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* OppositesAttract: Shepard and Liara when they start dating. Liara is a genius who earned her doctorate (or equivalent) early, Shepard barely passed high school. Liara at first runs away from any fight she gets into, Shepard is an N7 graduate who set a new record for getting through the program. Liara is a CloudCuckoolander, whereas Shepard is very down-to-earth (which leads to her serving as the CloudCuckoolandersMinder for Liara).

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* OppositesAttract: Shepard and Liara when they start dating.Liara. Liara is a genius who earned her doctorate (or equivalent) early, Shepard barely passed high school. Liara at first screams and runs away from any fight she gets into, Shepard is an N7 graduate who set a new record for getting through the program. Liara is a CloudCuckoolander, whereas Shepard is very down-to-earth (which leads to her serving as the CloudCuckoolandersMinder for Liara).
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* OppositesAttract: Shepard and Liara when they start dating. Liara is a genius who earned her doctorate (or equivalent) early, Shepard barely passed high school. Liara at first runs away from any fight she gets into, Shepard is an N7 graduate who set a new record for getting through the program. Liara is a CloudCuckoolander, whereas Shepard is very down-to-earth (which leads to her serving as the CloudCuckoolandersMinder for Liara).
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* [[spoiler:AwfulTruth: The asari were originally created by the Reapers, to serve as a sleeper weapon they could MindControl en masse. Liara goes into a HeroicBSOD when she finds out. Javik even lampshades it afterwards.]]
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* [[spoier:OfficialCouple: Despite some ShipTease with Kaiden early on and EatingTheEyeCandy with Vega, Shepard ultimately settles down with Liara, and their relationship survives, endures, and develops all the way to their wedding in chapter 81.]]

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* [[spoier:OfficialCouple: [[spoiler:OfficialCouple: Despite some ShipTease with Kaiden early on and EatingTheEyeCandy with Vega, Shepard ultimately settles down with Liara, and their relationship survives, endures, and develops all the way to their wedding in chapter 81.]]



** As of chapter 34, we also have references to the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion The Sea of Dirac]] and a Turian (who in the Avatar of Victory universe are Romanesque, and use latin, which of course never existed in the Avatar's world) organization whose motto is [[Wiki/SCPFoundation Tuti Teneti Protego]].

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** As of chapter 34, we also have references to the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion The Sea of Dirac]] and a Turian (who in the Avatar of Victory universe are Romanesque, and use latin, Latin, which of course never existed in the Avatar's world) organization whose motto is [[Wiki/SCPFoundation Tuti Teneti Protego]].
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** There are also a number of subtle changes in spelling and such for human names, bringing them more in line with the Asiatic names of the Avatar setting. For instance, Joker's real name goes from Jeff Moreau to Jet Moro, Captain Bailey to Bei-Li, and so on.


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** [[spoiler:This culminates in a nasty fight between Liara and Shepard over her drinking later on, which nearly destroys their relationship. Shepard's love for Liara pushes her to moderate her drinking, and the two eventually reconcile.]]

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** As with Golen's other works in the Avatarverse, there's also a good deal of work put into the Avatar side of the backstory, creating a history going back thousands of years and developing several more locations and cultures than canon had a chance to explore.



* FusionFic: The Avatar world replaced Mass Effect's Earth. Thus, we get various mash-ups, like "Chora's Den," a BadGuyBar and strip club, getting turned into "Korra's Den," a theme bar based on the Roaring Twenties that WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra took place in. It's not a strip club, either. Also, it turns out that bending is not unique to humans- pretty much every race has benders of one kind or another.

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* FusionFic: The Avatar world replaced Mass Effect's Earth. Thus, we get various mash-ups, like "Chora's Den," a BadGuyBar and strip club, getting turned into "Korra's Den," a theme bar based on the Roaring Twenties that WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra took place in. It's not a strip club, either. Also, it turns out that bending is not unique to humans- pretty humans--pretty much every race has benders of one kind or another.



