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* YoureNotMyType / IncompatibleOrientation: Applejack lets Caramel down as lightly as possible, because [[Asexuality she's just not interested in romance]].
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* YoureNotMyType / IncompatibleOrientation: Applejack lets Caramel down as lightly as possible, because [[Asexuality [[{{Asexuality}} she's just not interested in romance]].
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
** She actually begins to show signs of this. In particular, she tails Caramel on Hearts and Hooves day to be certain that Applejack rejects his advances.
** She actually begins to show signs of this. In particular, she tails Caramel on Hearts and Hooves day to be certain that Applejack rejects his advances.
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* CryIntoChest: After Caramel gets rejected by Applejack, Rainbow makes sure to drop by his house the next day, stroke his mane, and tell him everything's okay.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: Most of Chapter 10. Caramel realizes that Applejack isn't interested in him, but he gets the chance to be with Rainbow. Fluttershy, despite [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay yesterday's]] misunderstanding
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* ThrowTheDogABone: Most of Chapter 10. Caramel realizes that Applejack isn't interested in him, but he gets the chance to be with Rainbow. Fluttershy, despite [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay yesterday's]] misunderstandingmisunderstanding, successfuly asks Big Macintosh out. And Rarity and Pinkie have a "date."
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Subverted thrice the same chapter.
** First Caramel finally builds up the courage to tell Applejack his feelings, but she spots this and lets him down gently before he could finish his second sentence.
** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close... and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
** The same day, Fluttershy works up the courage to go confess to Big Macintosh, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay after finding out yesterday's events]]... asks him out.
** First Caramel finally builds up the courage to tell Applejack his feelings, but she spots this and lets him down gently before he could finish his second sentence.
** The next day, Rainbow Dash comforts Caramel, pulls him close... and then asks him if he wants to go to a Wonderbolts show.
** The same day, Fluttershy works up the courage to go confess to Big Macintosh, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay after finding out yesterday's events]]... asks him out.
* {{Jossed}}: During [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay Hearts and Hooves Day]], Caramel was considered desirable enough to already have a girlfriend. For the sake of this story, [[BetterThanCanon those few seconds were ignored]], fortunately.
* TheNotSecret: Rainbow knows a small hole in the roof of the Apple Family Barn where she can peek in, which she uses often. The Apple Family knows both facts.
* OddCouple: Rainbow Dash and Caramel, full stop, even before they were intersted romantically. But Rarity and Pinkie Pie's relationship [[StealthPun takes the cake]].
* OddCouple: Rainbow Dash and Caramel, full stop, even before they were intersted romantically. But Rarity and Pinkie Pie's relationship [[StealthPun takes the cake]].
* RomanticFalseLead: If you came into this expecting Applejack and caramel to be together, you will be disapointed.
* ThrowTheDogABone: Most of Chapter 10. Caramel realizes that Applejack isn't interested in him, but he gets the chance to be with Rainbow. Fluttershy, despite [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E17HeartsAndHoovesDay yesterday's]] misunderstanding
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, [[HugAndComment along with a hug]], by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, [[HugAndComment along with a hug]], by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.Applejack.
* YoureNotMyType / IncompatibleOrientation: Applejack lets Caramel down as lightly as possible, because [[Asexuality she's just not interested in romance]].
* YoureNotMyType / IncompatibleOrientation: Applejack lets Caramel down as lightly as possible, because [[Asexuality she's just not interested in romance]].
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* YaoiFangirl: Lyra, who walks away chuckling after seeing Big Mac and Caramel trip and land in a heap.
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* {{Lolicon}}/{{Shotacon}}: Poor Caramel. He is generally assumed to be the latter by many ponies in Ponyville and is briefly thought to be the former by Applejack when Rainbow Dash crashes into him and knocks him out then abandons him a short distance from where the Cutie Mark Crusaders clubhouse is. Applejack was about to beat the poor fellow up worse than he already had been if her brother hadn't talked her down.
