:The hybrid]] wanted some liquor, but James kept it out of reach, and this was her response.



* HeroOfAnotherStory: Zaeed, who managed to destroy the prison ship ''Purgatory'' on his own (he took Jack's place in the recruiting process), but also managed to save all the people at the refinery... by accident.

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* HeroOfAnotherStory: Zaeed, who managed to destroy the prison ship ''Purgatory'' on his own (he took Jack's place in the recruiting process), but also managed to save all the people at the refinery... refinery… by accident.



* HumanPopsicle: [[spoiler:Javik, but instead of a stasis pod like in canon, he was sealed in diamond. This also applies to his 'daughter' Abylon. Of course, they eventually were released, but in different times]].



* MakingASplash: Tali learns how to Waterbend [[spoiler: and is later revealed to have learned Bloodbending]].

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* MakingASplash: Tali learns how to Waterbend [[spoiler: and Wwterbend [[spoiler:and is later revealed to have learned Bloodbending]].Bloodbending]]. [[spoiler:This also applies to the other Tali, who was previously an [[BlowYouAway airbender]].



** RealityEnsues: However, powerful as it may be, Samsara's pockets aren't bottomless (unlike Cerberus...). [[spoiler: Resurrecting Shepard and reconstructing the Normandy (both massively-expensive projects)]] threw the organization into an immense debt, to the point that [[spoiler: Siwang Weaver had to fund the company with his own money for a short time and ask Shepard to pawn off any interesting stuff she found during her missions.]]

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** RealityEnsues: However, powerful as it may be, Samsara's pockets aren't bottomless (unlike Cerberus...).Cerberus…). [[spoiler: Resurrecting Shepard and reconstructing the Normandy (both massively-expensive projects)]] threw the organization into an immense debt, to the point that [[spoiler: Siwang Weaver had to fund the company with his own money for a short time and ask Shepard to pawn off any interesting stuff she found during her missions.]]



* NeverLiveItDown: In-Universe; Asha's ancestor, while a decent commander, accidentally got Avatar Hong killed. Her family has been considered jinxed since then, and her desire to be TheAtoner is part of the reason why she joins Shepard. It really doesn't help matters that Shepard died on Asha's watch as well...

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* NeverLiveItDown: In-Universe; Asha's ancestor, while a decent commander, accidentally got Avatar Hong killed. Her family has been considered jinxed since then, and her desire to be TheAtoner is part of the reason why she joins Shepard. It really doesn't help matters that Shepard died on Asha's watch as well...well…



* NonhumanHumanoidHybrid: [[spoiler:Abylon, daughter of a dikatur and Javik (a Prothean)]].



** In chapter 76, during the search for [[spoiler:a Reaper secret weapon]], upon finding the unnamed planet [[spoiler:where it's supposedly hidden]], Joker figures that since they were the first to see the planet, he would name it [[WesternAnimation/TitanAE Bob]], which Shepard opposes.



** Zaeed... is viewed as a barely-sane maniac who leaves a trail of devastation a mile wide. Even a Shepard who comes across as ''far'' more Renegade than the Avatar really should, who has ''Jack'' as a best friend, thinks that he's not worth taking on the mission.

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** Zaeed... Zaeed… is viewed as a barely-sane maniac who leaves a trail of devastation a mile wide. Even a Shepard who comes across as ''far'' more Renegade than the Avatar really should, who has ''Jack'' as a best friend, thinks that he's not worth taking on the mission.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Shepard needs [[spoiler:Leviathan]] on her trip to the Mu Relay to [[spoiler:investigate a weapon even the Reapers considered was only as a last resort]] since without [[spoiler:the depowered Reaper]], any trip there would be hopelessly one-way [[spoiler:as only she can activate the Mass Relay on the other side]].



* TokenHeroicOrc: In this case, token heroic Batarian [[spoiler: Balak ends up joining Shepard's team. They don't really like each other, but they are willing to set aside (most) of their differences if it gets the job done. Later, we learn ''why'' he's a token heroic batarian... or rather, we learn why ''the batarians are so bad to begin with.'']]

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* TokenHeroicOrc: In this case, token heroic Batarian [[spoiler: Balak ends up joining Shepard's team. They don't really like each other, but they are willing to set aside (most) of their differences if it gets the job done. Later, we learn ''why'' he's a token heroic batarian... batarian… or rather, we learn why ''the batarians are so bad to begin with.'']]

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* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar[[spoiler:, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra simplified it, taking a hyperbolic "ten thousand years"--akin to Wan Shi Tong's epithet He Who Knows Ten Thousand Things--as a literal, when the cycle operated on a far greater time scale).]]