* OfficialCouple: despite some ShipTease with Kaiden early on and EatingTheEyeCandy with Vega, Shepard ultimately settles down with Liara, and their relationship survives, endures, and develops all the way to their wedding in chapter 81.

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* OfficialCouple: despite [[spoier:OfficialCouple: Despite some ShipTease with Kaiden early on and EatingTheEyeCandy with Vega, Shepard ultimately settles down with Liara, and their relationship survives, endures, and develops all the way to their wedding in chapter 81.]]



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Captain Bei-Li.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Captain Bei-Li. And surprisingly considering his [[ObstructiveBureaucrat canon portrayal]], Ambassador Donnel Udina.



** [[spoiler: Zig-zagged with Tela Vasir. Whereas in canon, she worked for the Shadow Broker and tried to kill Liara and Shepard, in this version, she survives... because ''Jondam Bau'', a Spectre that you meet in the third game, takes her place. And he's supposed to survive (if you do it right).]]

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** [[spoiler: Zig-zagged with Tela Vasir. Whereas in canon, she worked for the Shadow Broker and tried to kill Liara and Shepard, [[NotHisSled in this version, version]], she survives... because ''Jondam Bau'', a Spectre that you meet in the third game, takes her place. And he's supposed to survive (if you do it right).]]



** Although post-season two, some of Varrick's traits have been incorporated into Weaver, most notably having an assistant named "Su Li," and occasionally asking her to 'Do the thing.'

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** Although post-season two, some of Varrick's traits have been incorporated into Weaver, most notably having an assistant named "Su "Ju Li," and occasionally asking her to 'Do the thing.'
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* OfficialCouple: despite some ShipTease with Kaiden early on and EatingTheEyeCandy with Vega, Shepard ultimately settles down with Liara, and their relationship survives, endures, and develops all the way to their wedding in chapter 81.

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It has a Spacebattles thread dedicated to its updates, available [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/avatar-of-victory-me-crossover.223851/ Here.]]

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It has a Spacebattles thread dedicated to its updates, available [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/avatar-of-victory-me-crossover.223851/ Here.here.]]



* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar[[spoiler:, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra just simplified it because ten thousand years was a bit more believable to her than the cycle of extinction and Reapers).]]

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* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar[[spoiler:, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra just simplified it because ten it, taking a hyperbolic "ten thousand years was a bit more believable years"--akin to her than Wan Shi Tong's epithet He Who Knows Ten Thousand Things--as a literal, when the cycle of extinction and Reapers).operated on a far greater time scale).]]



* [[spoiler: EarthAllAlong]]: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from millions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]

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* [[spoiler: EarthAllAlong]]: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from millions billions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]



** [[spoiler: As in Mass Effect canon, despite starting from much nobler intentions, Weaver ultimately succumbs to indoctrination, though he accepts it and gracefully--more or less--bows out of action and sets Samsara/Phoenix on the path to self-destruction, rather than fighting to the bitter end against Shepard.]]



* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weyrloc dies when Tali stakes him from the head down with an compressed ice spear.

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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weyrloc Guld dies when Tali stakes him from the head down with an compressed ice spear.



* RuleOfFunny: Combined with GameplayAndStorySegregation, is why despite Shepard going straight to Therum to recover Doctor T'Soni (Liara), Liara believes that Shepard and her party are hallucinations. In the game, this only happens if you recruit Liara after doing many, ''many'' other missions before recruiting her (such as Feros and Noveria).

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* RuleOfFunny: Combined with GameplayAndStorySegregation, this is why despite Shepard going straight to Therum to recover Doctor T'Soni (Liara), Liara believes that Shepard and her party are hallucinations. In the game, this only happens if you recruit Liara after doing many, ''many'' other missions before recruiting her (such as Feros and Noveria).



* TemptingFate: Vega says as much, saying that naming the VI on the moon after the guy who created an orwellian society in Ba Sing Se was pretty much ''asking'' for it to go crazy and start killing people.