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** Caramel has it even worse, with many ponies (including Applejack at first) thinking that he's not only gay but a pedophile to boot.
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* HypocriticalHumor: In Chapter Nine, Rainbow asks Applejack about how she feels about Caramel. To her frustration, Applejack doesn't (or plays along) realize she's asking what she thinks of him ''romantically''. The irony emerges when Rainbow calls Applejack dense, while she's the one with romantic feelings for Caramel.
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* ShutUpKiss: Done by Rarity on Pinkie Pie, when they got left in the desert. How much of it was romance and how much of it was to get Pinkie to shut up remains to be seen.
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A lot of words describe Rainbow Dash. Athletic. Lazy. Brash. But her main problem stems from how others assume that list includes [[MistakenForGay fillyfooler]]. After her big dad is ruined by this stereotype, Rainbow [[JustForPun dashes]] off to collect her thoughts.
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A lot of words describe Rainbow Dash. Athletic. Lazy. Brash. But her main problem stems from how others assume that list includes [[MistakenForGay fillyfooler]]. After her big dad date is ruined by this stereotype, Rainbow [[JustForPun dashes]] off to collect her thoughts.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hottip:*: Though the dream he had in chapter indicates, at least, confused feelings]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannotSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hottip:*: Though the dream he had in chapter 8 indicates, at least, confused feelings]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannotSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:*: Though Caramel did have distinct pony-shaped hoofmarks on him, but her identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:*: Though Caramel did have distinct pony-shaped hoofmarks hoof-shaped bruises on him, but her he identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hotip:*:though the dream he had in a recent chapter indicates a reciprocated feeling]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannoTSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hotip:*:though it[[hottip:*: Though the dream he had in a recent chapter indicates a reciprocated feeling]]. indicates, at least, confused feelings]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on each other, but CannoTSpitItOut CannotSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too low-grade for her]].
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:* Though Caramel did have distinct pony-shaped hoofmarks on him, but her identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:* [[hottip:*: Though Caramel did have distinct pony-shaped hoofmarks on him, but her identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom [[LampshadeHangine gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom [[LampshadeHangine [[LampshadeHanging gets to mull over the question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres.
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres. [[hottip:* Though Caramel did have distinct pony-shaped hoofmarks on him, but her identified her anyway by her hoof size and recognizing her hair.]]
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom gets to mull over the question while enjoying her new leg cast.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself and dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres.
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer Rainbow Dash drinks, intended for Caramel.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that Rainbow almost broke his neck.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking hasn't killed killed anyone yet, but she did manage to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself and dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres.
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer Rainbow Dash drinks, intended for Caramel.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that Rainbow almost broke his neck.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking hasn't killed killed anyone yet, but she did manage to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom [[LampshadeHangine gets to mull over the question question]] while enjoying her new leg cast.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself and dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her[[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
[[SomethingElseAlsoRises wingboner]].
* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison Inever Never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres.
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer intended for Caramel that Rainbow Dashdrinks, intended for Caramel.
drinks.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out thatRainbow she almost broke his neck.
* ** JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cookinghasn't killed killed anyone yet, but she did manage is on par with Sweetie Belle's, to say the least. She managed to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
* MistakenForGay:A Rainbow Dash's signature characteristic, and a driving force of the conflict during from the start. Even Pinkie Pie thinks this, who was hoping and hoped to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and she flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself and dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her
* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer intended for Caramel that Rainbow Dash
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking
* MistakenForGay:
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and she flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
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* NotADate: [[SarcasmMode Sure Rainbow.]] Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
* OppositesAttract: Rainbow's budding feelings for Caramel can best be desribed as this.
* OppositesAttract: Rainbow's budding feelings for Caramel can best be desribed as this.
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* NotADate: [[SarcasmMode Sure Rainbow.]] Sure, Rainbow. Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
happenings.]]
