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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis Aurora Borealia]]'' is a fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis Aurora Borealia]]'' Borealis]]'' is a fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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* ShipperOnDeck: Suze really wants Herc and [[spoiler: her sister Devi]] to get together. As of Chapter 37 of ''Aurora Australis'', she's [[spoiler: been disappointed.]]
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A sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10921197/1/Aurora-Australis Aurora Australis]]'' is currently in progress.
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* TheCasanova[=/=]HandsomeLech: Scott Hansen, Herc Hansen's younger brother and co-pilot of Lucky Seven. The guy will hit on just about anything with two X-chromosomes, even though his social skills leave much to be desired. [[spoiler: In ''Aurora Australis'', this proves to be his FatalFlaw: He ends up going for a girl way too young for him, and when Herc sees it mid-Drift and mid-Kaiju battle, it shatters their handshake and bond permanently.]]
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* TheCasanova[=/=]HandsomeLech: Scott Hansen, Herc Hansen's younger brother and co-pilot of Lucky Seven. The guy will hit on just about anything with two X-chromosomes, even though his social skills leave much to be desired. [[spoiler: In ''Aurora Australis'', this proves to be his FatalFlaw: He ends up going for a girl way too young for him, and when Herc sees it the memory mid-Drift and mid-Kaiju battle, it shatters their handshake and bond permanently.]]battle... [[{{Understatement}} the results aren't pretty.]]]]
** Devi and Susanti Hassan, pilots of Vulcan Specter, are the first two-woman pilot team, and identify as Muslim. Predictably, this makes them targets for the more narrow-minded officials.
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* ThisMeansWar: Used word for word in "Tales from thefront lines" after Raleigh and Yancy fall to a prank of Bruce and Trevin. HilarityEnsues in the form of a prank war that lasts a third of the chapter.
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* ThisMeansWar: Used word for word in "Tales from thefront lines" the Front Lines" after Raleigh and Yancy fall to a prank of Bruce and Trevin. HilarityEnsues in the form of a prank war that lasts a third of the chapter.
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* TheCasanova[=/=]HandsomeLech: Scott Hansen, Herc Hansen's younger brother and co-pilot of Lucky Seven. The guy will hit on just about anything with two X-chromosomes, even though his social skills leave much to be desired. [[spoiler: In ''Aurora Australis'', this proves to be his FatalFlaw: He ends up going for a girl way too young for him, and when Herc sees it mid-Drift and mid-Kaiju battle, it shatters their handshake and bond permanently.]]
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* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
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* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue [=LaRue=] and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
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* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
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* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue [=LaRue=] and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
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* ActionGirl: every female ranger qualifies.
* BadassBookworm: to pass the first cut of the Jaeger Academy, you have to be in better physical shape than most athletes, which means that those who fail the second and third cut and go in J-Tech or Engeenering R&D can easily own a full-grown man.
** GeniusBruiser: the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
* BerserkButton: don't separate two rangers suffering from Drift shock. Just don't. Even people as stoic as ''Pentecost'' will flip out if they're separated from their partner.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: who played the marriage scene from "The Princess Bride" during the wedding of Eden Assassin's rangers? [[spoiler: The Kaidanovskys.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: Yancy was already very caring toward his little brother before they became rangers. After getting Gipsy Danger, he becomes ''much'' worse.
* BigBrotherMentor: the Gage twins often end up playing this role to the Beckets.
* BilingualBonus: everywhere.
* CallForward: everywhere.
* BadassBookworm: to pass the first cut of the Jaeger Academy, you have to be in better physical shape than most athletes, which means that those who fail the second and third cut and go in J-Tech or Engeenering R&D can easily own a full-grown man.
** GeniusBruiser: the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
* BerserkButton: don't separate two rangers suffering from Drift shock. Just don't. Even people as stoic as ''Pentecost'' will flip out if they're separated from their partner.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: who played the marriage scene from "The Princess Bride" during the wedding of Eden Assassin's rangers? [[spoiler: The Kaidanovskys.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: Yancy was already very caring toward his little brother before they became rangers. After getting Gipsy Danger, he becomes ''much'' worse.