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* DishingOutDirt: Earthbenders. A couple of notable ones include (apart from Shepard) [[SacrificialLamb Jenkins]], Wrex, James, and [[spoiler:Weiss[[note]]the Geth VI you "get" when you lose Legion in the second game[[/note]]]].
* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar[[spoiler:, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon super-weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra simplified it, taking a hyperbolic "ten thousand years"--akin to Wan Shi Tong's epithet He Who Knows Ten Thousand Things--as a literal, when the cycle operated on a far greater time scale).]]



* EarthAllAlong: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from billions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]

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* EarthAllAlong: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... Earth… or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from billions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]


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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In chapter 73, a discussion about time and perspective from EDI goes off on a tangent to this thanks to Liara.


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** There's a C-Sec turian named [[VideoGame/{{Pokemon}} Arceus]].
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** "[[DeadpanSnarker I've made]] [[{{Understatement}} a 'huge']] [[ThisIsGonnaSuck mistake.]]" Words spoken by Morinth after accidentally angering the Avatar into the Avatar state.

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** "[[DeadpanSnarker I've made]] [[{{Understatement}} made a 'huge']] [[ThisIsGonnaSuck huge mistake.]]" Words spoken by Morinth after accidentally angering the Avatar into the Avatar state.
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A:TLA is not "the obvious" because of the existence of the film Avatar.


[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8099181/1/Avatar-of-Victory Avatar of Victory]] by James Golen is a crossover fanfic between [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender the obvious]] and ''Franchise/MassEffect'', a blend of the universes in question that has the Earth of A:TLA replacing the usual one.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8099181/1/Avatar-of-Victory Avatar of Victory]] by James Golen is a crossover fanfic between [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender the obvious]] ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' and ''Franchise/MassEffect'', a blend of the universes in question that has the Earth of A:TLA ''A:TLA'' replacing the usual one.
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** A little after the above, after bringing back a comatose Shepard due to prolonged Avatar State [[spoiler:out of rage that her sister Talitha was kidnapped by Phoenix]], [[Recap/TheLegendOfKorraS2E7BeginningsPartOne just like Korra before her], Shepard is unable to remember who she is, to the horror of Talitha, Liara, Asha, and Erdeni. [[spoiler:And then it turns out she was faking it.]]

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** A little after the above, after bringing back a comatose Shepard due to prolonged Avatar State [[spoiler:out of rage that her sister Talitha was kidnapped by Phoenix]], [[Recap/TheLegendOfKorraS2E7BeginningsPartOne just like Korra before her], her]], Shepard is unable to remember who she is, to the horror of Talitha, Liara, Asha, and Erdeni. [[spoiler:And then it turns out she was faking it.]]
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** Chapter 62 has a random evacuation scene where the evac ship has to leave behind a limping man because he was too far. Only to get biotically pulled by a Banshee as they try to leave. That limping man then does ''a biotic charge'' right at it, buying the ship enough time to break free.



** [[spoiler: As in Mass Effect canon, despite starting from much nobler intentions, Weaver ultimately succumbs to indoctrination, though he accepts it and gracefully--more or less--bows out of action and sets Samsara/Phoenix on the path to self-destruction, rather than fighting to the bitter end against Shepard.]]

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* GeneralFailure: Sajuuk... was not a good Avatar. At all. He alienated or killed almost all of his potential allies, causing the Protheans to lose the war to the Reapers, and died in disgrace a short time later. He makes [[JerkAss Javik]] seem reasonable in comparison. [[IHatePastMe Shepard makes a conscious effort not to be like him when this Cycle comes around]].

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* GeneralFailure: Sajuuk... was not a good Avatar. At all. He alienated or killed almost all of his potential allies, causing the Protheans to lose the war to the Reapers, and died in disgrace a short time later. He makes [[JerkAss Javik]] seem reasonable in comparison. [[IHatePastMe Shepard makes a 'a conscious effort not to be like him when this Cycle comes around]].


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** Commander Rai Li, whom not only shares a background with canon's War Hero Shepard, but in this fic she also runs with her own crew of misfits of a variety of species including Turian, Quarian, and rogue AI, flies a sister ship of the Normandy SR-2 (of which there is an entire class running around the Alliance fleet) and even is promoted to Spectre by the time of Book 3.
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* CompanionCube: Minor running gag with Garrus and his [[SniperRifle Mantis]] and Shepard and her [[CoolGuns Mattock]]. Especially when Shepard begins to fangasm over her new [[{{BFG}} Cain]].
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'''Shepard:''' Says the man who'd marry his rifle if it were legal.\\
'''Garrus:''' Well, there's an obvious distinction there. I've never cheated on my rifle.
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* [[spoiler: EarthAllAlong]]: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from billions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]

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Too normal a reaction to threatening loved ones to be this trope (about arbitrary things that set one off).