* OppositesAttract: Rainbow's budding feelings for Caramel can best bedesribed described as this.
* OppositesAttract: Rainbow's budding feelings for Caramel can best be
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* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the ways she warms up to him.
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* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: Unintened. After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the ways she warms up to him.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for caramel. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on eachother, but are too shy to confront the other.
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Caramel is in love with Applejack, who hardly notices him. Rainbow Dash is slowly falling for caramel. Caramel, who doesn't really notice it[[hotip:*:though the dream he had in a recent chapter indicates a reciprocated feeling]]. At the same time, Fluttershy and Big Macintosh both have crushes on eachother, each other, but are CannoTSpitItOut due to poor assumptions both of themselves and one another[[hottip:*:Fluttershy thinks Mac is a womanizer, while he considers himself too shy to confront the other.low-grade for her]].
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* ButtMonkey: Caramel
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* ButtMonkey: CaramelCaramel. Almost every accident has him on the receiving end of something nasty. The first incident is PlayedForDrama later, though.
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* OppositesAttract: Rainbow's budding feelings for Caramel can best be desribed as this.
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* [[INeverSaidItWasPoison I never Said It Was A Pony]]: How Caramel figures out Rainbow Dash was the one who crashed into him at Sweet Apple Acres.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow Dash gets a version of this when Caramel figures out Rainbow was the one who crashed into him in the forest, then failed to mention it while simultaneously taking advantage of his kindness. Her JerkassFacade falters for a moment, and flies off so Caramel won't see her crying.
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* ACupAngst: Though impossible for ponies to have breast sizes, the equivalent occurs where Rainbow Dash is rather sensitive about her "lack of curves." Along with her tomcoltish nature, this leads to very [[MistakenForGay unflattering]] [[BerserkButton assumptions]].
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Okay, I pored over it now. I\'ll just hide my cyanide pill and not look too hard at the spelling for a while.
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japan}} Neighpon]].
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out states his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japan}} Neighpon]].
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow is watching. She doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow Dash is watching. She Rainbow doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGOld / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGOld JerkWithAHeartOfGold / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
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* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie, Pie thinks this, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
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* NotADate: Sure Rainbow. Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
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* NotADate: [[SarcasmMode Sure Rainbow. Rainbow.]] Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
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* PlotParallel: Caramel and rainbow are slowly getting closer, while the same is happening to Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.
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* PlotParallel: Caramel and rainbow Rainbow are slowly getting closer, while the same is happening to Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.
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* SnowMeansLove: Rainbow and Caramel spend some time together in Canterlot to look at the sights, right down to the classic "catch snowflakes with our tongues" scene.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the way she warms up to him.
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramel as a crush on Applejack, while Rainbow Dash is starting to fall for Caramel.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, along with a hug, by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the way she warms up to him.
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramel as a crush on Applejack, while Rainbow Dash is starting to fall for Caramel.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, along with a hug, by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
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* SnowMeansLove: Rainbow and Caramel spend some time together in wintery Canterlot to look at the sights, right down to the classic "catch snowflakes with our tongues" scene.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of theway ways she warms up to him.
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramelas a has an unrequited crush on Applejack, while Rainbow Dash is starting to fall for Caramel.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in hishouse.
house until she woke up.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, [[HugAndComment along with ahug, hug]], by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramel
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, [[HugAndComment along with a
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* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
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* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself and dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japn}} Neighpon]].
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* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japn}} [[{{Japan}} Neighpon]].
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How\'d I forget this?
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by [=EminenceGris=]
[=EminenceGris=], found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3747/Assumptions here]].
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGOld / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
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* Pettanko: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
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* Pettanko: {{Pettanko}}: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
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* {{Foil}}: Caramel and Rainbow Dash are almost exact opposites personality-wise.
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.house.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, along with a hug, by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Said word-for-word, along with a hug, by Rainbow Dash, to assure Caramel he has a chance to win over Applejack.
