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* ACupAngst: Though impossible for ponies to have breast sizes, the equivalent occurs where Rainbow Dash is rather sensitive about her "lack of curves." Along with her tomcoltish nature, this leads to very [[MistakenForGay unflattering]] [[BerserkButton assumptions]].
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* ACupAngst: Though impossible for ponies to have breast sizes, the The equivalent occurs where Rainbow Dash is rather sensitive about her "lack of curves." Along with her tomcoltish nature, this leads to very [[MistakenForGay unflattering]] [[BerserkButton assumptions]].
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
** She actually begins to show signs of this. In particular, she tails Caramel on Hearts and Hooves day to be certain that Applejack rejects his advances.
** She actually begins to show signs of this. In particular, she tails Caramel on Hearts and Hooves day to be certain that Applejack rejects his advances.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: ClingyJealousGirl:
** Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
**She Dash actually begins to show signs of this. In particular, she tails Caramel on Hearts and Hooves day to be certain that Applejack rejects his advances.
** Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The last update came in March 10 2012, with no word from the author.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The last update came in March 10 2012, with no word from the author.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that she almost broke his neck.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering referring to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that she almost broke his neck.
**JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and she flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade facade falters for a moment, and she flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. There's been over seventy weeks since the last update, with no word from the author.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. There's been over seventy weeks since the The last update, update came in March 10 2012, with no word from the author.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by [=EminenceGris=], found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3747/Assumptions here]].
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} by [=EminenceGris=], found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3747/Assumptions here]].
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This Is A Wiki, not a forum thread. Avoid the natter.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The author hasn't even logged in since April 2012.
** Eminence Gris has logged in again.
*** And hasn't since seven weeks ago now.
** Eminence Gris has logged in again.
*** And hasn't since seven weeks ago now.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The author hasn't even logged in There's been over seventy weeks since April 2012.
** Eminence Gris has logged in again.
*** And hasn't since seven weeks ago now.the last update, with no word from the author.
** Eminence Gris has logged in again.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hottip:*: Though the dream he had in chapter 8 indicates, at least, confused feelings]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannotSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hottip:*: Though it[[note]]Though the dream he had in chapter 8 indicates, at least, confused feelings]]. feelings[[/note]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannotSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy another[[note]]Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].her[[/note]].
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:*: Though Caramel did have distinct hoof-shaped bruises on him, but he identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:*: Though [[note]]Though Caramel did have distinct hoof-shaped bruises on him, but he identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]][[/note]]
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*** And hasn't since seven weeks ago now.
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* EverybodyKnewAlready: Rainbow knows a small hole in the roof of the Apple Family Barn where she can peek in, which she uses often. The Apple Family knows both facts.
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* TheNotSecret: Rainbow knows a small hole in the roof of the Apple Family Barn where she can peek in, which she uses often. The Apple Family knows both facts.
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out states his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japan}} Neighpon]].
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out states his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japan}} [[UsefulNotes/{{Japan}} Neighpon]].
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** HopeSpot: EminenceGirls has logged in again.
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** HopeSpot: EminenceGirls has logged in again.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The author hasn't even logged in in over four months, let alone update the fic.
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* DeadFic: Heading straight to this territory. The author hasn't even logged in in over four months, let alone update the fic.since April 2012.
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[[quoteright:350:http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/caramel_rainbow_dash_4551.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:350: Will we ever see these two together? [[DeadFic Probably not.]]]]
[[caption-width-right:350: Will we ever see these two together? [[DeadFic Probably not.]]]]
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* TwiceShy: Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.
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* MasculineGirlFeminineBoy: As if you hadn't guessed it, Rainbow Dash and Caramel's relationship.
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Natter bait.
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* {{Jossed}}: During [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay Hearts and Hooves Day]], Caramel was considered desirable enough to already have a girlfriend. For the sake of this story, [[BetterThanCanon those few seconds were ignored]], fortunately.
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* {{Jossed}}: During [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay Hearts and Hooves Day]], Caramel was considered desirable enough to already have a girlfriend. For the sake of this story, [[BetterThanCanon those few seconds were ignored]], fortunately.ignored.
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* MistakenForGay: Rainbow Dash's signature characteristic, and a driving force of the conflict from the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, and hoped to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
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* MistakenForGay: MistakenForGay:
** Rainbow Dash's signature characteristic, and a driving force of the conflict from the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, and hoped to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
** Rainbow Dash's signature characteristic, and a driving force of the conflict from the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, and hoped to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
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Unfortunately, it appears to be a DeadFic.
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately, seems to be this way, as there hasn't been a peep from the author in over 6 months.
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately, seems Heading straight to be this way, as there territory. The author hasn't been a peep from the author even logged in in over 6 months.four months, let alone update the fic.
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* DeadFic: Unfortunately, seems to be this way, as there hasn't been a peep from the author in over 6 months.
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Pettanko is a fanspeak term and useful note - it shouldn\'t be used as a trope. A Cup Angst is the correct trope here, and is already on the page.
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* {{Pettanko}}: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
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* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking is on par with Sweetie Belle's, to say the least. She managed to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
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* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking is on par with Sweetie Belle's, to say the least. She managed to [[BeyondTheImpossible [[EpicFail burn tea]].
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* {{Lolicon}}/{{Shotacon}}: Poor Caramel. He is generally assumed to be the latter by many ponies in Ponyville and is briefly thought to be the former by Applejack when Rainbow Dash crashes into him and knocks him out then abandons him a short distance from where the Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse is. Applejack was about to beat the poor fellow up worse than he already had been if her brother hadn't talked her down.
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* MistakenForPedophile: Poor Caramel. He is generally assumed to be one by many ponies in Ponyville and is briefly thought to be one by Applejack when Rainbow Dash crashes into him and knocks him out then abandons him a short distance from where the Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse is. Applejack was about to beat the poor fellow up worse than he already had been if her brother hadn't talked her down.
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Why was the capital W left there, instead of the lower case one?
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac, Who, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by them when he was little]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac, Who, who, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by them when he was little]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac, Wwho, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by them when he was little]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac, Wwho, Who, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by them when he was little]].
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* RomanticFalseLead: If you came into this expecting Applejack and caramel to be together, you will be disapointed.
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* RomanticFalseLead: If you came into this expecting Applejack and caramel Caramel to be together, you will be disapointed.
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Her name is one word. Also, there should be a space after a period.
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** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close...and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
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** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close... and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Apple Bloom [[LampshadeHanging gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Apple Bloom Applebloom [[LampshadeHanging gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close... and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
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** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close... and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom [[LampshadeHanging gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom Apple Bloom [[LampshadeHanging gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: Unintened. After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the ways she warms up to him.
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* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: Unintened.Unintended. After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the ways she warms up to him.
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* HeroicBSOD: Chapter XI. During the Winter Wrap Up, they accidentally wake up a family of snakes ([[ContrivedCoincidence again]]) and Big Mac just freezes up in shock
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* HeroicBSOD: Chapter XI. During the Winter Wrap Up, they accidentally wake up a family of snakes ([[ContrivedCoincidence again]]) and Big Mac just freezes up in shockshock.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes?: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac that, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by snakes when he was little]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes?: WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Chapter XI gives us Big Mac that, Mac, Wwho, yes, is afraid of snakes. [[spoiler: It's because his parents were killed by snakes them when he was little]]little]].
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