* BerserkButton: [[TheVamp Morinth]] finds out the hard way, you do ''not'' mess with the Avatar's memories. Doing so results in UnstoppableRage.
** In general, messing with Shepard's loved ones. She goes into the Avatar State and lashes out at Traynor when she learns [[spoiler: her sister might have been kidnapped]].

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* [[spoiler:AwfulTruth: The asari were originally created by the Reapers, to serve as a sleeper weapon they could MindControl en masse. Liara goes into a HeroicBSOD when she finds out. Javik even lampshades it afterwards.]]

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*** However, even though they are now extinct, by far the most badass were the Nazara. How badass are they, you ask? ''They fought the Reapers to a standstill, and so far came closer than anyone else,'' '''''ever,''''' to ''defeating them outright.''

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** Attempted again in Chapter 47 on a New Collector. With a spike of ice. Unfortunately for Shepard, it doesn't have one, and Leviathan mocks her for thinking it'd have such an unnecessary weakness.

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* AdaptationalBadass: While Grunt was already pretty strong, he was still a vanilla krogan in the source material- he was just a really strong krogan who hit things, "Perfect Krogan" genetics and upgrades nonwithstanding, especially given that the other krogan squadmate you had had previously (Wrex) was capable of doing biotics. This fic fixes this by making Grunt everything he was in the original, but also makes him a Shaman. In a world where spirits exist and have great influence on the real world, this means that he can go around obstacles that would normally be closed, bend beasts and spirits alike to his will, and even convince other people's weapons to backfire on them by communing with them, via a BadassFingerSnap. Oh, and he actually managed to do better than ''Wrex'' in the Rite- Wrex was the last to ''kill'' a Thresher Maw. Grunt... managed to ''tame'' a Maw, and can now summon it like it's a Pokemon. Many of Shepard's other teammates also qualify: Wrex is an earthbender with centuries of experience, Tali learns how to waterbend in addition to her engineering skills, and bending overall is becoming more and more widespread throughout the galaxy after humanity made contact.



* {{Badass}}: Most of the characters, to some degree or another.
** AdaptationalBadass: While Grunt was already pretty strong, he was still a vanilla krogan in the source material- he was just a really strong krogan who hit things, "Perfect Krogan" genetics and upgrades nonwithstanding, especially given that the other krogan squadmate you had had previously (Wrex) was capable of doing biotics. This fic fixes this by making Grunt everything he was in the original, but also makes him a Shaman. In a world where spirits exist and have great influence on the real world, this means that he can go around obstacles that would normally be closed, bend beasts and spirits alike to his will, and even convince other people's weapons to backfire on them by communing with them, via a BadassFingerSnap. Oh, and he actually managed to do better than ''Wrex'' in the Rite- Wrex was the last to ''kill'' a Thresher Maw. Grunt... managed to ''tame'' a Maw, and can now summon it like it's a Pokemon. Many of Shepard's other teammates also qualify: Wrex is an earthbender with centuries of experience, Tali learns how to waterbend in addition to her engineering skills, and bending overall is becoming more and more widespread throughout the galaxy after humanity made contact.
** BadassArmy: Just as much as in canon, with the Raloi and even the ''Volus'' starting to qualify: the Volus have, after the Reaper invasion began, [[spoiler: started reverse-engineering the gun that killed the Derelict Reaper on which you found Legion in the original game for use against the Reapers]], and the Raloi are unparalleled snipers.

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* {{Badass}}: Most of the characters, to some degree or another.
** AdaptationalBadass: While Grunt was already pretty strong, he was still a vanilla krogan in the source material- he was just a really strong krogan who hit things, "Perfect Krogan" genetics and upgrades nonwithstanding, especially given that the other krogan squadmate you had had previously (Wrex) was capable of doing biotics. This fic fixes this by making Grunt everything he was in the original, but also makes him a Shaman. In a world where spirits exist and have great influence on the real world, this means that he can go around obstacles that would normally be closed, bend beasts and spirits alike to his will, and even convince other people's weapons to backfire on them by communing with them, via a BadassFingerSnap. Oh, and he actually managed to do better than ''Wrex'' in the Rite- Wrex was the last to ''kill'' a Thresher Maw. Grunt... managed to ''tame'' a Maw, and can now summon it like it's a Pokemon. Many of Shepard's other teammates also qualify: Wrex is an earthbender with centuries of experience, Tali learns how to waterbend in addition to her engineering skills, and bending overall is becoming more and more widespread throughout the galaxy after humanity made contact.
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BadassArmy: Just as much as in canon, with the Raloi and even the ''Volus'' starting to qualify: the Volus have, after the Reaper invasion began, [[spoiler: started reverse-engineering the gun that killed the Derelict Reaper on which you found Legion in the original game for use against the Reapers]], and the Raloi are unparalleled snipers.