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* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[IfYouKnowWhatIMean iment]]" with her.
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* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[IfYouKnowWhatIMean exper]][[LampshadedDoubleEntendre iment]]" with her.
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* CrashIntoHello: Rainbow Dash fails a trick and plows into Caramel. However, he's knocked unconcious by this, and Rainbow [[Jerkass just leaves him there]]. Creates drama when Caramel finds out she was behind it.
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* CrashIntoHello: Rainbow Dash fails a trick and plows into Caramel. However, he's knocked unconcious by this, and Rainbow [[Jerkass [[{{Jerkass}} just leaves him there]]. Creates drama when Caramel finds out she was behind it.it.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom gets to mull over the question while enjoying her new leg cast.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: What did you expect from the Cutie Mark Crusaders Gravity Defiers? Applebloom gets to mull over the question while enjoying her new leg cast.
* MistakenForGay: A driving force of the conflict during the start. Even Pinkie Pie, who was hoping to "[[BiTheWay exper]][[IfYouKnowWhatIMean iment]]" with her.
* Pettanko: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
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* Pettanko: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
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A very different set of words describe Caramel. Meek. Introverted. Undervalued. His main problem is that when others don't think of him as unimportant, he's a pedophillic coltcuddler. But after two chance meetings in the [[CrashIntoHello Everfree Forest]] and a [[WhatDidIDoLastNight bar]], the new breakfast-buddies slowly learn to look past what others think about them.
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A very different set of words describe Caramel. Meek. Introverted. Undervalued. His main problem is that when others don't think of him as unimportant, he's a pedophillic coltcuddler. But after two chance meetings in the in [[CrashIntoHello Everfree Forest]] the Sweet Apple Acres fields]] and a [[WhatDidIDoLastNight bar]], the new breakfast-buddies slowly learn to look past what others think about them.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Caramel, but also Big Macintosh when around Fluttershy.
* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japn}} Neighpon]].
* ButchLesbian: {{Subverted}}, but PlayedForDrama when everyone assumes the athletic, tomboyish Rainbow Dash is this way.
* ButtMonkey: Caramel
* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow is watching. She doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
* CrashIntoHello: Rainbow Dash fails a trick and plows into Caramel. However, he's knocked unconcious by this, and Rainbow [[Jerkass just leaves him there]]. Creates drama when Caramel finds out she was behind it.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer Rainbow Dash drinks, intended for Caramel.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that Rainbow almost broke his neck.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGOld / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking hasn't killed killed anyone yet, but she did manage to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
* NiceGuy: Caramel, big time. One of the reasons Rainbow is becoming fond of him.
* NeverMyFault: PlayedForDrama where Rainbow's huge ego makes it impossible for her to outright apologize when Caramel find out she was the one to crash into him. She eventually gets a half-hearted response out the next day, and Caramel decides getting to know her better was a fair tradeoff.
* NotADate: Sure Rainbow. Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
* PlotParallel: Caramel and rainbow are slowly getting closer, while the same is happening to Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Coltfriend]]: This is the first sentence out of Rainbow's mouth when Caramel introduces her to his siblings.
* SnowMeansLove: Rainbow and Caramel spend some time together in Canterlot to look at the sights, right down to the classic "catch snowflakes with our tongues" scene.
* Pettanko: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the way she warms up to him.
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramel as a crush on Applejack, while Rainbow Dash is starting to fall for Caramel.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Caramel, but also Big Macintosh when around Fluttershy.
* {{Bishonen}}: Caramel, when dressed up. Rarity even flat out his getup is all the rage in [[{{Japn}} Neighpon]].
* ButchLesbian: {{Subverted}}, but PlayedForDrama when everyone assumes the athletic, tomboyish Rainbow Dash is this way.
* ButtMonkey: Caramel
* ClingyJealousGirl: Rarity tries to invoke this by snuggling up with Caramel while Rainbow is watching. She doesn't say anything, but her reaction is all Rarity needs to understand how Rainbow feels about Caramel.