* BigBrotherMentor: the Gage twins often end up playing this role to the Beckets.
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* ActionGirl: every Every female ranger qualifies.
* BadassBookworm:to To pass the first cut of the Jaeger Academy, you have to be in better physical shape than most athletes, which means that those who fail the second and third cut and go in J-Tech or Engeenering Engineering R&D can easily own a full-grown man.
** GeniusBruiser: In the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
* BerserkButton:don't Don't separate two rangers Rangers suffering from Drift shock. Just don't. Even people as stoic as ''Pentecost'' will flip out if they're separated from their partner.
* BewareTheQuietOnes:who Who played the marriage scene from "The Princess Bride" during the wedding of Eden Assassin's rangers? Rangers to prank President Putin? [[spoiler: The Kaidanovskys.]]
* BigBrotherInstinct: Yancy was already very caring toward his little brother before they becamerangers.Rangers. After getting Gipsy Danger, he becomes ''much'' worse.
* BigBrotherMentor:the The Gage twins often end up playing this role to the Beckets.
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* CallForward:everywhere.Everywhere.
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** GeniusBruiser: In the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
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** Meting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ... to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
* CuddleBug: as a side-effect of the Drift, rangers feel closer to one another and spend more time cuddling or seeking physical proximity. Also, any ranger under Drift shock.
* CuddleBug: as a side-effect of the Drift, rangers feel closer to one another and spend more time cuddling or seeking physical proximity. Also, any ranger under Drift shock.
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** Meting Meeting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ...expecting..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ...Japanese... to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
* CuddleBug:as As a side-effect of the Drift, rangers Rangers feel closer to one another and spend more time cuddling or seeking physical proximity. proximity with each other. Also, any ranger Ranger under Drift shock.
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* DissonantSerenity: after the fight with Yamarachi, Raleigh gets some Kaiju Blue in his lungs yet remains surprisingly calm through the whole ordeal, which freaks Yancy out.
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* DissonantSerenity: after After the fight with Yamarachi, Raleigh gets some Kaiju Blue in his lungs yet remains surprisingly calm through the whole ordeal, which freaks Yancy out.
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* DownerBeginning: "Aurora Australis" ''Aurora Australis'' starts with Scissure's attack and the bombing of Sydney.
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* LikesOlderWomen: apparently, so are the Beckets ...
* TheMentor: any ranger team older than the main cast, but mainly Caitlin Lightcap and the Gage twins.
* MultinationalTeam: except the rangers (and even then, there are cases ...), the support crews can have varried backgrounds and don't always come from the same countries.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: did Marshall Pentecost just [[SideBet weight in the Battle Of The Sexes?]]
* TheMentor: any ranger team older than the main cast, but mainly Caitlin Lightcap and the Gage twins.
* MultinationalTeam: except the rangers (and even then, there are cases ...), the support crews can have varried backgrounds and don't always come from the same countries.
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* ForegoneConclusion: ''Aurora Borealis'' chronicles the rise and Golden Age of the Jaeger program, when as many as 30 Jaegers were in service. Given by the time of the movie, there are only four...
* LikesOlderWomen: apparently,so are the Beckets ...
* TheMentor:any ranger Any Ranger team older than the main cast, but mainly Caitlin Lightcap and the Gage twins.
* MultinationalTeam:except Excepting the rangers Rangers who are normally from similar backgrounds (and even then, there are cases ...), the support crews can have varried varied backgrounds and don't always come from the same countries.
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* PetTheDog: "Esperanza". During the previous chapter, the rangers of Matador Fury, who were imprisonned for non-violent fighting against the Mexican regime, rescue a stranded ship full of civilians while Hydra Corinthian and Gipsy Danger fight off the Kaiju. In the next, they are publicly awarded a citation for bravery ... and thanked by every passengers of the ship who came to the award ceremony. D'awww ...
* PintSizedPowerhouse: little Lea Franklin, one of Raleigh and Yancy's classmates who went into Engeenering Department. Barely above five feet yet able to bring down guys bigger than she is.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Apparently the people at Fox News are prejudice assholes. No hypocrisy there.