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* TemptingFate: Vega says as much, saying that naming the VI on the moon after the guy who created an orwellian Orwellian society in Ba Sing Se was pretty much ''asking'' for it to go crazy and start killing people.



* TimeAbyss [[spoiler: The Avatar Cycle has been passing between different species for more than '''2.5 Billion years.''']]

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* TimeAbyss [[spoiler: The Avatar Cycle has been passing between different species for more than '''2.5 Billion billion years.''']]


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** Chapter 80: [[spoiler: We learn the true history of the Reaper cycle, how the galaxy is descended from ''us'' [[EarthAllAlong and our Earth]], who seeded the galaxy with life because they were the first sapient species, and how the Reapers arose from a race, the shadowed ones, that sought to dominate them. Moreover, bending itself was created as a weapon to fight back against this malignant species, and they in turn created the Harbinger to crush humanity. All this is revealed by a ''good'' Reaper, Abentus, and the Pantokrator, an AI akin to God created by the first humanity and the creator of Raava (and thus indirectly of the Avatar cycle itself).]]
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** AdaptationalBadass: While Grunt was already pretty strong, he was still a vanilla krogan in the source material- he was just a really strong krogan who hit things, "Perfect Krogan" genetics and upgrades nonwithstanding, especially given that the other krogan squadmate you had had previously (Wrex) was capable of doing biotics. This fic fixes this by making Grunt everything he was in the original, but also makes him a Shaman. In a world where spirits exist and have great influence on the real world, this means that he can go around obstacles that would normally be closed, tame thresher maws, and even convince other people's weapons to backfire on them by communing with them, via a BadassFingerSnap. Oh, and he actually managed to do better than ''Wrex'' in the Rite- Wrex was the last to ''kill'' a Thresher Maw. Grunt... managed to ''tame'' a Maw, and can now summon it like it's a Pokemon. Many of Shepard's other teammates also qualify: Wrex is an earthbender with centuries of experience, Tali learns how to waterbend in addition to her engineering skills, and bending overall is becoming more and more widespread throughout the galaxy after humanity made contact.

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** AdaptationalBadass: While Grunt was already pretty strong, he was still a vanilla krogan in the source material- he was just a really strong krogan who hit things, "Perfect Krogan" genetics and upgrades nonwithstanding, especially given that the other krogan squadmate you had had previously (Wrex) was capable of doing biotics. This fic fixes this by making Grunt everything he was in the original, but also makes him a Shaman. In a world where spirits exist and have great influence on the real world, this means that he can go around obstacles that would normally be closed, tame thresher maws, bend beasts and spirits alike to his will, and even convince other people's weapons to backfire on them by communing with them, via a BadassFingerSnap. Oh, and he actually managed to do better than ''Wrex'' in the Rite- Wrex was the last to ''kill'' a Thresher Maw. Grunt... managed to ''tame'' a Maw, and can now summon it like it's a Pokemon. Many of Shepard's other teammates also qualify: Wrex is an earthbender with centuries of experience, Tali learns how to waterbend in addition to her engineering skills, and bending overall is becoming more and more widespread throughout the galaxy after humanity made contact.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: Played around with in the background. They're viewed as something along the lines of Spirits, and how each culture views those spirits shapes how they view AI's. For example, on Thessia, their spiritual experience was mostly negative, so the thought of a machine with a mind of its own makes them have strongly negative views on AI. The Salarians had no knowledge of any type of spirit at all until contact with the Asari, and had their worldview shaped by said contact. ''Turians,'' on the other hand, believe that AI could be a ''good'' thing, mostly because they have had an extremely ''positive'' relationship with spirits, and they believe that (properly controlled and supplicated, like a spirit), could help increase society greatly.