* CrashIntoHello: Rainbow Dash fails a trick and plows into Caramel. However, he's knocked unconcious by this, and Rainbow [[Jerkass just leaves him there]]. Creates drama when Caramel finds out she was behind it.
* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Caramel cleans himself dresses into a formal gettup for a party at Sweet Apple Acres. Poor Rainbow Dash has a hard time hiding her [[MemeticMutation Wingboner]].
* InstantSedation: The spiked beer Rainbow Dash drinks, intended for Caramel.
* {{Jerkass}}: Rainbow can be very obnoxious and brazen, refering to Caramel as a "weakling" and refusing to outright apologize when he finds out that Rainbow almost broke his neck.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGOld / JerkassFacade: On the other hand, she is warming up to him significantly, and was on the edge of tears when Caramel confronted her.
* LethalChef: Rainbow Dash's cooking hasn't killed killed anyone yet, but she did manage to [[BeyondTheImpossible burn tea]].
* NiceGuy: Caramel, big time. One of the reasons Rainbow is becoming fond of him.
* NeverMyFault: PlayedForDrama where Rainbow's huge ego makes it impossible for her to outright apologize when Caramel find out she was the one to crash into him. She eventually gets a half-hearted response out the next day, and Caramel decides getting to know her better was a fair tradeoff.
* NotADate: Sure Rainbow. Spending some time with Caramel in Canterlot, having him show you around, admiring views, and going to meet his family are totally unromantic happenings.
* PlotParallel: Caramel and rainbow are slowly getting closer, while the same is happening to Fluttershy and Big Macintosh.
* [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend He Is Not My Coltfriend]]: This is the first sentence out of Rainbow's mouth when Caramel introduces her to his siblings.
* SnowMeansLove: Rainbow and Caramel spend some time together in Canterlot to look at the sights, right down to the classic "catch snowflakes with our tongues" scene.
* Pettanko: Rainbow Dash is the pony version of this, if her "lack of curves" and other's observations are anything to go by.
* [[ThroughHisStomach Through Her Stomach]]: After Rainbow starts showing up on Caramel's doorstep everyday, he's kind enough to start providing breakfast to her. This is one of the way she warms up to him.
* TriangRelations: Type 5, as Caramel as a crush on Applejack, while Rainbow Dash is starting to fall for Caramel.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Rainbow Dash's second real interaction with Caramel happens when she wakes up in his bed. However, it's all rather innocent, as Rainbow drank a spiked beer and Caramel let her stay in his house.
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A MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic {{Fanfic}} by [=EminenceGris=]
A lot of words describe Rainbow Dash. Athletic. Lazy. Brash. But her main problem stems from how others assume that list includes [[MistakenForGay fillyfooler]]. After her big dad is ruined by this stereotype, Rainbow [[JustForPun dashes]] off to collect her thoughts.
A very different set of words describe Caramel. Meek. Introverted. Undervalued. His main problem is that when others don't think of him as unimportant, he's a pedophillic coltcuddler. But after two chance meetings in the [[CrashIntoHello Everfree Forest]] and a [[WhatDidIDoLastNight bar]], the new breakfast-buddies slowly learn to look past what others think about them.
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A lot of words describe Rainbow Dash. Athletic. Lazy. Brash. But her main problem stems from how others assume that list includes [[MistakenForGay fillyfooler]]. After her big dad is ruined by this stereotype, Rainbow [[JustForPun dashes]] off to collect her thoughts.
A very different set of words describe Caramel. Meek. Introverted. Undervalued. His main problem is that when others don't think of him as unimportant, he's a pedophillic coltcuddler. But after two chance meetings in the [[CrashIntoHello Everfree Forest]] and a [[WhatDidIDoLastNight bar]], the new breakfast-buddies slowly learn to look past what others think about them.
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