* PopCulturedBadass: given the number of pop culture jokes that run around the Shatterdomes, not only the rangers but everyone in the Shatterdomes is well-known in modern culture and either kicks Kaiju ass or helps the ass-kickers at it.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: little Lea Franklin, one of Raleigh and Yancy's classmates who went into Engeenering Department. Barely above five feet yet able to bring down guys bigger than she is.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Apparently the people at Fox News are prejudice assholes. No hypocrisy there.
* PopCulturedBadass: given the number of pop culture jokes that run around the Shatterdomes, not only the rangers but everyone in the Shatterdomes is well-known in modern culture and either kicks Kaiju ass or helps the ass-kickers at it.
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* PetTheDog: "Esperanza". During the previous chapter, the rangers Rangers of Matador Fury, who were imprisonned imprisoned for non-violent fighting against the Mexican regime, rescue a stranded ship full of civilians while Hydra Corinthian and Gipsy Danger fight off the Kaiju. In the next, they are publicly awarded a citation for bravery ... and thanked by every passengers of the ship who came to the award ceremony. D'awww ...
* PintSizedPowerhouse: little Lea Franklin, one of Raleigh and Yancy's classmates who went intoEngeenering the Engineering Department. Barely One of the youngest of her class, barely above five feet feet, and yet able to bring down guys bigger than she is.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Apparently the people at Fox News areprejudice prejudiced assholes. No hypocrisy there.
* PopCulturedBadass: given the number of pop culture jokes that run around the Shatterdomes, not only therangers Rangers but everyone in the Shatterdomes is well-known in modern culture and either kicks Kaiju ass or helps the ass-kickers at it.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: little Lea Franklin, one of Raleigh and Yancy's classmates who went into
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* SlaveToPR: not only do rangers have to fight Kaijus, they are also celebrities in their own rights and every team has a PR representative in charge of making sure their actions remain acceptable to the public and keeping the paparazzis at bay. One chapter even discusses how a ranger's ''appearance'' is important.
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* SlaveToPR: not only do rangers Rangers have to fight Kaijus, they are also celebrities in their own rights and every team has a PR representative in charge of making sure their actions remain acceptable to the public and keeping the paparazzis paparazzi at bay. One chapter even discusses how a ranger's Ranger's ''appearance'' is important.important.
** A few of the Rangers get the short end of the stick on this front. Yankee Star's pilots Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell get flak for not only being a mixed-raced partnership, but also for Tanisha's less than svelte figure and Caleb's homosexuality and ''freckles''. Ilisapie Flint, one of the pilots of Chrome Brutus, gets similar flak to Tanisha for her "heavier" physique.
** Shaolin Rogue's female pilot, Fei-Yen Wang, has the opposite problem: she's so attractive that PR has pushed her wiry, gangly Drift partner, Huan Che, to the side to showcase her as their media darling. The fact that they're supposedly dating doesn't help matters at all.
** A few of the Rangers get the short end of the stick on this front. Yankee Star's pilots Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell get flak for not only being a mixed-raced partnership, but also for Tanisha's less than svelte figure and Caleb's homosexuality and ''freckles''. Ilisapie Flint, one of the pilots of Chrome Brutus, gets similar flak to Tanisha for her "heavier" physique.
** Shaolin Rogue's female pilot, Fei-Yen Wang, has the opposite problem: she's so attractive that PR has pushed her wiry, gangly Drift partner, Huan Che, to the side to showcase her as their media darling. The fact that they're supposedly dating doesn't help matters at all.
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* ThisMeansWar: used word for word in "Tales from thefront lines" after Raleigh and Yancy fall to a prank of Bruce and Trevin. HilarityEnsues in the form of a prank war that lasts a third of the chapter.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raleigh and Yancy did ''not'' get along with Yankee Star's pilots, Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell. At first. First tag-team in the simulator ended in one big EpicFail.