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* AIIsACrapshoot: Played around with in the background. They're viewed as something along the lines of Spirits, and how each culture views those spirits shapes how they view AI's. For example, on Thessia, their spiritual experience was mostly negative, so the thought of a machine with a mind of its own makes them have strongly negative views on AI. The Salarians had no knowledge of any type of spirit at all until contact with the Asari, and had their worldview shaped by said contact. ''Turians,'' on the other hand, believe that AI could be a ''good'' thing, mostly because they have had an extremely ''positive'' relationship with spirits, and they believe that (properly AI(properly controlled and supplicated, like a spirit), could help increase improve society greatly.
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* ExtremeDoormat: [[spoiler:Tali'Zorah]] has a 'very' hard time telling people 'no'. Thanks to Garrus and Shepard, she's getting a lot better.

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* ExtremeDoormat: [[spoiler:Tali'Zorah]] has a 'very' ''very'' hard time telling people 'no'. Thanks to Garrus and Shepard, she's getting a lot better.
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** [[spoiler: Thane and Adahn didn't survive the Suicide Mission, and though she later woke up, Samara was in a coma for some time, and needs to get back her motor skills before she could do anything.]]

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** [[spoiler: Thane and Adahn didn't survive the Suicide Mission, and though she later woke up, Samara was suffered brain damage (which is almost always fatal to Asari due to how their brains are structured) which left her in a coma for some time, a time and needs to get back crippled her motor skills before she could do anything.functions.]]
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* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: This is effectively how Abentus came into being. The race it was crafted from, at the behest of their Avatar, willingly threw themselves at the Reapers to be harvested. With the entire species having been processed in a matter of months, there was no time for [[MoreThanMindControl Indoctrination]] to set in, leading to the birth of a Reaper with free will.]]

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* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: This is effectively how Abentus came into being. The race it was crafted from, at the behest of their Avatar, willingly threw themselves at the Reapers to be harvested. With the entire species having been processed in a matter of months, there was no time for [[MoreThanMindControl Indoctrination]] Indoctrination to set in, leading to the birth of a Reaper with free will.]]
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* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: This is effectively how Abentus came into being. The race it was crafted from, at the behest of their Avatar, willingly threw themselves at the Reapers to be harvested. With the entire species having been processed in a matter of months, there was no time for [[MoreThanMindControl Indoctrination]] to set in, leading to the birth of a Reaper with free will.]]
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Adahn repeatedly sustains damage to his chassis that would (and did) kill normal Geth, and the worst that comes of it a forced lockdown for a brief period. [[spoiler: This abnormal resilience is a sign of the presence of a soul.]]
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** As of chapter 47, [[spoiler: Adahn]] outshines all the other AI due to one simple fact: [[spoiler: ''he's an airbender'', and apparently has been ''since the Morning War.'']]

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** As of chapter 47, [[spoiler: Adahn]] outshines all one-ups most of the other AI examples in the setting due to one simple fact: [[spoiler: ''he's being an airbender'', and apparently has been ''since airbender since the Morning War.'']]]]
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: There have been many different intelligent races throughout the galaxy's lifespan to go by the name 'human'.]] It's admitted both in-story and by WordOfGod that there are only so many unique sounds that a set of vocal chords can produce; this was bound to happen at least once.
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: There have been many different intelligent races throughout the galaxy's lifespan to go by the name 'human'.]] It's admitted both in-story and by WordOfGod that there are only so many unique sounds that a set of vocal chords can produce; this was bound to happen at least once.
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* [[spoiler: EarthAllAlong]]: [[spoiler: It turns out that the Earth that has been the center of the Alliance in this universe wasn't the first Earth... or the first humans. ''Omega'' is actually the remnants of the original Sol system, from millions of years ago, and that it was ''our'' earth, or something like it, that was the precursor race that kicked off the whole cycle. Unfortunately, they fell to shadowy spirits who formed the First Reaper, and scattered life across the galaxy.]]
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* BringMeMyBrownPants: Liara has this happen to her twice; once after the geth tried to kill her at the dig site where she met Shepard, and again after Wrex shoots her in the forehead to test if her newly purchased armor is worth the two million credits she spent. It is.