** BadassCrew: The Normandy's crew, naturally.
** BadassNormal: Asha al'Wahim, a non-bender who nevertheless keeps up with the Avatar.
*** EmpoweredBadassNormal: Garrus Vakarian. Spends the first book bemoaning that he wasn't a bender, only to find himself firebending during the Battle of the Citadel, and having no idea how. [[spoiler: Solana Vakarian, his sister, also permanently gains the ability to firebend, even after the Reaper-tech device that gave her her bending is removed.]]
** BadassPreacher: [[spoiler: Ka'hairal Balak. Also doubles as a BadassTeacher.]]
** BadassUnintentional: [[spoiler: Conrad Verner, who accidentally brings down criminal organizations. Ironic considering [[IJustWantToBeBadass his original aspirations]].]]

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** * BadassCrew: The Normandy's crew, naturally.
** * BadassNormal: Asha al'Wahim, a non-bender who nevertheless keeps up with the Avatar.
*** EmpoweredBadassNormal: Garrus Vakarian. Spends the first book bemoaning that he wasn't a bender, only to find himself firebending during the Battle of the Citadel, and having no idea how. [[spoiler: Solana Vakarian, his sister, also permanently gains the ability to firebend, even after the Reaper-tech device that gave her her bending is removed.]]
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* BadassPreacher: [[spoiler: Ka'hairal Balak. Also doubles as a BadassTeacher.]]
** * BadassUnintentional: [[spoiler: Conrad Verner, who accidentally brings down criminal organizations. Ironic considering [[IJustWantToBeBadass his original aspirations]].]]


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* EmpoweredBadassNormal: Garrus Vakarian. Spends the first book bemoaning that he wasn't a bender, only to find himself firebending during the Battle of the Citadel, and having no idea how. [[spoiler: Solana Vakarian, his sister, also permanently gains the ability to firebend, even after the Reaper-tech device that gave her her bending is removed.]]

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* BlowYouAway: Shepard's natural element, stunted after [[spoiler: she used it to kill a batarian..]].

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* BlowYouAway: Shepard's natural element, stunted after [[spoiler: she used it to kill a batarian..]].batarian]].



** Shepard is nearly killed by several ''Krogan'' airbenders. Not so much because they were airbending, but because... well, the fact that Krogan Airbenders existed was extremely shocking for her and it caused her to hesitate.

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** Shepard is nearly killed by several ''Krogan'' ''krogan'' airbenders. Not so much because they were airbending, but because... because… well, the fact that Krogan Airbenders krogan airbenders existed was extremely shocking for her and it caused her to hesitate.



* LetsSplitUpGang: In chapter 39, while in the Collector Base, Shepard decides to take Tali, Mordin, Samara, and Jack on a side-mission, leaving the rest of the ground team (Miranda excluded, as she's on the Normandy as XO) to go with Grunt, who is holding the bomb. Garrus lampshades this in an attempt to defy it, but goes with the plan anyway.



** According to Thane, the hanar have a great deal of waterbenders, though we have yet to see one on screen.

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** According to Thane, the hanar have a great deal of waterbenders, though we have yet to see one on screen.in action.
** In lieu of biotics in the games, Miranda is now a waterbender instead.

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* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: Chapter 37, Marcus Pastor invokes this to Solana Vakarian, who is being hunted down by Kai Leng.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In chapter 32, Shepard almost dies because a Krogan tries to use Airbending to take her out. The reason she nearly got killed, if Tali hadn't intervened? Shepard was honestly so amazed at the prospect of a ''Krogan Airbender'' that she couldn't help but stare.



* ComicallyMissingThePoint: In chapter 32, Shepard almost dies because a Krogan tries to use Airbending to take her out. The reason she nearly got killed, if Tali hadn't intervened? Shepard was honestly so amazed at the prospect of a ''Krogan Airbender'' that she couldn't help but stare.
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* VillainsOutShopping: Literal case, but not real example - While searching a ship raided by Eclipse mercenaries looking for Mordin Solus, Shepard and company overhear two of them smuggling a set of egg-crates and a huge block of tofu.
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-->'''Shepard''': Nope. This is all the room we have. [[{{Airplane}} And don't call me Shr-Li]].

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-->'''Shepard''': Nope. This is all the room we have. [[{{Airplane}} [[Film/{{Airplane}} And don't call me Shr-Li]].
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** Liara names one geth [[GloriousShotgunPrincess Wuffles.]] It's not the same one, and is a mook who lasts all of three lines before he gets mowed down.

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** Liara names one geth [[GloriousShotgunPrincess [[FanFic/GloriousShotgunPrincess Wuffles.]] It's not the same one, and is a mook who lasts all of three lines before he gets mowed down.

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