* ThisMeansWar:used Used word for word in "Tales from thefront lines" after Raleigh and Yancy fall to a prank of Bruce and Trevin. HilarityEnsues in the form of a prank war that lasts a third of the chapter.
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* TricksterTwins: the Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Literature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
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* TricksterTwins: the The Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Literature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis Aurora Borealia]]'' is a fanfic written by [[ https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis Aurora Borealia]]'' is a fanfic written by [[ https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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''[[Aurora Borealis: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis]]'' is a fanfic written by [[Jocelyn: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
The story serves as a prequel to the Pacific Rim movie, drawing from many trustful sources the author could find. It tells the tale of Raleigh and Yancy Becket as they enter the Academy, become the pilots of Gipsy Danger and the life of rangers and their crew during the Golden Age of the Jaeger program. A sequel called "Aurora Australis" is on the way, this time focused on the Australian team of Herc and Chuck Hansen. There is also a side story, "Tales From The Front Lines" which is a series of one-shots expending on the background and lives of several characters. And is also quite funny to read ...
The story serves as a prequel to the Pacific Rim movie, drawing from many trustful sources the author could find. It tells the tale of Raleigh and Yancy Becket as they enter the Academy, become the pilots of Gipsy Danger and the life of rangers and their crew during the Golden Age of the Jaeger program. A sequel called "Aurora Australis" is on the way, this time focused on the Australian team of Herc and Chuck Hansen. There is also a side story, "Tales From The Front Lines" which is a series of one-shots expending on the background and lives of several characters. And is also quite funny to read ...
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The story serves as a prequel to
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To ''Jocelyn'': Merry Christmas! I hope you'll like it. The page is still more or less under construction, but I'm working on it, don't worry.
~ ''Elia41''
~ ''Elia41''
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* DownerBeginning: "Aurora Australis" starts with Scissure's attack and the bombing of Sydney.
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* MulticulturalTeam: except the rangers (and even then, there are cases ...), the support crews can have varried backgrounds and don't always come from the same countries.
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''[[Aurora Borealis https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis]]'' is a fanfic written by [[Jocelyn https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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''[[Aurora Borealis Borealis: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis]]'' is a fanfic written by [[Jocelyn [[Jocelyn: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
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** "When you are in combat, you have to make décisions. And you have to live with the consequences." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
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** "When you are in combat, you have to make décisions.decisions. And you have to live with the consequences." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
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* SlaveToPR: not only do rangers have to fight Kaijus, they are also celebrities in their own rights and every team has a PR representative in charge of making sure their actions remain acceptable to the public and keeping the paparazzis at bay. One chapter even discusses how a ranger's ''appearance'' is important.
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* BadassBookworm: to pass the first cut of the Jaeger Academy, you have to be in better physical shape than most athletes, which means that those who fail the second and third cut and go in J-Tech or Engeenering R&D can easily own a full-grown man.
** GeniusBruiser: the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
** GeniusBruiser: the same way, the first cut also teaches science and the likes, and a written test is part of the final exam. Those who pass and make it through the second and third cut are also well-read ... and pilot Jaegers.
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** "There are choices you make (...) You have to learn to live with them." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
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** "There "When you are choices in combat, you make (...) You have to learn make décisions. And you have to live with them.the consequences." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
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* PopCulturedBadass: given the number of pop culture jokes that run around the Shatterdomes, not only the rangers but everyone in the Shatterdomes is well-known in modern culture and either kicks Kaiju ass or helps the ass-kickers at it.
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* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a Relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
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* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a Relationship relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
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** Meting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ... "to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
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** Meting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ... "to to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
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To ''Jocelyn'': Merry Christmas! I hope you'll like it. The page is still more or less u, nder construction, but I'm working on it, don't worry.
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To ''Jocelyn'': Merry Christmas! I hope you'll like it.
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To ''Jocelyn'': Merry Christmas! I hope you'll like it.
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* EmbarassingNickname: "Strawberry" for Yancy and "Sunshine" for Raleigh because of a teen magazine. Raleigh does ''not'' like it.