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* BringMeMyBrownPants: BringMyBrownPants: Liara has this happen to her twice; once after the geth tried to kill her at the dig site where she met Shepard, and again after Wrex shoots her in the forehead to test if her newly purchased armor is worth the two million credits she spent. It is.
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* GenreSavvy: Aria knows that Morinth is incredibly skilled (skilled enough to take down ''four'' Justicars sent after her), so she goes for a better option: Point Shepard in Morinth's direction and let her handle the mess.
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* UnwittingPawn: The Golden Spiders mercenary group are this to the Illusive Man/Phoenix.

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* NoodleImplements: Shepard in chapter 56 asks Wrex for "a pillow case, an electrical cord, a jug of milk, and your lizard-parrot." to make the salarian dalatrass tell her where the krogan females are. It turns out she was exploiting this; due to how fast salarians thought, the most effective thing she could have done was to let her come up with what Shepard was going to do to her.



** The mandala that appears whenever Shepard, [[spoiler: Javik, and the Reapers or rakshasa]] go into the Avatar State/their equivalent? They look a lot like fire versions of the Mantra halos from VideoGame/AsurasWrath.



* WhamEpisode: While the story mostly stays in line with canon, there are still several ''major'' surprises in store.
** Chapter 49: [[spoiler:Leviathan is [[LetsGetDangerous capable of tracking the Normandy while in stealth with ease, and nearly kills the entire crew.]] In the aftermath of having to unshackle EDI... well, remember Siwang Weaver? The HonestCorporateExecutive who brought Shepard back this time? It turns out, he's not only not very honest, ''he's the Illusive Man.'']]
** Chapter 76: [[spoiler: While there was a great deal of {{Foreshadowing}} in hindsight and they're no longer under their thrall, it turns out the asari were originally ''created by the Reapers as a sleeper weapon.'']]



* XanatosGambit: Weaver's plan for the Phoenix invasion of the Citadel. [[spoiler: If it had worked and the councilors were killed, humanity could have stepped in. He didn't put much faith in that and arranged for Udina to take the blame for hiring pro-human mercenaries, leaving the evidence just flimsy enough that Shepard or others could find the true one responsible, Councelor Valern... who was indoctrinated by Rho. Since they do kill Valern, the Salarian Military will throw their weight behind humanity in order to distance themselves from Valern's insanity, giving the war effort a massive boost. The worst part is that ''this works.'' The codex at the end of the chapter says that that exact thing is happening.]]

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* XanatosGambit: Weaver's plan for the Phoenix invasion of the Citadel. [[spoiler: If it had worked and the councilors were killed, humanity could have stepped in. He didn't put much faith in that and arranged for Udina to take the blame for hiring pro-human mercenaries, leaving the evidence just flimsy enough that Shepard or others could find the true one responsible, Councelor Valern... who was indoctrinated by Rho. Rho, who Weaver is keeping as a prisoner and was forced to start the coup early. Since they do kill Valern, that Valern was behind it becomes public, the Salarian Military military will in all likelihood split themselves away from the dalatrasses entirely and throw their weight behind humanity in order to distance themselves from Valern's insanity, giving the war effort a massive boost.boost and causing a massive amount of power to go to the humans, turians, and asari. The worst part is that ''this works.'' The codex at the end of the chapter says that that exact thing is happening.]]
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* TimeAbyss [[spoiler: The Avatar Cycle has been passing between different species for more than '''2.5 Billion years.''']]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Shepard and Kasumi are cornered by Vido and Hoq in a gunship, when Zaeed comes out of nowhere in a Tu Wei Lu [[/note]]Atlas[[note]] and annihilates said gunship in order to take out his revenge on Vido.
* BizarreAlienBiology: inverted- Shepard mentions that the Elcor have red blood, like humans.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Shepard and Kasumi are cornered by Vido and Hoq in a gunship, when Zaeed comes out of nowhere in a Tu Wei Lu [[/note]]Atlas[[note]] (Atlas) and annihilates said gunship in order to take out his revenge on Vido.
* BizarreAlienBiology: inverted- Inverted- Shepard mentions that the Elcor have red blood, like humans.