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* EmbarassingNickname: EmbarrassingNickname: "Strawberry" for Yancy and "Sunshine" for Raleigh because of a teen magazine. Raleigh does ''not'' like it.
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* EmbarassingNicknames: "Strawberry" for Yancy and "Sunshine" for Raleigh because of a teen magazine. Raleigh does ''not'' like it.
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* BewareTheQuietOnes: who played the marriage scene from "The Princess Bride" during the wedding of Eden Assassin's rangers? [[spoiler: The Kaidanovskys.]]
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** "There are choices you make (...) You have to learn to live with them." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
** "It's not just about trust." Stephanie Lanphier to Yancy. "It's about respect." Mako says the exact same thing to Raleigh in the movie.
** Meting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ... "to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
** "There are choices you make (...) You have to learn to live with them." The sixth chapter, which deals with the funerals of Raleigh and Yancy's mother, is called "The choices you live with".
** "It's not just about trust." Stephanie Lanphier to Yancy. "It's about respect." Mako says the exact same thing to Raleigh in the movie.
** Meting with their new PR representative, Raleigh mutters to his brother "She is not what I was expecting ..." in French, only for the woman to answer in the same language "Better or worse?" Fast forward to the movie and Mako makes the exact same comment in Japanese ... "to Raleigh, who answers in kind.
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* ThisMeansWar: used word for word in "Tales from thefront lines" after Raleigh and Yancy fall to a prank of Bruce and Trevin. HilarityEnsues in the form of a prank war that lasts a third of the chapter.
* TheTrickster: Tendo, ever since the Academy. Arranging a chain of deals? Playing pranks on the other team members? Taking bets and holding the pools? Playing TheSocialExpert? He's your man.
* TheTrickster: Tendo, ever since the Academy. Arranging a chain of deals? Playing pranks on the other team members? Taking bets and holding the pools? Playing TheSocialExpert? He's your man.
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* TricksterTwins: the Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Littérature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
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* TricksterTwins: the Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Littérature/HarryPotter [[Literature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raleigh and Yancy did ''not'' get along Yankee Star's pilots, Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell. At first. First tag-team in the simulator ended in one big EpicFail.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raleigh and Yancy did ''not'' get along Yankee Star's pilots, Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell. At first. First tag-team in the simulator ended in one big EpicFail.EpicFail.
* TricksterTwins: the Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Littérature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
* TricksterTwins: the Gage twins, Bruce and Trevin. One Marshall compares them to the [[Littérature/HarryPotter Weasley twins]] and a prank war with the Beckets in Los Angeles ends with both groups earning eleven demerits ... in five days.
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* BerserkButton: don't separate two rangers suffering from Drift shock. Just don't. Even people as stoic as ''Pentecost'' will flip out if they're separated from their partner.
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* EverybodyWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
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* EverybodyWentToSchoolTogether: DissonantSerenity: after the fight with Yamarachi, Raleigh gets some Kaiju Blue in his lungs yet remains surprisingly calm through the whole ordeal, which freaks Yancy out.
* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
* EveryoneWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
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* PetTheDog: "Esperanza". During the previous chapter, the rangers of Matador Fury, who were imprisonned for non-violent fighting against the Mexican regime, rescue a stranded ship full of civilians while Hydra Corinthian and Gipsy Danger fight off the Kaiju. In the next, they are publicly awarded a citation for bravery ... and thanked by every passengers of the ship who came to the award ceremony. D'awww ...
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* EverybodyWentToSchoolTogether: Class 2016-B held Raleigh and Yancy, Tendo, Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier and the pilots of Vulcan Specter, Devi and Susanti Hassan.
* PintSizedPowerhouse: little Lea Franklin, one of Raleigh and Yancy's classmates who went into Engeenering Department. Barely above five feet yet able to bring down guys bigger than she is.
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* TeamMom: Carolina Olivares, Gipsy's PR representative. The crew kindly nicknames her "Abuela" (Grandma in Spanish).
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* TeamMom: Carolina Olivares, Gipsy's PR representative. The crew kindly nicknames her "Abuela" (Grandma in Spanish).Spanish).
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raleigh and Yancy did ''not'' get along Yankee Star's pilots, Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell. At first. First tag-team in the simulator ended in one big EpicFail.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Raleigh and Yancy did ''not'' get along Yankee Star's pilots, Tanisha Davis and Caleb Mitchell. At first. First tag-team in the simulator ended in one big EpicFail.
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* ParentalAbandonment: Raleigh and Yancy suffer this at the beginning of the story, first with their [[MissingMom mother's death]], then with their father's abandonment ... [[DisappearedDad and later death]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10514009/1/Aurora-Borealis]]'' is a fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/169252/Jocelyn]] on Fanfiction.net
The story serves as a prequel to the Pacific Rim movie, drawing from many trustful sources the author could find. It tells the tale of Raleigh and Yancy Becket as they enter the Academy, become the pilots of Gipsy Danger and the life of rangers and their crew during the Golden Age of the Jaeger program. A sequel called "Aurora Australis" is on the way, this time focused on the Australian team of Herc and Chuck Hansen. There is also a side story, "Tales From The Front Lines" which is a series of one-shots expending on the background and lives of several characters. And is also quite funny to read ...
!! This fic contains the following Tropes:
* ActionGirl: every female ranger qualifies.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Yancy was already very caring toward his little brother before they became rangers. After getting Gipsy Danger, he becomes ''much'' worse.
* BigBrotherMentor: the Gage twins often end up playing this role to the Beckets.
* CuddleBug: as a side-effect of the Drift, rangers feel closer to one another and spend more time cuddling or seeking physical proximity. Also, any ranger under Drift shock.
* {{Determinator}}: '''Raleigh'''. Simply put, the kid never gives up. It is best exemplified during the Final Spar where he lasts longer than anyone else and Pentecost later admits that, in the end, he forced ''them'' to yield and stop the fight, because he himself would never surrender.
* LikesOlderWomen: apparently, so are the Beckets ...
* TheMentor: any ranger team older than the main cast, but mainly Caitlin Lightcap and the Gage twins.
* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a Relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
* TeamDad: Antwan Ferrier, Gipsy's personnel coordinator.
* TeamMom: Carolina Olivares, Gipsy's PR representative. The crew kindly nicknames her "Abuela" (Grandma in Spanish).
The story serves as a prequel to the Pacific Rim movie, drawing from many trustful sources the author could find. It tells the tale of Raleigh and Yancy Becket as they enter the Academy, become the pilots of Gipsy Danger and the life of rangers and their crew during the Golden Age of the Jaeger program. A sequel called "Aurora Australis" is on the way, this time focused on the Australian team of Herc and Chuck Hansen. There is also a side story, "Tales From The Front Lines" which is a series of one-shots expending on the background and lives of several characters. And is also quite funny to read ...
!! This fic contains the following Tropes:
* ActionGirl: every female ranger qualifies.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Yancy was already very caring toward his little brother before they became rangers. After getting Gipsy Danger, he becomes ''much'' worse.
* BigBrotherMentor: the Gage twins often end up playing this role to the Beckets.
* CuddleBug: as a side-effect of the Drift, rangers feel closer to one another and spend more time cuddling or seeking physical proximity. Also, any ranger under Drift shock.
* {{Determinator}}: '''Raleigh'''. Simply put, the kid never gives up. It is best exemplified during the Final Spar where he lasts longer than anyone else and Pentecost later admits that, in the end, he forced ''them'' to yield and stop the fight, because he himself would never surrender.
* LikesOlderWomen: apparently, so are the Beckets ...
* TheMentor: any ranger team older than the main cast, but mainly Caitlin Lightcap and the Gage twins.
* SchoolgirlLesbian: Kennedy LaRue and Stephanie Lanphier, the future pilots of Hydra Corinthian, went to the same school and end up in a Relationship during their time at the Academy. No one saw it coming.
* TeamDad: Antwan Ferrier, Gipsy's personnel coordinator.
* TeamMom: Carolina Olivares, Gipsy's PR representative. The crew kindly nicknames her "Abuela" (Grandma in Spanish).