** [[spoiler: Adahn.]]

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** [[spoiler: Adahn.Also, Adahn/Legion.]]



* CurbStompCushion: The fourth time Shepard battles Leviathan, on the Collector Ship. [[spoiler: Shepard manages to land a few blows, but the fight is overwhelmingly in Leviathan's favor, since it decided to [[IAmNotLeftHanded stop trying to capture the Avatar, and instead just kill her.]] Shepard only survives because of her team's intervention.]]

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* CurbStompCushion: The fourth time Shepard battles Leviathan, on the Collector Ship. [[spoiler: Shepard manages to land a few blows, but the fight is overwhelmingly in Leviathan's favor, since it he decided to [[IAmNotLeftHanded stop trying to capture the Avatar, and instead just kill her.]] Shepard only survives because of her team's intervention.]]



** Remember how in all the Mass Effect games, the bad guys had a seemingly endless supply of human husks to throw at you? Ever wondered where they got those when humans were relatively new on the galactic scene, and the number of human colonies weren't that large? Apparently the Author did as well, because the primary basic Reaper husk used on Palaven are Salarians, which have poorly defended colonies and nearly a trillion-strong population.

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** Remember how in all the Mass Effect games, the bad guys had a seemingly endless supply of human husks to throw at you? Ever wondered where they got those when humans were relatively new on the galactic scene, and the number of human colonies weren't that large? Apparently the Author author did as well, because the primary basic Reaper husk used on Palaven are Salarians, which who have poorly defended colonies and nearly a trillion-strong population.



* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra just simplified it because ten thousand years was a bit more believable).
** Inverted in that it turns out that the reason that humans can't be both Biotics and Benders at the same time is that Biotics is a ''form'' of Bending, just not one that anyone knew about. And since Humans can't bend multiple elements (except the Avatar), you can either be a biotic or a bender but not both. In fact, Shepard's "Natural" bending state is that of biotics, and the reason that she was capable of using airbending is because she was the avatar.
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Rael'Zorah, after learning that the geth marked him, and anybody protecting him, with death. Overlaps a little with HeroicSacrifice.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Nataraja, a Reaper super weapon/ Dark Spirit that is unleashed on Palaven.
** Meretsegger, Tuchankan death incarnate. There are only two courses of action you can take when confronted by it: Run, or Die... and there's no guarantee that running will save you. To give you a hint of how powerful this thing is, it made ''Shepard'', the '''AVATAR''', run away ''screaming''. If that doesn't tell you the threat, than consider that it is the spirit of death... for [[DeathWorld Tuchanka.]] A galactic codex entry has it on the same level of dangerous as ''Koh''. When someone suggests that they try to kill it, the response is that since it's a death spirit, all it would do is make it stronger and annoyed that someone tried. [[spoiler: Grunt walks right up to it and convinces it to fight the Reapers, since they twisted the bargain Meretsegger made with them]].

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* DoingInTheWizard: Wan was the first Avatar, Avatar[[spoiler:, but not the first ''human'' Avatar. Also, Vaatu was actually a Reaper super weapon and did not return every ten thousand years (Korra just simplified it because ten thousand years was a bit more believable).
believable to her than the cycle of extinction and Reapers).]]
** Inverted in that it turns out that the reason that humans can't be both Biotics and Benders at the same time is that [[spoiler: Biotics is a ''form'' of Bending, just not one that anyone knew about. And since Humans can't bend multiple elements (except the Avatar), you can either be a biotic or a bender but not both. In fact, Shepard's "Natural" bending state is that of biotics, and the reason that she was capable of using airbending is because she was the avatar.
Avatar.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Rael'Zorah, after learning that the geth marked him, and anybody protecting him, with death.death due to his experiments. Overlaps a little with HeroicSacrifice.]]
* EldritchAbomination: Nataraja, a Reaper super weapon/ Dark weapon/Dark Spirit that is unleashed on Palaven.
** Meretsegger, Tuchankan death incarnate. There are only two courses of action you can take when confronted by it: Run, or Die...RunOrDie... and there's no guarantee that running will save you. To give you a hint of how powerful this thing is, it made ''Shepard'', the '''AVATAR''', run away ''screaming''. screaming. If that doesn't tell you the threat, than consider that it is the main spirit of death... for [[DeathWorld Tuchanka.]] A galactic codex entry has it on the same level of dangerous as ''Koh''. When someone suggests that they try to kill it, the response is that since it's a death spirit, all it would do is make it stronger and annoyed that someone tried. [[spoiler: Grunt walks right up to it and convinces it to fight the Reapers, since they twisted the bargain the Meretsegger made with them]].



* {{Foil}}: [[spoiler: The Migrant quarians and the Rannochian quarians are definitely this. The Migrants have engineers? Due to the fallout of the Morning War, 1/3 of the Rannochians are biotics. Where the Migrants have had to maintain a population of 17 million and a one child policy, the Rannochians have been having multiple children per family (Zek'Eluus has six siblings, apparently). The Migrants hate geth, and the Rannochians attribute the fact that they survived to the geth. Whereas the Migrants are descended from an anti-geth faction which made up most of the government and military, the Rannochian's ancestors defended the geth and apparently, were composed of most of the civilian population, which was nearly destroyed due to said military/government nuking and then gassing the planet to get rid of them, [[LaserGuidedKarma prompting the geth to retaliate and completely wipe them out, before helping save the remaining civilians.]]]]



** One of Toph's descendants was the one to make First Contact with the Krogan.
* HeroicRROD: Tapping into the full power of the Avatar State will tear the user's body apart from the stress. This happened twice to Shepard; during her NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Morinth, and again when Phoenix [[spoiler: kidnaps her sister.]]

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** One of Toph's descendants was the one to make among those who made First Contact with the Krogan.
* HeroicRROD: Tapping into the full power of the Avatar State will can tear the user's body apart from the stress. This happened twice to Shepard; during her NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of Morinth, and again when Phoenix [[spoiler: kidnaps her sister.]]



** As it turns out, biotics are actually another type of bending, and the Avatar is able to harness this form.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weyrloc dies when Tali stakes him (from the head down) with an ice spear.
* InsistentTerminology: Avatar Vajrapata insists that Unaloq was not a Dark Avatar. The real thing, a ''true'' Dark Avatar, is ever so much worse because a ''true'' Dark Avatar comes not from some spirit just handing you power, it takes true suffering for an Avatar to decide to turn dark.

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** As it turns out, [[spoiler: biotics are actually another type of bending, and the Avatar is able to harness this form.
form, but due to the Avatar's presence, other humans cannot be both biotics and benders.]]
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Weyrloc dies when Tali stakes him (from from the head down) down with an compressed ice spear.
* InsistentTerminology: Avatar Vajrapata insists that Unaloq Unalaq was not a Dark Avatar. The real thing, a ''true'' Dark Avatar, is ever so much worse because a ''true'' Dark Avatar comes not from some spirit just handing you power, it takes true suffering for an Avatar actively deciding to decide to turn dark.be evil.



* LampshadeHanging: On the copy/paste nature of a lot of the "bases" you fought through in the first game. Garrus claims that the turians practice on mockups of Alliance bases frequently, which leads everyone to wonder how badly the Alliance is compromised... until Garrus mentions that most Alliance bases are just prefabs that use the same layout for simplicity's sake, and "The only variation is the positioning of the cover."

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* LampshadeHanging: On the copy/paste nature of a lot of the "bases" you fought through in the first game. Garrus claims that the turians practice on mockups of Alliance bases frequently, which leads everyone to wonder how badly the Alliance is compromised... until Garrus mentions that since most Alliance bases are just prefabs that use the same layout for simplicity's sake, and "The only variation is the positioning of the cover."



** [[spoiler: Not so benevolent now that Weaver has been revealed to be the Illusive Man. Though the benevolent part still seems to apply to most of the remaining members who weren't in the know.]]

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** [[spoiler: Not so benevolent now that Weaver has been revealed to be the Illusive Man. Though the benevolent part still seems to apply to most of the remaining members who weren't in the know.know about Phoenix.]]



* MotorMouth: People (usually Shepard) have to constantly remind Liara to take a breath before she talks herself into unconsciousness. Also Mordin, but that was how his canon form was as well.

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* MotorMouth: People (usually Shepard) have to constantly remind Liara to take a breath before she talks herself into unconsciousness. Also Mordin, but that was how his canon form self was as well.



** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit identical to the one she pioneered in [[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]].

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** When Jack is taken prisoner and has to escape from Phoenix in Book 3, she does so wearing an outfit identical similar, if not identical, to the one she pioneered in [[Franchise/MassEffect Mass Effect 2]].

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*** However, even though they are now extinct, by far the most badass were the Nazara. How badass are they, you ask? ''They fought the Reapers to a standstill, and came closer than anyone else,'' '''''ever''''' ''to defeating them outright.''

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*** However, even though they are now extinct, by far the most badass were the Nazara. How badass are they, you ask? ''They fought the Reapers to a standstill, and so far came closer than anyone else,'' '''''ever''''' ''to defeating '''''ever,''''' to ''defeating them outright.''



** Do not go back on a bargain with [[EldritchAbomination Meretsegger]]. The last thing you want to do is make the [[DeathWorld Tuchankan]] spirit of death angry, especially at you.

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** Do not go back on a bargain with the [[EldritchAbomination Meretsegger]]. The last thing you want to do is to make the [[DeathWorld Tuchankan]] Tuchanka's]] chief spirit of death angry, especially at you.



* BetaCouple: Garrus and Tali are becoming this.

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* BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Garrus and Tali are becoming this.]]



** PlayedWith: Shepard struggles with her sexuality fairly vocally.
** In addition, Asari are an excellent way of muddying the water in this issue even outside of this story; they are mono-gendered and can reproduce with ''any'' species or gender.
* BigDamnHeroes: Shepard and Kasumi are cornered by Vido and Hoq in a gunship, when Zaeed comes out of nowhere and annihilates said gunship in order to take out his revenge on Vido.

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** PlayedWith: Shepard struggles with her sexuality fairly vocally.
** In addition, Asari are an excellent way of muddying the water in this issue even outside of this story; they are mono-gendered and can reproduce with ''any'' species or gender.
vocally for a while.
* BigDamnHeroes: Shepard and Kasumi are cornered by Vido and Hoq in a gunship, when Zaeed comes out of nowhere in a Tu Wei Lu [[/note]]Atlas[[note]] and annihilates said gunship in order to take out his revenge on Vido.
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** BadassArmy: Just as much as in canon, with the Raloi and even the ''Volus'' starting to qualify: the Volus have, after the Reaper invasion began, [[spoiler: started reverse-engineering the gun that killed the Derelict Reaper on which you found Legion in the original game for use against the Reapers]], and the Raloi are unparalleled snipers.
*** However, even though they are now extinct, by far the most badass were the Nazara. How badass are they, you ask? ''They fought the Reapers to a standstill, and came closer than anyone else,'' '''''ever''''' ''to defeating them outright.''
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** [[PacificRim "First; do not touch me again. Second, do not ''ever'' touch me again."]]

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** [[PacificRim [[Film/PacificRim "First; do not touch me again. Second, do not ''ever'' touch me again."]]
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** There are also several more {{Shout Out}}s and nods to Glorious Shotgun Princess, such as Legion/Adahn's encounter with Sovereign, compared to Wuffles/Legion's encounter with Harbinger.

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